小学英语作文：
Traveling（旅行）
I like traveling very much. I want to go to many beautiful places.
I would like to go to the forest, because I think the forest is the most beautiful in the world. We can take photos, collect leaves, watch insects and pick up some wild flowers in the forest.
I’d like to go to Lakes too, because we can row the boat, go fishing and play with water there.
I also would like to go to the village, because my father told me I can live in the village for a short time in the summer holiday.
But my friend May would like to go to the great wall. She said "One is not a true man unless he comes to the Great Wall."
小学英语作文：
Something about Myself
My name is Liu Wen. I'm a twelve-year-old girl. I have two big bright eyes and short black hair. Now I'm studying in grade six of Houxiaohe Primary School.
As I'm the only daughter in my family, my parents love me very much. They don't let me do anything, even tidy up my schoolbag.
I like playing sports, especially basketball. I wish I could play as well as Yao Ming. I study hard and I think I have made more progress than before. After graduation, I hope to go to a good middle school to study so as to repay my parents for their rearing.
My Favourite City
Different people like different cities. I like San Ya best. I hope I can go to San Ya.
San Ya is a city in Hai Nan. It is different from many cities in China. Because there is only one season in San Ya. Do you know what season it is? It is summer. The temperature in San Ya is very high. So it is hot and warm in San Ya. San Ya is famous for its beaches and coconut trees. You can walk at the beach and swim in the sea. The sea in San Ya is very clean. San Ya is also famous for it's sea food. The sea food in San Ya is very fresh and cheap.
This is my favourite city. I think San Ya is the best place to go in China. I really like San Ya! Do you like it?
小学英语作文：
My Classmates
I have many friends in my class. They're lovely and interesting. I would like to introduce some of them. Alice is very cute. She's also kind to everyone and she's very enthusiastic. She's always ready to help everyone, but she is forgetful. She always forgets to bring her textbooks, but our teachers always forgive her. Ben is the most talkative boy in our class. His nickname is "chatterbox". He has a great sense of humor and he always makes me laugh. Linda is a quiet student. She is good at every subject but she never shows off. Allen is a very tall boy. He plays basketball very well and he is on our school team. He often says, "Playing basketball is good for your health". How about your classmates? Do you like them? Try to admire your classmates. You will be happier.
小学英语作文：Introduce Myself
I am a student. I am twelve. I have a happy family. My name is Sophie, I like star, apple ... My mother’s Lois. She likes me and my father ... I have a strong father. His name is Derek. He likes my mother and me ... I have a happy family! I love it!
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。
小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。
My Village
My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!
【要领点评】
本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。
小学英语作文：A Big House In Our School
新塍镇中心小学五（1）班 王加颖 指导教师 计晓敏
Look! There is a big house in our school. There are five small rooms in it, a language room, an art room, a math room, a game room and a dance room
. In the language room, there are three children. They are learning English with their teacher. In the art room, there are three children, too. They are drawing pictures.
Now, look at the match room. There are three children in it. And they are having math class now. In the dance room, there is a boy and two girls with their dancing teacher. And they are practicing dancing. In the game room, there are six children. They are making riddles and guessing.
All of the children in the big house are very happy, because they can learn many things and have so much fun it!
评语：本文是看图作文。小作者根据所给图片，发挥了充分的想象，把静止的图片写得活灵活现，很有生气。这种利用图片让学生运用所学的语言进行表达的语言训练，有助于学生综合语言运用能力的提高。
学生看图作文
河北省涞水县文教局教研室 郭建春
Can you write a story according to the four pictures below？
你能用下面的四幅图来写一个故事吗？
Here is a story written by a pupil of 8 years old. Let's read it.
下面是一个八岁小学生写的故事。我们来读一读吧。
I make a
. It is nice. I put a lot of 
in the 
, and I put the in the , too. It is going here and there on the. Suddenly it becomes a large 
. I get on the and go to the sea.
我做了一个纸船。它非常漂亮。我在浴缸里放了很多水，然后把我的纸船也放进浴缸。纸船在水面上漂来漂去。突然，它变成了一艘大轮船。我坐上船驶向大海。
小学英语作文：My favorite season
六（2） 张小林 指导老师 郭建春
There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. Spring is my favorite season.
In spring, the weather is warm, and the flowers bloom(开放). We can take off our winter clothing. And we can put on our beautiful spring clothing. Wonderful!
I like spring best. Because the days get longer. So I can go out for a walk with my friends. Great!
