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托福综合写作范文-TPO3
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Reading阅读材料
Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters. However, there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him. One such painting is known as attributed to Rembrandt because of its style, and indeed the representation of the woman’s face is very much like that of portraits known to be by Rembrandt. But there are problems with the painting that suggest it could not be a work by Rembrandt.
First, there is something inconsistent about the way the woman in the portrait is dressed. She is wearing a white linen cap of a kind that only servants would wear-yet the coat she is wearing has a luxurious fur collar that no servant could afford. Rembrandt, who was known for his attention to the details of his subjects’ clothing, would not have been guilty of such an inconsistency.
Second, Rembrandt was a master of painting light and shadow, but in this painting these elements do not fit together. The face appears to be illuminated by light reflected onto it from below. But below the face is the dark fur collar, which would absorb light rather than reflect it. So the face should appear partially in shadow-which is not how it appears. Rembrandt would never have made such an error.
Finally, examination of the back of the painting reveals that it was painted on a panel made of several pieces of wood glued together. Although Rembrandt often painted on wood panels, no painting known to be by Rembrandt uses a panel glued together in this way from several pieces of wood.
For these reasons the painting was removed from the official catalog of Rembrandt’s paintings in the 1930s.
listening听力材料
Professor:
Everything you just read about "Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet" is true, and yet after a thorough re-examination of the painting, a panel of experts has recently concluded that it's indeed a work by Rembrandt. Here is why.
First, the fur collar. X-rays and analysis of the pigments in the paint have shown that the fur collar wasn't part of the original painting. The fur collar was painted over the top of the original painting about a hundred years after the painting was made. Why? Someone probably wanted to increase the value of the painting by making it look like a formal portrait of an aristocratic lady.
Second, the supposed error with light and shadow. Once the paint of the added fur color was removed, the original could be seen, in the original painting, the woman is wearing a simple collar of light-colored cloth. The light-colored cloth of this collar reflects light that illuminates part of the woman's face. That's why the face is not in partial shadow. So in the original painting, light and shadow are very realistic and just what we would expect from Rembrandt.
Finally, the wood panel. It turns out that when the fur collar was added, the wood panel was also enlarged with extra wood pieces glued to the sides and the top to make the painting more grand and more valuable. So the original painting is actually painted on a single piece of wood, as would be expected from a Rembrandt painting. And in fact, researchers have found that the piece of wood in the original form of "Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet" is from the very same tree as the wood panel used for another painting by Rembrandt, his "Self-portrait with a Hat".
Answer托福综合写作范文
The lecture revises the idea presented in the text, that Rembrandt was not the artist who painted the famous painting “Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet.”
The inconsistency between the white cap, which identifies the woman as a servant, and the expensive fur collar she wears dissolves as the professor explains that the fur collar was apparently painted over Rembrandt’s original in order to increase its worth by displaying an aristocratic woman.
In addition, the assumption that the light and shadows in the painting do not fit together is refuted by the fact that in the original painting the woman wears a light cloth that illuminated her face. Thus, the presentation of light and shadow was indeed very realistic and accurate, as it is characteristic of Rembrandt’s paintings.
Finally, the mystery of the panel consisting of patches glued together is also solved in the lecture.The wood panel was actually later enlarged to make it more grand in size and hence more valuable, but the original painting was painted on a single panel, as Rembrandt would have done. Furthermore, the wood was found to be made from the same tree Rembrandt used in many of his other paintings, like the “Self-Portrait with a Hat.”
All this information serves to support the argument that Rembrandt was the painter of this controversial work.
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TPO3综合写作阅读部分：
Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters. However, there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him. One such painting is known as attributed to Rembrandt because of its style, and indeed the representation of the woman’s face is very much like that of portraits known to be by Rembrandt. But there are problems with the painting that suggest it could not be a work by Rembrandt.
First, there is something inconsistent about the way the woman in the portrait is dressed. She is wearing a white linen cap of a kind that only servants would wear-yet the coat she is wearing has a luxurious fur collar that no servant could afford. Rembrandt, who was known for his attention to the details of his subjects’ clothing, would not have been guilty of such an inconsistency.
