以下大作文范文来自王江涛2008考研英语高分写作。图画选择并非十分妥当，有些不值得一写，而且有的写法教为怪异，所以没有必要整篇背诵。放在这里的目的主要是让我们可以有更多练习的机会，并且可以从范文中吸取好的语言和思路。如果有时间精力的话，强烈推荐把这些文章的全部或者是某些篇章中英互译一下，一是为了提高自己写句子和用词的能力，二是让自己对照原文，看自己的常见错误在哪里。坚持以下5步法
1． 认真研究原文
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3． 对照你的翻译，用英文默写或者是翻译回来
4． 对照原文找差距
5． 写练习心得，为什么要这样写，哪里做得不够，又有哪些小错误，一定要做这个，这是提醒自己的最好方式
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二十大必背范文 BY 王江涛
一．社会篇
（一）北京奥运
The picture is the Beijing 2008 Summer Olympics logo. The emblem has a single Chinese character on a traditional red Chinese seal. The English words”Beijing 2008”are written with a Chinese brush below it. At the bottom of the picture, there are the five rings of Olympic Games. The figure in the logo resembles a runner or dancer and the Chinese character”jing”which means”capital”.
The image carries the message that today’s China is not only a nation with a long and glorious history, but also one full of modern dynamics. First and foremost, this logo is a journey to the future, the emblem for China moving towards the 2008 Olympic Games. What is more, it is a symbol of the city’s promise to make the Games a success. Accordingly, this emblem represents the heart of an ancient culture embracing the modern world, the spirit of a people moving towards a new destiny.
In my view, first of all, the Olympic Game represents the spirit of sports. Arms flung wide, it invites all people and the world to share in the city’s history, beauty, energy, and its future. In addition, it is a gesture of friendship and hope that the community of nations will unite in peace through sports.
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这幅图画是北京20xx年夏季奥运会会徽。这一标志在传统的红色中国印章上刻着一个汉字。汉字下方用中国毛笔书写了“北京2008”的英文字样。图画底部是奥运的五环标志。会徽中的人物象征着一位跑步者或舞者，而汉字“京”的意思是“首都”。这一会徽表达了当今的中国不仅拥有灿烂悠久的历史，更是一个充满了现代活力的国家。首先，这一会徽是一次奔向未来之旅，是中国迈向20xx年奥运会的象征。其次，它是北京承诺将成功举办奥运的标志。因此，这一会徽代表了一种悠久文化拥抱现代世界的信心，以及中国人民迈向新征程的精神。在我看来，奥林匹克运动会首先代表了体育的精神。它伸展了双臂邀请全世界及其人民分享北京的历史、魅力、能量及未来。此外，它象征友谊，并希望国际社会通过体育运动进而和平共处。
(二) 中国航天
It is vividly depicted in the pictures that the Shenzhou-VI, or “Divine Ship,” has carried two Chinese astronauts into orbit and the counthe prestigious space club pioneered four decades ago
by the former Soviet Union and the United States. As the inventor of the ancient rocket, the Chinese nation had cherished a space dream for centuries. The launch of its first satellite, the Dongfanghong, in 1970 ushered in China’s space age. At present, the Shenzhou-VI marks another giant stride in China’s space trek.
The blast-off of China’s manned spacecraft will definitely breathe new energy into the country’s pursuit of space technologies for the overall welfare of its people. Just imagine what new seed varieties with higher yields and better qualities, which are developed in space, would mean to a country with 1.3 billion people. It is hoped that wider applications of space technology will turn out to be an important driving force in the country’s economic and social development.
It is my view that expensive as they are, manned missions are worth it. In addition to offering a tremendous boost to a country’s technological capabilities and creating a plentitude of other possibilities, they are a huge morale booster. The successful launch of Shenzhou-VI has clearly showcased the value of devotion, co-operation and pursuit of the unknown. And the upbeat spirit the two Chinese astronauts demonstrated in the face of the unknown will inspire the nation to take on challenges as it continues to evolve.
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这些图片生动地描述了神舟六号宇宙飞船搭载两名中国宇航员进入轨道，并且使中国进入40年前前苏联和美国发起的闻名遐迩的太空俱乐部。中国作为古代火箭的发明者，数百年来一直珍藏着太空梦想。19xx年，第一颗人造卫星“东方红号”使得中国进入太空时代。现在，神舟六号标志着中国在太空征程中的一个伟大成就。毫无疑问，为了全国人民的共同利益，中国载人宇宙飞船的发射将为中国探索空间科技注入新活力。设想一下：在太空培育高产优质的新种子，对于一个拥有十三亿人口的国家将意味着什么。人们希望空间科技的更广泛应用能成为我国经济社会发展的一个巨大推动力。在我看来，尽管载人飞船耗资巨大，但是物有所值。除了对我国的技术力量产生巨大的推动以外，它也将极大地鼓舞全国人民的精神。神舟六号的成功发射已经清楚地证明了奉献、合作以及探索未知的价值所在。而两位中国宇航员在面对未知世界时所表现的不屈的精神，也将激励中国在未来的发展中应对将面临的种种挑战。
（三）和谐社会
As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, a smart boy and a pretty girl are staring at a huge construction entitled “harmonious society”.The construction is basec on harmonious cities, countries, communities,families,campuses,enterprises and medical treatment, to name only a few. Although a lot of efforts have been put into bridging the widening gap between rich and poor in our nation, the situation is far from optimistic. A case in point is the uneven development of our nation. On the one hand, some people in the developed areas of country are enjoying almost everything that modern civilization can offer—luxury cars,expensive houses and other devices for comfortable life. On the other hand, in some undrdeveloped areas, a great many people are still living in sheer poverty. They do not have the minimal means of living, even no money for education of the young. Looking at all these, how can we stay aloof and easy?
