20xx年西城一模情景作文16分

People moving our school

Recently, a meaningful activity was held in our school, which aimed at selecting some people who moved us in our daily life. The student Union put up an introduction about this activity on the school notice board. At the same time, six candidates’ photos were put up on it. In our spare time, we watched the video about six candidates. From the video, we got to know what they did. One of them cleaned our teaching building every day, another one always helped others.

After knowing the good deeds of them, our classmates finally voted for four people who impressed and moved us most. Organized by our monitor, we voted the tickets into a big box one by one.

Last Friday, in the school meeting, the top four people were awarded by the school headmaster. We all admired them, for the reason that they not only did what they should do but also set on good example for us. All of us were determined to learn from them!

What a meaningful activity it was! I will never forget it!

20xx年西城一模开放作文12分

As can be seen in this picture, a man wants to cut a branch from the big tree, while he saws the branch where he is sitting on at the present. How ridiculous it is! So in the end, he will drop from the tree and hurt himself badly.

From my perspective, what the picture intends to tell us is that we should take a total consideration when we deal with things. If the sawed other branch rather than the one he sat on ,he would not only get what he wants but also avoid getting hurt. This picture reminds me of our study. Some of us sometimes cheat in the exam in order to get good grades as they want, just like the man in the picture. However, they don’t consider the punishment they will be faced. As a result, they will fail.

In a word, no matter what we do ,we are supposed to take a total consideration. Only in this way, can we achieve our goals easily and safely! This is what I have benefited from this picture.

第二篇：20xx北京高考英语开放作文七大热点话题

观点1：成功，失败，困难 success and failure困难/心态：difficulty and mindset（2010北京）The road to success is beset with tremendous difficulties, but don’t be afraid of them.Faced with difficulties, we should never give up and try our best to find a way out. Life can be hard. But if we have the courage,persistence,confidence and determination, we will finally gain the final success.2012.1月朝阳（困难与成功）答案：三、可能出现的立意: 1. 遇到困难时应审时度势，尽可能找到解决办法。2. 要想成功，就不能害怕失败，尝试最重要。3. 不要被表面的困难吓倒，总会有办法。4. 每个人面前都有机会，重要的是能否抓住机会。5. 不同的人看待事物的角度不同（角度1 ：悬崖 角度2：梯子）。6. 选用正确的办法是解决问题的关键（走下悬崖，从梯子爬上另一端，而不是跨过沟壑）。7. … …8. … …9. … …四、One possible version:As can be seen in the picture, there is a man hesitating before a gap which stops his way to the destination. The gap is deep and wide, which seems hard to cross. However, there is a ladder down in the gap, which provides an easy access to the other side.The picture conveys the message that it is important to study the situation in case of difficulty. The road is stopped by the gap. However, with the help of the ladder, one can go to the other side and continue his journey to the destination. This also applies to our daily life. If we study what lies before us carefully when we meet difficulty, we may find a way out. Thus, it is necessary to study the situation and find a solution. 方法:ways of doing sth 正确方法Let’s try to choose the right way to deal with different problems. Right ways mean less work and better results, while wrong ways lead to more work and failure.once a problem comes, it is more important for us to analyse it first and find out how to solve it. Only in this way can we reach our target.2012.1月东城（做事方法）答案：第二节 开放作文（15分）One possible version:As can be seen in the picture, a boy is holding a pair of huge scissors to cut a small piece of paper, but in vain.The picture tries to tell us that a proper method plays a very important role in achieving a goal. In our daily life, we constantly need to carry out different tasks, whether they are simple or complicated. We should always keep in mind that adopting a proper method is the most important thing. If not, whatever efforts we make, we’ll accomplish nothing, just like the boy in the picture, who is using a wrong way to cut paper. It may be wise for him to change the scissors into a small pair or just use his own fingers. Only in this way, can he tear the paper into pieces. In my opinion, choosing a suitable method is very important both in our study and in our life.

