高考英语满分作文-租房
作文题目
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1．词数：100左右：
2．参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。
第二篇：高考英语满分作文
I'm very happy to receive your letter， and I'm glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street， which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there， and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms， one of which is bedroom， the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed， a sofa， a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat， and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish， but I'll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough， write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon！
All the best！
Yours，
Li Hua
我很高兴收到你的信，我很高兴听到你会去中国学习中文在这里。我已经找到了你菲亚特。正是在芳草街，这是不远处建新中文学校。巴士11号能带你那里，它是一个中文学校前停止。该单位是在3间客房，其中三楼是卧室，另外两个是浴室和厨房。有一张床，沙发，办公桌，在这25平方米的有椅子米小菲亚特，租金每月500元。也许这菲亚特并不像你想好，但我会尽我所能来满足您的需求。如果它不适合的话，写信给我，我将寻找一个更好的地方。
希望您能尽快来到这里！
所有最好的！
你的，
李华
20xx年广东高考英语满分作文
Should tourists take photos with animals？
Koalas in wildlife parks can?t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists? behaviour illegal to protect the animals.
When people are visiting wildlife parks， they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.
If I were an animal in the wildlife park， I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn?t
feel happy at all！ I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.
However， I don?t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can?t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time， during which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.
20xx年的年广东高考英语满分作文
游客应该给动物拍照吗？
考拉在野生动物公园不能入睡，因为他们令人不安的游客不断。不结盟运动思想，使游客的非法行为，以保护动物。
当人们正在访问的野生动物公园，他们喜欢与动物拍照留念。原因是多种多样的。一些人可能认为拍照与动物的有趣的对比拍照与其他人。其他人可能认为，这将是一个有趣的经验，与动物拍照访问期间。
如果我是一种动物的野生动物园，我会感到恼火的人不断拍照时，与我。我的生活将得到极大的影响，我不会感到高兴了！我想我应该有一些私人的空间和时间来放松消遣。
但是，我不同意，如果它是非法宣布采取与动物的照片。游客支付门票参观野生动物园，将是很可惜的，如果他们不能的照片，一种动物。也许野生动物公园可以设置一些特殊的时间，在此期间，游客可以与动物的照片。它既能满足游客和保护动物。
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假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。
Dear David,
I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well.
Hope to see you soon in Beijing.
Yours,
Wang Ming
亲爱的大卫,
我很高兴你要到北京去学习汉语。汉语是非常有用的,许多外国人正在学吧。对你很难,因为它是相当不同于英语。你必须记住尽可能多的汉字。它也是重要的事要做一些阅读和写作。你可以看电视和听广播练习听力。尽你所能去跟人在中国。你可以从书本中学习汉语不但也从你身边的人。如果你有任何问题,请叫我。我确信你会学好中文。
希望很快再见到你在北京。
你的,
王明
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请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。 提纲：
(1) 家乡的地理位置；
(2) 解放前的情况；
(3) 解放后的变化；
(4) 对家乡的感情。
My Home Town
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
我的家乡
我的家乡是一个美丽的地方。它矗立在很宽的河,有丰富的鱼米之乡”。
但在过去的日子是一个贫穷和落后的小镇。许多人没有工作。他们过着艰苦的生活。
我的家乡是19xx年解放的。从此发生了巨大的变化。街道被加宽。工厂、学校、医院、影剧院如雨后春笋般涌现出来。人民的生活是大大提高了。
我爱我的家乡。我喜欢它的更多的人。他们正在努力工作以使它还更丰富、更美丽。
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健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。
提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；
2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳；
3.饮食要健康；
4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。
要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；
2. 100词左右；
3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Dad(Mum),
You?re so busy every day that you don?t pay much attention to your health. I?m worried about your health all the time. I?d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn?t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You?d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What?s more, it?s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.
Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!