Our nation is building up a harmonious society. If we do not do something to harmonize the situation by achieving common welfare for all the people, how can we accomplish that noble goal? To begin with, we each individual should start from right here and now, and attach great value and importance to the urgency of the issue. Furthermore, in a bid to working towards a harmonious nation where the rich is just and the poor secure, it is high time that we took drastic actions to build up a harmonious society.
参考译文
这幅漫画象征性地描绘了一个英俊的小男孩和一个漂亮的小女孩正在仰望一个名为“和谐社会”的巨大建筑。这个建筑建立在和谐城市、和谐乡镇、和谐社区、和谐家庭、和谐校园、和谐企业和和谐医疗的基础上。尽管我们已经付出巨大努力来弥补我国贫富之间日益加剧的差距，但是情况远远不能令人乐观。我国的不平衡发展就是一个很好的例子。一方面，有些发达地区的人们正在享受现代文明几乎能够提供的一切——豪华轿车、豪华住宅以及提供舒适生活的其他设施。另一方面，在一些欠发达的地区，很多人仍然生活在极端的贫困中。他们缺乏最基本的生活手段，甚至没有钱供年轻人上学。有鉴于此，我们怎能无动于衷？我们的国家正在建设和谐社会。如果我们不为全体人民谋求共同福利来平衡这种状况，又怎能达到这一崇高目标？首先，我们每个人都应马上重视这个问题的紧迫性。其次，为了创建公平致富、保障贫困的和谐国家，我们应采取严厉措施来建设和谐社会。
（四）沙尘暴
It is symbolically revealed in the cartoon that sand storm in a city is so heavy that taxis cannot move any more. A passenger with a mask on his mouth, is riding on the back of a camel, which is the new “taxi”.
The purpose of the cartoon is to show us that utmost importance should be attached to environmental protection. On the one hand, it so happens that we cut trees to clear land for farming and level up a lake to build houses. The result of so doing and other destructive developments is deforestation and uncontrollable desertification, thus drving us homeless like the scene we see above. On the other hand ,scientists have warned that unless drastic steps are taken, the problem of sand storm will eventually get out of hand. As a matter of fact, people from all walks of life are showing a real concern over this issue.
From my point of view, we should work out concrete solutions to the problem. For one thing, the best way to fight back against the greedy desert is to vigorously set about the task of planting trees and grasses for the reforestation to reclaim the land. For another, since trees play a vital role in water and soil conservation, we must waste no natural resources and possibly develop alternative forms of energy to replace the decreasing resources. Accordingly, the earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and our descendants.
参考译文
这幅漫画象征性地描述了一个城市中的沙尘暴非常严重，以至于出租车无法开动。一位行人面戴口罩，骑在新的“出租车”——一只骆驼的背上。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们应该充分重视环境保护。一方面，我们砍伐树木以便获得耕地，填平湖泊以便修建房屋。这些行为以及其他破坏性发展的结果就是乱砍滥伐和无节制的土地沙化，最终如我们看到的景象一样，使得我们无家可归。另一方面，科学家已经警告我们除非采取严厉措施，否则沙尘暴问题将最终失控。事实上，各行各业的人们正在对这个问题予以充分关注。
在我看来，我们对这个问题应该制定具体的措施。首先，由于树木在水土保持中发挥重要作用，抵制贪婪的沙漠的最好方法就是积极地开展植树种草、收回土地的工作。其次，我们必须停止浪费自然资源，并且发展替代正在减少的资源的可行性能源形式。地球是我们的家园，我们有责任为了我们自己和子孙后代照顾好她。
（五）环境保护
The cartoon vividly depicts a little bird shedding tears for its lost paradise. In the picture given, a bird, cold and hungry, is squatting on a lonely trunk, overlooking the desolation of trunks left after trees were cut down. The bird seems to be asking herself. “Where is my homeland?”
At present, environmental protection has become the source of greatest complaint in a great many developing countries. First of all, the destruction of forests is only part of the threat to the ecological balance of the planet. What is more, the sad little bird is a symbol of all living creatures, including humans,and,like the bird, we too will be left homelss if we allow the destruction of the environment to continue.
As environmental protection has seriously influenced people’s daily and economic development, the highest priory of governments has given rise to the problem and many experts have been called in for advice. First and foremost, we must take positive steps right now to put an end to the plundering of the Earth’s natural resources. Futhermore, there is no denying that the drawer of the picture is urging us to start with a campaign to save the forests. Only by doing so can we strike a sustainable development of the world.
