《两位未婚妻》剧本阐述与评析 本小组要讲述的类型电影是战争片。因此，较之于其他类型小组，本组在要求的表演片段上，显得较为困难。因为就现在的条件来说我们很难讲战争场面还原在舞台上，也就是说我们通过正面描写来呈现战争的内核是无法实现的。那么，我们唯有采取侧面描写的方式加以烘托战争灭绝人性的一面。但是，接踵而来的问题是：原创一个战争剧本对于毫无战争剧本写作经验的本人来说，实在是相当艰难的挑战。（尽管本人其间“恶补”了一些战争小说）但是，久经思量之下，最终还是选择了改编。

剧本《两位未婚妻》改编自匈牙利浪漫主义小说家约卡伊.莫尔的同名小说《两位未婚妻》，小说共有六十多页，大部分的篇幅用来描述战争场面和荒城景象以及难民的流离失所。在改编过程中，本剧舍弃了上述情节（鉴于舞台呈现的局限性），将重点放在两位军官（保尔和罗伯特）和他们的未婚妻（卢约和珍妮）的重逢场面的描写上。以此来升华战争残酷的主题，表现战争中个人命运的无力感。 具体地，剧本中主要通过以下三个方面来表现战争的残酷：

一、人物设置

剧中设置的两位男主角：保尔和罗伯特。保尔是匈牙利骑兵团的军官，罗伯特是奥地利的军官。本身这两个人物的冲突就存在，又加之两位女主人公的设置，即他们的未婚妻：卢约和珍妮。因此，两位本已敌对的军官又有了另一重身份：一对姐妹的未婚夫。这就构成了贯穿本剧始终的最强大的冲突。

二、人物语言

两对年轻人，他们本应手挽着手在公园漫步，本可以幸福地生活在一起，但战争苍白了他们本应属于恋人之间的甜言蜜语，代之以下述对话无奈而悲痛的无力感。

卢约战栗地拉住保尔的手臂（痛苦地）：你们要相互战斗吗？你要对抗我妹妹的未婚夫，我的天哪。

珍妮向保尔：那个时候你们就不想一想我们吗？

保尔：这就是军人的命运。珍妮，我的朋友，爱情、幸福，会使人感到兴奋。但当军号吹响的时候，人们就会忘记爱情和幸福，除了强烈的责任感，再不会想别的了。

三、背景音乐

较之于原小说单一的文字表现方式，本剧为突出战争的语境，加入了三段背景音乐以烘托战争中军人“服从命令”的天职和面对命运无情捉弄的悲怆以及战争下个人悲剧的命中注定。

《苏联军歌》作用： 为强化战争中军人屹立不倒的责任感和使命感以及加强军人骨子里的某种热血沸腾的情结，这首乐曲的基调是积极激昂的。

《征服天堂》作用：表现对对个人命运被无情捉弄的悲伤，这首乐曲的基调是低沉、悲壮的，饱含一种催人泪下的力量。

《防空号》作用：选取这段仅有几秒钟的乐曲在于：一、辅助故事

情节发展；二、将它放在表演片段的尾声处是提示重逢的结束，另外，也契合了主人公保尔曾经说过的一段话：“但当军号吹响的时候，人们就会忘记爱情和幸福，除了强烈的责任感，再不会想别的了。”从而传达出战争年代个人的无力感，尤其是军人。

第二篇：表演剧本

英文奥卡斯颁奖剧本

Good afternoon everyone! It is our honor to show our presentation here.Our team members include 。。。The topic of our team is disaster, and we will use a special form to present our opinions about the topic. Please enjoy it!

第一幕：开场，介绍颁奖典礼流程。

其他配合：配合播放欢呼声，按PPT

Ladies and gentleman, It’s my great honor to be the host of the ceremony. The big show of the year is here. Its Ocars night.（播放欢呼声）

The most glamorous affair in glamorous Hollywood draws a glittering crowd.

Tonight must be a big night. I'm a little nerves that we shall have a great crowed of super star here, and we will witness the great moment of the borning of our Ocars best film!