直接不行，间接来direct way/indirect way（2011北京）In pursuing a dream, we might focus on only one say of making it come true, forgetting that there may be alternatives.20xx年西城二模答案：二、One possible version: As is seen from the picture, a man, annoyed with a big stone ahead of him in the middle of a wide road, is trying his best to kick the stone away, sweating heavily.It seems that the man’s purpose is to clear the barrier in his way. However, he hasn’t realized that he may solve the problem in another way. With enough space on both sides, why not walk around the stone and keep going? The story of the man can be a lesson to us. We may have different problems in everyday life. Don’t just stick to one method only and get yourself trapped. Instead, we need to look around and try to use what life offers to achieve our goals. 学生习作： In my opinion, I really don’t agree with the person in the picture. We should do things step by step. I think we shouldn’t think about any idea to make success easier, or we may fall into the trouble that we haven’t expected. Genius is 1% inspiration and 99% perspiration. I think we should learn from Edison and do everything carefully. I think the man in the picture is clever. Choosing this way, he can save energy and finish the task in a short time. For example, in our life, when we meet the maths problems, some people may answer them in the way the teacher has taught us while other students may use an easy way to solve them. So it is necessary for us to set our mind free and not to follow the common practice.The ways of being success are different, and we should try to find the best way to make it.In my opinion, the road stands for something we have to do in our life, whose process may be long and hard. So some people always want to take an easy way to go over the road, which may save their time and energy. But I think it’s totally wrong. Many things like study and work are really difficult for us to accomplish. But the process of them is more important than the result, since we may get many benefits from it. So we shouldn’t pay too much attention to the results. Only by understanding the value of process, can we make our life more meaningful. 成功需要耐心Theme: Success needs a person’s patience.个人力量/团队协作:individual's strength and teamwork/cooperationCooperation needs effective communication, without which we’ll do things blindly. So before taking actions, plan things carefully and communicate well with your partners。Unity brings power.Two heads are better than one.United we stand, divided we fall. In the picture, two goats are tied to each other with a rope. They both see some grass in opposite directions, and try t

o pull to get their own food. They are unsuccessful, because the rope is too short to allow them to eat the food at the same time. The picture is trying to tell us that cooperation is better than conflict. Both of the goats want their food at the same time, which has formed a conflict between them. However, if they decide to cooperate and eat the grass on the left first, and then the grass on the right, they will both be able to get their food. Thus things will turn into a "win-win" situation. Therefore, remember that sometimes our goal is not that we get something and the other gets nothing, but that all people get what they want. Cooperation will benefit everyone. As can be seen in the picture, two men are holding sticks ready to kill the mouse . When they drive the mouse to the common area, both of them expect the other to catch it. If they work together , they will surely kill the mouse.The picture tells us that we should cooperate to overcome the difficulties . The two men are just like we students and the mouse is just like the difficulties shared by us. In face of difficulties, each of us should take on our own responsibility and work together to achieve success. Just as an old saying goes: unity is strength. Only when we work together will success come. 2012.1月西城（团结就是力量） 答案：As depicted in the picture, some small fish, fleeing in all directions, are being chased by a large, fierce one. A few minutes later, however, the tables are turned. The small fish, along with a large number of their fellows, return and drive their enemy away by forming the shape of a larger fish. The hidden message here is obvious, that is, unity brings strength. To a small fish, life can be very tough as threats from the large fish are always there. The chance for its survival is slim when it faces a large fish all by itself. If, however, all the small fish form a united team, they may become strong enough to defeat the enemy. The same thing would happen in our life. For instance, we sometimes face threats or troubles that may be unbearable, leaving each of us insecure and helpless. Don’t forget, in that case, that our friends and family are a source of strength. If life is a pond and we are the fish inside it, we should always stay united to meet its challenges. 海淀一摸答案：三、Possible versions1．立意：团结As can be seen in the picture, some people are standing hand-in-hand, forming the shape of a heart. They are all smiling happily.This picture conveys the message that sometimes we need to be united. There are basically two ways to accomplish things: working alone or working together with others. We are born with all kinds of ambitions, to conquer the world, for example. Yet very often we are awakened up by the plain fact that there are certain things we cannot accomplish alone. Therefore, it is essential for us to work in a united way. United, we stand; divi