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这幅图画生动地描述了一只小鸟在为它失去的天堂流泪。在给出的图画中，一只寒冷饥饿的小鸟蹲伏在孤单的树干上，俯瞰着被砍伐后的荒芜树林。小鸟似乎在问自己：“我的家在哪儿呢？”
目前，环境保护已经严重影响了人们的日常生活和经济发展，这个问题引起了政府优先考虑，他们请来很多专家献计献策。首先，我们必须立即采取积极措施制止掠夺地球的自然资源。其次，这幅漫画的作者无疑鼓励我们展开一场挽救森林的斗争。只有这样我们才能继续这个世界的可持续发展。
（六）环境污染
The pictures symbolically illustrate pollution is becoming increasingly serous around the globe. In the first cartoon, a man is scorching the earth on a chimney. In the second one, a famous ancient Chinese poet, Wang Bois astonished by the heavy smoke poured by chimneys into the air and dirty river polluted by a factory. We are informed that “the autumn river is the same color with the sky”. The drawer is sending a message about the significance of the need for everyone to fight against the danger of environmental pollution. There is no denying that the industry is indications of civilization, progress and development. Unfortunately, as industry develops, so will the number of factories, and the amount of industry pollutants. We are so development-oriented that we almost can sacrifice our blue sky and pure water for the purpose of obtaining a little material gain.
As a consequence,it is imperative for us to take drastic actions. On the one hand, the factories should be equipped with devices which can dispose of waste gas and water in a bid to prevent them from polluting our planet. On the other hand ,there should be an increasingly loud voice from the public for firm measures against poisonous gas sent off and unhealthy water polluted by factories.
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这些图画象征性地描述了全球污染正在日益严重。在第一副图中，一个人正在烟囱上烘烤地球。在第二副图中，中国古代著名诗人王勃，被烟囱排放到大气中的浓烟和被工厂排放的废水污染的河流惊呆了。文字说明显示：“秋天共长天一色”。
画家传达了如下重要信息：每个人都必须抵制环境污染的危害。毫无疑问，工业是文明、进步与发展的标志。然而，随着工业的发展，工厂与工业污染物的数量同时增加。我们如此以发展为导向，以至于为了获取一点物质利益，几乎牺牲了蓝天净水。
因此，我们急需采取严厉措施。一方面，工厂应该配备能够处理废气和废水的设施，以阻止它的污染我们的星球。另一方面，公众应该加大呼吁采取稳固措施的力度，控制工厂排放的毒气和污染的废水。
（七）交通问题
The pictures vividly reveal that heavy traffic is becoming increasingly serious all over the world. In the first photo, there is traffic congestion on the road with numerous cars, trucks and buses. In the second picture, hundreds of people are waiting for a train.
We can deduce from the pictures that the photographer is trying to attract our attention to the issue of heavy traffic. First of all, every year men and women crowd into cities in search of employment, a decent living, and the excitement and stimulation of urban life. As people in mounting numbers flood into cities, city services and facilities have been strained to a breaking point. In additon, since in a city with booming industry, land is precious and cannot be extravagantly used by traffic, traffice flows constantly rise to fill whatever scale of roads and hithways are provided for them. It is imperative for us to improve this situation. For one thing, the number of private cars should be limited while more bus routes should be opened up because buses can accommodate more passenger. For another, more streets and roads should be constructed. Since neither of the suggestions can effectively solve the problem, there is an increasing awareness that the two solutions may be combined with other possible solutions to produce the best effect.
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这些照片生动地揭示了交通拥挤正在全世界变得日益严重。图一中，道路上交通堵塞，充满无数轿车、卡车和公交车。图二中，成百上千的人正在等一辆地铁。
我们可以从这些图片中看出：摄影师正在努力吸引我们关注交通拥挤问题。首先，每年人们涌进城市寻求就业机会、体面的生活以及都市生活的激动与刺激。由于越来越多的人涌进城市，城市服务与设施的承受能力已经到达临界点。此外，由于在工业迅速发展的城市中土地非常珍贵，不能被交通过度利用，无论公路和高速路修建到何种规模，车流总是不断地增加，直至挤满道路。
我们迫切需要改进这种状况。首先，由于公交可以运载更多乘客，我们应该限制私车的数量，开辟更多公交线路。其次，我们应该建设更多道路。由于这两个措施都不能单独有效地解决这个问题，人们越来越意识到为了达到最佳效果，我们可以把这两个措施和其他可能的措施结合起来。
（八）学术腐败
As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon, some people who call themselves “scholars” are doing their research. Instead of writing his own research papers, he resorts to copying other’s dissertations. Looking at the picture, we cannot but worry about the problem of intellectual honesty—an issue vital to the healthy development of our science and technology cause.
Suppose that every scientist or researcher does not do experiments, but plagiarize others’ research results, then what would happen? There would be no academic credibility and people would no longer believe what the scientists say. Since scientists are noble elites of society, if their words are unreliable, then the credibility of the whole society would deteriorate and collapse.
As a consequence, intellectual credibility is not something that we can afford to lose or leave it at large. To begin with, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who plagiarize others’ works. In additon, we should cultivate the awareness of the young that academic honesty is extremely rital to us. In short, it is high time we took effective measures to reverse the disturbing trend illustrated in the cartoon.
