德州市陵城区义渡口镇初级中学英语组九年级
(17)命题作文类写作
命题作文通常只给出一个话题,或者仅提供写作的开头。然后由学生自由发挥,围绕话题,完成作文。
一、命题写作注意事项
1.命题作文只给了一个话题或简单的提示,不能直接获得很多的写作信息,必须先看清题目要求, 思考后确定写作内容。
2.准备好充足的材料,并选好适当的单词、短语、句型和恰当的时态,然后理清思路,确定写作顺 序和表达的层次。
3.写作时要多用学过的熟悉的句子,尽量多用简单句,少用长句。
4.写完后要认真检查,包括:句子有无遗漏,使用时态是否正确,大小写、标点符号是否规范,词 数是否合理等。
二、常用写作表达
1.I'm sure. 我肯定。
2.There is no doubt that... 毫无疑问……
3.I'm glad/pleased/happy to... 我很高兴……
4.I'm worried about... 我担心……
5.I hope... 我希望……
三、写作热身
根据前面的文字描述制作一张写作模板
第一段:点明话题(According to.../Recently.../There was.../Nowadays more and more...)
第二段:叙述经过或提示原因或出示论据(要点一__________,要点二__________,要点三__________)
第三段:发表看法或总结全文等(In my opinion.../I think.../I hope...)
四、经典范文欣赏
根据自己最近所看的卡通片,写一篇题为My Favourite Cartoon的短文。
【美文欣赏】
My Favourite Cartoon
I have seen many cartoons recently. But my favourite cartoon is Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf(《喜羊羊与灰太狼》). I like the cartoon because I like the Pleasant Goat. It is clever.It can always run away from the Big Big Wolf when Big Big Wolf wants to eat it. What's more, it's also very brave and helpful. It's not afraid of Big Big Wolf whenever it's in trouble and it always helps the other goats. I think the cartoon is great fun. I hope I can see it again.
第二篇:20xx年北京市中考英语满分作文总结
20xx年北京市中考英语满分作文
北京中考英语作文题目:
根据文中大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、不少于60词的短文.所给英文提示词仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.
生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的经验,如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法…… 现在,某英文报纸就分享(Sharing)的话题征文,请你投稿。描述一次你与他人分享的经历,并谈谈你的感受。
提示词语:share …with ; experience; interest; learn; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confident
满分作文示例1
In our life, everyone has some experiences of sharing something with others, like sharing an interesting book, a good idea and problems.
I had a memorable experience of sharing. Though I was interested in math in Grade6, my math was poor. I could hardly understand what my math teacher said in class. I didn’t know how to deal with the math problems. My best friend, whose math was pretty good, give me
some suggestions on how to learn math well. With his help, my math has made more progress.
In a word, sharing is a good way to encourage everyone to make a change and enjoy happiness.
满分作文示例2
I had an experience of sharing. Last term, we needed two hundred yuan to buy some stabbers for our class clean-up. I came up with a good idea that we could sell some old waste things to make money. The others agreed with me. So we started to collect waste paper and other things. Finally we succeeded. I like sharing my idea because it can make me feel more confident. If we can share with others, everyone can also have the same happiness.
满分作文示例3 I had an experience of sharing. When my family moved, I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that I failed. I got worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me some
advice. From then on, we got to know each other and shared our ideas, problems, and happiness. We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit it with others.