Mr. Guo点评：通过小作者的描写把温暖的春天描写的如此美好，真实地写出了自己的感受。希望同学们都要向小林学习啊！
小学英语作文：My family
六（1） 王超越 郭建春
I have a happy family. In my family there are four people. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I. My father is a businessman. My mother is a farmer. My brother and I are students. I’m thirteen years old. I’m in Class One, Grade Six. My brother is in Class Two, Grade Four. We help each other and we love each other.
Mr. Guo点评：小作者感情真挚，语言简洁流畅，为读者们展现出一幅幸福美满的画面。
小学英语作文：Mr. Chocolate
六（3） 姜小蒙 指导老师 郭建春
Hi, I’m Mr. Chocolate. Do you like me? I usually wear a black and white dress. Look at me, am I beautiful? I’m very sweet, so many children like me. I hope we can become good friends! Oh, it’s time to go to school. I must go. Goodbye!
Mr. Guo点评：本篇文章字数不多，但作者用其丰富的想像力和拟人的修辞手法把一块巧克力描绘的生动形象，郭老师要给小蒙同学一个Excellent!要继续努力呦！
小学英语作文：My cat
六（1） 郭佳蒙 指导老师 郭建春
I like animals very much. But I like cats best. Her name is Mimi. She is very lovely. She has a small black nose and a long tail. Her legs are short. When I get home, she always wags her tail and walks up to me. When she feels hungry, she meows loudly. Now she’s very fat.
I love my little cat very much.
Mr. Guo点评：简洁流畅的语言向大家描述了一只讨人喜爱的小猫。
小学英语作文：A happy day
六（4） 刘 蔚 指导老师 郭建春
Yesterday was Sunday. My father, my mother and I went shopping.
First, we went to the supermarket on foot. We bought some pineapples and oranges there. My mother bought a nice T-shirt for me. It is yellow and white. I like it very much. Then we went to the bookshop. There were so many kinds of books. I bought three English storybooks. After that we went home by bus.
What a happy day!
小学英语作文：My father
六（4） 祖 宣 指导老师 郭建春
My father is forty-three years old. He is a teacher. He works very hard. He always wear a yellow coat and a pair of blue trousers. He likes sports and he likes basketball best.
My father loves me very much. He cheeks my homework every day. He often buys delicious food for me. On weekends we often go to the park with my mother. I love my father.
Mr. Guo点评：祖宣同学的这篇小作文熟练使用了一般现在时态中的第三人称单数用法，行文流畅，字里行间流露出对父亲的尊敬和喜爱。
小学英语作文：My rabbits
六（3） 代 昂 指导老师 郭建春
I have two lovely rabbits. Each of them has got a round head, round eyes, long ears, short legs and a small tail.
One is white, and the other is brown. They like to eat vegetables, and they like to eat the food on my hands. We are good friends. I love my rabbits.
Mr. Guo点评：短短的几句描述，就把两只可爱活泼的小兔展现在我们面前。希望代昂同学能再接再厉，写出更好的文章来。
小学英语作文：
My Friend
I like my friend. Lily is my best friend. She is a student. She has long hair. Lily is a girl. She is very cute and lovely.
My friend has big eyes and small ears. My friend likes music and computer games. My friend is in Class One, Grade Four.
I like my friend. Let’s my best friend.
点评：作者能细致地描述自己好友，句子通顺流畅，用词得当，表现了对好友的喜爱。最后Let's my best friend. 写出了作者的心声，是一篇优美的英语小作文。
小学英语作文：My Friend
广东省佛山市南海区大沥镇盐步东秀小学 冯子茵 指导教师 冯文慧
I have a good friend. She’s a girl. Her name is Liang Huiwen. She has short black hair, big eyes and ears. She has a small nose and a big mouth. She is thin and tall. She likes blue. She’s cute and quiet.
Who’s your best friend? Haha!
点评：作者能细致地描述自己好友，句子通顺流畅，用词得当。最后Who’s your best friend? 点出主题。
小学英语作文：My Teacher
广东省佛山市南海区大沥镇盐步东秀小学 冯梓轩 指导教师 冯文慧
My name is Feng Zixuan. I have a good friend. She is a lady. She has long hair. She is quiet and tall. She likes English very much. She has small eyes and a big mouth. She speaks English well.
What’s her name? Ha! Ha! Her name is Miss Feng, our English teacher.