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这幅漫画象征性地描述了一些所谓的“学者”在如何进行研究。这位学者并未创作自己的研究论文，而是致力于抄袭他人的论文。看着这幅漫画，我们不得不担心学术诚信问题——这对
我们的科学技术事业的健康发展至关重要。
假设每个科学家或研究者都不做实验，而是抄袭他人的研究成果，那将发生什么？学术诚信将不复存在，人们将不会再相信科学家说的话。科学家是社会的高级精英，如果他们所说的话变得不可信，那么整个社会的诚信将会恶化并且崩溃。
因此，我们不能对学术诚信问题置之不理。一方面，我们应该制定严格的法律法规来严惩那些抄袭他人成果的人。另一方面，我们应该培养年轻人的意识：学术诚信对我们非常重要。简言之，我们应该采取有效措施来扭转图画中所阐释的令人不安的趋势。
（九）职业道德
The cartoons vividly depict people in expanding numbers are engaged in open and rampant cheating in business. In the first drawing, a boy has no courage to have dinner in front of delicious foods in that there may exist pesticide pollution or poisonous elements. In the second picture, the administrative office, salesmen, breeding families and forage shops are laughing at the hanging of a poisonous duck.
Professional dishonesty has a very damaging effect. In the first place,since cheating in business reveals the moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness of those businessmen who engage in it, the dishonest practice will ultimately exert a perverse influence on the whole society. In the second place, it not only puts honest businessmen at a competitive disadvantage, encouraging those who did not cheat to adopt similar practices later, but undermines the very foundation of professional ethics in business.
It is often painful to impose sanctions in a specific case. But it is worthwhile. For one thing, to eliminate professional dishonesty thoroghly, serious forms of punishment for a willful offense—a suspension of the offender from business—should be applied. For another, since the incentives to engage in cheating in business are mainly due to a lack of adequate precautions, drastic actions should be taken to prevent one from of cheating or another.
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这些漫画生动地描述了越来越多的人参与了商业上公开肆意的欺诈。在图一中，由于害怕食物中可能存在农药污染或有毒物质，一个男孩面对着美食，却没有勇气进餐。图二中，管理部门、销售商、饲料店和养殖户正在嘲笑一只将被绞死的问题鸭。
职业欺诈具有非常坏的影响。首先，由于商业欺诈揭示了那些参与商人的道德缺陷和人性弱点，欺诈行为最终会对全社会产生歪曲的影响。其次，这不仅使那些诚实商人处于竞争劣势，鼓励那些从未欺诈过的商人日后采取相同的行为，而且损坏了商业中职业道德的根基。 在一件具体事件中实施制裁通常是痛苦的，但是值得。首先，为了彻底消除职业欺诈，我们应该严惩故意违犯者，即吊销违犯者经营权。其次，从事商业欺诈的主要原因是缺乏充分的预防措施，所以我们应该采取严厉措施阻止各种形式的欺诈。
（十）人口增长
As is shown in the graphs, there exists a definite link between world population and the amount of energy consumed around the globe. The first diagram describes that from 1900 to 2050, the world population will dramatically increase from 1.6 billion to 9 billion. It is illustrated in the second bar chart that China has effectively controlled its population growth rate by staying at 7.0 percent in 2003.4.7 percent lower than the average world rate. As is revealed in the third table, between 1900 and 2000, the amount of world energy consumed substantially rose from 0.5 billion ton coals to 23 billion ton.
The purpose of the charts is to show us that population explosion becomes a serious problem. First and foremost, population growth has put enormous pressure on world food supplies, making it
extremely difficult, if not impossible, to avoid hunger and starvation on a massive scale. Furhermore, destruction of the land has also increased as the growing amount of natural vegetation removed to make room for mor houses, roads and highways. Last but not least, the rise in population is accompanied by desire of people in mounting numbers for increasingly less job opportunities, and fewer and fewer natural resources to their living standards.
Briefly speaking, food shortage, environmental destruction and the lowering of the quality of life are the certain results if we are not able to solve it. To begin with, we should appeal to the authorities to control world population. In additon, we should cultivate the awareness of people that family planning policy is extremely essential to China. It is time that drastic measures were taken by the authorities to change the situation.
参考译文
如图所示，世界人口和全球能源消费量之间存在着必然的联系。图一描述了从1900到20xx年，世界人口将从16亿急剧增长至90亿。图二柱状图揭示了中国在20xx年人口增长率保持在7％，低于世界平均值4.7个百分点，有效控制了人口增长率。图三描述了从1900到20xx年，世界能源消费量从5亿吨煤当量急剧增加至230亿吨煤当量。
这些图表的目的是告诉我们人口爆炸成为了一个严重问题。首先，人口增长给世界食物供应带来巨大压力，使得避免大规模饥荒变得非常困难。其次，人们为了给住宅、道路和告诉公路腾出空间占用了天然耕地，造成了土地破坏的激增。最后，人口的增长总是伴随着越来越多的人渴望越来越少的工作机会、而用以提高生活水平的自然资源日益减少的状况。
简言之，如果我们不能解决这个问题，食物短缺、环境破坏和生活质量下降将成为必然。首先，我们应该呼吁政府控制世界人口。其次，我们应该提高人们的意识：计划生育政策对中国非常重要。政府应该采取严厉措施来改变这种状况了。
二．教育篇
（十一）就业
As is illustrated in the pictures, thousands of students in Henan and Zhejiang Province went to two sonferences to find jobs. Job hunting has been a headache for college graduates.
Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get jobs? The causes of this phenomenon are various. For one thing, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the number of graduates is greater than the need in the market. For another, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country. According to the recent statistics by China’s Ministry of Education, 3.38 million college students graduated all over the country in 2005 and only 75% of them are employed right after graduation.
