【总体策略】
1、字迹:字迹漂亮当然好,就算字不好看没关系,写得工整就好,一笔一划!第一印象好了,之后的分数不会太离谱。电脑阅卷,字迹很重要,最怕参差不齐,第一印象就不好。
2、开头和结尾:阅卷老师时间有限,当中部分无法细看,开头结尾尤为重要,多用修辞,引用诗句,首尾呼应,更重要的是开头结尾表明观点,文章中心明确了,分数不会低!
3、整体结构:一定要结构清晰,我个人提倡“三段式”(如下面给出的范文),当然个人喜好不同,关键是要让老师看出有结构。
4、具体事件:要有具体事件,不要长篇大论,没有具体故事的描写,中考作文不是高考作文,需要考试融入自己的生活经历,描写事件。
5、中心思想:中心思想直接决定文章的高度和深度,语言不好没关系,中心思想要正确。不要太低,局限于眼前小事;也无需太高,不要每篇文章都扯到国家头上。关键是要有体会,有感悟,老师希望看到的是考生真实感受和价值观。换句话说,就是希望考生能总结人生道理,学以致用!当然可以适当文学化,不要大白话。
第二篇:三段式作文的结构安排
一、 三段式作文的结构安排
二. 模板
Reduce Waste on Campus
There has been a discussion recently about waste on campus. It is obvious that a great loss of precious resources, such as water and electricity have been caused by waste. Additionally, our waste adds our parents and society a burden. So it is high time that we took actions to reduce the waste on campus.
First of all, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or clean faces, or wash clothes and dishes. The reason is that there is a great shortage of water in the word. Secondly, we should be economical. That is to say, when go shopping, we should buy only what we really need. Thirdly, we should turn off the light when we leave dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity as much as possible.
In fact, more than three ways can be adopted. As for me, the cultivation of good habit of thrift is most important for all of us. All in all, every college student should join in the efforts to combat the waste on campus.
3. 问题解决型模板三(20xx年1月)
How to Succeed in a Job Interview?
① Nowadays, there is a growing concern on the interview at job market. ② It is obvious/certain that the interview is indispensable for getting a job. ③ However, some people have not realized the importance of the interview.
④ It will cause many serious results if a candidate ignore the importance of the interview. ⑤ First of all, the interviewer know about the candidates in an interview. ⑥ Secondly, the interviewee can get necessary information directly. ⑦. Finally, excellent performance in an interview will enable the interviewee to secure a job.
⑧ In spite of all these, there are still many ways for an interviewee to adopt. ⑨ First of all, the interviewee must demonstrate his aptitudes and skills
for the job. ⑩.In addition, the interviewee ought to be honest about his personal details. ⑾.Thirdly, the interviewee should act as properly as possible. ⑿.Only in this way can he succeed in an interview. 2. 为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”; 3. 该说“不”时不说“不”的坏处。
Don’t Hesitate to Say “No”
It is believed that we should directly say “No” on many occasions. The truth is deep and profound./The truth of it is self-evident. As we know, when we cannot offer help, we should tell the truth to others. Consequently, we should not hesitate to say “No”.
A case in point is the daily behavior of us. This is close to suggest that it is always not easy to say “No”. It is true that people often prefer to say “Yes” for fear of hurting others. Moreover/In addition, many people think that refusal usually means inability.
All mentioned above tells us that it is hard for us to say “No” when we need to. As a matter of fact, others will misunderstand our situation when we lie by saying “Yes”. There is no denying that we will really hurt them when we fail to help them in the end. In short, everybody should learn to say “No” directly.