点评：作者将自己的英语老师当成是自己的好朋友，体现了作者对英语老师的爱戴！
小学英语作文：
My Family
Hi, Friends! Come and meet my family, my family has seven members. They are my parents , my grandparents, my brothers and me. My parents are farmers. My father likes sports. My mother likes music. My grandma is a farmer, she likes flowers. My grandpa is a teacher. He likes painting. My brothers are students. They likes sports very much. What about me? My name is Chen Yinghua. I am a good student. I like English very much.
点评：作者很详细地介绍自己的家庭成员的职业和爱好。句子通顺，用词得当，值得学习。
学英语作文：My family
Come and meet my family.
My family has five members. This is my father. He`s a driver. He likes sports. This is my mother. She likes music. This is my grandma. She`s a farmer. She likes painting. And my name is Ken. I'm a student.
点评：作者简洁明了介绍家庭成员的职业和爱好，句子通顺，用词得当。
学英语作文：My Home
广东省佛山市南海区大沥镇盐步东秀小学 叶梓琪 指导教师 冯文慧
Welcome to my home! My home is not big. But it is very nice and clean. There is a living room, two bathrooms, a kitchen and two bedrooms in it.
The big bedroom is for my parents. You can see a TV, a window, a bed, a door, a dressing table in it. You can see a window, a door, a desk, a chair, a bed and a computer in my bedroom. You can see a TV, a sofa, a table, a desk and five chairs in the living room.
I like my home and my family!
点评：作者很详细地介绍自己的家，句子通顺,用词得当。最后I like my home and my family! 点出作者的意图。
小学英语作文：My Home
广东省佛山市南海区大沥镇盐步东秀小学 冯椅婷 指导教师 冯文慧
Welcome to my home! My home is not big. But it is very clean and nice. There is a living room, a bathroom, a kitchen and four bedrooms. My bedroom is clean, too. My mother is in the kitchen now. My father is in the living room. I like my home.
点评：作者简洁地介绍自己的家，句子通顺,用词得当。
小学英语作文：My Sister
广东省佛山市南海区大沥镇盐步东秀小学 马钰淇 指导教师 冯文慧
I have a good sister. She has short hair, small eyes, big ears and a big nose. She’s quiet and cute. She speaks Chinese well. She likes music and painting.
Can you guess what’s her name?
点评：作者很详细地介绍自己姐妹的外貌。句子通顺，用词得当，值得学习。最后用Can you guess what's her name? 提出疑问，耐人寻味。
小学英语作文：My Dog
广东省佛山市南海区大沥镇盐步东秀小学 彭静欣 指导教师 冯文慧
I have a dog. Its name is Doggy. I like it.
Doggy has two big eyes, two small ears, a big nose and a small mouth. It’s black and white. It has a short tail. It’s cute and lovely.
Doggy is strong. It likes bones, rice and meat very much. My dog is lazy. It can catch a ball.
I love my dog very much.
点评：作者能从外貌特征、形态和爱好描写自己的小狗。这无不是作者仔细观察的结果。句子通顺，是很好的英语小作文。
小学英语作文：National Day Holidays
I went to my cousin's house on the first day of the holidays and got a piece of good news that his wife was pregnant. She said she's worrying about getting fat, but on her face there was a unconcealable pleasure of conceiving a baby. My cousin told me that he'll educate his child in a severe way, with a future father's matureness. I'm happy for them.
Yesterday, our research school's soccer team had a match with the graduate students from the department of international business. It was almost a close game in the first half, but we seemed lacking of vigor in the second half, so we lost the game.
Half of the National Day holidays have passed by ... life still goes with good and bad times.
My Robot
I have a robot. Its name is Ken. It is very tall, strong, handsome and cool. It has ten hands, six legs and five eyes. It can do many things. It can jump high, and it can jump at the top of the building. It can run fast, it can run as fast as Lu Xiang. And it can fly high, just like a plane. It also can do housework. For example, It can clean the house, cook for my family, wash the clothes and so on. It's super! I love it. What about you?
My Robot
I have a good friend. His name is Robby. He has a big head, four strong legs and four long hands. He can run very fast and fly very high. He can speak Chinese, English and Japanese. He can put out the fire, help us to learn and help sick people. He lives at my home. Who is he? Do you know? He is my robot.
I have a robot. Its name is Billy. It has six long hands, four long legs, three big eyes, two small ears and a big mouth. It's hard-working and funny. It can walk with its legs. It can work with its hands. It can talk with its mouth. And it can help my mum do the housework. It can help my dad to repair the computer. It can help my sister and me to learn. We all like the robot very much!
