2015 雅思写作7分班课程 Day3
Introduction
l Agree or disagree:
On the specific issue of something. ——引出某一话题
I’m fully of/against the opinion that the latter should give place to the former.
To a very large extent. —— 添加字数
题目背景+ 观点
Background information
Thesis statement
让步反驳：不同意某观点时
1. Although some people may think that……
2. I tend to believe that……
e.g.: Although some people may think that it is fair to maintain gender equality in every discipline in the Universities, I tend to believe that such a rigid rule is impractical& even harmful.
事实+对方（理由）+反驳 概念改写
However, I do not agree this opinion because……
Although there are……, I tend to believe……
【单词积累】participate 参与 | bury under |shield sb from 使某人远离
开头最常用语言词汇提升方法：概念/意义/功能转换
1. 对······有好处
n Be good at
n Do good to
n Be of considerable significance to
n Be beneficial to
n Have positive effects on
n Play an important/ indispensable role in……
n Improve, enhance, promote, strengthen, develop, facilitate.
n Computers can be used to facilitate language learning.—— 积极含义
2. 对——有坏处
l Have negative effect on
l Be detrimental to
l Pose a threat to
l Damage, destroy, deteriorate 恶化；hinder阻碍；threaten; endanger
3. 应该
l Should, ought to, be supposed to
l Be obliged to do
l Be responsible for
l Be encouraged to
l It is justified to do
e.g.: Protecting the environment is of considerable significance.
4. 引出常见社会现象
l It is quite common these days____
l There is a growing tendency that____
二．Discuss& give your opinion 开头
题目背景
改写观点
表明态度/套句
Sample: Some people advocate that…… Others take the view that….
These two arguments will be explored in the essay.
4. Advantages and disadvantages 开头
题目背景 illusion a world of confusion
表明态度/套句 In this essay, I intend to analyze the pros and cons(正反两方面) of this development.
l Indifference n.冷漠
l Private information
l Greedy bastard
l Social isolation
l Get caught in the net 被互联网捆绑
5. Causes and solutions 开头
题目背景
该写题目
点名原因/套句 In this article, I intend to explore its causes and offer some possible measures.
Something has triggered a new round of heated debate among……
Background info+ Thesis statement
A case in point is that
Hook/Bing! 把对方兴趣点引发
主体段论证结构
Structure
Topic sentence
Supporting sentences
Concluding sentence——可有可无
举例——基本方法 不要乱编 There’s no doubt that our lives would be far less convenient without a little help from our animal friends.
解释——结构灵活
因果——语言提升
对比——论证思路1
让步——论证思路2
【例句】
l A growing number of environmental problems are no longer confined to a certain region or country.
l For example, oil spoils can pollute international waters and the loss of the ozone layer may lead to the melting of the ice caps and glaciers, which in turn, may raise sea levels worldwide.
l The emission of carbon dioxide.
l For example, the smog produced in Beijing also poses a threat to the health of people in surrounding areas such as Hebei and Shandong province. Lack focus
l Taking cell phones for example, its……
l For example/instance/Take something as an example
l A case in point is that….
l Such as…
解释论证
By that I mean, with a profound background of education psychology, teachers are more professional. In other words……
功能句型
1. As…as
2. Be+ 比较
3. Superior+ inferior
常用连接词
l It means/ In other words/ By that I mean
l That is to say
l To put it another way
因果论证
Women should not be a member of the army.
Women should not take up a military career.
Because they are inferior to men in physical strength.
Because of their physical inadequacies.
雅思写作词汇提升原则
1. 多样不常见
Teenager- juvenile-adolescent-youngster-the youth
2. 灵活且精确
Naïve-immature-immaturity-money-cash-cheque-currently-bills-tip-salary-income-revenue-bonus-wage-compensation-welfare-budget-investment-financial aid-scholarship-cost-expense-expenditure
3. 生动性
Bury, flood, shield
The Internet has put the world on our fingertips.