①提出观点:很多情况下应该说“不”,统领全文。②进一步说明观点的正确性。③深入论证观点的正确性。④得出本段的结论,重申观点。⑤以日常行为为例说明观点。⑥说明“不”的不易性。⑦解释为什么人们不说“不”:怕伤害别人。⑧进一步解释人们不说“不”的理由:拒绝意味着无能。⑨总结上面的原因,重申说“不”的不易性。⑩从反面说明该说“不”的时候不说“不”的坏处一:导致别人误解。⑾该说“不”的时候不说“不”的坏处二一:最终不能帮助别人时,会伤害别人。⑿总结全文,重申观点:应该学会说“不”。
It Pays to Be Honest
It is believed that many dishonesties, such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities, etc. ruin our normal life, and they maintain that being honest is not only beneficial to others but also to oneself. The truth is deep and profound. As we know, if one is honest, other people will deeply respect him or her, and are willing to make friends with him or her. In addition, being honest can make people’s life easier and more harmonious.
There are numerous examples supporting the argument. A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of trustworthiness and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate. This is close to suggest that honesty can make our society more stable, and all people can live a peaceful life there. For another example, buyers usually like to make a deal with the dealers they trust. Moreover, the dealer, such as Tongrentang Herbal Medicine Shop which runs business honestly is more likely survive the fierce market competition.
All mentioned above tell us that it is high time that we took action to fight against dishonesty. But one thing we have to notice is that sometimes we need white lies to comfort the patients who have suffered serious illness. In short, we should let the dishonesty have no place to stay in our society.
现象解释型模板一
现象解释型模板二
叙事型模板
The Day My Classmate Fell Ill
It so happened that one day we were having an English class in the language lab. Just at that time, my classmate Lucy next to me fell unconscious suddenly. It impressed me most because her face was so red that it seemed to be burning.
What happened next was moving and unforgettable. At first, my teacher phoned a doctor. Almost at the same time, a girl student wetted her handkerchief and put it on Lucy’s head. What’s more, some students made a temporary bed for Lucy by putting some desks together. As a result, Lucy soon came to herself.
As I understand, love mikes a beautiful and harmonious world. On the one hand, Lucy is always ready to help other. On the other hand, we will try our best to help her when she is in need. Therefore, we should love each other and make this world a better place.
范文:
Teacher’s Day
As is known to all, September 10th is a special occasion, on which we students can say to our teachers, “Thank you for your care and guidance. Please enjoy this special holiday of your own.”
In my memory, Mr. Xu, my Chemistry teacher in high school, impressed me most in my past school years. At that timeplan for me. Highly this, I this subject, found the correct I will never forget those who have to help me
论述文的万能句型(现象解释型,问题解决型,和观点论证型,对立选择型):
(一) 第一段:
1、 现状说明:
1. about?When asked???When it comes to?? ..., most/many people believe that ..., but other people
?Faced with???
?regard???consider???... as ...??? ... differently??
2. When it comes to ..., people's opinions differ. Some believe that ..., while others claim that .
3. There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the ?role????view? of .... Some people claim that ...,
?idea???
while others believe that ....
4. There is a general discussion today about the ?issue??? of .... Those who criticize ... argue that .... problem??
They believe that .... But people who advocate ..., on the other hand, argue that ....
5. Most people are of the opinion that .... But I personally believe that ....
6. Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that ....
7. Now, it is generally acknowledged that ..., But I doubt whether ....
如果是图表作文,第一段的万能句型为:
2、 图表描述:
1. In 1990, it increased/decreased from ... to ...
2. By comparison with 1998, it decreased/increased by
3. The figure has nearly doubled, ? with??compared? that of last year. ?as against?
?two and a half times??increased???twice4. It has ? almost ??, compared with ... ??decreased??six times???
?twice???5. The number is ?4 times? as much as that of 1990.
?half???
6. It ? for??accounts? ... percent of the total. takes (up)??
?half????third? of the 1990 total.
?quarter????less than?7. The number was ..., ?? a than?more?
(二) 第二段
1、原因列举:
1. The phenomenon/change in ... mainly ? from??results? the fact that ... ?arises from?
2. One may regard the phenomenon as a ... ??sign of ...?? to ...??response
3. There are many ??causes?? for this dramatic growth/decrease. First, ... Second, ... Finally, ... ?reasons?
4. A number of factors can account for the change in ...
5. Another contributory factor of ... is ...
?are???6. Why ?do? ...?