Here is the schedule for tonight.(PPT上写出流程)

Firstly, we will review the marvelous clips of the nominees.

Secondly, we will present the award of Ocars best film, and the director of the award winner will make the thank-you words.

Thirdly, the organization committee has prepared a surprise for the winner. Fourthly, we will review the clips of the Ocars best film!

At last, actor and actress of the film will appear on the stage and give out some words. To present the award, please welcome our honored guests Xiaomin and Lichao. 第二幕：颁奖

道具：信封、奖品

其他配合：需要玉瑶播放提名电影片段、欢呼声

Well, thank you so much. Hello everyone! It’s my honor to be here today. Oh Lichao, you look so handsome today!（to 利朝）

Oh thank you, you are gorgeous! Well here are the nominees for the best film. 播放提名电影片段

All of these film are amazing, and it is hard to choice which is the best.

Yes, but the Juries have made the deal and the result is in it. Let me open it. The Ocars goes to ??

The Day after Tomorrow（播放欢呼声）

(上台领奖)

第三幕：感言+回忆

道具：手机、电话、桌子、笔记本电脑、一些白纸、一支笔

场景布置：把桌子摆上讲台，桌上摆放的物品有：手机、电话，笔记本电脑，一

些纸，一支笔

其他配合：需要玉瑶来按PPT，播放各种声音

Thank you so much! Oh, my god. I just can’t believe it. I never expected this award tonight. I would like to thank the Academy for allowing me to have the most incredible ride with rooms full of artists that I see tonight .I can’t begin to tell you how much I appreciate this great honor. There are so many people I’d like to thank. First of all, I want to thank my parents for bringing me into this world. And, I want to express my appreciation to all of my friends for their support when I needed a shoulder to cry on , especially to Guo meng，Guo xiaomin, Tan yingqian, Cao lichao .Thank you for being there when I needed you. Finally I would like to thank the disaster, thank you; I just want to say it change everything of my life .It impressed on me so many things .I never forget that autumn. I remember that ……（开始表演）

Wanghui is reaching back into the past and lost in thought. Her mom wanted her to be white-collar. So Wanghui gave up on her dream and became a secretary automatically. It is a beautiful Sunday morning. She’s working overtime in a large company, as busy as usual.

【（妈妈）】My love girl, have you get up yet?

【女儿】Eh… yeah.

【同事】Wanghui ,give me this year's financial statements，please?

【女儿】Ok, wait a minute please.

【妈妈】（困惑的神情）Who were you talking to? Aren’t you at home?

【女儿】I’m in the company. I work overtime today. Mom, I am so tired.

【妈妈】(语重心长的说)En, I can feel that, but I want you to remember that “No cross, no crown. No pains, no gains.

【女儿】(不耐烦的说)Yes，I will never ever forger it——no pains, no gains.

【妈妈】But, in the same time, although you are busy with work, you’d better eat at regular hours.

电话铃响，老板来电话，??

【女儿】(不耐烦的说)I know. Mom, But I am really busy now, my boss is calling me. Call you back later. Ok? Goodbye

【妈妈】The cold air is coming, Be careful not to catch cold. Hello? Hello? Can you hear me?（叹气?摇头?）

【女儿】Good morning, Mr. Cao.

【（老板）】Morning. Well, have you arranged my schedule on Monday?

【女儿 】Ah yes. I have framed the active schedule favorably.

【老板】Well, send an email to me immediately. And I want the chart that shows the

sales results for the last year, as well as the company's sales target this year.

【女儿】I am going to arrange and sending an email to you 20 minutes later. Ok?

【老板】 OK, bye.

【女儿】 Thank you, Good bye.

【话外音】At this time the floor begin rocking wildly, She realizes it is the earthquake, (播放含有地震的声音、墙板掉下来的声音、人们的叫喊声的片段) She feel panic and hides under the desk.

【女儿】(无助的喊)Help, help！

继续播着地震的声音、人们的呼救声

【话外音】At first, She cried out for help. After hours of waiting anxiously, she felt a desperate tiredness set in and thought of her mom.