My Favourite Animal
I have a pet. It's a cat. It has two big eyes, a small mouth and a long tail. It's very cute. It can run, jump and climb trees. But it can't fly. It's good at catching mice. So there is no mice at my home. It likes eating fish very much. It's my favourite animal.
My Father's Daily Life
My father is a math teacher in a middle school. He usually gets up at six o'clock, eats his breakfast at six fifteen. Then he goes to work. He is never late for work. He has lunch at twelve o'clock at school. At five thirty, he comes back home and cooks dinner for my family. After dinner, he always goes for a walk in the park. He goes to bed at eleven o'clock. I love my father.
My favourite teacher
张家港市凤凰小学 王安琪
Hi, everybody. My name is Wang Anqi, I'm twelve years old, I'm in class5 grade 6, and I'm from Fenghuang Primary school.
Well, I'd like to talk something about my teacher; I like my computer studies teacher Mr. Long best, Mr. Long is tall and strong. He has black hair. There is a pair of glasses on his bright eyes. He has two big feet and he always wears sports shoes.
Mr. Long's hobby is taking photos. He often shows us his photos about scenes, animals and persons; He is always good at catching the most wonderful moments. He is kind and easy-going. A t his lessons, we often surf the internet and play computer games. We often see beautiful pictures and read interesting stories online. We are excited in the computer class. We have a computer lesson every week. We hope we have more.
Last month, we had a spring sports meeting, We were all excited, especially when we saw the teachers' running race. We were looking forward to its coming, because Mr. Long was in the race. He was the last runner. At that time, the first runner was far behind. When he began to run, his team was catching up fast. We were all pleased with their performance. To our surprise, Mr. Long was running with all his strength and he passed several runners, one, two, and three.... Finally, he won the first. We were so excited that we couldn't say any words but shouting and laughing. Everyone knew it was Mr. Long that made the great success.
“Hooray! Mr. Long, you are so great.” I'll learn from you in the future.
My self
Hello ! My name is qu xue wen ,I'm a girl. I like eat apples bananas and Oranges. I like play computer games.I'm tall but me is very fat.I have very big eyes,A small nose and a small mouth.My math is very good.I'm 13 years old.I like read books.I ride my bike go to school.
This is me.Do you like me?
My teacher
I have a new teacher.She is an English teacher,her name is Miss He.She is young and beautiful.She is strict but kind.She often goes to work by motor bike.But sometimes she likes piaying sports.Usualli she likes reading book.I like my English teacher very much.What about you?
My English Teacher
Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.
My pet
I have a new pet.It is a dog.It is Ming Ming.It is one year old.It is very cute.It has short fut.It has big eyes and long ears.It's very small.It has a short tail.It likes eating bone.It likes running.Sometimes It likes playing boat.I like my pet very much.
What is success?
What is success?It is what everyone is longing for.Sometimes success would be rather simple.
What is success? Different people hold views on This question. Some think that one is successful if he can make a great deal of money. Others argue that success means holding an important government post.
THE BIG DAY
I am very happy that i find the webside of the English study room this noon . I am a self-taught student and i dream i can make a lot of friends that love english study .I have no chance to be a school student but i believe hard work can equal to the smart. There were only two creature that can get the top of the high point the eagle and the snail .The eagle may get the target very easily but the snail is much more difficult but if there a friend who can do him a favor maybe he can get the point more easy .
The name of my essay is the big day ,for i am on the way to make friend on this day .A friend in need is a friend indeed .
My best friend
My best friend is Mary. She lives in a tall building. She lives on the fifth floor. Everyday she takes the lift up and down. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin. She has short black hair， two big eyes and a small mouth. She is very cute. I like playing with her. We are in the same class. I like to read books but she likes playing games. She likes to eat popcorn and ice creams. I like them， too. Her favourite food is fish， so she is clever. She loves her cat. She often plays with her. The cat likes Mary， too. They are cute.
Do you have a best friend？ Can you tell me something about your friend？
家乡天空
When I was very young ,the sky in my hometown was nice and beautiful, the sky was very blue,and the air was fresh. There were some birds singing ,and there were many trees in the fields. I often played with my friends in the open air.I liked it.
Now the people are rich ,but the sky in my homerown isn't blue .the trees were cut down , and there aren't many birds. And the air isn't fresher than before. The rubbish is put here and there, it was bad for our health.So wo must do something to protect the environment. If we make a contribution to protecting the environment,the sky will become much more beautiful.