第二篇：20xx雅思写作真题
2015雅思写作真题
1月TASK1
chart
2003-2006期间5个不同年龄段人用互联网的比率
年第一场考试以柱状图开始，延用传统柱状图的写法，根据年Theleadersordirectorsoforganizationsareoftenolder
canalsobeTASK2people.Butsomepeoplesaythatyoungpeople
aleader.Whatdoyouthink?
组织的领导者总是老年人。但一些人认为年轻人可以胜任。你怎么看？社会类Argumentation
此题与20140712年轻人是否可以在政府机构担当要职很相似。正文思路大致可从以下几个方面展开：
Body1Fortheyoungpeopleastheleaders
1.toinjectfreshvitalityfortheircreativemodeofthinking,vigorousenergyandenterprisingspirit.
themselves.2.toexploretheunknown,assumetheresponsibilityandchallenge
3.toless-worryaboutintermsofpersonalmatters.Body2:againsttheyoungpeopleastheleaders
1.theyareinexperiencedandunsophisticated
2.theyarelackofthelong-establishedinfluenceandhard-earned
词汇参考：
1.undertakev承担……reputation.
2.rangingfromAtoB从……到……
3.jeopardizev危及到……
4.beputatrisk处于危险
5.superioritiesn优势
6.boomtheeconomyv繁荣经济
7.commitblunderv犯大错
8.injectnewlifeintov注入新的活力
9.creativemodeofthinkingn创造性思维
10.enterprisingspirit进取的精神
11vigorousadj充满活力的
Task1地图题
Themapdescribesthedevelopmentofacollegecampusin1990,2010and2020.由于考情回忆有限，本期小作文范文暂不提供。
[思路]：
地理变迁题，不需要按照时间来写，而应该按照对象词来写，这样才有对比。
[注意点]：
时态容易出错误，如果题目中有未来的时间，一定要记得改变时态。
宁波新东方王彭涛Task
2
分析：
题目属于新中等。要求是双边论证并给出自己的观点。也是和之前被疯传的冰桶挑战有点相同。一些人觉得这很好，也有些人觉得这是在作秀，就比如这几天陈光标被爆出他的冰桶挑战其实不是冰水，是温水。
这个题目有很多关键词，famouspeople，internationalaidorganization,MAKEproblemslessimportant.很容易跑题，或者举例不恰当.
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Withthenegativeinfluenceoffamouspeople’sbadbehaviorexposingtoourslightmorefrequently,plentyofcitizensbegintodoubttheirsupporttowardsinternationalaidorganizations.However,manypeoplestillbelievethatfamous
peoplearehelpersratherproblemmakers.Frommypointofview,internationalaidorganizationscanattractmorecitizens’attentiononproblemsifcelebritiesgivetherightsupportandsetupgoodimages.
Itissensibletoarguethatinternationalcharitygroupscantake
advantageofthepublicityofcelebrities.Withtheannouncementofhigh-profilefigures,suchasfamoussingers,moviestarsandsportsprofessionals,the
activitiesorcampaignsofinternationalorganisationscanberespondedimmediately,iftheyareendorsedbycelebrities.Intheearlytimeofthisyear,
BucketChallengespreadaroundtheworldALSIcewithinafewdaysbythesharingofmanycelebrities.Meanwhile,theorganisationsalsoreceivedmillionsofdonationbyfansaswell.
Nevertheless,itisanundeniablefactthatasmallpartofcelebritiesdon’tgainmuchpopularityorbringanyconveniencetointernationalaid
organizations.Althoughsomecelebritiesgivetheirsupporttothese
organizationsoutwardly,theydon’tbringanytangiblehelp.Forexample,somecelebritiesleadaluxuriouslifeandnevertakepracticalactionstosocialproblems,orevenonlytakeadvantageofinternationalaidorganizationstoadvocateforthemselves.Asaresult,thepublicwilllooseconfidencetothese
organizations,nottomentionsolvingproblems.
Tosumup,Ibelieveinternationalaidorganizationswillreceivemuchmorehelpfromcelebritiesandfigureoutmoreproblemsifcelebritiescanmaketherightchoicesandtheircelebrityeffectisusedappropriately.