【女儿】Mom, what can I do? I miss you, I should not be so hasty to hang up, I should not talk to you like that. Forgive me. If I will be snatched from the jaws of death, I will love you more than love myself.

与此同时PPT 播放儿时的回忆：一些关于母亲照顾小孩的温馨图片或者是无声的视频

【女儿】I can’t die .I have a lot things to do .Dear God！Just look at what I’ve done all these years! I just keep working and working. I almost forget that I want to be a director. I never try my best to touch my dream. God, please, please help me, I can’t die…help me….

【话外音】Her mind suddenly switched back to the scene of Academy Awards.

【女儿】I was so lucky .Thank god give me another chance to survive and thank the disaster, it taught me a lot. It impresses on me so many things that I make sense of loving my family，cherishing my life and time and the biggest change is that I try my best to make dream come true.(播放欢呼声) Remember that we have only one life. We do not know what will happen in the next second, so never give up on your dream. Just to do what you want to do. Try your best to make your dream come true. God bless you.

Thank you so much

第四幕：给出惊喜

Thank you . Please hold a minute！

Your special experience impressed all of us and you really did a wonderful job of the film. But, you can never imagine that, we have a mysterious surprise for you! Guess what?

We interviewed your mother and boss after that, you’ll see the video we made for you, let’s share it with everyone here and in front of the television. LET'S see the big screen!

（利朝拿着电视框到桌子前，开始感言）

“VCR1”

老板：Hey guys, do you remember me? I’m so proud of you. Congratulations. Well you know, before the disaster, I loved the money more than my life. All thoughts in my heart were how to make a lot of money, for that I always drove you to do jobs as many as possible, sometimes I made your wage in arrears.

And at that time, I thought the relationship between boss and staff was exactly the relationship between superior and subordinate.

But after experiencing the disaster, it dawns on me（恍然大悟） that money is not everything and no amount of money can not resist the earthquake. Life is most important, and everyone should treasure everything in the life, including family and friends.

And the relationship between boss and staff can be friends and copartners. My company is a team, not a factory. Everyone should do his best to make the team better, including me. I have raised the wage of my staff, and the arrears of wages become a history.

In the face of disasters, we as entrepreneurs must take more social responsibility. The fortune created by our companies actually comes from the staff and society. In return, we should do our best to make the society better. I have decided to donate 100,000 dollars to the Red Cross, helping the victims of the disaster.

In the face of disasters, we are always looking forward to giving our hands to the victims of the disaster. So please think about that we can give our love to the victims of the disasters, why not give it to the people around us? The boss can give the love to staff, and the staff can give the love to the company. Students in the school can give their earnestness and love to their classmates. So please cherish the people around us. Love the people around us is to love the society.

Thank you.

“VCR2”

Mom:Hello，My sweet girl! I don’t know whether the film you directed can get the award or not. No matter what, I am really proud of you.

All of the time, I want to pass on my hard-won wisdom to you. I hope you can achieve success some day. So I was strict with you when you were a child. I ask you to obey what I said, because I really want you to be the person as I hope. I want you to be an office lady, even though I realize you don’t like it. Fortunately, whatever I want for you, I know you’ll go your own way. It’s traditional for daughters not to listen to their mothers, not till much later, at least. Today I feel happy that you didn’t obey my words years before and you just follow your heart. Now you have an amazing job. I really want you to know that I know sometimes to you I seem harsh and so unfair, but

I hope one day you will see, I taught you well because I care.

As you begin your growth to womanhood, this fact you must know, you'll always be my source of pride, no matter where you go. You'll always be my winner, and victory will prevail. You have taught me so much more than I have taught you before, and I think raising a daughter is an infinite gift. I love you, my lovely girl!

At last I hope everyone at the ceremony or in front of the television can have a wonderful life. I make a sentence to end my words: accompany your parents, accompany your son or daughter, accompany persons who you love as much as you can! Thank you!

【主持人】 thank you. Hope you will make more and more good films for all of us.

【女儿】No words can fully express my gratitude .Thank you , God bless you, God bless China.