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四级写作笔记&十大必背范文
四级写作笔记
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第一原则：书写工整，卷面清晰。
第一：是否写满（字数）。是否三段？是否两头小、中间大。
第二：首句是否是主题句。
第三：扫描，往往是首末句。一定要写好。以及第一句。
只要有些亮点就可以了。
第二原则：字数原则。120——150
一行十个词比较合适。12-15行
就是十句话，就要三段。
长短结合，以段句为主。长句——15到20个次。6短10长。
提高实力；掌握技巧。
1）十遍精读；（范文）
第一角度：语言：精彩词汇/精彩词组/精彩句型/句子结构[简单句/从句（3-5个）/时态（四级已现在时为主，只有举例论证、图表用过去时]/冠词/主谓一致]
第二角度：结构、关联词（3-5）、同义替换、代词替换（英语多用代词）。
第三角度：内容：观点、原因建议、
2）背诵（最好方法）
背到滚瓜烂熟、脱口而出。
3）默写（语法、拼写、标点错误。修改了错误，分
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数就上去了）
4）中译英。（找出不同——自己差的地方）
5）写作。考前5-十篇（模仿的过程）
技巧：
万能框架；
总结框架——从一篇文章；或不同文章。
每段每句话都来自不同文章。60个词就够了。不能多。
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词汇：
1）记忆法
4500词。而需要的只有2-3千 背单词【记忆法：7是一个神奇的数字！1：快速突破！（混个脸熟）大多是阅读词汇，只需要认识。2：了解用法；3：做题体会。】
用纸挖个小洞，只能露出词就好了。
第一遍——正序
第二遍——逆序！
第三遍——乱序！
建立对应干系。
词汇书不用很复杂。基础好一天450。
上午背单词在12点之前结束。没有前摄干扰。
不需要读出来，只要建立外形之意义。
盖中文，说意思。
每隔5分钟，重复前五分钟内容。半小时重复前半小
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时内容。
晚上没有后摄干扰，有助于记忆。
必须有3次没有后摄干扰才会深刻。
词汇量上去问题就不大。
词汇弱点，集中记忆。
当天要重复一遍。
2）词根词缀法
3）联想法
4）泛读法
应用文
书信——重点
11分之七都是应用文。书信（5次一次——目击见证书——来自国内的高考。感谢信——感谢老师；建议信——投诉食堂属于公务书信所以要表扬）或口头作文（导游词、竞选演讲）
机构：不认识负责人（希望工程）——DEAR SIR,（DEAR MADAM)(TO WHOME INCONCERN(老师喜欢英国英语，用逗号）
PRESIDENT（有六个意思）
经理（manager）
个人：关系不亲密——
私人书信：直呼其名。
3-5个从句。
提纲一般有三点。第一句：提纲可以选作主题句。第二句作自我介绍（公务书信）；第三句写写作目的（英文开门见山）。
第二段：改写提纲二。第二句写两点原因或情况。
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第三句：小结（也可不写）。
第三段：第一句改写提纲三；第二句：表示感谢（英文比较虚伪）（只有建议信不需要感谢，投诉信都需要感谢的）习惯句型：
my thanks to you for your generous help are beyond the words.(大胆使用主系表替代主谓宾，显得比较书面化。）
words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you.
I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt(衷心的） appreciation to the kind assistance（帮助） you render（给与） me.
第三句：期待回信。I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. I look forward to your favorable（好意的） reply at your earliest（尽早的） convenience. YOUR PROMPT ATTENTION TO MY INQUIRY（需要） WOULD（委婉，多用） BE HIGHLY Appreciated。（英文多用被动，——以理服人）
书面作文——送分！
落款：
yours sincerely，
Lid Ming
这种落款是万能的。
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论说文写作
另一种题型。
1）语言（第一位、结构第二位、内容第三位）
如今常考夹叙夹议文章。（时间顺序）
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描写文——如今偶尔考描写性段落（目击）。（空间顺序）
论说文-——重点。
语言：第一标准——基本正确
extansive knoledge（广泛的知识)
第二标准——丰富多变。
不要反复用一个词汇。
i hold the opinion that。
句型、词组（可以轻易改造成句型）、词汇（精彩的）（think——reckon、assume、assert、）due——enough
be of importance。
结构问题：
英文尤其讲究！思维差异！中文情感分段，英文逻辑分段。
中文：读者体会。英文：作者交代
中文迂回模式。（重心放在最后）英文直线模式。（中心放在最先）
逻辑，一般是总分总。
1，关联词体现结构
启（启动观点、文章）
承（观点承接，
正面论证：分类论证、first and formost【最重要】to begin with，more over，further more，
因果论证；英文前果后因in that……for【不能放句首】
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举例论证：）
转（yet， whereas……）
合（合并归类。
末端首句，23短尾句）
2、同义替换
3、代词替换（名词）
内容第三
观点不重要。
it is high time that……
三大优秀句型：倒装句；强调句；虚拟语气。都会帮你长分。
********** 不能为了过四级而考四级。
看碟！多看原版影视；（阿甘正传，西雅图夜未眠，情归巴黎）
老友记。纽约最地道口语。
欲望都市
狮子王、冰河世纪
听英文歌曲
流行音乐原版在欧美。
多读写。
女生《罗密欧与朱丽叶》
《简爱》（简写版）
《爱情故事》
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男生《圣经》（语言是最优秀的！希伯来文翻译来的！）
《希腊罗马神话》（西方文明源头）（中国对外翻译出版社）
《老人与海》
海明威的作品。
千万不要查字典，懂多少算多少。
教父！
掌握方法。听写！很多来自于托福——世界最难，把语速放慢罢了。
男生一般形象负面，女生常正确。比萨一般不好吃，苹果派好吃！
听写！听写一盘磁带——必及格。
听一句、写一句（基础差者，可以用四级听力）
听一段写一段（翻来覆去）
听力最好教材：
listen to this（外研社）（中级足够）
step by step（华东师大出版）
口语：跟读模仿！
阅读——背诵！对听说读写都有好处！
被新概念三，阅读的最好教材！
写作：中译英！
听写新概念
先看中文，翻译，再听写，跟读模仿或背诵！
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快速阅读：
先看题干，再看文章！
寻找明显信号！
中心话题！
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四级写作十大必背范文
1、留学
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic studying Abroad. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1、目前很多中国学生出国留学， 2、出国留学的好处， 3、我的看法。 （
Nowadays, going abroad for studies is enjoying
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a striking （显著的）popularity among
adolescents. Importance should be attached to（非常重要） studying abroad.