20xx年5月16日雅思写作真题回忆
Task1flowchart
Thediagramshowsthestagesofprocessingcocoabeans.
5月是流程图高峰，本月第二场雅思考试流程图如约而至，难度中等。注意被动语态的使用。
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Theflowchartillustrateshowtoprocesscocoabeansintodifferentproducts.Itisclearthattherearethreestagesinthisprocess,fromtheinitialwholebeanstothefinalproductsonthemarket.
Atthefirststage,thewholebeansarepickedfromthecacaotree.Afterbeingpicked,theiroutershellsareremovedandtheyaredriedforthenextstage.Stagetwoconsistsofmanysteps.Ontheonehand,someofthedriedbeansareprocessedintococacake,andtheninthenextstage,***/thesescakes(不确定是蛋糕还是其他单词，所以以星号代替)aregroundintococoapowderandcocoaliquor,whicharetherawmaterialformakingavarietyofcakesanddrinks.Ontheotherhand,otherbeanswouldbemixedwithsugartoproduceindustrialchocolate.Finally,thesefinishedchocolatewouldbesoldtotheconsumer.
分析：
文章结构：4段
首段：导入话题，表达立场
主体段1：thepositiveeffectsofevaluatingandcriticisingteachersonthequalityofeducation
主体段2：thenegativeeffectsofevaluatingandcriticisingteachersintheclassroom
结尾段：重述要点，表明立场
SampleAnswer:
Nowadays,whetherevaluatingandcriticisingteachersshouldbesupportedintheclassroomhasbecomeacontroversialissue.Frommyperspective,evaluationandcriticismofteachersarenecessaryfortheimprovementofeducationiftheyareobjectiveandreasonable.
Ontheonehand,proposingchangestoteachers’lessoncontentcontributestotheimprovementofteachingquality.Usually,itisdifficultforteacherstorealisethemistakesandslipsintheirteachingunlessstudentsremindthem.Additionally,teachersmaynotclearlyknowwhatstudentshaveknownandwanttoknowwhenplanningtheirlessons.Ifstudentscanputforwardtheirideasandsuggestionstowardsthelesson,itwillbeofgreathelpforteacherstoupgradetheteachingprojects.Moreover,tryingtoevaluateteachers’lessonisparticularlybeneficialforstudents’academicandcareerdevelopmentinthefuture.Themoderneducationemphasisescriticismandinnovation.Undoubtedly,itisaneffectivewayforstudentstodebateordiscusswithteachers.
Ontheotherhand,thedisruptivestudentswillprobablydisturbtheclassandnegativelyaffectbothteachingandlearningoutcomes.Whenstudentsvoicetheiropinionsintheclassroom,itwillbehardtomaintaintheorderanddisciplineandtheteachersmayfeeldisrespected.Also,studentswillsufferalossintermsofknowledgeandotherlearningcontent.Thisisbecauseteachersalwaysdevotemuchtodeliveringknowledgeandexplainingtheories.Iftheyaredisrupted,theteaching
planmaynotbeabletobefulfilled.Asaresult,bothteachersandstudentshavetofacealossinthequalityofeducation.
Tosumup,itcanberecommendedthatstudentsevaluateandcriticiseteachersintheclassroomonthepremisethattheyhavedecentmannerswithoutdisturbingthelearningatmosphere.Onlyinthiswaywillteachersandstudentsachieveawin-winoutcomeineducation.
20xx年9月26日雅思写作真题回忆
Task1
Thelinegraphshowsthepercentageofdifferentagegroupsofcinemavisitorsinaparticular
country.
分析：
本次的小作文考查了线图。配图是根据网友回忆所做，数据仅供参考。在根据按年龄分组进行比较的时候，也别忘了时间上的比较。范文中根据趋势，将50岁前和50岁以后分为两组进行描写
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Thelinegraphgivesinformationabouttheproportionofmoviegoersbyfouragegroupsinaparticularnation.