Your loving son (daughter)
Tom (Mary)
亲爱的爸爸(妈妈),
你每天都很忙,你不太注意你的健康。我很担心你的健康。我想给你一些建议。我听说步行是最好的运动。你的公司没有离家很远,是吗?为什么不走到办公室去吗?你最好锻炼至少每周一次,如打网球训练。去游泳,也是一个不错的选择。更重要的是,它必须有健康的食物。不要太晚睡。有足够的睡眠能帮助你的大脑的工作做得更好。
爸爸,请接受我的建议。我真希望你身体健康!
爱你的儿子(女儿)。
汤姆(玛丽)。
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Dear Dad(Mum),
You?re so busy every day that you don?t pay much attention to your health.I am worried about you. I hope you can keep healthy. You often drive to your office. It is not far.What about walking there because it can make you much stronger?I?d like you to play basketball or go swimming in the gym at least once a week. It is important to eat healthy food such as vegetables, meat, eggs and fruits. Though your work is hard, I still hope that you can go to bed early so that you can get enough sleep.
I?m looking forward to receiving your letter.
Your loving son (daughter)
Tom (Mary)
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亲爱的爸爸(妈妈),
你每天都很忙,你不太注意你的健康我很担心你。我希望你能保持健康。你经常开车到你的办公室。不远. 有什么关于行走,因为它能使你更强的吗? 我想要你去打篮球和游泳在健身房每周至少一次。这是很重要的,吃健康的食物,如蔬菜、肉、蛋和水果。虽然你的工作很努力,但我还是希望你能早点上床睡觉,这样你就能得到足够的睡眠。
我盼望收到你的来信。
爱你的儿子(女儿)。
汤姆(玛丽)。
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随着阳光体育运动在全国开展，政府对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视，提出了这样的标语：“EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出现了可喜的变化，强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。
注意：1. 词数80—100左右。
2. 要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。
参考词汇：build up one?s body strength 强健身体 reduce diseases 减少疾病
As the Sunny Sports is developing in our country, the government has paid attention to the health of the students and raised, "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY, KEEP ILLNESS AWAY". So far our school life has changed a lot. Now we have more time to do sport in the morning or after school. We play football, basketball, badminton and swim. They let our brains relax and make our school life more colorful. We have become more energetic. Above all our study has all been improved.
Let?s take exercise every day. It can build up our body strength and reduce diseases.
如阳光体育发展我国政府重视学生的健康和复活,每天锻炼一小时,让病”。到目前为止我们学校的生活发生了翻天覆地的变化。现在我们有更多的时间做运动或者放学后在早晨。我们踢足球、篮球、羽毛球和游泳。他们让我们的大脑放松,让我们的校园生活更加丰富多彩。我们已经变得更有活力。首先我们学习都得到改善。
让我们花每天锻炼。它能增强体力、减少疾病。
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Doing sport builds up our body strength and reduces diseases.
Though we lead a better life, our health is becoming worse now. So "EXERCISE ONE HOUR A DAY，KEEP ILLNESS AWAY" has been raised by the government.
At noon or after school we play ball games, swimming and running. Look!The playground seems smaller because lots of students are playing on it.The school life has become colorful and we are energetic.As a result we study harder and better.
The Sunny Sports has brought an exciting change to us. Let?s keep on doing it.
体育锻炼身体的力量,建立我们减少疾病。
虽然我们过上更好的生活,我们的身体越来越差了。所以每天锻炼一小时,让疾
病”已经在政府部门。
放学后我们中午或打球、游泳和运行。看!操场上显得比较小,因为许多学生都玩它学校的生活变得丰富多彩,我们是精力充沛的. 因此,我们在新的一年里更用功、更上一层楼。
在阳光明媚的运动带来了一个令人兴奋的变化给我们。让我们继续做这件事。
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Career or Family: which is more important?
When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in one?s life.
It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In the very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. What?s more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.
In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, they can enhance each other so that one?s life can become better and better. Therefore, it?s not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.
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职业或家庭:哪一个更重要?