ded, we fall. We should bear in mind that we cannot survive alone and frequently we need to unite with others to achieve our goals. (124 words)2．立意：爱心传递As can be seen in the picture, many children are standing merrily in a circle, hand-in-hand. The circle is heart-shaped.The simple picture conveys a deep message that the world will be full of love when everybody passes their own love to others. Love is important for us. Just as the picture above, only when love is delivered from person to person can we sense each other’s trust, concern, warmth, friendship, etc, which are vital for everyone’s happiness.In a word, if every one of us can devote a bit of love to others, our lives will be more beautiful. (100 words)20xx年海淀二模答案：第二节 开放作文（15分）One possible version：In the picture, we can see a circle of bricks standing next to each other. The first brick on the right is falling down, causing the falling of the next one. In the end, the whole circle will be ruined.The picture conveys a message that the success of a project depends on each individual step. When each individual step is given full attention, it is quite likely that the whole project will be a success. In the same way, a mistake in one step may lead to a complete failure of the whole project, as is shown in the picture. So each individual step can make the difference between success and failure.We should try our best every step of the way.注意细节The picture conveys a message that the success of a project depends on each individual step. In the same way, a mistake in one step may lead to a complete failure of the whole project, as is shown in the picture.only when every part of one certain job is well constructed can the project turns out to be a success.As far as I’m concerned, we should strengthen ouselves, in order to make sure that every part of our knowledge is well mastered. Otherwise, the test score won’t be ideal.过程与结果 process and result，不能好高骛远Some people always dream of great success.they are so eager to succeed that they hope to get to their destination as quickly as possible.the fact is on the contrary.So we should focus on the process of fighting for success．As long as every step is solid, sooner or later we will gain what we long for．重视基础20xx年海淀二模答案：In the picture, a man is rowing a boat with great difficulty. However, the water in the river is too shallow for the boat to move on. Obviously, it is difficult to move the boat no matter how hard he tries.The picture tries to convey the message that it is important to build a solid foundation if we want to succeed. We can learn this lesson in real life. Take study for example. If we don’t have basic knowledge and essential ability, we may fail to achieve our goals even if we work hard. Just like the man in the pictu

re, he can’t move forward as expected because water is not deep enough for the boat.Therefore, a good foundation is the key to success天才与勤奋Even if you are gifted to some degree, you can’t just rely on your talent. Talent does some support to your success, but can’t guarantee unless you pay for that as well. Working hard is the base to make sure you can reach your goal.不因循守旧In our society, many people have got used to their common practices of settling problems. They are unaware that there are better solutions. So in my opinion, whatever we do, we should be creative and try to find out a most effective way观点2：优点与缺点 —— 进步improvement优点advantage / merit / talent / abilities / strength / strong points缺点 disadvantage / shortcoming / limitation / drawback / weakness/weak points我们要学习别人身上的长处，这样才能促进我们自身的进步。The learning process to other’s talents is important, which contributes to our own improvement effectively. 每个人都有缺点，每个人也都有优点。Everyone possesses merits as well as limitations. 扬长避短 perform / show the talents and avoid the drawbacks取其精华，弃其糟粕 absorb the useful and reject the worthless事倍功半more efforts but less effect我们要虚心接受别人的意见，这样才能取得更大的进步。The modest acceptance to others’ suggestions contributes to our progress more effectively.平等交流 If we enlarge one’s strongpoint, we may recognize it and can find something worth learning from the person. On the contrary, if his weak point is always focused on, he will feel discouraged, which prevents him from making progress.（优点缺点）As we all know, everyone has both strengths and weaknesses. Therefore, we should be objective about others’ achievements rather than find faults with them on purpose. Only in this way can harmony be achieved and conflicts be avoided. （客观认识别人的成就，不能总挑别人的毛病）some people who look confident, trying to impress others with their “rich” knowledge. However, what they really know is far from enough.As an old saying goes, empty bottles make the loudest noise.Therefore, it’s wise to enrich ourselves with knowledge and try to make our head full.（正确认识自己，戒骄戒躁guard against arrogance，不断提升改进自己）骄傲与谦虚In a word, the way to success is full of difficulties around. We should not be too proud; instead, we need to be more modest and keep our mind clear. Therefore, in the course of pursuing our dreams, we should be aware and make the best of our own strengths rather than ignore our own strong points. （认识并充分利用自己的优势，不要盲目羡慕和模仿他人的优点）everyone has his or her advantages. The old man is rich in life experience, but it do