From1978to2008,threeagegroups(14-24,25-34and35-49)experiencedasimilarpattern.Theyoungpeople(age14-24)enjoyedwatchingmoviesincinemathemost,reaching90%in1978.Next,itdeclinedobviouslytoabout75%in1988andgrewupslightlyagaininthefollowing10years.Beforealightdropin2003,it
hasremainedstablefor5years.Finally,itendedatnearly82%in2008.Likewise,tothepercentageofcinemavisitors(25-34),thereisasignificantdecreasefrom80%to60%between1978and1988,followingamoderateincreasein1998.Afterthat,itwasstableandthenfellto65%in2008.Similarly,theshareofagegroup35-49arrivedatthebottomat40%beforeaconsiderablerisein1988.Adecadelater,itreachedthehighestpointataround62%andkeptconstantlyuntilafallfrom2003.
Thepercentageofeldermoviegoerswasalwaysbelow40%from1978to2003.However,after2003,moreelderlypeoplepreferredtowatchfilmsincinema,whichwasquitedifferentfromtheotherthreeagegroups.Thepercentagerosegraduallyto50%in2008.
Overall,youngpeoplelikedtowatchmovieincinemathemostandelderlypeoplewastheleast.Thetendencyofmoviegoers’percentageofthefouragegroupswasquitesimilarbetween1978and2003.From2003to2008,theproportionofage50+increasedwhileothersdecreased.
Task2
议论文
分析：该题属于环保题型。虽然近年来环保已经不再是雅思写作考试话题的热点，但是在今年的1月29日，3月12日，5月9日和8月1日的雅思考试中均出现了环境相关的题目，所以还是希望广大考生对雅思写作的十个话题逐一准备，才能在考场上做到万无一失。
文章结构：5段主体段1：缺少回收意识是没有足够的回收利用原因之一。
主体段2：没有足够的回收装置是没有足够的回收利用原因之二。
主体段3：解决没有足够的回收利用这个问题的措施。SampleAnswer:
Thelastyearshaswitnessedtheincreaseintheawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.However,therearestillalotofwastematerialsthathavenotbeenrecycled.Thisessaywillmainlyanalysethereasonsofthisproblemandsuggestsomesolutions.
Onemainreasonofthisproblemmaybethatthepublichaven’trealizedtheimportanceofrecyclingwastes.Aseconomydevelops,peoplehavehighincomesandcanaffordalargenumberofitems.Atthesametime,theydon’tknowhowtodealwithwhattheyhaveusedandhaven’trealizedthattheirbuyinghabitswillcausetheconsumptionofenergy,creasewasteandincreasepollution.
Thisproblemcanalsobeattributedtothelackofrecyclingsitesinthepublicplaces.Insomecountries,thegovernmentisnotbeabletopurchaseenoughrecyclingsitesduetopoorfinancialconditions.Asaresult,peoplearelikelytofinditdifficulttoplacetheirrubbishintothedustbins.
Inordertoaddressthisproblem,thegovernmentandcitizensshouldmakejointefforts.Firstofall,thegovernmentoughttoprovidefreeeducationofrecyclinglecturesforthepublic.Thisisbecausemanycitizenshaven’treceiveddecenteducationandarenotwellinformedofhowtorecycleandreusewasteitems.What’smore,therecyclingindustryneedstobefinanciallysupported.Ifthegovernmentdoesnotpayattentiontotheestablishmentanddevelopmentofthisindustry,theproblemwillcontinuetoexistinoursociety.
Asmentionedabove,theneglectofrecyclingandtheshortageofrecyclingsitesarethemainfactorsleadingtotheincreaseofwastematerials.Tosolvethisproblem,boththegovernmentandthepublicshouldcollaborate.
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20xx年10月8日雅思写作真题回忆
Task1地图宁波新东方汪宇红TheplansbelowshowtheSouthWingofWaltonMuseumin2008andin2012afteritwasredeveloped.
分析：之前在课上一直提醒大家要注意流程图和地图，这下准备过的同学有福了。那么10月10日考试的烤鸭们也可以松一口气了。这个地图主要比较了theSouthWingofWaltonMuseum在20xx年和20xx年状况，属于地理变迁题。
Sampleanswer
ThemapsshowthedevelopmentoftheSouthWingofWaltonMuseumbetween2008and2012.
