作文评分标准
2分 — 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分 — 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
8分 — 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
11分— 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。
14分— 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。字数不足应酌情扣分：
Part One 背诵范文
对命运的两种看法
自己的观点
结论：命运掌握在自己的手中
My View on Fate fate. fate is predestined and nobody can change it, everybody is the master of his fate and he can change it with his own hands.
latter all men are born equal and nobody is destined to always succeed or fail in his life. For another, if a person is diligent and determined, he will realize his dream no matter how poor, humble or unlucky he may be. Nobel, who invented dynamite after countless experiments during which lost his brother and got seriously injured himself.
there is no such thing as destined fate in our life. Only if we hold on to our dream can we turn it into reality, just as the saying goes, ― Everybody is the architect of his own fortune.‖
家教的好处
家教的坏处
结论
Advantages and Disadvantages of Family Tutoring engage family tutors for their children. family tutoring , family tutoring can help weak students to can help the child make preparations for the future competition.
Family tutoring students may not welcome family tutoring at all because many of them are already overburdened. the quality of the
teacher and teaching remains a potential problem, as the main aim of most tutors is to earn money. , the student may depend too much on family tutoring and overlook learning at school.
disadvantages . Teachers and parents should help students improve efficiency both in and out of class –
experience tells us that the best students need no family tutoring.
毕业生关注找工作问题
找工作的三个解决办法
总结
How to Get a Job After Graduation
a more and more fierce competition in the job market. Consequently students voice growing concern over how to get a job after graduation.
, the main approach is to take part in grand recruiting fairs in big cities. The students hands in his resume and waits for the notice of an interview. , the student can go over the advertisements on newspapers, TV or the Internet to find a satisfactory job. Of course, he should also wait for replay after sending out applications. going directly to an ideal company is a brave behavior, which sounds pretty rare among the job hunters. I don’t want to have a try at those companies which have not advertised in the mass media. The success rate is so rare that I cannot afford the time and energy. I would not like to go to those crowded recruiting fairs, which often provide only poor-paying posts which are neither challenging nor promising. sufficient preparations and distinguishing myself during interviews, get the ideal job which I have been dreaming of.
奥运将在北京召开
奥运对中国的巨大影响
作为大学生我们能为奥运做什么
Beijing Olympics and I
The Olympics Games will be held in Beijing on August 8, 2008. All the Chinese feel very proud of this great event. As the historic sports meeting, Beijing Olympics will not only bring along splendid sport competitions, but also offer golden opportunities for the development of China.
’s economic development. , the Olympic Games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. games, large numbers of tourists will visit China and experience Chinese culture, thus improving the communication between Chinese people and people from all over the world.
As college students, we should contribute our share to this historic event. For example, we can carry out Olympic education among citizens, familiarizing them with Olympic spirits and Olympic knowledge.
An English speech contest the University English Club May 4th the university auditorium memorize the 86th anniversary of the May 4th Movement. Any of
full-time student in this university the speech. The student interested in the activity a draft of his/her speech April 30ththe Speech Organization Committee Office at Room 1512 of the No.2 Student Dormitory. Please email your draft
Part Two 结构与模板
作文开头部分
1. 开门见山 The best way to stay healthy is to develop a good quality of psychology. ……
2. 正反表态 Nowadays more and more advertisements are seen on TV every day. Some people think that advertising on TV can bring us a lot of benefits, but others hold the different opinions. In my opinion, I am in favor of the former.
3. 让步法 Nowadays, young people choose to phone each other rather writing letters. Some are worried that letter writing will be useless in the future. Even so, I still maintain that letter writing will never be killed by phones. …..
4. 提问法 Of the different factors that can have influence on young adults, the family and friends stand out most. Which of the two is more important? My view is that it is friends who have the most important influence on young adults.
常用句型
1. When it comes to ……, some think/believe/hold ……
2. There is a public debate today that ……
3. Recently, …. has been brought into focus.
4. Like a coin has two sides, there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to ……
5. Nowadays, it is heatedly discussed topic to many people that …..
6. ….. has aroused much public concern in ……
7. In my opinion/Personally ….
8. From my point of view, I think …….
9. My view is that …..
10. As for myself/For my part, I would like to say ….
11. As far as I am concerned, I …….
12. We can assume ……
作文主体部分
段落的展开
主题句: 本段要说什么问题;
具体; 简洁
扩展句: 说明和支持该主题
表示各种逻辑关系的过渡词连接各个句子
1. …as an example, to
illustrate….
2. to begin with, first, second, furthermore, besides, in addition, moreover,
finally,
3. reason, consequently, is caused by, lead to, result in
4. at the same time, similar to, accordingly, both, similarly, the same as, in
the same way
作文结尾部分
1. 总结归纳 From the above, we can see that TV advertising is beneficial both to manufacturers and consumers because of the information it provides.
2. 再次强调 Generally speaking, in most cases, friends are the most important influence on young adults.
3. 提出建议 In order to survive the competition of globalization, we must go along with the historic tide of globalization, and actively cope with the opportunity and challenge that the economic globalization brings.
常用句型
1. In summary, …
2. In short, ….
3. In brief, ….
4. To sum up, …..
5. In conclusion, ….
6. All in all, …..
7. On the whole, ….
8. In a word, …..
9. From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that…..
10. Thus, it can be concluded that….
11. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ….
12. We can conclude from the foregoing reasons and examples that ….
常见作文模板
Nowadays ,there are more and more ……. It is estimated that …… Why have there been so many …? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is that ….Besides,…. The third reason is….To sum up ,the main cause of ….is due to ….. .It is high time that something were
done upon it. For one thing ,…..On the other hand ,….. All these measures will certainly…..
For most of us today, ….
From above ,we can find that the reasons why ….are as follows.
The primary reason , I think, is …
Second, ….
The third reason is …….
Therefore, ….
These days we often hear that …..
It is common that……..
For one thing ,…….
For another,…….
What is more, ……..
Since ….., it is natural that ……….
To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth trying .We should do something such as …..to improve the present situation ,and I do believe everything will be better in the future .
Different people have different views on ____. Some people think that ____, while others argue that ____. … As far as I am concerned, I agree with the ___ opinion. … Taking all these factors into consideration, we can reach a conclusion that ……
Recently it has become a common phenomenon for …….
Although it may …… Personally, I … agree with……
On the one hand, …… On the other hand, …..
In a word, …….
Nowadays,…… It has become such a serious problem in our society.
To put an end to such a serious problem, in my opinion, calls for the efforts from all sides. First of all, ….. Moreover, ….. Last, ….
As long as …… , we believe we will find a satisfactory solution to the problem!
谚语类模板
There is a famous saying, …… which means …..
Let’s take …. for an example. …..
Judging from the examples given above, we can come to a conclusion that ….