当问及他们自己的事业和家庭,进行的一项民意调查显示,人们总是有不同的反应。一些人认为它更重要的是去追求自己的事业,而总是有别的人争辩说,家庭应该是人的生命。
它没有任何问题,事业起到了至关重要的作用,在我们的日常生活中。首先,在职业生涯所能给我们的生活目标。没有职业,我们的生活一定会浪费时间。更重要的是,职业,可以给我们提供一个生存的意义。大部分的人获得他们的收入来自一份工作。另一方面,家也是不可或缺的重要组成部分,随着越来越多的人将生活的承认。家庭往往被认为是女性的地方,让我们可以逃避烦恼的生活。此外,我们可以
获得一种归属感,从家庭。没有它,任何人都会感到孤独绝望。
在我看来,事业和家庭不是相互对立的。相反,它们可以增进彼此的生活能使人变得越来越好。因此,这不是一个选择,而是一个正确和错误的理想和实用。之间,
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Olympics and I
Dear friend,
I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness.
This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What?s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it?s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded.
My friend, I really look forward to the coming of this great Games. As an individual, I?m all ready to offer my help in any way I can. I also hope to invite you all to come here, and watch the games in 2008.
Sincerely yours,
奥运会和我
亲爱的朋友,
我有一个好消息告诉在这里。经过多年努力,北京被授予举办20xx年奥运会。作为一个居民在北京,我感到很兴奋,并且想要与你分享我的快乐。
这次成功意味着很多,我不仅仅是一场比赛。首先,这个游戏一定会促进中国经济的发展。根据最近的一项调查,这个游戏专家将提高我们的国内生产总值约3%,并提供大约10,000个工作岗位。更重要的是,我们的文化将被广泛认可和接受,世界各地的游戏。人们将从世界的每一个角落,体验中国文化的各个方面。除此之外,通过游戏,我们的生活环境将会大大提高。例如,北京的公共交通系统将被更新。同时,众所周知,更多的树木将被种植、草原会大大扩展了。
我的朋友,我真的很期待即将到来的这一伟大的游戏。就个人而言,我已经准备好提供给我的帮助。我也希望能邀请你来这里,看了20xx年奥运会。
真诚的你,
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Tourism in China
Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.
Facing this tendency, we can?t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people?s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What?s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now. 九
中国旅游
近年来,我国旅游业的趋势增长较快。根据最近的一项调查由一些专家的47%,城市居民出行规律,也让他们28%的农村居民对全国巡演。调查还显示,越来越多的人都很感兴趣,并将旅游业今后参军。
面对这种趋势,我们不禁探索一些潜在的因素是可靠的。在最初的地方,以改革开放政策,中国人民的生活水平大大提高,因此,他们中的大多数人能买得起去环游世界。更重要的是,它被认为是现在人们采取更积极的态度去旅游,并把它当成一种生活方式。此外,旅游设施正变得越来越好。例如,交通运输发展迅速,许多景点都有空。
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What a disaster(灾难)!So far,it's reported that more than 60,000 people died in the SiChuan earthquake.What's more, millions of people there have become homeless.And they are still in the danger of illness and other difficulties.
Anyway, thanks to all the kind people, in and abroad,the situation has been changing well.But we still work hard at it,especially to build houses for those homeless people and cure the injured people.
What can we do now? Besides doing our own job well,we can donate money to them.We firmly believe that with the party and the government's strong leadership, and with the people of all nationalities throughout the country to aid,this earthquake relief will be a victory!
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什么灾难(灾难)!到目前为止,据报道有超过60000人死于四川地震。更重要的是,数以百万计的人们已经变得无家可归的. 他们还在危险的疾病和其他的困难。无论如何,谢谢所有善良的人们,在国内外局势已经改变,好吧但我们仍然努力,特别是建造房屋为那些无家可归的人们和治愈受伤的人。
我们现在要做什麽?除了做自己的工作,我们可以捐一些钱给他们我们坚信,在党和政府的坚强领导,并与全国各族人民在整个国家的援助,这次地震救灾一定会取得胜利!
