2014 长宁二模作文
A problem I’ve solved
1. What was the problem?
2. How did you solve it?
3. What have you learned?
A problem I’ve solved
l Lose one’s way (calm down, ask for help)
Everyone has problems. So do I. I travelled to America with my parents. Since it was my first trip to go abroad, I felt so excited that I went here and there and got lost. I shouted in Chinese but no one replied and I didn’t find my phone. I felt more and more nervous and didn’t know what to do. At that time, I told myself to be calm. I tried to talk to the local people to ask for help. Finally, I found my parents. I solved the problem myself. From the unforgettable experience, I have learned that when the problem comes, you need to calm down and try your best to solve it. Then you will succeed.
A problem I’ve solved
l Make friends/how to get along with others (smile, talk with others politely, be kind to help others)
l Argue with a friend (because of a small thing/apologize to sb./learn how to get along with others/neverlose temper)
l Make a speech
Last month, I met a problem which was hard for me to work out. I was asked to give a speech about myself but I had little experience. After thinking a lot, I was determined to spare no effort to solve the problem. First, I searched the Internet in order to gather some useful information. Next, I asked my parents to give me some suggestions. Finally, I inspired/encouraged myself to be more confident and tried to relax. To my surprise, I succeeded in completing the speech and became the winner.
In a word/In conclusion, I’ve learned that when we meet difficulty, just be diligent (hard-working) and strive to(manage to) solve it and then we will gain the achievement.
I used to be very nervous and I was poor at communicating with others. My teacher asked me to take part in a competition and said that it could improve my ability. In order not to make my teacher disappointed, I prepared a lot. I read many useful books, which could enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind. “No pains, no gains.” Finally, I got the first prize in the contest. Since then, I became more confident and brave. From the experience, I have learned that success won’t be far away if you really work hard.
Believing myself is something I learned from a problem I’ve solved. One day, when I was chosen to read my article in the front of our classroom, I felt nervous and I was afraid of making mistakes. I told myself to be brave and confident. I believed that I could manage to do it. At last, I succeeded and I have learned that that believing myself is something important in my life.
A problem I’ve solved
l Have difficulty in learning English/listening/reading… (I didn't do well in the English test last term. That’s a big problem, so I made up my mind to study harder and solve it. I did my best to follow the teacher in class. I took notes carefully and practised listening regularly. What’ more, I read some English storybooks in my free time. So far, I have made great progress. I’ve learned that we should never give up.)
l Sports (swimming, running…) Although I felt tired, I still didn’t give up. As a famous saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” In the end, I succeeded in ….
l Learn to ride a bicycle (fall down for several times, keep balance, never give up)
I had a problem in English. I was poor at listening. As we all know, English is so important that I must do something to improve my English. I tried to do my best to follow my teacher and took notes carefully. I also practised listening regularly. With the help of my teacher, I solved the problem and made progress in English. I’ve learned that nothing is impossible. We should face the difficulty bravely and never give up!
Several months ago, I failed in an English exam which made me feel extremely unhappy. At first, I though mum would blame me for my failure. Instead, she encouraged me a lot and said “Nothing is impossible.” These words made me have the courage to move on. And I started to work hard at school or even at home. At last, I got a good score in English. Through this experience, I’ve learned that any problem can be solved if I try my best to overcome the difficulty.
The other day I’ve met a problem. I couldn’t swim well. Last month, I decided to learn to swim but I failed. When I wanted to give up, my father told me “When you want to give up, remember why you started.” Suddenly, I noticed that I should work harder to solve this problem. Then I practised swimming a lot and asked my teacher for help. Finally, I solved the problem. Now, I’ve learned that practice makes perfect and we shouldn’t feel like giving up easily.
A problem I’ve solved
l Health problems (lose weight, improve the poor memory, deal with pressure…)
There is no denying that there are always some problems in our daily life. As for me, I always fell asleep in class at the beginning of the term. That made me worried a lot. To solve the problem, I decided to wash my face with cold water before every class. In addition, I determined to keep myself excited during the lessons. For example, I never gave up focusing on every question the teacher asked and tried my best to work it out.In these ways, I never fall asleep in class any more. After solving the problem, I realized that every difficulty can be solved if I am hard-working enough. After thinking about the solution actively, I will be able to overcome the trouble sooner or later.
