专四Note writing 评分标准

时间:2024.4.21

Note writing 便条写作

项目简介

1.     学生在10分钟之内完成大约50-60词的便条写作,要求做到格式正确,内容完整,语言得体。

2.     与作文写作有所不同:便条项目侧重于语言的实用性和功能性,检查学生日常运用语言的实际能力。

大作文检验考生的正规写作能力,强调内容完整,条理清楚,结构合理,语法正确,语言通顺恰当。

Note writing 评分标准

l  20##年真题

l  (20##年评分标准如下)

http://www.doc88.com/p-74053758312.html

l  (2006便条参考范文)

l  (20##年评分标准大致如下)

1.      格式

1)  日期(1分)  April 21st, 2011    / April 21

2)  称呼(1分)     Dear Mike,       / Mike,

3)  正文

4)  署名(1分)   Yours,

                   Lily  (根据题目要求写,题目没有要求则任意选用一个英文名; 

                         若用XXX或者汉字扣0.5分)

                             正确位置在便条正文下面空一到两行右侧。

2. 正文内容与语言

1)       语言表达较差(包括语法和拼写错误),扣0.5-1.5分, 拼写错误超过3个要扣1分。

2)       语言没有严重错误,格式正确,内容完整,语言得体,字数符合要求(<80, >40), 可给5分;

3)       便条总字数要求约50-60字;一般不到40或者超过80扣1分。

常见问题

l  缺少日期

l  Yours 写成 yours

l  署名和结束语写在同一行

l  署名用XXX或者中文

l  署名后加句号

l  字数太多或者太少

l  内容不完整

l  语言文体不得当 (formal style / informal style)

例题

例一

例二

例三

Your friend has just won the first prize in the Provincial English Speech Contest. Write a note of congratulations.

(1)           明确假设的写作人与接收人之间的关系,确定用何种语体。to whom

(2)           确定便条的功能,即表明写便条的原因。 why

(3)           将提示中提到的场景转换成自己的语言,自然融进便条内容中去。what

便条一:

便条二:

便条三:

 

 

 

练习:

Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of 50-60 words based on the following situation:

   You are Peter/Mary. You had a party at your home recently but unintentionally neglected to invite a close friend of yours—Victoria. Write her a note apologizing for this and explaining how the mistake came about.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy.

 

Tips:

l  可以从四个方面检查便条写作:

1)             格式

2)             内容 <一封理想的TEM4便条应包括以下三点:(1)写便条的原因;(2)要告诉的事情;(3)有关的希望、建议或要求等。>

3)             语言

4)             字数

l 格式

结尾套语为写便条人对收便条人的谦称或客套以示礼貌,措辞的变化按照不同的关系而定。现分述① 致不熟悉的人,宜用较庄重的套语,如Yours sincerely,Sincerely yours,或Sincerely等。② 对上级、长者,除了可用上述较庄重的套语,也可用Yours respectfully或Respectfully yours。③ 对一般朋友或熟人可用①中提到的较庄重的套语,也可用Yours等较为随便的套语。④ 对密友则采用较随便的套语为宜。例如,Yours,Love,With love,Best wishes,Best regards等等。⑤ 对亲属可用下列任何一种:Love,With love,All my love,Yours affectionately,Affectionately yours,Lovingly yours,Yours lovingly,Your loving son(Dad?);但对亲人,不宜用Sincerely yours。

由于TEM4便条写作一般是针对考生日常生活或学习相关的事情,写作的对象一般是其朋友、老师、熟人,因此,TEM4通常只接受Yours sincerely,Sincerely yours,Sincerely,或Yours这几种结尾套语。


第二篇:专四便条 Note Writing 题目


1. Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

The final exam is over. You want to go for a picnic to relax this weekend and ask Lily, your best friend, to go with you. Write a note, asking whether she is interested and telling her your plan including the time, place, and things needed for the picnic. Do not sign your own name, using “Linda” instead.

2. Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

Your friend, Mary, asked you to borrow from the library a book on American foreign policy. You have tried but failed to find it. Write her a note, making an apology to her and promising her to borrow one from your classmates. Do not sign your own name, using “Linda” instead.

3. Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

You want to invite Mr. Wallace to give a speech on “American Literature”. Write him a note, telling him the purpose of the invitation and the time of the lecture. Do not sign your own name, using “Linda” instead.

4. Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

Suppose your friend, Mike, lent you a book and gave you some suggestions when you made preparations for TEM-4. Write him a note to show your gratitude. Do not sign your own name, using “Linda” instead.

5. Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

You are preparing for TOEFL these days. You want to ask your friend, Sam, for some advice. Write him a note, expressing your request. Do not sign your own name, using “Linda” instead.

6. Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

Suppose your friend Helen has own a prize in a singing contest. Write her a note to congratulate her. Do not sign your own name, using “Linda” instead.

7. Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

You have just heard that your former classmate, Alex, has parted from his girlfriend and he is in a bad mood. Write a note to comfort him and give him some encouragement. Do not sign your own name, using “Linda” instead.

8. Write a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

Suppose your mother has come to see you and tonight you will sleep in the room she has booked in a hotel near your university. Write a note to inform your roommate Helen of that. Do not sign your own name, using “Linda” instead.

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