回答者： west济 - 十级?? 2009-10-1 08:44
最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 60％的同学认为 40％的同学认为
1．不应该收门票
2公园是公众休闲的地方
3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 1．应收门票，但票价不要太高
2．支付园林工人工资
3．购新花木
注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。
2．词数：100左右。
3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee
Dear Editor．
I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance
fee should be charged for parks．
高考满分作文1(1号题)
Dear editor,
I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people?s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on
a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。我们60％的同学认为，入场费没有达到人们的预期，有一个公园被认为是一个地方，市民可以在家里或工作的一个很好的时候，他们不也忙。如果收门票必须由一个公园的旅客支付的，有必要建立一个大门和围墙。在最后一个城市将在一个坏看看。我们40％的同学认为，入场费可以接受，但不能过于昂贵。从门票销售的钱可用于支付公园的园丁，购买鲜花和一些其他种类的树木。
至于我自己，我觉得入场费是有用的，因为它可以用来保护公园。我们是否有同感，亲爱的编辑？
此致
李华
高考满分作文2(1号题)
Dear editor,
I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and trees. As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays. At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park. After all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working order. Do you agree with me, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。 60出100学生认为，收门票，不应该购买前一进入公园，因为它是一个公共场所去时，都是免费的。如果要购买机票，大门和墙壁都必须有一个公园，这将使城市建成很丑陋。四十出100学生认为，收门票，应以前购买的一进入公园，但门票的价格应该是
合理的。钱，是从售票获得可用于支付园艺工人和购买鲜花和各种树木。至于我自己，我真的觉得公园的好地方到周末和节假日。同时，我们作为游客，应支付入会费，当我们进入公园。毕竟，它需要很多钱，以保持良好的工作秩序公园。你是否同意我的，亲爱的编辑器？
李华
考满分作文3(1号题)
Dear editor,
I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public. They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure. They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged. The city will not look so beautiful as it should have. Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn?t be out of control. Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees. For myself, I?d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks? Yours truly,
Li Hua
亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。我的同学，60的占百分之认为入场费不应该强迫公众的想法。他们认为，公园的地方，市民享受闲暇自己。他们认为，一门和哀号的兴建，如果收门票，收费。这座城市将不再那么美丽，因为它应该有。四十我的同学占百分之的思想，入场费是行，但不应该失去控制。入会费可以用来支付园丁和购买花木新类型。至于我自己，我想说，如果我们大家努力建设成为一个花园，谁对公园门票为关心我们的城市？
李华
高考满分作文4(1号题)
Dear editor,
I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%. They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public?s enjoyment. If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four sides. If so, city will not look as
beautiful as it would. Otherwise, those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%. They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees. The truth lies in the hands of the majority. Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。反对的收费公园占60％的门票。他们是一记，公园是供公众享用。如果优惠票公园的游客要求，一门要设立等，对四周的墙壁。如果是这样，上海将不看的，因为它美丽会。否则，那些在收取公园占40％的门票赞成票。他们都认为，门票价格应适当控制，而且入学金可用于支付园丁和购买花木新的类型。真理掌握在多数人的手中。我的论点是否立场，因此，亲爱的编辑器？
高考满分作文5(1号题)
Dear editor,
I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Of all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite view. Those who don?t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for pleasure. Those in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can?t be beyond control. Those against the idea think that a city?s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be collected. Those who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and trees. I think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for parks. Am I right, editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。在所有我们谁也参加了讨论，60％的份额的观点，即入场费不应该收取点，而40％的市场份额持相反意见。那些谁不同意这样的看法认为，公园是一个地方，公众可以用他们的乐趣业余时间。在这个想法的支持，对那些认为公园门票不能失去控制。反对的人士则认为，一个城市的面貌将受到损害，因为门和哭声将建立门票如果要收集。那些谁的想法一致认为入会费可以用来支付园丁和购买花木新品种。我认为它利大于弊收取一个公园入场费。我说得对，编辑器？
此致
李华
这应该很容易看懂呀，用得着翻译么
【全国卷I海南、宁夏】
【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：
1．外出购物
2．替房东还书
3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消
2）此事已告知Susan
3) 尽快回电
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Mrs. Wilson,
I?m going out shopping, and won?t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o?clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn?t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Yours,
Li Hua
威尔逊夫人，
我要出去购物，也不会下午5时00分左右才回来。我已与我的两本书，你要我回到市图书馆。下午约1时许下午，保罗称，说她不能满足博尔顿咖啡明天上午你，因为她参加一些重要的事情来。她觉得很遗憾，但他说，你可以设置一些会议的其他时间。她想你叫她尽快回来你的家。她已经把这件事告诉转变苏珊。 你的，
李华
[名师点评] 本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。
Computer
As we all know, the computer is a marvelous machine. It has all kinds of types. Nowadays most computers have a memory processor in which information can be stored and be taken out at any time.
