学校通知申请材料已收到，学员写的进一步申请的回信
学校通知申请材料已收到，学员提供进一步情况的回信：
Dear Professor Amazali:
Thank you for informing me that my application file is now complete. This is to update the information you find in that file.
When I first made the application, my fourth and final year of undergraduate studies had just commenced. I am now half way through the writing of my graduation paper, titled Software Reusability in the Field of Business Management. My research, centered around a POS (point of sales) system at the typical supermarket, has been going on smoothly, and I expect to finish the paper by mid May. This graduation paper project has further enhanced my understanding of computer science and its potential in business management.
As I am sure you imagine, I am now anxious to hear any news you may have regarding the status of my application. While I know that you mus
t be flooded with applications by high-
caliber people around the world, I do think that I cut a good match to any of my competitors for acceptance and financial aid. As weigh my various options beyond graduation, I hope that&nb
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第二篇：学校通知申请材料已收到,学员写的进一步申请的回信
学校通知申请材料已收到，学员写的进一步申请的回信
学校通知申请材料已收到，学员提供进一步情况的回信：
Dear Professor Amazali:
Thank you for informing me that my application file is now complete. This is to update the information you find in that file.
When I first made the application, my fourth and final year of undergraduate studies had just commenced. I am now half way through the writing of my graduation paper, titled Software Reusability in the Field of Business Management. My research, centered around a POS (point of sales) system at the typical supermarket, has been going on smoothly, and I expect to finish the paper by mid May. This graduation paper project has further enhanced my understanding of computer science and its potential in business management.
As I am sure you imagine, I am now anxious to hear any news you may have regarding the status of my application. While I know that you must be flooded with applications by high-
caliber people around the world, I do think that I cut a good match to any of my competitors for acceptance and financial aid. As weigh my various options beyond graduation, I hope that&nb
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