写作总结
1. 关于写作顺序
? 原则:边写边排版
? 顺序:问题重述——模型建立——问题分析——(其他人)模型求解、灵敏度分析——(摘要)——优缺点分析——问题进一步发展
(摘要书写看进度,整体进度快,可最后写摘要,否则在模型求解完之后应当初步写摘要。)
2. 关于摘要:
3. 关于数据:
? 当题目中附有数据表格时,应当从问题出发,提取其中有用的数据信息,进行汇总统计。解题写作时,首先需对数据分析进行详细说明,指出问题所在;然后在数据分析出的问题基础上,建立改善模型并深入,这样可以让解题由依有据。(Eg:眼科病床:B-10)
4. 关于模型建立与求解:
? 每个问题的建模以及求解前,需整体描述对该小问的理解,以及大致思路(必要步骤),注意该步骤不仅仅是在问题分析时需要;若有解题的大前提,应当放在章前即阐明。 (Eg:眼科病床:B-10当前情况,医院的住院部按两个原则安病人住院。一是对于眼部外伤,医院病床有空就立即安排住院;二是对于白内障、视网膜疾病、青光眼等三种疾病,按照先到先服务的原则安排病人住院)
? 在用到某种模型或方法时,首先需要简要介绍该模型或方法的特点、适用条件、解决的问题、以及此处为什么可以采用该方法,然后进入模型建立。
? 在建立评价指标时(前)除需先说明指标的内容、意义后进行指标模型建立外,关键还在于结合实际分析指标的合理性(挑重要指标的,无需每个都如此);
(Eg:眼科病床:人对某一事物的抱怨度总是从无到有,最后达到某一稳定状态(自我崩溃或无所谓)。因此人的抱怨度曲线的斜率变化是由 0 逐渐增大,当增大到一定的值时又减为 0。通过对人的抱怨度变化规律的分析,我们选择 S 型函数作为抱怨度函数。)
? 每个评价指标模型建立之后,1、一般需对指标值变化所代表的意义解释,即某值变大变小代表什么?是否有特殊点?特殊点含义?如1或0?;2、该指标对问题的解决有什么影响,3、最后还需作出一般性结论。
(Eg:眼科病床:B-10潜在等待时间是指病人 j 在 i 天不能入院,而推迟到第二天入院,所带来的手术前额外等待时间。(可举例说明……)。该参数体现了病人在周六不能住院后果的严重性,也就是他在周六住院的重要性。因此,无论从减少病人抱怨度还是从使病床得到最大限度利用的角度来考虑,都应采用病人潜在等待时间越长,越优先在当天入院的原则。)
5. 关于结论引出:
? 根据问题分析部分所得结论,构建了……模型
? 采用了基于……的方案。
第二篇:写作总结
红色字是要替换掉的关键字
我分三部分写:开头、中间、结尾
首先是文章的开头,作文开头我认为是最好写的,只要把作文标题写上去就可以了,也最容易提高分值。
It goes without saying that the issue of piracy has caused wide public concern at present. According to a recent survey made by some experts, as many as 60%-80% of the college students have such experiences using piracy produce. In addition,the survey also shows that an increasing number of people are interested in piracy produce, and will join the army in the future.
这个是我依据六级作文“反盗版”写的,比如今年的六级作文,只要替换成“西方节日”的关键词就可以了。
比如“压力”讨论:
It goes without saying that the issue of stress has caused wide public concern at present. According to a recent survey made by some experts, as many as 60%-80% of the people have felt under stress. In addition, the survey also shows that an increasing number of people will join the army in the future. 我写了什么,我好像什么都没有写?!
中间段落有的要求是分析原因,有的要求是正反观点
对于分析原因,我总结了三个万能原因:经济发展、政策推动、法律制定,以不变应万变 What caused this remarkable phenomenon? Personally, there are at least three premier factors contributing to it. To begin with, the government has been forwarding the policy to support private houses programs. Furthermore, the increased income resulting from economic growth plays a cardinal part in the changes. Finally, the authorities concerned have made proper regulations to protect private houses.
这个是我依据六级作文“私有房产”改写的,这三个原因可以说在任何方面都是可以用的,再说了改卷的老师都是看你的句型和词汇用的如何,根本就不会注意你写的是什么内容,这个大家都应该是知道的。
比如今年的六级作文,你说“经济发展了所以大家才有钱去过西方节日”难道不可以么?我就是这么写的。
另一个是正反观点
When asked about their opinion of stress, people always response differently. The overwhelming majority of people deem that stress is not the bad thing it is often supposed to be. They are of the attitude that a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and to give purpose in life. On the contrary, there are other people who hold stress contributes to one's mental decline and hence endangers his health. In conformity to them, relaxation, the opposite of stress, is essential for a healthy mind and
body.
这个我是依据朱泰祺老师的作文“压力”改写的,大家参考。
结尾有的要求是提出对策,有的要求是趋势分析
提出对策,原因找出来了要提出解决方案,我这里总结了三个万能措施:政府立法、提高意识、认识价值
In conclusion, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to reverse the disturbing phenomenon. To begin with, we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control commercial fishing. Furthermore, we should enhance the awareness of people that the ocean resources are very vital to us. Finally, we should bring home to people the value of protecting ocean resources. Only in this way can we protect our ocean resources. Also I believe that we humans can overcome this difficulty, and we will have a brighter future.
这一部分我是依据考研作文的那篇“鱼”改写的,大家可以参考。
大家想一想,有什么问题这三个措施不能解决的呢?还考虑什么,背吧!
结尾的另一个写法是趋势分析。 From the analyses made above, we may come to the conclusion that the qualities of people's living have been constantly improved between 1995 and 1999. With the further growth in economy and more changes in life style, the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the better direction. 这个是我依据胡敏老师那篇“生活水平提高”改写的,大家参考。
这个写法同样可以适用于今年的六级写作,“以后过西方节日的人会越来越多,是一个趋势”。 以上就是我的作文总结,我写了什么,我好像什么都没有写?!但是对于一篇新的文章我确实能写好多,不是么,大家自己看吧。
这些基本上对于一般的议论文都是可以应付的,大家参考,祝所有的考生早日过关四六级!