esn’t mean he can do everything best. The young one is lack of life experience, but full of energy and new ideas. He can do something better than the old. In my opinion, we should learn from each other no matter whether he (she) is old or young.（各有所长，互相学习）we all have strengths and weaknesses，and what we can do is limited．However，weaknesses don’t necessarily mean failure，but may indicate the possibility of cooperation．By working with others．and making the best use of each other's talents，we can always achieve better results．（每个人都有自己的优点缺点，共同合作，能互相补充对反的不足，获得更大的成功）观点3：父母与孩子的关系20xx年北京卷the mother bird must be very proud of her children,who are able to find their own food now.but she may also feel a sense of loss since they no longer need her day-to-day care as they used to. This picture shows very well the mixed feelings of parents when watching their children grow up. Their “nest” will never be empty!Although it seems that the kid does not respect his dad, it is their communication that has gone wrong. Open and frank communications help to ensure parents and their children stay close together.So why don’t the dad and his son sit together, calm down and talk through their problems? This way, I believe they will gradually have a positive relationship and become the father and son the we all really admire.parents are making every effort to create a comfortable environment for their children. But unfortunately, they have forgotten one important fact. No one can grow up without experiencing pain and difficulties. Too much protection from parents has a side effect on children. Let children face whatever may lie ahead of them SO that they will be able to grow naturally. (经历风吹雨打，才能独立成长)20xx年东城二模答案：So parents do whatever they can to take good care of their children. There’s nothing wrong with that. But meanwhile, as far as I’m concerned, not only the young but also the old in society deserve good care and enough attention. The needs of the old shouldn’t be ignored.In conclusion, we shouldn’t lose the good tradition of caring for the old.When talking to each other, father and son are not in equal positions. Fathers simply tell their sons what to do rather than listen patiently．Therefore，sons will have few chances to share their own ideas or open up to their fathers．They often look up to their fathers with respect，fearing that they might not live up to fathers’expectations．1 hope our parents will listen to us more instead of just giving us orders．（平等交流，而非发号施令equal communication rather that giving order Theme1: We should cherish the unconditional love given from our parents and do something for them in return.

Theme2: Too much love from parents has spoiled us so that we don’t have enough ability to face challenge in real life.健康成长 healthy growth / improvement / development 表扬 praise / commend v praise / commendation n 创造一个让孩子能够健康成长的家庭氛围。Create a family atmosphere where children can receive a healthy growth.孩子与父母沟通方式不正确，不应该溺爱孩子，应该严格教育Parents should treat their children in a proper way. They mustn't spoil them，but be strict with them.孩子的一系列依赖行为都是家长的过分溺爱造成的。Children’s dependent habits come from parents’ spoiling behaviors.Children’s dependent behaviors come from parents’ spoiling and indulgence.如果家长能够让孩子自由的选择他们想做的事情，那孩子们的生活将会比现在轻松得多。If parents can return the right of choosing to the children, their life will become much more relaxing and pleasant.观点4：反应环境问题（情景作文曾考过环保类话题） whatever we do, we shouldn’t only focus on what we are doing at present. If we neglect our future, we’ll end up in failure。If we pay no attention to the environment just in order to earn more money now, how can we live a happy life in the dirty surroundings? So try to think about our future when doing things.（不能杀鸡取卵，要放眼未来）观点5：心态2012.1月海淀（心态：知足）答案：三、One possible versionAs is shown in the picture, a monkey is picking and eating peaches happily on a tree, throwing some half eaten ones onto the ground. A hedgehog, at the same time, is eating the leftovers happily. From my point of view, the picture conveys that we should have a positive attitude towards life. The food for the animals in the picture is not of the same quality, but they both seek great pleasure by enjoying what life presents. It is this attitude that we should adopt. If we enjoy the things in hand, we will smile through life, just like the monkey and hedgehog in the picture1、（2009-2010hdqm）One possible version:As can be seen in the picture, the two cups are smiling, regardless of how much water they each have. One cup is almost full while the other is not.The picture indicated that people should always be optimistic, no matter what they have. Just as in shown, the two cups with different amount of water are both happy. I think that they are both pleased to serve people with all they have. They may represent common people in our life. Whether rich or poor, we should be happy to do something for society. Thus we can learn that giving is the source of happiness.2.（2009-2010cyqm）One possible version :From the picture we can see that one hand is trying to hold the sand with great caution . while the other hand lets part of it drop .I think the picture conveys the message of gain and loss to us .