My problem was that I had a weak body. I used to catch a cold easily. So I decided to exercise more. Although I was lazy, I spent an hour swimming every weekend. I played badminton with my friends every day. I went on exercising when I felt a little tired. I improved my health a lot. I have learned that where there is a will, there is a way. We can be healthy by exercising regularly.
A problem I’ve solved
l Do maths problems
Last week, when I was having a test, I met a big maths problem. I couldn’t work it out. I was nervous and hopeless. I nearly wanted to give up. At the same time, I thought of what my mum had told me “Don't be afraid and keep calm all the time.” I relaxed myself and read the problem again. In surprise, I found I wrote down a number by mistake. At last, I solved it. From that, I have learned sometimes a peaceful mind can work better.
l Raise a pet
l Report the theft (find the owner of the purse)
好词好句
? What have you learned?
l More importantly, I have learned that we should never give up and calm down when we meet some problems. In addition, we ought to get some help if we can’t solve the problem by ourselves. Problems are really meaningful to everyone, so don't be nervous when you have any problem.
l You are sure to succeed as long as you have a willing heart/you work hard.
l When you meet a problem, believe yourself and try your best to deal with it.
l We mustn’t give up any true friendship because we will know the importance of friends when we see darkness.
l Where there is a will, there is a way.
l Failure is the mother of success.
l No pains, no gains.
l Practice makes perfect.
l I believe that the more I try, the better I will be.
l I believe what I have done will turn out to be my great success in the future.
l What I’ve learned is that focusing your attention on the difficulty and controlling yourself is the key to success.
20##闸北一模
Suppose you are a fan of “Where are we going, Dad”. Please write a letter to the programme and recommend a place for them to spend a 3-day trip.
提示：近来“爸爸去哪儿”节目轰动了全国。如果你是这个节目的忠实粉丝，请给栏目组写一封推荐信，推荐一个地方适合父亲与孩子一起共同度过一个三天两夜的旅行，并请至少给出两个理由。
Phrases for reference （以下短语仅供参考）
be located in/on/at famous for
share…with have interest in
（ 注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。）
Dear Editor,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
xxx
Recommend a place to “Where are we going, Dad”
Dear editor,
I love watching the program and I am really happy to recommend Beijing as your next destination. Here are my two reasons. First, the Great Wall is a famous scenic spot in Beijing. I believe fathers and their children can have a great time there. During the climbing, fathers can encourage and teach children to be independent. More importantly, with their father's help, they can persist until the end. Secondly, there are a lot of other historical places such as the Forbidden city and the Summer palace. Fathers and children can learn a lot about ancient China and our traditions there. I hope that you can take my suggestion and wish your show become more popular.
Yours
Vivian
可以改编my favourite place 介绍一个地点，并结合父亲与孩子的实际
20##金山一模作文
Complete the poster of at least 60 words on the topic “A little more fresh air, please”. ( 以“多一点新鲜空气”为题完成一篇不少于60个词的海报，标点符号不占格。)
（ 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Expressions for reference （以下短语仅供参考）
plant trees, drive cars, walk more, pollute, haze（霾）
A little more fresh air, please.
Nowadays, the environmental problems are more and more serious. In urban areas, dirty air is everywhere because of the fumes from cars and the waste from factories. The situation is so serious that we must take action. We should take public transport instead of driving cars. The government should stop factories from producing harmful gases. It’s our duty to protect our environment. I hope we will have a little more fresh air in the future.
14徐汇一模作文集锦
Write at least 60 words about the topic “A good way to ________”（在生活中，在学习技能等各方面，每个人都会有做某件事独特的非常有效的好方法，请以“一个______的好方法”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
A good way to learn English 18.5分
Now that English is widely used in the globe/world as an international language, learning English well has become much more essential. My good way to learn English is to make it an oral language. Every morning, I practice English by imitating the sentences that I heard in the news last night. I also offer to answer questions in class, expecting the teacher to point out my problems. Every time soon after I get on the bus, I take out my MP3 player to listen to some English novels. As a result, my efforts have been paid off. So why not join me to learn English orally?
A good way to get rid of sleepiness in the morning 18分
It’s difficult for everybody to get up in the morning, especially in winter. But I’ve got my good way to solve the problems. Just take a shower! Taking a shower can not only make your body clean, but also make you energetic. Then you can have breakfast and begin your nice day. Maybe it sounds simple, but as for me, it’s certainly a good way to get rid of sleepiness in the morning.