I assume this hard nut canbe cracked if both colleges and students take effective actions. First and foremost, universities should researchthe market and develop special skills to suit its need. In addition, students’ attitude towards employment should be changed. Going to some small cities and country, they can give full play to their professional theoretical knowledge and practical skills. Briefly speaking, if we attach much importance, this situation can be improved.
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如图所示，河南和浙江省上万的大学生进入两个招聘会寻找工作。找工作对很多大学毕业生来讲已经变成了非常头疼的问题。
为什么大学生发现越来越难找工作？这个现象的原因如下。首先，几年前各大学院和大学录取了很多经济、金融等热门专业的学生，以至于毕业生的数量超过了市场需求。其次，大多数大学生宁愿在大城市待着，也不愿去小城市和乡村。根据中国教育部最新调查，20xx年
全国有338万大学生毕业，而其中只有75％毕业后马上找到了工作。
我认为如果大学和学生都采取有效措施，这个难题是可以解决的。首先，大学应该调查市场来发展学生的特殊技能以适应需求。其次，学生的就业观念应该转变。他们应该去小城市和乡镇，在那里他们可以充分发挥自己的专业理论知识和实践技能。总而言之，如果我们更加重视，这种状况可以得到改善。
(十二) 中西方文化
The cartoons vividly depict the current celebration of western and Chinese festivals in China. In the first picture, the Lantern Festival is defeated by St. Valentine’s Day on an arena. The caption reads, “The Lantern Festival PK St. Valentine’s Day. In the second picture, a happy Santa Claus with lots of gifts is running in front of two astonished Chinese children with firecrackers and lanterns. We are informed that “the Spring Festival is in danger”.
The purpose of the drawings is to show us that importance should be attached to the issue of festival celebration. On the one hand, western festival celebrations are so colorful that especially the youth cannot resist all the temptation of having one. Just imagine the romantic atmosphere on St. Valentine’s Day, the fun on All Fool’s Day and the ecstasy brought by gifts and games at Chrismas. On the other hand, Chinese festivals have their own attractions. Think about the comfort of family reunion during Spring Festival and the delicacy of national feelings on many occasions.
As for me, some fashionable western festivals are no doubt days to set aside as special. Meanwhile, I cannot afford to be absent from family gathering during many Chinese festivals. My celebration would be a combined one, some for western festivals, and some for Chinese ones.
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这些漫画生动地描述了当前中国人庆祝西方和中国节日的现状。在图一中，元宵节在擂台上被情人节击败。文字说明显示：“情人节PK元宵节”。在图二中，一个开心的圣诞老人满载礼品，跑在两个惊讶地拿着鞭炮和灯笼的中国孩子前面。我们被告知：“春节危险”。
这些漫画的目的是告诉我们应该重视庆祝节日的问题。一方面，西方节日如此丰富多彩以至于尤其年轻人难以抵制过节的诱惑。设想一下情人节的浪漫气氛、愚人节的乐趣和圣诞节礼物和游戏带来的惊喜。另一方面，中国的节日也有其魅力。想想春节期间全家团圆的温馨以及很多节日中民族情感的慰藉。
对我而言，一些时尚的西方节日无疑是要特别度过的。同时，我也无法在很多中国节日中缺席家庭聚会。我的节日祝贺是中西结合的。
（十三）上网成瘾
In recent years, people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet. As is vividly depicted in the picture, it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line, either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work’s needs. Actually on-line visiting has become a routine activity in our everyday life. However, it seems rather ironic to use a chain instead of normal wire to connect with the mouse in this picture. The exaggerative and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet.
Discussion on the duality has become very popular in newspapers or in people’s chats. On the one hand, no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life. People from all walks of life are benefiting considerably from its powerful function of information communication. As a college student, I get on line every day to learn the news, to study English by registering for web courses, to exchange information through e-mails with my net friends and to download my favorite music, flash, film and pictures. Being a veteran on-line shopper, I
frequently purchase books, CDs at much lower prices. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle. Cyber-living resembles the experience of looking constantly into a kaleidoscope which displays both colored patterns and illusions. Once indulged in the fictitious world, people can barely concentrat on real life. Consequently, many student just chat on line or play computer games immoderately every day, skipping many important classes. Such a waste of time inevitably leads to their failure in the exams.
Therefore, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. After all, Internet is invented to enrich our life, to connect you and me, and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain.
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近年来，人们与互联网之间的关系变得越来越不可分割。图中生动地展示了无论是为了自我娱乐还是适应工作的需求，我们都能很方便地点击鼠标在网上冲浪。事实上，网上冲浪已在我们的日常生活中成为一种惯例。然而，这幅图中看来相当讽刺的地方是，使用一条锁链而不是普通的鼠标线连接鼠标。这幅夸张并使人印象深刻的图画微妙地揭示了人与互联网之间的双重关系。
在报纸上和人们的谈论中，对这种双重性的讨论非常流行。一方面，不可否认互联网现在是我们日常生活中最有用的媒体之一。各行各业的人们都从它强大的信息交流功能中受益匪浅。作为一名大学生，我每天上网了解新闻，通过注册网络课程来学习英语，借助电子邮件和我的网友们交流信息，下载我最喜爱的音乐、动画、电影和图片。作为网上购物的老手，我经常以极低的价格购买书籍、CD。但在另一方面，很多人承认他们太沉迷于网络而无法保持一种正常和健康的生活方式。网络生存就像时常浏览展示多彩方式和幻影的万花筒的一种体验。一旦沉迷于这种虚幻世界，人们很难关注现实生活。因此，很多学生每天没有节制地在网上聊天或打电子游戏，逃过重要课程。这么浪费时间无疑会使他们考试部及格。 因此，我们很有必要以一种合理的方式使用互联网，避免过度沉迷。毕竟，人们发明互联网是为了丰富我们的生活，连接你和我，是为了提高我们的工作效率，而非用锁链束缚我们。 （十四）网上交友
The cartoon vividly shows that when two teenagers meet their net friend named “Beauty”, to their astonishment, they really find an old lady in front of a computer. The purpose of this drawing is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the issue of Internet friendship.