In2008,theSouthWingwasatwo-storeybuildingwithapathonthewestofit.Inthefirstfloor,therewasaspecialexhibitionroom,ashopandacloaksroom.Theentranceandreceptionwasonthesecondfloor,sovisitorsneedtogoupstairsfromthestairsbetweentheshopandthecloaksroom.Also,nexttothereceptionwasareadingroom.
Bytheyear2012,thisbuildinghadfourstoreyswithaliftfromthefirstfloortothetopfloor.Thecloaksroomhadbeenmovedtothereceptionandthisareahadbeenchangedintochildrenplayarea.Ontheeasternsideofthelift,therewasanewcaféwherevisitorscanservethemselvesandonthetopfloorwasanotherexhibitionroom.Oppositetotheself-servicecaféwasanew-builtrestaurant.Inthewestofthebuilding,anentrancehallwasconstructedonthesecondflooranditshouldbenotedthatonthethirdfloortherewasterrace.
Task2
例文分析：
这次考试的题目还是老题，在历史上多次出现。作文的审题也不是很难，非常贴近学生的学习。文章属于典型的观点类文章，需要考生给出自己的观点，例文中作者同意一个观点，认为中学应该提供更加广泛的学科。然后从学生的潜力开发和全面发展两个角度进行分析，然后在通过反方段进行补充，最后进行了非常简单的一个总结。
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Whatrangeofsubjectsthehighschoolofferscanhaveastarkandprofoundinfluenceonstudents’futuredevelopment.I,tobehonest,holdtheviewthatthegeneraleducationwithawiderangeofsubjectsisbeneficialtostudentsthemselvesinthelongrun.
Ifstudentshaveaccesstomorecourses,theyarelikelytohavemore
opportunitiestochoosethesubjecttheypreferorarebetterat.Inthisway,thestudentscanlearnwithmoreenthusiasmandpassionateandwillfeellessboredwiththeirclasses.Withmoremotivationderivedfromtheirinnerhearts,studentscangivefullplaytotheirpotentialsandachievebetteracademicperformance.
Besides,themorediversesubjectsystemcanalsocultivatemorewell-roundedstudents.Theknowledgebaseofdifferentsubjectsisdistinctfromeachother,whichcanhelptofosterthestudentsincertainperspective.Mathematicsandphysicsarehelpfultostudents’logicandabstractthinking;somehumanitysubjectssuchasliteratureandaestheticscanenhancestudents’capabilitiesofappreciationandjudgment.Thereisnodoubtthatstudentswillbecomemoreversatileiftheyhavegraspedknowledgeofdifferentsubjects.
Itisalsotruethatfocusingonthenarrowerrangeofsubjectscanbringsomebenefittosomeextent.Studentscanconcentratemoreonlimitedsubjectsandaremorelikelytobecomethespecialistincertainfields.YouyouTU,theNobelPrizewinnerinmedicine,receivesspecializededucationinTCMandchemistryanddevotesallherlifetotheresearchoftheanti-malariamedicines,makingherbecomeaworld-renownedscientist.
Tosumup,ageneraleducationwithwiderrangeofsubjectsshouldbeaccessibletostudentsbecauseofitsbenefittoasounderdevelopmentofstudents.
20xx年8月29日雅思写作真题回忆
Task1饼图
Thepiechartsshowtheproportionoftheenergyproducedfromdifferentsourcesinacountrybetween1985and2003.
Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeaturesandmakecomparisonswhererelevant.
分析：
动态饼图，主要突出不同构成部分的比例变化，但与此同时也要去分析同部分的排序变
化。最后要注意表示比例的一些常见用法。
Thepiechartspresentthechangeofthepercentageoftheenergyproducedfromvarioussourcesinaparticularcountryfrom1985to2003.
Itisclearthatoilwasthemostdominantsourcesfromwhichtheenergywasproducedthroughoutthewholeperiod,althoughitdroppedfrom52%in1985to39%.Likewise,nuclearalsodeclined,butmuchlesssignificantlyto17%,becomingthethirdprimarysourcefromwhichtheenergywasproduced.