The sand is just like good things in our life .Everyone attempts to get things and hold them forever .However ,it is impossible to keep everything all the time .Sometimes we have to learn to abandon something , even if it’s quite good or usefull . In my opinion , sometimes to lose is not a bad thing , but a wise choice . 乐观悲观There are all kinds of troubles in our life. If we can face them in an optimistic way, things will be better and we’ll be more hopeful. Faced with the same situation in our daily life, pessimistic people may feel helpless and complain about it all day long.1. Peaceful and calm mood can lead to success while nervousness will lead to failure; 2. Calm mind helps hit the target.3. If you have a peaceful heart, you will have a peaceful result;4.实力+心态=成功；1. Good mood helps to get a step further to success;2.Relaxation will lead us to success;3.The lighter your heart is ,the nearer to success; 4.Relaxed mind helps reduce pressure;5. Having easy mood benefits our life;6.A relaxed attitude towards problems can relieve the burden on you;7.不论遇到多大的机遇与挑战，都要保持一颗平常心；8.越激烈的竞争需要越平静的心态；9.心态对克服困难很重要；1. Different people have different attitudes towards the same thing; we should choose to be active;2.Life is so short and precious that we have to live each single day happily;Attitude determines your mood;3. Attitudes towards life result in different moods.4.Optimistic & pessimistic5.人可以自己决定自己的心境愉悦与否，心是可以被头脑控制的；6.面对含苞待放的花朵，乐观的人看到花开，悲观的人看到花败；其他：比如自信，乐观，平静的心态也应该考虑观点6：因特网 应该正确使用Instead of helping people open to the world, the Internet ,if used inappropriately, may enclose them from the real outside world.较全面的立意Become addicted to the virtual world , separated from the realityBe trapped in the big cage of the Internet without knowing it不全面的立意Become addicted to computerPut ourselves into the virtual worldIt is shown in the picture that a boy playing with his computer is locked in a bird cage, while still unaware of his imprisonment.Instead of helping people open to the world, the Internet ,if used inappropriately, may enclose them from the real outside world. People are just sometimes too obsessed in chatting online or playing games, having fun with virtual friends. Such a hobby can serve as a drug, by using which you may be freed from the real world full of unpleasant matters, sinking into an absolutely perfect but virtual world. As people are getting more and more addicted to it, however, the rapid changing world of the reality has already become inapproachable to them. In other words, these people are actually locking themselves

by an invisible cage made by themselves.Instead of burying yourself into a virtual world, why not face the problems in the real world bravely? In that way, and only in that way can we finally truly grasp our dreams in our minds.In the picture we see a group of children playing hopscotch happily while a boy is sitting in front of his computer，fully absorbed in a game．This picture intends to show how children today and in the past spend their free time．In the old days, there was no modern equipment such as TV sets or computers，so children killed time，playing games outdoors．With the development of science and technology, children are so attracted by computer games that they become addicted and stay in front of the screen all day long. Unlike the kids playing hopscotch，a team game，the boy who tends to spend more time alone easily develops psychological problems such as a lack of a sense of cooperation and communication skills．So in my opinion，modern science may not benefit people．观点7：创新1. Never let tradition wear out the passion of innovation;2. Don’t let conservation eat away creativity3. Keep up with the time.4.The world is constantly evolving; we should be evolving and keep up with the changing world instead of being conservative;5. 更积极地看待新事物，不要剥夺新事物成长的机会；6.打破思维禁锢，在前人的基础上改革创新；不因循守旧In our society, many people have got used to their common practices of settling problems. They are unaware that there are better solutions. So in my opinion, whatever we do, we should be creative and try to find out a most effective way开放作文之升华总结篇提出建议，总结结论，或者升华主旨（完整，有力），有时候还可以联系自己升华总结方法：in conclusion,to sum up,therefore,...建议或者结论 倒装句only in this way can we do sth...