圈题作文：记叙文

例题分析

(一) (2013·淄博一模)

3月1日下午(星期四)，一个美国中学生代表团到你校访问，师生一行十几人参观了学校，之后在你们班举行了一个小型座谈会，历时约一小时。事后，英语老师要求就当天的活动以日记的形式写一篇120个词左右的英语短文。

座谈会主要内容：相互介绍；中方学生代表谈传统节日文化；美方学生代表谈兴趣爱好；自由交流。

注意：

1．可适当增加细节，使文章内容连贯，语言流畅。

2．日记格式已给出，不计入总词数。

Thursday March 1, 2013 Fine

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解析:这是一篇日记形式的记叙文。日记格式都已给出，所以它主要考察记叙文

的写作方法。记叙文在高考当中考查的较少，但是也不可忽视。它的特点

是：要求考生根据写作要求把事件或活动的时间、地点、人物、发生的事

按照一定的顺序清楚的描写出来。可以有一两句对这件事的议论或看法。

下面是一篇范文供大家借鉴

Thursday March 1, 2013 Fine

This afternoon an American high school delegation, consisting of 10 students and 5 teachers came to visit our school. Our headmaster showed them around some parts of the school, such as the library, the lab and the gym.

Fortunately, our class was chosen to have an informal discussion with the visitors, which was a good opportunity for us to practice our English. Everyone at present was active to introduce themselves one by one. Our monitor, Zhanghua，introduced the Chinese traditional festivals, especially the Chinese Spring Festival.Soon after that Tom, an American student, who was a great fan of YaoMing and Jeremy Shuhow Lin, said something about NBA and some other hobbies. Then we talked about some other topics that we were interested in.Almost an hour had passed before we realized it. It's really amazing to talk with the American teachers and students in English, which helps us a lot with our English.

（2012杭州高三一模）

生活中我们经历很多难忘的事，请你以“An Unforgettable Day”为题用英语写一篇短文，讲述你的一次难忘的经历。

解析:这是一篇记叙文，要求考生以“An Unforgettable Day”为题记叙一件事。 相比第一篇短文，这篇短文只给了题目，没有其他的提示，这就要求考生

在脑海里搜集生活中的一些经历，把它编成符合本文要求的文章。这个题

目还是比较常见的，抓住“难忘”来写，就理解了题目要求。当然，它也

要有时间、地点、人物、发生的事等要素。

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下面是一篇范文供大家借鉴

An Unforgettable Day

Late one afternoon, I was on my way home from school. I walked slowly along the street with my head dropped. The scenes on both sides of the street were beautiful, but I had no interest in them at all. I walked and walked, thinking of what had happened that day. Just a few minutes before the second class began that afternoon, I was asked to go to the teacher’s office. I heard my teacher talking to my mother with anger. “How could you dare to go to see a film this morning without permission?” Mother said at the top of her voice, slapping me in the face heavily. I looked at mother, dumb founded...

I walked more slowly, for I had seen my house ahead, where mother was always standing at the door, smiling at me, at this time every day. But now, she wasn’t there. My heart was beating faster. I even didn’t dare to open the door for fear that mother should beat again. Not knowing what to do, I sat on the ground near the door, blaming myself for what I had done. Suddenly a soft hand patted me on the head. I looked up, seeing mother standing beside me. I couldn’t help crying, “Mum!” tears rolling down my cheeks.

举一反三突破提升

请以“A Special Summer Camp”为题，发挥想象用英语写一篇短文，想象

要符合逻辑，文章要连贯、通顺。字数100左右

参考范文：

A Special Summer Camp

During the holiday I took part in a special summer camp with my classmates．There we made some new friends who were senior school students from London, Britain． As hosts, we showed them around many places of interest in Beijing, such as the Palace Museum, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace．I told them about the great changes taking place in Beijing．They said Beijing was quite different from what they had heard and it was as beautiful as London．

Meanwhile, we improved our spoken English with their help．I think the summer camp is of great value．

请你写一篇英语日记，讲述你的一次难忘的经历。

注意：字数100左右，日记格式已给出，不计入总数。

参考范文：

An unforgettable experience

Sunday July 4th, Fine

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I went to the Summer Palace yesterday morning. After entering the main gate, I happened to meet some American visitors. I greeted them and we began talking. I got to know that they were college students travelling in China. I showed them to the Long Corridor, the Stone Ship, up to the Longevity Hill and some other places. After that we went boating on Kunming Lake. We all had a wonderful time in the Summer Palace. When we came out of the gate, I helped them do some shopping. Then they thanked me and left.

I felt very happy and proud that I could be of some help to foreign friends by using my English and got a good chance to practise my spoken English.

生活中我们会遇到很多让我们难忘的人，请你用英语写一篇短文，讲述一个

给你留下深刻印象的人。

注意：字数100左右，不要使用真实人名、校名。

参考范文：

Gregory, an American, teaches English in Zhengzhou University. He was born in October 1951. After graduating from a university in 1972, he went to South Africa. Twenty years later, he came to China and became a teacher in Zhengzhou University. He loves China and Chinese students very much. He also takes great interest in educational cause. He has a lot of ways to make his classes lively and interesting. In the past eight years, he has put his heart and soul in his work and study.