The oldest kind of computer is the abacus. It was used in China long agoi The first modern computer was very large and expensive, but now scientists already have been making computers smaller and cheaper, at the same time easier to use and work faster and faster now.
Computers can be used a great deal in many ways. It can do many kinds of work. They can be used in doing business and science research work, in some large factories, and our daily life. We even use it to play computer games at home. Today a lot of people buy computers. Computers is becoming more and more popular indeed.
计算机
众所周知，计算机是神奇的机器。它有各种类型。现在多数计算机均有存储器，信息可以随时被存储或提取。
最古老的计算机是算盘。算盘很久以前在中国使用。第一台现代计算机非常庞大和昂贵，现在科学家们已经使计算机变得更小和更廉价，同时更易于使用，并且运行速度越来越快。
计算机可以充分用于很多方面。它可以做很多事。它们可用于商业，科学研究，大工厂及我们日常生活。我们甚至用它在家玩电脑游戏。现在很多人购买电脑，计算机变得越来越普及
以上翻译是用谷歌翻译的，有些语句错误，很容易看明白，还需要你自己校核一下
回答者： 星之安琪儿 - 三级?? 2009-10-1 08:45
20xx年广东高考英语满分作文
Should tourists take photos with animals？
Koalas in wildlife parks can?t fall asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The movement is thinking to make the tourists? behaviour illegal to protect the animals.
When people are visiting wildlife parks， they like to take photographs with animals. Reasons for this are varied. Some people may think taking photos with animals are funny in contrast with taking photos with other persons. Others may think that it will be an interesting experience to take photos with animals during their visit.
If I were an animal in the wildlife park， I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me. My life would be greatly influenced and I wouldn?t feel happy at all！ I think I should have some private space and time to relax myself.
However， I don?t agree if it is announced illegal to take photos with animals. Tourists pay for tickets to visit the wildlife park and it will be a pity for them if they can?t have a photo with an animal. Perhaps wildlife parks can set some special time， during which tourists can take photos with animals. It can both satisfy tourists and protect the animals.
20xx年的年广东高考英语满分作文
游客应该给动物拍照吗？
考拉在野生动物公园不能入睡，因为他们令人不安的游客不断。不结盟运动思想，使游客的非法行为，以保护动物。
当人们正在访问的野生动物公园，他们喜欢与动物拍照留念。原因是多种多样的。一些人可能认为拍照与动物的有趣的对比拍照与其他人。其他人可能认为，这将是一个有趣的经验，与动物拍照访问期间。
如果我是一种动物的野生动物园，我会感到恼火的人不断拍照时，与我。我的生活将得到极大的影响，我不会感到高兴了！我想我应该有一些私人的空间和时间来放松消遣。
但是，我不同意，如果它是非法宣布采取与动物的照片。游客支付门票参观野生动物园，将是很可惜的，如果他们不能的照片，一种动物。也许野生动物公园可以设置一些特殊的时间，在此期间，游客可以与动物的照片。它既能满足游客和保护动物。
回答者： sun2856652 - 二级?? 2009-10-1 12:11
好文章
回答者： 梦之使者2 - 二级?? 2009-10-1 16:47
试题：第二节 读写任务(共l小题，满分25分)
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Dear Ari,
As you sleep in my arms, I'm amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you.
I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult
society. That's why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means "lion". It's our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.
Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you'd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon.
Finally your mother's labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord (脐带) and put you in your mother's arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.
