题目：

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then give your comments. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

　　【审题构思】

　　这是一篇图画类作文，要求考生描述图画，并做出评论。此类作文一般为三段式。即第一段简单描述图画的内容及内涵，第二段就图画的内容展开评论，并表明自己的观点，第三段重申自己的看法并提出建议。考生在评论和表明自己的观点时，一定要思路清晰，且要表达清楚。

　　【参考范文】

　　In the picture above, a child flies from one cage to the other cage like a bird.One cage is named school, and the other is named cram school. What a sarcastic picture. There is no freedom left for the children who cannot enjoy the supposed cheerful vacation.

　　Why cannot the children enjoy the vacation that belongs to them Who push the children from one cage to the other What should we do to help the trapped children The three questions solved, the above picture will not exist any more. The answer to the first question is hidden with the superficial one being acquiring more knowledge, and the fundamental one is that parents demand more scores from their children. They expect their children to be able to score more through attending various cram schools at the cost of their children’s supposedly splendid vocation. So it is the parents who pursue quick success that push the children from one cage to the other. To free the children, the parents should put emphasis on the children’s physical and mental health rather than the score.

　　As is known to all that pursuit of high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be uprooted. Therefore, we should emancipate the children in the mind and return the joy of childhood to children gradually.

【高分词汇与词组】

supposed 本该的

trapped 受困的

attend various cram schools 参加各种辅导班

pursue quick success 急功近利

【句型替换】

　　To free the children, the parents should put emphasis on the children’s physical and mental health rather than the score.

　　=To set the children free , the parents should emphasize the children’s physical and mental well-being rather than the score.

　　As is known to all that pursuit of high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be uprooted.

　　=As we all know that pursuing high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be eradicated.

第二篇：20xx年12月英语六级作文范文学习没有捷径

20##年12月英语六级作文范文2

1.   学习成功没有捷径

2.   工作学历论

3.   技术支持

学习没有捷径

　　参考范文

读书无捷径插图

　　As is vividly depicted in the picture, before the circulation desk stands a student, who wants to find a shortcut to learning, with the librarian pointing it to him. On the lower part of the picture, we can see some English characters which read “' How To Do Well In School Without Studying ‘is over there in the fiction section”。

　　As to me, I think there is no shortcut to success, and the English characters under the picture also mean that the shortcut to success only exist in the virtual world. Whether you can do well in school is based on the effort that you spend on study. That is to say, the more diligent you are, the better your study is. Diligent is momentous and fundamental to people what the soul is vital and significant to us. Had it not been for it, we could not have been success. The story of Ma Yun, founder of China’s online trading empire, best prove the significance of diligent in realizing personal ambitionand creating value to the world。

　　“The most crucial part of your life,”once wrote a distinguished professor, “is tocultivate the quality of diligent。”I was, and remains, the supporter of the idea that “There is no shortcut to learning。”

　　范文译文

正如图画里面生动描述的，在图书馆还书台前站着一个学生，他想要在学习中找到一个捷径，图书管理员正给他指向图书馆中的一个角落。在图画的下方，我们可以看到一行话：“怎样不学习却能学的很好”在科幻小说中。

　　就我而言，我认为成功是没有捷径的，而且图画下方的也说明了成功的捷径只存在于科幻小说的虚拟世界中。因为你能否取得好成绩取决于你在学习上付出的努力。也就是说，你越勤奋，你的成绩就会越好。勤奋对于人们的重要性，就如同灵幻对于我们的重要性一样。如果没有它，我们就不能获得成功。马云中国网上贸易帝国的创始人，他的故事就非常好的证明了勤奋在实现个人目标和为世界创造价值方面的重要性。

　　一个著名的教授曾经写到：“在你的生命中，最重要的部分就是要培养勤奋的品质。”我过去是，而且现在仍然是这个观点的支持者：成功没有捷径。