He is considered as an honest, humorous teacher, and he is respected and loved by the students and the teachers.

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第二篇：河南省郑州市中原区学大教育培训学校20xx届高三英语圈题5 七选五 过渡句

圈题七选五：过渡句

例题分析

1. Money Matters

Begin at the grocery store. Pick out two similar brands of a product--- a name-brand butter and a generic (无商标产品)，for example. You can show your child how to make choices between different brands of a product so that you can save money. 75 If he chooses the cheaper brand, allow him to make another purchase with the money saved. Later, you may explain how the more expensive choice leaves less money for other purchases.

［20xx年全国新课标卷］

A. Wise decisions

B. The value of money

C. Permit the child to choose between them.

D. Tell your child why he can –or cannot --- have certain things.

E. Ask yourself what things that cost money are most important to you

F. Talk about how the money bought the thing after you leave the toy store.

2. Kids' health: Four steps for fighting stress

Everybody gets stressed time to time. 71 Some ways of dealing with stress —like screaming or hitting someone—don't solve much. But other ways, like talking to someone you trust, can lead you to solving your problem or at least feeling better. ［20xx年全国I卷］

A. Ask for a helping hand to get you through the tough situation.

B. Notice your friends' feelings and find a way to help them.

C. Different people feel stress in different ways

D. Ah, it feels so good when the stress is gone.

E. You need to figure out what the problem is.

F. And don't forget about your friends.

G. Then, find a way to calm down。

答案：Ｃ

解析：本题考查七选五过渡句。通过理解设空后的句子，可以推断出“是在讲处理压力的方法”结合选项Ｃ中的ｄｉｆｆｅｒｅｎｔ ｗａｙｓ可知也是在讲方法。故选Ｃ。

举一反三突破提升

1. Last year, researchers from the University of Michigan reported that empathy, the ability to understand other people, among college students had dropped

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over the past 10 years. __ 71 Today, people spend more time alone and are less likely to join groups and clubs.

A. Everyone is different, and levels of empathy differ from person to person.

B. That could be because so many people have replaced face time with screen time, the researchers said.

C. “One doesn’t develop empathy by having a lot of opinions and doing a lot of talking,” Freed says.

D. Humans learn by example—and most of the examples on it are anything but empathetic.

E. Empathy is a matter of learning how to understand someone else—both what they think and how they feel.

F. Good social skills—including empathy—are a kind of “emotional intelligence” that will help you succeed in many areas of life.

G. Having relationships with other people is an important part of being human—and having empathy is decisive to those relationships.

２．?４．Let it grow.

It is a good thing to stay in touch. However, try not to press your new friend with calls, messages or visits as this would likely wear him or her out and finally you may lose your friend. 74 . The best friendships are the ones that grow naturally.

A. Be cheerful.

B. Do things together.

C. Do not wait to be spoken to.

D. Try not to find fault with your friends.

E. Making new friends comes easy for some people.

F. For a friendship to develop you need to stay in touch.

G. So you will need to give your friend time to react to you.

3. Trust has been considered as the basis of any relationship, including friendship. No relationship can last long with a lack of trust. Not many of your friends will have real faith in you as you would like to believe. _71_ . Sometimes, it takes years, even a complete lifetime, to trust someone. However, how do we know if our friends have faith in us?

People can be extraordinarily jealous(猜疑的) sometimes.

You know they will never pass on a wrong suggestion.

In fact, winning trust is, by far, the most challenging aspect of relationships. Two people cannot have identical reactions to a situation and different opinions do exist.

No matter how close you are to your friends, you cannot take that comfort level for granted.

If your friends share their secrets, there’s a good possibility that they have much faith in you.

However, people who are fortunate to have been blessed with true friends are never alone in any battle.

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4. Some people might argue that we should have the freedom to dress however we want regardless of what people think. They can also argue that we should not judge people based on how a person dresses. _73_ . People judge us based on how we look, and that is a fact that we should accept.

The dress should match the occasion.

It is helpful to have fashion awareness when we dress.

Therefore, the look is important for a first impression.

That is pretty ideal, but it is not practical in the real world.

It changes people’s reactions towards you in a positive way.

Therefore, it is a good idea to be aware of how we behave at home.

However, when we dress up and go out to public places, it becomes an issue.

5. Another interesting fact about those in the sandwich generation is that they may not have any siblings(兄弟姐妹), because families have gotten smaller in the last century. _75_ . As a result, the burden of taking care of elderly parents is on one child rather than among a whole passel(群) of kids, who shared the responsibility as it once was.

Some people of the sandwich generation are seniors themselves.

There are 20 million American women who like the sandwich very much.

Living to the age of 85 or older used to be rare but it is not so any more. And sometimes they can’t handle it very well but they don’t have a choice. Alternatively, they may only have one sibling but may live far from each other. That visual image should give you an idea of what the “sandwich generation’ is. However, this type of living arrangement may return because of financial pressures. 针对训练答案：1． Ｂ 2．Ｇ 3．Ｃ 4．Ｄ 5．Ｅ

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