And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lion's heart. Welcome to the world, Ari.
Love,
Daddy
[写作内容]
假设你就是信中的Ari，父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲50岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好)：
1．以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；
2．以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：
(1)读信后的感受；
(2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；
(3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。
[写作要求]
1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接 引用原文中的句子；
2．信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
二、评分标准
项目 分值 评分标准
概括 5 按照要求概括了全部主要信息, 没有增加与原文无关的信息, 没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。
4 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 没有增加与原文无关的信息, 没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。
3 基本按照要求概括了主要信息, 但包含一些不相关的信息, 有个别句子抄自原文。语言结构基本正确，行文比较规范。
2 不能按照要求概括主要信息, 包含较多不相关的信息, 有较多的抄袭原。语言结构不够正确，行文不够规范。
0---1 没有按照要求概括主要信息, 基本是不相关的信息, 大多数句子都照抄原文。语言结构不正确，行文不规范。
写作 18---20 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，内容丰富。
词汇丰富，用词得当。能有效运用合适的语言结构，而且没有（或较少）语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性好。
14---17 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题明确，个别内容不准确或者不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用了合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。
11---13 包含题目所给全部或绝大部分的内容要点。主题比较明确，个别内容不准确或不相关。词汇较丰富，有个别用词错误。较好地运用合适的语言结构，有少许的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性较好。
7---10 包含题目所给的部分内容要点。主题基本明确，有些内容不准确或者不相关。词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。
4---6 只包含题目所给的个别内容要点。多数内容不相关或者不准确。文章有些地方照抄原文。词汇贫乏，有较多的用词错误。大多数的句子出现语法错误。篇章结构的连贯性差。
1---3 只包含与题目所给要点内容有关的一些单词。主题不明确，文章基本照抄原文。词汇及其贫乏，基本不能正确用词。几乎没有正确的句子。篇章结构零乱。 0 以下几种情况，给0分：
1） 完全抄袭原文（或其它文章）
2） 文不对题
3） 只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容。
三、任务型写作评卷场评分细则
◆概括
1．完全不理解，照抄原文 0分
2．死板机械地抄，不改变原文顺序 1分
3．改变主语或宾语的抄为主 2 分 (灵活地抄)
4．稍为改动总体的抄 3分
5．改变句子、用词，重新排列组织 4—5分 (字数不特别要求)
◆120字自主写作
1．感想，语言，内容，连贯性
2．语言为主, 内容的相关部分，综合考虑连贯
3．首先看语言是否合格
4．内容： 读后的感受, 成长的感受, 感激和祝福
5．用了阅读理解中的素材不算抄袭
6．内容偏离的时候以语言为主
四、学生习作选评给分情况
1 ( 1+5=6分)
Dear Dad,
On this date of your 50th birthday, Mom gave me the letter. You wrote me when I was born 18 years ago. In your letter, you hope me up to successful and brave in society, and you named me is Ari, means strong and do well for myself, you wish I love you and Mommy.
I very love you and mother, because not only you and Mom love me, but
also you do every think is due to me. When I was ill, you and Mom are very busy for me, give me best love. Now I was 18 years ago. I become a strong and can do well for myself. I think you for you and Mom. I?ll use my all love for you, but sorry, I didn?t can earn the money for you, because I have to study. So hope you wait me.
I wish you strong and healthy all the life.
2 ( 2+9=11分)
In you letter, Daddy, I know that you hope me grow strong and eager grasp. You love me, you give the best for me. You imagining I will be like a lion who is brave.
I felt very warm when I reading your letter. In my growing road you give me the best. When I in trouble, you give the help for me first. If I make mistake, you won?t angry for me, you only give me a warm love. In my life, you and Mum?s love is full of it. I can grow up without your love.
Happy birthday, Daddy. I won?t make you sad, I would be a brave and success lion while you hope me to be in the difficult society.
Thank you. Dad. I love you and Mum forever.
3 ( 0+13=13分)
In your letter, I know I was a lovely boy in your life, and I was know that lots of funny things happen before I was born.