A good way to shop 19.5分
When people say they want to go shopping, they usually think of going to a shopping mall. However, shopping in a mall can be extremely tiring. You must walk on your feet for hours and hours. I think a good way to shop is to shop online. With the help of modern technology, we can browse through hundreds and thousands of items without having to leave our home. Shopping online can give you a chance to compare the prices easily. Once you have decided on what you want, all you have to do is click a button and your item will arrive at your doorstep within a few days. From my point of view, shopping online is a good way to shop. It is not only a comfortable way to shop, but also a convenient way to shop.
A good way to read books 19分
Reading books is something everyone can enjoy. I enjoy reading books, too. After reading a lot of books, I find a good way to read them. Before reading a book, l always try finding out why the writer wrote this book first. This includes the writer’s life or his experience, which could affect the writer’s feelings when he wrote the book. After learning about why the writer wrote the book, I can understand the sentences more accurately. As a result, I think it is a good way to read books.
2014浦东一模
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
Situation: Nowadays many students go to school by bike, by car, by underground… How do you go to school? What do you think of it? 眼下不少学生骑自行车、乘私家车、乘地铁等方式上学。你是怎么去学校的？你觉得你的方式如何？谈谈你的想法并简述其理由。
Words and patterns for reference (以下单词或词组可供选用):
choice, convenient, save time, stop…from
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范文
Nowadays, students go to school in many different ways. I go to school in my father’s car. In my opinion, it is not environmentally-friendly because of the fumes from cars. Nowadays, the environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. I always feel guilty when I am in the car because I am polluting the environment. As the situation is so serious, I think I should go to school by underground instead of by car. It is convenient to take the underground to school. What’s more, it does less harm to the environment. Let’s take public transport to school.
Let's learn to smile
l Do you often smile in your daily life?
l Why should we learn to smile? (Give one or two examples.)
l What changes will we see if we smile more often?
老师范文
As we all know, smile plays an important part in our life./Smile is essential for us in our life. I often smile in my daily life. In my opinion, all of us should learn to smile because it’s a good way to show our kindness to others. What’s more/In addition, smile can make us feel more confident. If we smile more often, we will have more chances to make friends or we will get along with our friends much better./our friendship will be much stronger. Therefore, let's take action to learn to smile right now.
表示原因可以用because或That’s why we should learn to smile./For these reasons, we should learn to smile.
举例说明:
It's polite for us to smile when we want to ask for help.
If we ask questions with a smile, others will be pleased to answer.
If we often wear a smile on our faces, we will probably make more friends.
When others are in trouble, we can give them encouragement by smiling
学生范文
I often smile in my daily life. I think it's essential for us to smile. If you smile, others will think you are friendly. A person who is not confident can also be encouraged if you give him a smile. (具体事例) Smiling more often will make you have more friends and be happier. (changes) Smiling is very useful and important. Let's learn to smile.
8+10+1
It's common knowledge that smile has the magnificent power to make us happy. As a result, I often smile in my daily life. On one hand, we will have a chance to relax ourselves if we learn to smile. On the other hand, it's necessary to smile to show others you are polite and kind. (具体事例) The faster the city develops, the more stress we will have. If we smile more often, the pressure will no longer affect us. In a word, let’s learn to smile!
8+9.5+1
It’s important for us to learn to smile to others. I often smile in my daily life. First, we should learn to smile so that we can communicate with others better. Second, smiling to others can bring happiness and a good feeling to others. (具体事例) We will see our friends talking to us happily if we smile more often. Let’s learn to smile.
7+9+0
I often smile in my daily life. I think smile plays an important part in our life. For example, when we listen to others, smile can show our interest in this topic. What’s more, smile also can make us feel comfortable and happy. If we smile more often, we will have more friends. So let’s learn to smile!
7+9+0
注意问题
l Smiling to each other can make our city better. 如何实现？不符实际 内容扣分
l I usually smile in my daily life. Why should we learn to smile? Because it can help you look much younger. 设问句不要 内容扣分
好词好句
l Smile has an amazing power to change our life.
l The more you smile, the more happiness we will get.
l Life without smile is like the day without sunshine.
l If you smile at life, life will smile back at you.
l Smile is the spice of life.
l Smile is one of the most important elements in our life.
l If we smile a lot, we can pass positive energy to others.
l I believe smile belongs to everyone.
l If we smile sweetly, our life will be full of love and sunshine.