According to the recent survey by the Chinese Academy of Social Science, 80% of people who roam the information Superhighway are there in search of social interaction. As a consequence, the voice speaking through the other side of the line can be used to disguise aspects of a user’s personality. And this might bring an unpleasant or even damaging outcome. Numerous examples can be given, but this will suffice. One of my closest friends, Helen, started a Net relationship with a man she knew as “Prince Charming”. The physical contact, however, reveals that her beloved idol was a husband with wife.
In my view, first and foremost, it is true that people may gain community on the Net, but this exists only in cyberspace. Furthermore, although Internet feiendship can give users companionship and even romance, it often ends with failure and even disaster. It is high time that we placed great emphasis on this phenomenon.
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这幅漫画生动显示了当两个年轻人见到他们名叫“美女老佛爷”的网友时，令他们目瞪口呆的是，他们真的看到一位老奶奶坐在电脑前。这幅图的目的是告诉我们应该充分重视友谊的问
题。
根据中国社科院最新调查，80％的人在信息高速公路上浏览是在寻找社交。其结果是，网线另一端发出的声音可以用来掩盖一名用户性格的方方面面。而这可能造成不快甚至破坏性的后果。这样的例子有很多，但下面这个就足以说明问题。我最好的一个朋友海伦，和一个网名叫“白马王子”的男子开始了一场网恋。而亲身接触证明了她深爱的偶像是一名有妇之夫。 在我看来，首先人们确实可以在网上获得社交，但这只存在于数字空间中。此外，尽管网络友谊可以给用户带来友情甚至浪漫，它也经常以失败和灾难告终。我们应对这一现象引起重视。
（十五）青少年犯罪
The cartoon vividly illustrates a gang of youngsters, holding axes in their hands, are rushing to fight with others. The caption reads, “Juvenile delinquency is increasingly lower than normal age.”
Careful deliberation of this problem has given me several ideas as to why this should be so. To begin with, with the rising divorce rate, some children are not properly taken care of ,and are easily led astray by evildoers. What is more, devoid of the nourishment of education and a school environment, the teenagers failing in various entrance examinations become full of resentment at a society which they feel has rejected them. Last but not least, inexperienced and gullible young people plunge into the illusory world of electric games, on-line chat or even pornography. Such alienation from proper social values is the slippery slope to crime.
It is my view that, first of all, the whole society should attach great importance to the sound growth of youngsters. Furthermore, proper guidance and protection of adults and schools are vital to teenagers. To sum up, if we exert every effort, the juvenile crime rate will undoubtedly be brought down and effectively controlled in a short while.
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这幅漫画生动地描述了一群年轻人手持斧头，正在跑去群殴。文字说明显示：“青少年犯罪低龄化”。
对这个问题的认真思考告诉了我这个问题出现的原因。首先，随着离婚率的上升，有些孩子没有得到适当照顾，很容易被坏人带入歧途。其次，由于缺少教育和学校环境的熏陶，各种入学考试中落榜的青少年对于认为社会抛弃了他们而对社会充满仇恨。最后，无知轻信的年轻人陷入电子游戏、网络聊天甚至色情的虚幻世界中不能自拔。这种偏离正确的社会价值观很容易导致犯罪。
在我看来，首先，整个社会应该高度重视青少年的健康成长。其次，成人和学校的正确引导和爱护对青少年至关重要。总而言之，如果我们竭尽全力，短期之内青少年犯罪率无疑会下降并得到有效控制。
（十六）压力
The cartoon vividly reveals that a young couple is carrying a house on their back. On the house, there are four of their parents, their baby, a car, a TV set, a computer and so on. These things are so heavy that the couple can hardly carry them on their back.
In the past few years, quite a number of men and women have chosen to do something less competitive. They are afraid that the stress and strains of work will rob them of joy and happiness and do them harm both physically and mentally. In fact, however, stress isn’t the bad thing it is often supposed to be. Above all, unless it gets out of control, a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and challenge, and to give purpose and significance to an otherwise meaningless, idle life. Furthermore, people under stress tend to express their full range of potential
and to actualize their own personal worth—the very aim of a human life.
Stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it. What we can do is to develop our adaptive abilities to deal with it rather than to escape from it.