There are a great many advantages of studying , living and studying abroad offers students a different perspective of the world（一种不同的世界观）. On a university campus, international students are likely to encounter（遭遇） their
counterparts（相对的） from various countries and areas（地区） and are exposed to （面临着）diverse ideas and values. What is more, overseas experience is the best opportunity for the real-life（现实生活中） use of foreign languages. There is no better opportunity to improve second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken.
it is my view that although going abroad is expensive and perhaps（可能） painful, the payoff is worthwhile（付出是值得的）（首先）, in addition to（除了……以外）knowledge, overseas students can gain precious experiences（获得宝贵的经验）that those who stay at home will never have. Furthermore（此外）, overseas experience, frustrating（令人沮丧） and painful as it may be, is conducive to the growth of adolescents（有利于青少年的成长）.
2、就业
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Jobs for Graduates. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline
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below:
1、大学生难找工作， 2、原因很多， 3、解决的办法。
Job hunting has always been a headache for college students. Though many graduates are employed right after graduation, some are not. （更严重的是）, some still have no idea where to go working even a long time after graduation.
The reasons for this phenomenon are various. the one hand, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled（入学） so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the number of graduates was greater than（大于） the need in the hand, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.
I reckon（估计） this problem can be solved if both colleges and students take measures. First, they should research the market and develop
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special skills to suit its need. Second,
students’ attitude towards employment should
be changed. They should go to small cities and
country. There they can also give full playInternet. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below: 1、互联网使用的现状， 2、大学生是否应该使用互联网，人们的看法不同， （充分发挥） to their professional knowledge. 3、我的看法。
if we pay much attention（重视）, the
situation（情况） can be improved.
3、网络
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30
minutes to write a composition on the topic
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In recent years, people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet. As is known to all, it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line, either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work’s needs.
On the one hand, no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life. As a college student, I get on line every day to exchange information through e-mails with my net friends. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle.
Thus, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. After all，Internet is invented to enrich our life, and to improve the
efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain.
4、考试
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My
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Views on Examinations. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:
1、大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩， 2、考生可能带来的副作用， 3、我对考试的看法。
In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in
mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous. To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching. Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to
training their students in exam techniques. No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations. In addition, the most
undesirable effect is that examinations
encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize
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mechanically rather than to think creatively.
In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students’ academic development. If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?
5、老师
Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic the most unforgettable Teacher I ever know. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below: 1、我生活中最难忘的老师是……
2、为什么他（或她）令我难以忘怀， 3、结论。
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In my life I have met a great many teachers who are really worth recalling. But perhaps the most unforgettable one I ever know is my English teacher.
What frequently bring back memories of my school teacher are his special qualities. First of all, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening of a passion for
learning. He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English
language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. Second, I was attracted by his lively wit. I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs.
Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.
6、求学信
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter applying for
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admission into a college or university. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1、 入学条件，
2、 学费和奖学金， 3、 住宿情况。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university. My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.
First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I already have a bachelor’s degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any
scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation
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regarding accommodation?
I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
7、邀请信
Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party. Write an invitation letter to them individually: 1、邀请参加晚会， 2、说明举办晚会的原因， 3、将安排哪些活动。
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Dear Snoopy,
I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr. Goo Jing’s wedding ceremony with Ms. Huang Rung to be held at Beijing Grand Hotel from 8 to 10 p.m. on April 1, 2007.
As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to attend the celebration and share our joy. The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.
If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company. Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
8、投诉信
Directions: You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college. 1、要求下学期换一个新房间，
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2、解释原因， 3、要求单间。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next semester. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.
I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In these circumstances, I find it difficult to
concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.
I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
9、致辞
Directions: Write a speech on the opening of a conference of no less than 120 words. In your speech, you should: 1、进行自我介绍，
2、详细介绍大会内容， 3、结束语。
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Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing! To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself. I am the
president of Motorola (China) Electronics Ltd.
The following is my introduction to the
conference. First, it is my great honor to be here with all of you and declare open the Conference of International Trade Cooperation. Second, on behalf of our company, I would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the guests and delegates. Last, I believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive.
I wish all of you enjoy yourselves during this conference and hope the above information will help you. If you have any question for me, please feel free to ask at any time. Thank you for your attention.
10、告示
Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information: 1、比赛目的、时间、地点， 2、参赛者的要求，
3、裁判和奖励的细节。
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You should write about 120 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.
Chinese Speaking Contest
February 3, 2008
To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (10 February) at the Students’ Auditorium. Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.
The Students’ Union
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Department of Chinese Language and Literature
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