In my living, I was happy and lucky, because I believe you on doing a lot things that make me happy. When I was young, you often tell strong to me, you often play games with me though you are very busy. When I was ill, you will take me to the hospital first, when I go to school, you often tell me to take care of myself and don?t break the traffic rude. After I guard from high school, you show me a lot of fresh things that I had never come through.
Words fails me to express my thankful to you. Now, I dust hope can live happily and have a strong body. What?s more, wish you will healthy forever.
4 ( 3+16=19分)
Dear Dad,
You encouraged me to be a brave and successful person. You were eager to see my good performances, which should be strong, seize every opportunity, do well for everybody. I keep your words on my mind and work hard all these years.
I?m totally moved by your words, my great father. I?m touched by your happiness, gave wishes and love in the letter.
Words fail to express how I appreciate you. I remember the day you taught me swimming. You put me into the centre of the swimming poor, just as if I were a brave lion and left me. I struggled to catch you but I couldn?t. You lifted me up a while and then back to water. I was able to swim that day and I was strong both physically and mentally. Thank you, Dad.
Today is your 50th birthday. I?m here to say, thank you, thank you for your love and sorrow. Thank you for the warmth and health. I can?t be here without you. I love you.
Wish you a happy birthday and happy all your life. Wish you in good health everyday. Happy birthday to you.
5 ( 5+18=23分)
In your letter, you wished me to be strong-minded and successful. You were looking forward seeing me tight for my future bravely and do well for myself and others.
After reading this letter, I feel quite shocked at your expectation on me. I also feel ashamed for not having performed well to meet your demand.
I still remember when I was in primary school, I failed to apply myself to studying. I was addicated to computer games. As a conseque I soon became the last one in my class. You didn?t abuse me at all. On the contrary, you teached me that studying was the most important object at the moment and encouraged me to study hard. Only when I have read your letter did I realize that I behaved so bad at that time and you were so sad to see I didn?t do well for myself.
I can?t help expressing my gratitude and sending my best wishes to you, wish you healthy and happy. I promise that I will spare no effort to satisfy you demand of being a brave and successful person.
最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 60％的同学认为 40％的同学认为
1．不应该收门票
2公园是公众休闲的地方
3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 1．应收门票，但票价不要太高
2．支付园林工人工资
3．购新花木
注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。
2．词数：100左右。
3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee
Dear Editor．
I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we havehad about whether an entrance
fee should be charged for parks．
高考满分作文1(1号题)
Dear editor,
I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people?s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.
With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。我们60％的同学认为，入场费没有达到人们的预期，有一个公园被认为是一个地方，市民可以在家里或工作的一个很好的时候，他们不也忙。如果收门票必须由一个公园的旅客支付的，有必要建立一个大门和围墙。在最后一个城市将在一个坏看看。我们40％的同学认为，入场费可以接受，但不能过于昂贵。从门票销售的钱可用于支付公园的园丁，购买鲜花和一些其他种类的树木。
至于我自己，我觉得入场费是有用的，因为它可以用来保护公园。我们是否有同感，亲爱的编辑？
此致
李华
高考满分作文2(1号题)
Dear editor,
I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and trees. As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays. At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park. After all, it takes a lot of
money to maintain a park in good working order. Do you agree with me, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。 60出100学生认为，收门票，不应该购买前一进入公园，因为它是一个公共场所去时，都是免费的。如果要购买机票，大门和墙壁都必须有一个公园，这将使城市建成很丑陋。四十出100学生认为，收门票，应以前购买的一进入公园，但门票的价格应该是合理的。钱，是从售票获得可用于支付园艺工人和购买鲜花和各种树木。至于我自己，我真的觉得公园的好地方到周末和节假日。同时，我们作为游客，应支付入会费，当我们进入公园。毕竟，它需要很多钱，以保持良好的工作秩序公园。你是否同意我的，亲爱的编辑器？