Thepercentageofnaturalgas,ontheotherhand,witnessedthemostnoticeableincreaseduringtheperiod,risingfrom13%in1985to23%in2003.Coalandotherrenewableresources,thoughwhoseincreasewaslessmarked,risingby5%and3%respectively.
Interestingly,theproportionoftheenergyproducedfromthehydrogenremainedstablein1985and2003,makingittheleastusedsourcesfromwhichtheenergywasproduced.
Overall,oil,naturalgasandnuclearstillconstitutealargerproportionofallthesources,whileotherthreesources,namelycoal,hydrogenandotherrenewable,arelessusedwhenproducingtheenergy.
Task
2
Nelson观点：
写反方更出彩
1.现在的一些商业文化交流、合作未必是促进全球化，而是把世界分成一个个阵营
2.本土文明被商业文明冲击e.g.印第安，毛利
3.本土老板姓生活水平受到影响，恶性竞争，反倾销反补贴
分析：
题目的类型属于双边讨论类。话题类型属于全球化的影响中的文化影响。这是一道老题目，审题要清楚，两边的观点都要讨论到再给出自己的观点。
范文主体思路分析：
主体部分一：肯定了越来越紧密的全球交流对商业和文化都有好处。对商业主要基于利益需要，对文化则能增强对异国文化的理解并消除误解
主体部分二：明确了文化交流国家的民族特征是存在的，但是仅仅对一些弱国而言作者观点：根据不同的国家进行解释为什么文化交流对于他们是更有利还是更有弊的wordcount：346
Theclosercommunicationbetweendifferentcountrieshasbeenaconspicuoustendencyinrecentyears,bothineconomicandculturalaspects.Somepeopledoubtthecontinuallyconnectionswillcausevanishingofacountry’sidentities.Inmyview,theresultofinternationalinteractiondependsonthesituationindifferentnations.
Infact,theinternationalcontactisadefinitelymutualbenefitforcountries.Duetotheeconomicallymotivated,bothstatesandentrepreneursareinterestednotonlyinthedomesticmarketbutalsointheoverseamarket.Thecloserconnectionopensuphugepotentialopportunitiesforbusinesscorporation.Besides,themoreculturalcontacts,thebetterunderstandingofotherpeoples.Cultural
communicationcanalterpeople’sattitudetowardsanothercultureandembracedifferentvalues,whichwillpromotemulti-culturalunderstandingandevenremoveculturalbarriers.
Admittedly,thecross-nationalinteractionwillalsoimposeanegative
influenceonnationalidentities,especiallytothoseweakcountriessuchasPacificislandcountriesandsomeminicountriesinEuropeandAfrica.Itseemsthatintheseweakcountries,thelocalshavebecomemorefamiliarwithexoticcultures,whichreflectstheforeignculturalinvasiontosomedegree.Forinstance,themainstreamvalueofteenagersinthesecountrieshasbeenmainlyshapedbyHollywood
blockbustersinsteadoftheirtraditionalliteratureorotherartisticworks.
Inmyopinion,whethercloserglobalcommunicationwillcausedemiseofnationalidentitiesrelyondifferentcountries.American,aswellasCanadaandAustralia,ismarkedbytheirhighpopulationmobility,orimmigrants,tobemoreexactly.Thecultureinthesenationsisbasedonotherculturesindeed.Therefore,theywelcomedifferentcountriesanditcannotbeaproblemtothem.Also,somecountries,likeChina,IndiaandBritish,havetheirownuniqueethnicidentityandculturalconfidencewhichcomefromtheirlonghistory.Globalcontactwillalsobeacceptabletothem,too.Onlytotheweakcountries,thelocalgovernmentshouldtakestepstoprotecttheirvulnerablecultures.
Inconclusion,thepositiveandnegativeinfluenceofglobalcommunicationreallycoexists.However,theoutcomeofclosercontactisbetterorworseisdeterminedbydifferentcountries.