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这幅漫画生动地描述了一堆年轻夫妇在背上背着他们的房子。房子上，有他们的四位父母，一个孩子，一台电视，一台电脑，等等。这些负担如此之重，以至于这堆夫妇几乎难以承受。 在过去几年中，不少人选择去做竞争不那么激烈的工作。他们害怕工作的紧压力会使他们无法得到享受和幸福，会损害他们的身体和精神。然而，事实上压力并不是像人们所认为的那样是一件坏事。首先，一定的压力非常重要，除非你控制不了它。压力可以为人们提供动力和挑战，使本来没有意义、无所事事的生活变得有目的、有意义。其次，处于压力下的人容易发挥自己全部的潜力，实现自己的个人价值，这正是人生的目的。
压力是日常生活的一个组成部分，你无法逃避。我们所能做的事就是培养自己的适应能力，去全力应付，而不是逃避。
（十七）宠物问题
The cartoon vividly depicts people in mounting numbers are keeping various kinds of animals as pets. In the first picture, a dog, which is a lady’s pet, also has its own pet. In the second drawing, a pet cat led by an old lady is astonished by a pet mouse walking across the street.
Two fundamental factors can account for this phenomenon. In the firtst place, with the quickening pace of modern life and the fierce competition of society, people in expanding numbers feel a sense of indifference, brought upon by a lack of normal communication in the family and an absence of social interaction in the nerghborhood. In the second place, there is a definite link between the increase in the number of people keeping pets and the rise in people’s living standards. According to some pet owners, the care of a dog can cost on average 20 RMB a day—the amount of money which could buy a whole family a day’s food in the past.
It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation. On the one hand, pets are good, affectionate, layal and obedient companions to their masters. On the other hand, since China is a developing country and a great many people are still living below the poverty line, keeping pets is a rather costly and time-consuming hobby.
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这些漫画生动地描述了越来越多的人把各种各样的动物当作宠物。在第一副图画中，一位女士的宠物狗也有自己的宠物。在第二副图中，一位老妇人的宠物猫惊讶地发现一只宠物老鼠正在穿过马路。
两大重要原因可以解释这个现象。首先，随着现代生活节奏的加快以及社会的激烈竞争，越来越多的人感到冷漠。这是由家庭中缺乏正常沟通和邻里间缺少社会交往造成的。其次，在养宠物人数增加和人民生活水平提高之间存在着必然的联系。根据一些宠物主人的说法，养一条宠物狗平均每天需要花费20元，而这笔钱在过去可以为一家人购买一天的食物。
我们应该采取有效措施制止这个现象。一方面，宠物是主人良好、挚爱、忠实、温顺的伙伴。另一方面，由于中国是个发展中国家，很多人还生活在贫困线以下，养宠物是个相当费钱、费时的爱好。
（十八）个人隐私
The cartoon vividly illustrates a man is astonished at numerous personal data out of acomputer. The data include home address, hobbies and interests, employer, Identification Card number, phone number, credit card number, personal photographs, social relationships, and so on.
In recent years, a great many mass media focus on the activities of film stars, pop singers and even
ordinary people. First and foremost, reporters disguise theire identities, infiltrate the subject’s business and family, or even bug an wiretap them—to get the news by whatever means are necessary. In addition, since celebrities are newsworthy figures, and their stories draws far more attention than those of other people, it is natural that the press tries to attract the public to buy their magazines or surf on net by featuring private life of famous people. Generally speaking, a large readership means the rise in the circulation of their publications, hence a huge profit.
In my view, exposing the privacy of people threatens to do more harm than good. In the first place, those exposed people can be severely injured by such public attention. In the second place, we have the right to keep our own privacy, the basic right which should be respected, protected and guaranteed by our laws and regulations under whatever circumstances.
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这幅漫画生动地描述了一个人正惊讶于电脑中所流出的大量个人信息。这些信息包括家庭住址、个人爱好、工作单位、身份证号、电话号码、信用卡卡号、个人照片、社会关系，等等。 近年来，很多大众媒体关注电影明星、流行歌星甚至普通人的活动。首先，记者们隐藏身份，混进调查对象的事业和家庭，甚至打扰并**，以所需的任何方式获得新闻。此外，由于名人是有报道价值的人物，并且他们的故事与其他人的相比，能引起更多的关注，所以媒体很自然通过公开名人的私生活来竭力吸引公众购买杂志或网上冲浪。一般而言，庞大的受众意味着其出版物发行量的增长，以及由此带来的巨大收益。
在我看来，暴露个人的隐私弊大于利。一方面，那些被曝光的人可能被这样的公众关注所严重伤害。另一方面，我们有权保护自己的个人隐私，这是无论何种情况都应被我们的法律法规所尊重、保护并保障的基本权利。
（十九）高薪与快乐
The cartoon vividly depict the relationship between wealth and happiness. In the first picture, a graduate is standing on the top of a hill named “high salary”. In the second drawing, a magnate is imprisoned by diamonds. The caption reads, “Wealth is not equal to happiness”.
There is no doubt that wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society. Various kinds of up-to-date household appliances, latest fashions and recreations make their appearances with each passing day. On the contrary, wealth can also lead to disasters if we have an inappropriate approach to it. Wealth may tempt weak-willed persons to be addicted to harmful habits, such asdrug-taking and gambling, and result in their ruin.
From my point of view, one should never rely only on wealth to achieve happiness. For one thing, a person may lose his reason and go astray if he only intends to seek wealth and indulges himself in leading a luxurious life. For another, there are some government officials who take advantage of their positions to take bribes from the people turning to them for help. Hence, on no account can we equate happiness with wealth.
