Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Young People Should Have Combatant Spirit. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the table and the outline given in Chinese below.
1. 现在很多年轻人缺乏拼搏精神
2. 导致这一问题的原因是什么
3. 大学生应该加强拼搏精神
Young People Should Have Combatant Spirit
Nowadays, quite a few people believe that combatant spirit is essential for one’s success in today’s competitive world. However, some young people today think nothing of this spirit, which in their opinion, is only needed in revolutionary age. Even worse, when facing difficulties, they will choose to yield or cower without making any efforts.
There are many factors resulting in young people’s lack of combatant spirit. Among these, comfortable living environment plays a vital role. Today’s parents provide nearly everything for the children, which results in the children losing their motivation to strive on their own. What’ s more, the present education system does not pay much attention to the cultivation of young people’s combatant spirit. (说明原因段)
Considering the importance of combatant spirit, I think it is high time to take effective measures to strengthen young people’s combatant spirit. Above all, parent shouldn’t spoil their children and should ask their children to strive for what they intend to obtain. Moreover, schools should create a better environment for students to develop their struggle and aggressive spirit. Besides, young people themselves should adjust their minds and follow the examples of those people in history or around us who achieve their success under the stimulation of combatant spirit. In a word, it is an urgent thing for today’s young people to cultivate their combatant spirit.(说明方法段) 问题解决型模板1
描述问题段
Nowadays / In recent years, there are (still)/ have been quite (a) few people 或其他涉及人群who 做法、看法./ (still) more and more/ (still) quite a few/ few people (still) 或其他涉及人群的做法/看法. However / Indeed, 这种做法/看法的不当之处/危害性/表现. Even worse/ besides， 进一步说明该做法/看法的危害/表现.
// Nowadays/ In recent years, 问题is /are becoming / have/ has become a serious problem/ 问题 is getting more and more concern/ drawing wide attention.问题表现一. Even worse/Besides, 问题表现二.
说明原因段
There are many factors resulting in/ influencing 该问题./Many reasons contribute to 该问题./该问题 is due to the following factors/ reasons. Among these, 原因一plays / play a vital role/ is an important one. 进一步阐述原因一. What’s more/ In addition, 原因二.
说明方法段
Considering the seriousness of 该问题/ the great harm brought by 该问题/ the importance of 该问题， I think it is high time 采取行动或措施/ we paid more attention to 该问题。 Firstly/ Above all, 方法一. Secondly/ Moreover, 方法二。 Thirdly/Besides/ In addition, 方法三. To conclude / In a word, it is everyone’s responsibility to 为解决该问题付出努力/ it depends on common effort from 对解决问题起作用的人to 最终解决该问题. / It is an urgent thing 解决该问题. / Only in this way/ through these ways 该问题才能解决。
How to Improve the Parent-child Relationship
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1. 父母与孩子之间的代沟越来越大
2. 造成代沟产生的原因
3. 如何消除代沟，并改善父母与孩子之间的关系
In recent years, more and more people come to realize the harmfulness of the generation gap. Indeed, generation gap is a source of family disharmony. Besides, a worsened parent-child relationship caused by the generation gap may lead to numbers of social problems. (描述问题段)
Many reasons contribute to the generation gap. Among these, the different growing environment plays a vital role. Parents and their children grew up in different backgrounds, so it’s inevitable that they vary in values, which directly results in their different opinions on the same thing. What’s more, parents, being busy with their work, seldom have the opportunity to communicate with their kids. (说明原因段)
Considering the great harm brought by the generation gap, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the parent-child relationship. Above all, the parent should progress with time, and try their best to respect their child’s opinion. Moreover, the child should learn to be considerate of their parents and use proper methods to direct their parent to understand them. In addition, parents and child should participate in some activities together to deepen their understanding. To conclude, it depends on common efforts from both parents and child to improve the parent-child relationship. (说明方法段)
问题解决型模板2.
描述问题段
（As many people know, / It is generally accepted that）总数该问题. 表现一/作用一. Additionally, 表现二/作用二. Therefore, how to 总述该问题is worth paying more attention to / more attention from 应该关注该问题的人群.
说明方法/因素段
The following ways can be adopted/ Some effective measures have been taken to 解决该问题./ Many a factor plays an important role in 解决该问题. Firstly/Above all, 方法一/因素一. Secondly/ Moreover, 方法二/ 因素二. Thirdly/ Besides/ In addition, 方法三/ 因素三. 阐述观点段
As for me/ As far as I am concerned, 我的建议或看法. “我”的理由一. Besides/ In addition, 我的理由二. All in all/ Therefore, 总结全文.