My dream job
When I grow up, I'm going to do what I want to do. I'm going to move somewhere interesting. Paris sounds like a city that I could that enjoy. There are lots of art exhibitions there. I want to be an artist . So how am I going to do it? First, I'mgoing to find a part-time job for a year or tow and save some money. Then I'm going to be a student at an art school in Paris.
My mother
I have a happy family.They are my father, my mother, my grandma and me. I like my mother very much.
My mothe is a tall woman.She has black hair.Two eyes.A pair of glasses.A small nose.And a small mouth in head. She like wear skirt. So she is a customer.My is a cook,too.She cook delicious dinner everyday .This is my mother
Everyone should have the courage to
Everyone should have the courageto
Everyone should have the courage to.Why to say?Because people is higher animals.We must can bold.
Life is a big stage.Wonderful your life is not wonderful to see you on the performance of .If you feel in the performance of.Then you have the sueeccded.Although I have only primary and secondary school students .But I want people to be able to have the courage to .
The power of love
As an example of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year. Although their incomes are still low by international standards, people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can ― be it money or goods ― to help their needy fellow citizens. Moreover, they do this with no thought of gain for themselves
In my opinion, the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are..zwen8.com We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. In this way, we can help to make the world a better place, for the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love.
This morning
This morning is cool.I am going to play basketball.After play basketball,I feel tired,but I very happy.Because basketball is my favourite sport.My body is strong.I hope you like basketball too.I play computer games now.
My good friend and I
Hi! I am Liang Shuaikang.I have a good friend.She is a pretty girl.We play games together in our school.On Saturday,we play basketball.On Sunday,we read books in the bookstore,then we drink orange juice.Every weekend we have a good time.
My family
There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my sister and me. My father likes reading. My mother likes cooking. They both work in Leliu. They always go to work by car. They work hard.
My sister and I are pupils. I study in the primary school affiliated with Shunde No.1 Middle School. My hobby is collecting coins. My sister studies in Xishan Primary School. She likes watching TV. We love our family very much.
My friend
I have a friend. Her name is Candy. She is twelve year old. She has black and short hair. She has a little mouth, two big eyes. She is so cute. Her mom and dad love her. She has a happy family. Her friends like her too, So she’s happy every day.
She is a student of Yi Zong Fu Xiao. She is in Class Four Grade Six. She studies very hard. English is her favourite subject. She likes to speak English. She can speak English very well now. She always says “Learn by doing.” So she thinks speaking is very important in learning English.
We are very busy studying when we are in school. But on the weekend, we are free. We often do homework together on Saturdays. After that, we can watch TV at home. Sometimes, we play games. We have the same hobbies. She likes riding bikes and watching TV and so do I. Her favourite sport is swimming. She’s very good at it. She often teaches me how to swim in summer.
I like her very much. I am lucky to be her friend.
My friend
Lisa is a good girl. She is my best friend. We are students. I know each other very well.
Lisa has very long and black hair. Her eyes are very bright. She is thin but not weak. She is smart and active. But sometimes she is quiet. She is very strict with herself. She studies very hard. She wants to enter a good middle school next year. So she always tells me to study hard together. We hope we can get into the same school next year.
We have the same hobbies. She likes playing badminton, and I like it too. We like the same music, the same books. Her favourite book is Harry Potter. I like it , too. We often read books together.
She is also brave and independent. You know, our parents come to school to take us home every Friday afternoon. But one Friday, I found her go home alone by taxi. I said: “ You are very brave, you are the best.” She said “Thanks”with smile.
She tells me she wants to be a nutritionist one day. I think it very hard to be a nutritionist.But she says where there is a will, there is a way. I hope her dream will come true one day.
Lisa, you’re my friend. I have to learn from you. I love you.
My weekend
I think everyone will have a busy and interesting weekend. Now, let me introduce my busy weekend to you.
On Saturday morning, I am going to the bookstore. I’m going to buy some story-books and a Chinese-English and English-Chinese dictionary. I like reading story-books. I find them very interesting. Then I am going home. My home is near the bookstore. So I am going by bike. I like riding my bike. In the evening, I am going to play piano. Playing piano is my hobby.
On Sunday morning, I am going to do my homework. Now I am in Grade Six. I want to enter a good middle school next year. So I must study hard. In the afternoon, I am going shopping with my parents and my little brother. My mom says she is going to buy a pair of sneakers for me. I love going shopping. I think all of the girls like going shopping. Am I right.