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这些漫画生动地描述了财富和快乐的关系。图一中，一个毕业生站在一座名为“高薪”的小山顶上。图二中，一个富豪被困禁在钻石之中。文字说明显示：“财富不等于快乐”。
毫无疑问，财富能带来快乐，尤其在现代社会。各种各样新式的家用电器，最新的时尚和娱乐与日俱增。另一方面，如果我们采取不适当的手段活的财富，财富也能带来灾难。财富可能诱惑意志薄弱的人迷上有害的习惯，例如吸毒和赌博，并且导致毁灭。
在我看来，人不能只是依赖财富来获得快乐。一方面，一个人如果只想寻求财富，并沉迷于过奢华生活，就会失去理性，误入歧途。另一方面，有一些政府官员利用职权，向有求于他们的人索取贿赂。因此，我们决不能把快乐等同于财富。
（二十）出国留学
The picture vividly depicts that three young students are flying in the sky. With a bag on the back, each of them is holding a huge book entitled “Studying Abroad”. The caption reads, “Going abroad for studies is enjoying a striking popularity nowadays”.
The purpose of the cartoon is to show us that importance should be attached to studying abroad. First and foremost, living and studying abroad offers students a different perspective of the world. On a university campus, international students are likely to encounter their counterparts from various countries and areas and are exposed to diverse ideas and values. What is more, overseas experience is the best opportunity for the real-life use of foreign language. There is no better opportunity to improve second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken. Generally speaking, it is my view that although going abroad is expensive and perhaps painful, the payoff is worthwhile. In the first place, in addition to knowledge, overseas students can gain precious experiences that those who stay at home will never have. Furthermore, overseas experience, frustrating and painful as it may be, is conducive to the growth of adolescents. Accordingly, the difficulty, coupled with the frustration brought by culture shock, is a rewarding treasure for one’s future life and development of personality.
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这幅图画生动地描述了三个青年学生在天空中飞翔的情景。他们背上背着书包，每个人都紧握着一本名为《留学》的大书。文字说明显示：“留学热”。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们应该充分重视留学问题。首先，国外生活和学习提供给学生们一个看待世界的不同视角。在大学校园中，国际学生很可能遭遇来自不同国家和地区的同伴，并且面临迥然不同的观念和价值。此外，海外经历为外语在实际生活中的运用提供了最佳时机。没有比住在使用该语言的国家更好的提高外语技能的机会了。
总之，我认为尽管出国留学很昂贵，并且可能会很痛苦，但这种付出是值得的。首先，除了知识之外，留学生可以获得留在国内的学生永远无法获得的宝贵经验。其次，尽管留学经历可能使人沮丧痛苦，然而这对年轻人的成长是有益的。因此，这种困难以及文化撞击所带来的挫折，对于个人的未来生活与个性发展将是一笔宝贵的财富。
开头万能公式
1． 开头万能公式一：名人名言
有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办？尤其是英语名言？”，很好办：编！
原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦！而且没准将来我们就是名人呢！对吧？
经典句型：
A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” （适用于已记住的名言）
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. （适用于自编名言）
更多经典句型：
As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
2． 开头万能公式二：数字统计
原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编
造：
Honesty：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。 Travel by Bike：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?：根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型：
A recent statistics shows that …
结尾万能公式
1． 结尾万能公式一：如此结论
说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子： Obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！
更多过渡短语：
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型：
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2． 结尾万能公式二：如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽！
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？
更多句型：
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
写作的“七项基本原则”
一、 长短句原则
工作还得一张一驰呢，老让读者读长句，累死人！写一个短小精辟的句子，相反，却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题： As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！
强烈建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。
二、 主题句原则
国有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否则会给人造成“群龙无首”之感！相信各位读过一些破烂文学，故意把主体隐藏在文章之内，结果造成我们稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉劝各位一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！
特别提示：隐藏主体句可是要冒险的！
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
三、 一二三原则
领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。
1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗）
2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗）
3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗）
4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐）
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐）
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐）
8）most important of all, moreover, finally
9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况）
10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况）
建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！
四、 短语优先原则
写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点—精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.
这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。
五、 多实少虚原则
原因很简单，写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之类的形象词。再比如：
走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说：dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说：stagger out of the room
所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！
六、 多变句式原则
1）加法（串联）
都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短语可以用：
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2）转折（拐弯抹角）
批评某人缺点的时候，我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点，然后转入正题，再说缺点，这种方式虽然阴险了点，可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢，我们说话的时候，只要在要点之前先来点废话，注意二者之间用个专这次就够了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短语：
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3）因果（so, so, so）
昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩，然后我主动搭讪，然后我们去咖啡厅，然后我们认识了，然后我们成为了朋友…可见，讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语：
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）
有些人脑袋大，身体小，或者有些人脑袋小，身体大，虽然我们不希望长成这个样子，可如果真的是这样了，也就必然会吸引别人的注意力。文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。 举例：This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：
When to go, Why he goes away…
5）附加（多此一举）
如果有了老婆，总会遇到这样的情况，当你再讲某个人的时候，她会插一句说，我昨天见过他；或者说，就是某某某，如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面，那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其实很简单，同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前。
6）排比（排山倒海句）
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. （气势恢宏）
要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！
七、 挑战极限原则
既然是挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！
原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，其实也很简单，只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会，它就是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China. 如果您可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪！
文章主体段落三大杀手锏
一、举实例
思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
更多句型：
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二、做比较
方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的；
世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（through comparison）和不同点（through contrast）。下面是一些短语： 相似的比较：
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比较：
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
三、换言之
没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you. 或者上面我们举过的例子： I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it. 因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it. 更多短语： in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply