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101 曹子健
The Shanghai International Marathon competition,which was raised by the Donglee Ltd. International was held on December 15th,2010.120 athletes who are from home and abroad took part in it.The motto of the competition was “Challege ourselves ,and live a healthy life.”It was more than a competition because everyone,including the audience,enjoyed the game and its spirit.Everyone watching the game cheered for the athletes while the athletes tried their very best to run faster and faster.As a result,98 finished the competition,with great glory and happiness.Melee from Ethopia won first place,and Li Zicheng from China,aged only 18 won second place.Encouraged by the game,everyone filled themselves with courage to fight against difficulties in daile life and become “Swifter,higher and stronger.”It was a meaningful event,wasn’t it?
101 叶敏婷
Happily,the Internationnal Marathon was held in Pudong in December 15th,2010.There were 120 athletes taking part,including Chinese and foreigners.It was held by the Donglee Ltd. International and the goal for the race was “Challenge myself and live healthily.”Not surprisingly,it was a great success.In the race,the audience all cheered for the athletes and of course,not hesitating,all the athletes tried their best to run faster and faster.As a result,98 of them finished the race and the competitor from Ethopia,called Melee,won the first place.What’s the most surprising thing,however,was that the 18-year-old competitor Li Zicheng won the second place who came from China.It was really meaningful to hold the race as it encouraged people not to give in to the difficulties and try to achieve the goal of “Swifter,higher and stronger.”
101 张尔雯
A Marathon race was held on Dec. 15th,2010 in Pudong,Shanghai.There were 120 athletes from home and abroad taking part.It was held bu the Donglee Ltd. International Company,What’s more,it’s goal was to challenge ourselves and make us learn to live in a healthy way.
During the competition,the audience cheered for the great athletes.Certainly,the athletes tried hard to run faster as they could.As a result,98 people finished the competition.The ahtlete named Melee,from Ethiopia won the first place.Li Zicheng,a Chinese boy,who is only 18 years old won the second place.
The competition was really meaningful.It encourages people noe to be afraid of difficulties and make efforts for the goal—“Swifter,Higher and Stronger.”
101 陈放
A breath-taking Marathon was held in Pudong,Shanghai on December 15th,2010.It was Donglee Ltd. International that host the competition and 120 athletes from home and abroad took part in it.The purpose of the competition was “Challenge ourselves and lead a healthy life.”During the race,the spectators were excited and cheered for the athletes again and again.And of course,the athletes tried their very best to run faster.As for a result,98 of the competitors finished the race,and Melee,from Ethiopia,won first place.To pur pride,Chinese athlete Li Zicheng,who was only 18,came next.Although under intense pressure,Li finished the race perfectly.The Marathon has passed,but it is still meaningful because it encourages people to face difficulties bravely and pay effords to achieve the goal “Swifter,higher and stronger.”
119 卿晨
Pudong,Shanghai has seen athletes presenting their best during a marathon held on Dec.15th,2010.Hundreds were screaming and cheering for the 120 competitors who were of different nationalities and making attempts to speed up all the time .The crowd burst into applause when among the 98 competitors who finished the race,Melee feom Ethiopia got the 1st place and the Chinese boy Li Zicheng,18,placed
2nd.Donglee Ltd. International,which was the host, claimed that the aim of the race was to appeal to people to challenge themselves and lead a healthy life .“The race was given the purpose of encouraging people to work on the goal of ‘Higher,Swifter and Stronger’instead of being afraid while facing hardships.”The company explained. 119 黄焕贞
The Shanghai International Marathon, which was held by Donglee Ltd. International Company,fell on Dec.15th.It was held in Pudong,Shanghai.
The number of the competitors from home and abroad was 120.And the goal of the competiton was to challenge ourselves and live heathily.Those who were watching the games were making their efforts to cheer for the competitors while competitors were trying their best to run faster.
In the end,98 competitorscompleted the competition and Melee,from Ethiopia,won the first prize;the Chinese boy,Li Zicheng,got the second place.
Although this competition has been over,it encourages us not to be frightened of hardships and to face the difficulties bravely,and we should also make frequent efforts to reach the goal:“Swifter,higher and stronger.”
119 吴可薇
The Shanghai International Marathon was concerned by the public,which was held in Pudong,Shanghai on Dec. 15th ,2010.120 athletes from home and abroad had taken part in the competiton held by Donglee Ltd. International.Undoutedly,this activity encouraged us to fight against ourselves and live a healthy life.Even though the competitors were deperately tierd,they still tried their best to run faster.And the audiences cheered for them.It’s not an exaggeration to desoribe the 98 people who finished the competition as heroes.It was an Ethiopia athlete named Melee that won the race.To our surprise,the Chinese athlete,Li Zicheng,who only aged 18 won the second place.There is no possibility of denying that this game is definitely worth the value.It encourage us ti face difficulties and work for the goal “Swifter,Higher and Stronger’.I am greatly convinced that this spirit will comtribute ti our life.
119 莫泳薇
The Shanghai International Marathon was held on Dec. 15th ,2010 in Pudong,Shanghai.Athletes from home and abroad in all 120 were admitted into the competition.Further more, it was held by Donglee Ltd. International.To encourage people to face the hardship bravely and make greater efforts to reach the goal which was“Swifter,Higher and Stronger”,a slogon which was“Taking challeges by yourself and living a healthy life.”was come up with.During the marathon,the audiences cheered for athletes who tried their best to run as fast as possible.As a result,it was 98 competitors that completed the marathon and Melee,from Ethiopia,was the first one to reach the detination.And Li Zicheng,only aged 18 from China,got the second place.
119 李慧娴
Undoubtedly,this is the most exciting competition among various of sports in Pudong,Shanghai,which was called International Marathon Competition.It was held on Dec. 15th,2010.
There were 120 competitors from home and abroad.This competition was hosted by Donglee Ltd. International.People who watched competition were cheering for athletes who were trying their best to run faster.The host called for people to make challenges and create a healthy life，and 98 competitors finished the competition.The athlete from Ethiopia was the winner.People also spoke highly of Li Zicheng,who was only 18 years but won the second place.The meaning of this competition was to encourage people to face the hardships to achieve the goal:“Swifter,Higher and Stronger.”And all of us should take an active part in sports.
As far as I am concerned,we should learn the importance of doing sports and start to do sports from now on.
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The Shanghai International Marathon was held on Dec. 15th,2010 in Pudong Shanghai.It was held by the Donglee Ltd. International.There were about 120 athletes taking part.The goal of the competition was “Chanllenge ourselves,live a healthy life”.
The people who watched the competition cheered for the competitors,so the competitors tried their best to run as fast as they could.
The result of the competition was that there were 98 competitors finished the competition,the Ethiopian competitor Melee won the 1st prize,and Li Zicheng aged only 18 won the 2nd prize.The other competitors who didn’t won a good prize said they would come again.
The competition was held in order to encourage people not to be afraid of the difficulties and make effort to reached the goal “Swifter,Higher and Stronger”
121 杨灿洪
It was on Dec. 15th,2010 that the International Marathon Competitiong was held in Pudong,Shanghai.There were 120 competitors who were from hone and abroad.Donglee Ltd. Internatinal Company,who is the host of this competition,said that holding this competition was for the purpose of telling people to challenge themselves and live more healthily.The people who watched the the competitors cheered for the athletes and the competitors tried their best to run faster.At the end of the competition,there were 98 people who finished the competition.And the winner is Melee who is from Ethiopia.Li Zicheng won the second prize.To our surprise,he is only an 18-year-old Chinese boy.As is known to all,this competition encouraged people to face the difficulties bravely and try to be swifter,higher and stronger