?did??? ... For another, ...??For one thing,?? Perhaps the primary reason is .... is .... Another is ....??One reason
?rise?7. ... is also responsible for the ?? in ... decrease??
2、观点陈述:
1. Although a lot of people believe that ..., I ??doubt?? whether the argument bears wonder??
?much analysis.??? n.??close examinatio
?believe???2. As opposed to widely held ideas, I ?argue? that ...
?think???
3. Although the popular ??belief?? is that ..., (a) current ?idea??study??? indicates that ... ?survey?
?mention??? the fact that ... ?consider?4. They may be right about ..., but they seem to ??neglect?? to ?fail?
5. Although it is widely accepted that ..., it is unlikely to be true that ...
say??this is not to??6. It is true that ..., but ?it doesn't follow? that ...
?it doesn't mean???
?believe??accept? no??absolutely??7. There is/are ?? that ... ? reason(s) for us to ?resistin fact every??????reject??
?understand???8. What these people fail to ?consider? is that ...
?mention???
?say?You????argue9. ? may ?? that .... It probably will. But ... ?One???think???
10. It is one thing to believe that ..., but it is quite another to say that ...
3、利弊说明:
1. The advantages of A outweigh any benefit we gain from B.
2. Good as A is, it has its own disadvantages. For one thing, it ...; for another, it ....
?enormous??much?????l? advantage over B ..., it can not compete with B in ... 3. Although A has ?substantia
?considerable?????a distinct??
4. A's advantage ?
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(三) 第三段:
1、 归纳结论:
From what has been discussed above??1. Taking into account all these features?, we may safely draw the conclusion that .... Judging from all evidence offered??
2. All the evidence supports an unshakable conclusion that ....
3. It is (high) time that we placed great emphasis on ....
4. It is (high) time we put an end to the undesirable phenomenon of ....
5. There is? doubt??little?that further attention must be paid to the problem of .... ?no denying?
6. It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation.
2、 建议措施:
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6. It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation. Hence, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures/steps. We should appeal to the authorities to make strict laws to control this problem. We should enhance/cultivate the awareness of people that this issue is vital for us. Only in this way can we solve the problem. I believe we humans can overcome this difficulty and we will have a brighter future. 结构:常用的“启、承、转、合”表达方法
? 1. “启”。
? 按顺序:First, Firstly, First of all, At first, In the first place, In the
beginning, To begin with, To start with, For one thing, On the one hand
? 当前:Now, At present, recently, lately,
? 一般而言:In general, generally speaking, as a matter of fact ? 2. “承”。
? 按顺序:second, secondly, beside this, in addition, furthermore,
moreover, what is more,
? 举例子:for example/instance, as an example, as another example;
namely,
? 换言之:in other words, in particular,
? 扩展:after that, afterwards, from now on, similarly, meanwhile, at
the same time,
? 3.“转”。
? 转折:but, yet, however, nevertheless, though, although, despite, in
spite of,
? on the contrary, unlike, on the other hand,
? 4. “合”。
? 结尾: In conclusion; In short; In summary; Therefore; Thus; To sum up; To conclude; consequently, To summarize; Briefly; Above all; As a result; at last; eventually; accordingly;
语言:1. 词汇替换
认为:assume / argue / hold / claim / suggest / declare / say / believe / insist/ maintain /suppose that
? in my opinion/in my view/in my point of view/as far as I know/as far as I’m concerned/ as for me
重要的:important/significant/be of great value/be of great significance/be of great use
很多:many, a multitude of, an army of, an ocean of , A great / large / huge / considerable / significant / noticeable number / amount/ quantity / portion of
越来越多 more and more/ a growing number of /an increasing number of/on the rise
大多的:the (vast / overwhelming) majority of
人:people-----folks, individuals, characters
支持/反对者:followers/ objectors, be in favor of the idea that