How to Package Ourselves
1. 在现代社会， 人和商品一样，也需要包装
2. 适当包装的好处
3. 大学生应该如何包装自己？
It is generally accepted that packaging is very important in modern society, not only for a commodity but also for a person. A good packaging can help show a person’s unique qualities and advantages. Additionally, by packaging, a person can become more confident. Therefore, how we should package ourselves successfully is worth paying more attention to. (描述问题段)
Many a factor plays an important role in a successful packaging. Above all, we must have a clear knowledge of ourselves, and then find a packaging way suitable to our nature. Moreover, as young college students, our packing should not pursue magnificence and exaggeration but should be natural and causal. Besides, considering our financial conditions, we can not spend too much money in packaging.(说明因素段)
Form my point of vies, packing is necessary in today’s competitive society. However, it 2
absolutely shouldn’t be the focus of our attention. Also , we should have a correct understanding of packaging, distinguishing it from disguising and cheating. Also, going too far is absolutely undesirable. Therefore, we must have a good grasp of the degree of packaging.(阐述观点段) 问题解决型模板3.
描述问题段
Nowadays/ Recently/ In recent years, 问题has become quite a serious problem in 问题存在的主要范围/ has aroused widespread attention/ concern form 关注人群. 问题表现一/原因一/重要性一. What’s worse/ In addition, 问题表现二/原因二/重要性二.
说明危害段
( It is very clear that / As everyone sees,) 该问题 is /are bringing great damage/ harm to 危害对象/ 该问题produce(s) harmful effects in many aspects,/ (Though 该问题可能不太严重的表现，)该问题 can bring great negative effects (on 影响的对象)》 Above all / First of all, 危害一. 进一步阐述危害一. Furthermore/ Moreover/ Even worse/ What’s more, 危害二.
说明方法段
Undoubtedly/ Considering the seriousness of the problem, it is an urgent thing (for us to take effective measures ) to 解决该问题./ We should pay more attention to 该问题. Firstly/ First of all, 方法一. 进一步阐述方法一./ Secondly/ Moreover, 方法二. Thirdly/ Besides/ In addition, 方法二/方法三. Only through these ways / Only in this way 该问题才能够解决.
The Aging Problem in China
Nowadays, the aging problem in China has become quite a serious problem in the society. The decreased birth rate is one of the major factors that account for this problem. In addition, the improvement of medical technology prolongs people’s life span. (描述问题段)
The aging problem can bring great negative effects. Above all, it will exert a direct influence on the economy. Due to the aging problem, there may be a shortage of labor force, a key point ot be considered in many sectors, which will influence the industry greatly. Furthermore, the aging problem places a heavy burden on every family , since 4 to 8 family members need to be taken care if by the main labor force in a family.(说明危害段)
Undoubtedly, it is an urgent thing to deal with the aging problem. Firstly, the society security system should be set up for the olds because it is the premise to deal with the aging problem. Secondly, the welfare and rights of the olds should be attached great importance to. Thirdly, the olds should be encouraged to participate in social activities, which helps relieve the shortage of labor force and reduce the burden on every family. Only through these ways can the government better cope with the aging problem and provide the olds with a good living environment.
问题解决型常用句式 :
1. Nowadays, …..has become a problem we have to face.
2. Here are some suggestions for handing….
3. The best way to solve the troubles is …
4. People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.
5. It is important that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation.
6. There is little doubt that serious attention must be called to…..
7. There no immediate solution to the problem of …, but… might be helpful/ but the general
awareness of the necessity of….might be the first step.
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8. In order to make our world a better place in which we live, we should make great efforts to….
9. A great change will certainly be produced in ….
10. Following these methods may not guarantee the success in solution to …. But the payoff will
be worth the effort.
11. We should try our best to overcome /conquer the difficulty that…….
12. No wonder, many people are attracted/gravitated into…..It is quite obvious that the pursuit
of ….is the main reason for the problem.
13. One of the universal/ pressing/ burning/ urgent problems/ issues we are faced with/
confronting us is that …..
14. It is undeniable that …..has become the biggest concern of the present-day world.
15. There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …..
16. Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that …..will lead us in danger.
17. No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that….
18. It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.
19. Taking all these factors into consideration/ taking into account all these factors, we naturally
come to the conclusion that …..
20. All in all, we cannot live without…..But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to
cope with the problems that would arise. 4