美国商学院推荐信范文

美国留学申请提交材料部分推荐信可以分为两种，一种是教授签字执笔写的;另一种是在申请时学校如宾夕法尼亚大学沃顿商学院会有自己独有的需要本校教授或推荐人填写的推荐信表格推荐人填写提交即可。如果对海外留学有疑问，可以在线咨询小马过河留学专家，也可拨打全国免费咨询电话：4008-123-267！

　　Dear Admissions Committee:

　　Among all the students who have received my instruction in the courses of “International Marketing” and “Strategic Management” at ABC University, Mr. John Doe is one of the few who stood out and left with me a positive impression. Therefore, I am confident to recommend this young man to your prestigious MBA program.

　　John is a bright and aggressive individual who possesses a strong motivation to learn and excel in his course work. Unlike most of his peers, who gained knowledge merely from school lecturing, John would spend a great amount of efforts and time in reading outside articles and textbooks and share his ideas with the class. In addition, as an open- minded individual who never let go any learning experience, John often came to me discussing various questions and problems he encountered in his coursework.

　　I would like hereby to draw upon an instance that I believe fully exemplifies John's academic ability. While attending my class he presented an excellent report focusing on the research of the European Community (EC), in which he shared with us his careful observations on EC, and proposed a number of innovative suggestions for Taiwanese industries that wished to gain successful presence in that market. Having noticed his superior ability to conduct independent research studies and to support his arguments with logical quantitative analyses, I recommended John to submit his paper to the Accounting & Statistics Quarterly published by the Executive Yuan of R.O.C.. Needless to say, John has acquired very high marks in both of my courses.

　　The very positive impression made by John has been repeatedly re- enforced by his strong performance in various extracurricular activities. John has managed to earn full confidence from me in his sound managerial potential by demonstrating an intelligence, aggressiveness, and leadership quality in both academic and extracurricular contexts.

　　In general, I consider John a very promising applicant to your esteemed MBA program. I have the least reservation on his potential to succeed in his future educational as well as professional pursuit, and will be more than happy to discuss with you any matters pertaining to this reference letter.

　　Sincerely yours.

　　推荐信往往客观比较好，中国学生往往写的都是自己的优点，但申请事实证明客观的带转换性的符合自己特点独有的推荐信美国名校会更加青睐。如学生是金融，期间学过数学课但是成绩并不好，推荐信可以转换客观的写学生主课金融成绩很优秀，在校期间还选修有精算专业或数学专业的课即可。

第二篇：高中生美国本科留学推荐信范文

高中生美国本科留学推荐信范文

来源:新东方夏令营 点击率: 298 发布: 2010-6-28

下面是一封Carlton原创的高中生就读美国大学本科的推荐人推荐信，历时一整天完成。

推荐信从班主任和物理老师的角度来描述评判被推荐学生。部分语句和段落可以直接套用。

Recommendation for XXX

Dear Sir or Madam:

As the Physic teacher of Miss Han, I have known her for 4 years during which time I’ve shaped a overall image of her. Generally, she’s included in the category of top-notch students I’ve ever acquainted with. Thus, I’m happy to give an introduction outlining her junior high school life here, to enable you to assess her suitability for acceptance to your esteemed university.

开头固定模式，介绍推荐人与被推荐人关系，简要提到推荐人的职位（最重要的一个）。这一段力求简练精干。

I taught Miss XXX, where she left me with an impression of her intellect, industry and independent thinking. During the 2 years in my class, both her assignments, which are meticulously finished, along with test scores on Physics subject almost always come out excellent. On the whole, she performed fairly competitively in most subjects in junior high.

这一段是从第一个侧面来描述被推荐人，本文是从学术角度评价被推荐人的。

With a different frame of reference, I’d like to focus the picture on her merits of art talents and perseverance. Her active participation and many awards in art contests guide me to speculate about longtime practice of playing piano and painting which has later been confirmed by her. It seems that her serious attitude toward school courses has something to do with the art practice. Though suffering from a broken arm since an accident in a sports activity, she didn’t give up practicing piano and finally passed the certificate exam of that year. Having conversed with her parents about the story, I come to understand this connection.

与前段不同，该段描述了被推荐学生在艺术上的才能，但在下面一段我们更进一步叙述了被推荐学生应用其艺术才能为团队做贡献的实例，可谓一石二鸟。

Not only does she exhibit many talents but also employs them to aid the class in various activities. Assigned to take charge of activities related to arts, she fulfilled her duties pretty well in selecting songs for the chorus, teaching them word by word and finally accompanying their vocals in the contests. Besides, another case would prove her an able student to balance and make schedules.

Even with approaching final exams and heavy courses work, she still kept classroom bulletin board updated by tips about courses and instant news about campus. Probably she takes it as a manner in which her painting skills could be applied while class activities were assisted.

最后强调了被推荐人良好的平衡能力，即使学业紧张，但仍出色完成工作任务。

XXX has been a real asset to Beijing NO.XX middle school, both in academics and in extracurricular activities. I am quite sure that she will prove equally valuable to your university, and am convinced that she will prove an outstanding undergraduate student. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require further information regarding this remarkable student.

最后一段仍然是模式化的语言。

Tips on DIY留学申请推荐信

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如果申请人决定自己动手写推荐信而不去找那种骗钱的中介，那么两样东西结合就基本上没有顾虑了。

Google + 柯林斯英英字典（不要用金山）

使用google可以检验你的表达是中式的还是native的，因为如果表达非常中式，search bar下面会蹦出好多中英夹杂的网站链接，那么就直接否定掉。

笔者曾经翻译过一个词“班主任”，很遗憾美国的高中并不设有这样一项职位，网络上有译为teacher in charge of the class，这属于纯粹的“意”译。外国人仍然不能第一眼看明白。于是，笔者从班主任的功能出发，想到了supervisor一词，然后再次google，非常让人兴奋的是class supervisor一词有很多uk和美国的链接，而且supervisor是监督之意，符合班主任之职责。

使用柯林斯英英字典的理由是，他给出的英文解释和例句能够消除英汉字典中中文解释的歧义。e.g.challenge the authority在英文中用来形容英勇的行为，有较强的感情色彩，不宜修饰学生，若修饰学生直接使用 the courage to question就好，中性且无异议。

最后就是注意句式变化，特别是强调句型的应用。若需强调被推荐人的某个特质，强调句型是最理想的选择，不要通篇全都是陈述句。