On Sunday evening, I am going back to school by school bus. I love my weekend, how about you? Tell me something about your weekend.
Animals
I like animals very much. I have a dog, It’s my favourite animal. It’s white, It looks like a snow ball. It has two big eyes and ears. But its nose and mouth are very small. It’s very naughty.
It often stares at my food when I have a meal. When I’m home it follows me all the time.
When I do my homework, it often sits beside quietly, but sometimes runs around me and shouts: wom wom.
I like my dog very much.
My holiday
My holiday was good. I stayed at home for sometime. I went to Tianyi Square and bought same games. But one day, my monther, my younger brother and I went to Tianyi digital square to buy games. And I bought a new uniform in the evening. I'd like to have a glass of apple juice my monther bought it for me. I says, " Thanks a lot. " I bought some shoes. I want a pair of sports shoes. In the shop, the wonderful song added tour pleasure. I see the black shoes. my monther says, " There are beautiful !"
I was happy that day, because I went to Tianyi Square and had a lot of fum.
My Best Friend
I have a lot of friends in Simon English School. One of them is my best friend. His name is boyd.
He and I are both thirteen years old. but I am older than he, and I am fatter than he too. He is shorter than I, and he is thinner than I. He wears a pair of glasses but I don't.
He likes to eat pocket-food, and he is a gentleman in a sense that when he has pock-food he will share them with us.
He and I are in the same school and in the same class. So, we can help each other. We alway play in the school together. he likes to do thing I like. He lives in the Ningbo Jiangdong, so he hardly came to my home in Zhenghai but I alway go to his home on weekends and he sometimes will come to my home on weekends. Sometimes we will fight but we alway get along well.
His mother is a doctor in the Li-Hui-Li hospital and I know where her office is. His father is a worker in the Bei-Lun power plant. He is a head of a group. So, his father has a lot of work to do.
He and I are in the same school. We usually have a good time so he is my best friend.
My Family
Hello! Everyone. Here’s a photo of my family.
Look! The girl in red is myself. I’m Gu Tingyan. My English name is Wendy. Please call me Wendy, because I like it. I’m tall and thin. My eyes are big. My hair is short. I like reading, skating, drawing and English. I’m very clever. I’m the top student in my class. All the teachers and classmates like me and I like them, too.
The man on the right is my father. He is also very tall. He’s handsome. He always wears a pair of glasses. My father is an English teacher of middle school. Sometimes we learn English together. My father likes basketball. He is good at it. He always plays basketball with his workmates.
The woman on the left is my mother. In my eyes, she’s very beautiful. She is tall, too. My mother has a round face, two big eyes and a small nose. Her hair is long. My mother is a doctor. She works very hard. She likes smiling. She’s very kind. I think my mother is a good housewife. She can make delicious dinner and she can do the housework well. Sometimes I help her.
I have a happy family. I like my father and my mother.
Money
Money is indeed important, but money cannot buy everything. A miser may think that “money talks,” but if you only give your attention to making money, you may lose many things, such as health, friendship and love. I don't think we should regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems or enable us to live a comfortable life. What we should do is to use it appropriately and not become misers. This way, all of us can lead a happier lives.
My good friend
I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. She has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better. She is good at singing.
She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. She is also nice. She often helps us . Our classmates like her very much..
Can you guess her name? She is my good friend -Xu jiaojiao.
My bedroom
I have a lovely bedroom. There is a bed in my bedroom. There is a desk near my bed. There is a pink doll on my bed. I sleep with it every night. There is a big window in my bedroom. The yellow lamp is on my desk .Every evening, I do my homework under the lamp. I have a big shelf in my bedroom. There are many books on the shelf. I like reading very much. Do you like reading? You can borrow the books from me if you like?
My bedroom is so nice. I like it.
Happy Holiday
May Day is coming. I’m so happy because my father and my mother take me to Wu Quan Park this holiday.
In the park, I see many trees and beautiful flowers. There are many children and many happy playing games, too.
My parents take me to the zoo. There are lions, tigers, eagles, bears, deer, monkeys, and so on. I like the monkeys best because they are very clever and they make us laugh. How lovely they are!
I have a good time that day. What a beautiful and happy holiday.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
My Days of the week
I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。
小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。
My Favourite Food
Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.
How about you? What’s your favourite food?
【要领点评】
My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。
I can help do housework
I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?
【要领点评】
本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。
小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
In The Kitchen
This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.