Second, Rembrandt was a master of painting light and shadow, but in this painting these elements do not fit together. The face appears to be illuminated by light reflected onto it from below. But below the face is the dark fur collar, which would absorb light rather than reflect it. So the face should appear partially in shadow-which is not how it appears. Rembrandt would never have made such an error.
Finally, examination of the back of the painting reveals that it was painted on a panel made of several pieces of wood glued together. Although Rembrandt often painted on wood panels, no painting known to be by Rembrandt uses a panel glued together in this way from
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several pieces of wood.
For these reasons the painting was removed from the official catalog of Rembrandt’s paintings in the 1930s.
(一)下面是阅读部分常遇到的疑难词解释，希望能帮助大家更好的理解文章的内容：
1. Rembrandt ['rembrɑ:nt] n. 伦布兰特(姓氏)
2. inconsistent [?nk?n's?st(?)nt]adj. 不一致的；前后矛盾的
3. linen [['l?n?n]]
n. 亚麻布，亚麻线；亚麻制品
adj. 亚麻的；亚麻布制的
n. (Linen)人名；(英)利嫩
4. panel ['p?n(?)l]
n. 仪表板；嵌板；座谈小组，全体陪审员
vt. 嵌镶板
n. (Panel)人名；(英、法)帕内尔
5. catalog [['k?t?l?ɡ]]
n. [图情][计] 目录；登记
vi. 编目录；按确定价格收入目录(等于catalogue)
vt. 登记；为编目录
(二)以下是对阅读文章中出现的长难句的解析：
1. 位于阅读第一段：One such painting is known as attributed to Rembrandt because of its style, and indeed the representation of the woman’s face is very much like that of portraits known to be by Rembrandt.
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解析：这句话解释说其中有一幅画因画风而被认为是伦布兰特的作品，并且，就这幅画中女性的面部体现而言，也确实是伦布兰特的刻画风格。
Such是形容词，修饰后面的painting，be known as表示“被认为是?”；这个句子并没有涉及很多的语法，而是一些简单的词组连接而成。
2. 位于阅读第二段：She is wearing a white linen cap of a kind that only servants would wear-yet the coat she is wearing has a luxurious fur collar that no servant could afford.
解析：句子中的of后面部分修饰cap，of表示“?的”；a kind 后面的that作为关系代词，引导非限制性定语从句，和第二个that的用法一样。
3.位于阅读最后一段：Although Rembrandt often painted on wood panels, no painting known to be by Rembrandt uses a panel glued together in this way from several pieces of wood.
解析：句子是although引导的从句表示“尽管”的意思，后半句表示“但是”的意思。两句是转折的关系。
(三)阅读文章组织结构解析
文章以“总—分”的结构解释了为什么这幅作品非Rembrandt所作。
总论点：文章第一段最后一句：But there are problems with the painting that suggest it could not be a work by Rembrandt.(有几处问题说明这幅作品不是Rembrandt所作)。
分论点1：第二段第一句：there is something inconsistent about the way the woman in the portrait is dressed.(画中女士的穿着不协调，而Rembrandt不会犯这样的错误)。
分论点2：第三段第一句：Rembrandt was a master of painting light and shadow, but in this painting these elements do not fit together.(作品的明暗色调不协调)。
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分论点3：最后一段最后一句：Although Rembrandt often painted on wood panels, no painting known to be by Rembrandt uses a panel glued together in this way from several pieces of wood.(画板是木头拼接而成，不是Rembrandt的风格)
阅读文章的内容首先否定了作品是Rembrandt所作，然后从三个方面做出分析。下面是听力文本部分，我们来看看，又有什么观点和支持的论点呢。
听力文本部分：
Professor:
Everything you just read about "Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet" is true, and yet after a thorough re-examination of the painting, a panel of experts has recently concluded that it's indeed a work by Rembrandt. Here is why.
First, the fur collar. X-rays and analysis of the pigments in the paint have shown that the fur collar wasn't part of the original painting. The fur collar was painted over the top of the original painting about a hundred years after the painting was made. Why? Someone probably wanted to increase the value of the painting by making it look like a formal portrait of an aristocratic lady.