李华
考满分作文3(1号题)
Dear editor,
I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public. They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure. They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged. The city will not look so beautiful as it should have. Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn?t be out of control. Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees. For myself, I?d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks? Yours truly,
Li Hua
亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。我的同学，60的占百分之认为入场费不应该强迫公众的想法。他们认为，公园的地方，市民享受闲暇自己。他们认为，一门和哀号的兴建，如果收门票，收费。这座城市将不再那么美丽，因为它应该有。四十我的同学占百分之的思想，入场费是行，但不应该失去控制。入会费可以用来支付园丁和购买花木新类型。至于我自己，我想说，如果我们大家努力建设成为一个花园，谁对公园门票为关心我们的城市？
李华
高考满分作文4(1号题)
Dear editor,
I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%. They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public?s enjoyment. If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four sides. If so, city will not look as beautiful as it would. Otherwise, those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%. They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees. The truth lies in the hands of the majority. Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。反对的收费公园占60％的门票。他们是一记，公园是供公众享用。如果优惠票公园的游客要求，一门要设立等，对四周的墙壁。如果是这样，上海将不看的，因为它美丽会。否则，那些在收取公园占40％的门票赞成票。他们都认为，门票价格应适当控制，而且入学金可用于支付园丁和购买花木新的类型。真理掌握在多数人的手中。我的论点是否立场，因此，亲爱的编辑器？
高考满分作文5(1号题)
Dear editor,
I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Of all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite view. Those who don?t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for pleasure. Those in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can?t be beyond control. Those against the idea think that a city?s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be collected. Those who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and trees. I think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for parks. Am I right, editor?
Yours truly,
Li Hua
亲爱的编辑，
我写信告诉我们曾经对是否收门票的公园，应收取讨论你。在所有我们谁也参加了讨论，60％的份额的观点，即入场费不应该收取点，而40％的市场份额持相反意见。那些谁不同意这样的看法认为，公园是一个地方，公众可以用他们的乐趣业余时间。在这个想法的支持，对那些认为公园门票不能失去控制。反对的人士则认为，一个城市的面貌将受到损害，因为门和哭声将建立门票如果要收集。那些谁的想法一致认为入会费可以用来支付园丁和购买花木新品种。我认为它利大于弊收取一个公园入场费。我说得对，编辑器？
此致
李华
这应该很容易看懂呀，用得着翻译么
【全国卷I海南、宁夏】
【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：
1．外出购物
2．替房东还书
3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消
2）此事已告知Susan
3) 尽快回电
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Mrs. Wilson,
I?m going out shopping, and won?t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o?clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn?t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Yours,
Li Hua
威尔逊夫人，
我要出去购物，也不会下午5时00分左右才回来。我已与我的两本书，你要我回到市图书馆。下午约1时许下午，保罗称，说她不能满足博尔顿咖啡明天上午你，因为她参加一些重要的事情来。她觉得很遗憾，但他说，你可以设置一些会议的其他时间。她想你叫她尽快回来你的家。她已经把这件事告诉转变苏珊。 你的，
李华
[名师点评] 本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。
Computer
As we all know, the computer is a marvelous machine. It has all kinds of types. Nowadays most computers have a memory processor in which information can be stored and be taken out at any time.
The oldest kind of computer is the abacus. It was used in China long agoi The first modern computer was very large and expensive, but now scientists already have been making computers smaller and cheaper, at the same time easier to use and work faster and faster now.
Computers can be used a great deal in many ways. It can do many kinds of work. They can be used in doing business and science research work, in some large factories, and our daily life. We even use it to play computer games at home. Today a lot of people buy computers. Computers is becoming more and more popular indeed.
计算机
众所周知，计算机是神奇的机器。它有各种类型。现在多数计算机均有存储器，信息可以随时被存储或提取。
最古老的计算机是算盘。算盘很久以前在中国使用。第一台现代计算机非常庞大和昂贵，现在科学家们已经使计算机变得更小和更廉价，同时更易于使用，并且运行速度越来越快。
计算机可以充分用于很多方面。它可以做很多事。它们可用于商业，科学研究，大工厂及我们日常生活。我们甚至用它在家玩电脑游戏。现在很多人购买电脑，计算机变得越来越普及