Second, the supposed error with light and shadow. Once the paint of the added fur color was removed, the original could be seen, in the original painting, the woman is wearing a simple collar of light-colored cloth. The light-colored cloth of this collar reflects light that illuminates part of the woman's face. That's why the face is not in partial shadow. So in the original painting, light and shadow are very realistic and just what we would expect from Rembrandt.
Finally, the wood panel. It turns out that when the fur collar was added, the wood panel was also enlarged with extra wood pieces glued to the sides and the top to make the painting more grand and more valuable. So the original painting is actually painted on a single piece of wood, as would be expected from a Rembrandt painting. And in fact, researchers have found
http://bailiedu.com
that the piece of wood in the original form of "Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet" is from the very same tree as the wood panel used for another painting by Rembrandt, his "Self-portrait with a Hat".
(一)下面是听力文本出现的生词，帮助大家更好的理解：
1. bonnet [['b?n?t]]
vt. 给装上罩；给戴上帽子
n. [机] 阀盖；软帽
n. (Bonnet)人名；(英)邦尼特；(法、意)博内；(德、西、葡、捷)邦内特
2. pigments [['pigm?nts]]
n. [颜料] 颜料，染料；[物][生化] 色素(pigment的复数形式)
3. illuminate [[?'l(j)u?m?ne?t]]
vt. 阐明，说明；照亮；使灿烂；用灯装饰
vi. 照亮
(二)下面是对长难句的解析：
1. 听力第三段：Once the paint of the added fur color was removed, the original could be seen, in the original painting, the woman is wearing a simple collar of light-colored cloth.
解析：once用作连词时，意为“一旦??就??”，用于连接时间状语从句，相当于as soon as。
2.听力最后一段：
It turns out that when the fur collar was added, the wood panel was also enlarged with extra wood pieces glued to the sides and the top to make the painting more grand and more valuable.
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解析：原来是由于毛领的增加使得木质画板的边缘和顶部面积随之加大，而且也更加有价值。
(三)文章结构和内容解析：
文章反驳了阅读文章中的观点，解释说明作品是Rembrandt所作。然后分别从三个对应方面进行论述。
总论点：第一段：Everything you just read about "Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet" is true, and yet after a thorough re-examination of the painting, a panel of experts has recently concluded that it's indeed a work by Rembrandt.(这幅作品是Rembrandt所作)。
分论点1：第二段第二句：X-rays and analysis of the pigments in the paint have shown that the fur collar wasn't part of the original painting.(经检查可知，毛领是后期添加的)。
分论点2：第三段第二句Once the paint of the added fur color was removed, the original could be seen, in the original painting, the woman is wearing a simple collar of light-colored cloth.(色彩的不协调也是由于后期毛领的添加造成的)。
分论点3：最后一段第二句：It turns out that when the fur collar was added, the wood panel was also enlarged with extra wood pieces glued to the sides and the top to make the painting more grand and more valuable. (原来画板的拼接也是由于毛领的增加造成的)。
最后根据阅读文章和听力文本两部分的内容，构思综合写作的写作思路即可。
下面是综合写作的范文：
The lecture revises the idea presented in the text, that Rembrandt was not the artist who painted the famous painting "Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet".
The inconsistency between the white cap, which identifies the woman as a servant, and the expensive fur collar she wears dissolves as the Professor explains that the fur collar was apparently painted over the original painting to increase its worth by displaying an
http://bailiedu.com
aristocratic woman.
In addition, the assumption that light and shadow in the painting do not fit together is refuted by the fact that in the original painting, the woman wears a light cloth that illuminated her face. Thus the presentation of light and shadow was indeed very realistic and accurate, as it is characteristic of Rembrandt’s paintings.
Finally, the mystery of the panel consisting of patches glued together is also solved in the lecture. Actually, the wood panel was later enlarged to make it more grand and valuable, but the original painting was painted on a single panel, as Rembrandt would have done it. Furthermore, the wood is of the same tree used in other Rembrandt paintings, like the "Self-Portrait with a Hat". All this information points to Rembrandt as the painter of the controversial painting.