雅思写作名师点题：

柱状图主要有两个考点要考查；一是对于数据间的比较要详细描述；二是对于横轴的趋势变化要进行归纳和总结性说明，这样才能达到总体描述的效果。

雅思写作高分范文：

The bar chart reveals the time spent in the UK for different types of telephone calls from 1995 to 2002

Generally, among three categories including "local一fixed line", "national and international一

fixed line" and "mobiles (all calls)", local phone calls accounted for the largest proportion of

all usage, ranging from 70 to 90 billion minutes. Next to it, national and international ones took

the second position standing at 38 to 60 million minutes. obviously, the mobiles took up the

smallest part (3 to 40 billion minutes).

The trends of the telephone usage changed during the 8 years. The local phone calls peaked at

90 billion minutes in 1999, and then started to decline to the 1995 figure in 2002 (70 billion).

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剑桥雅思考官写作范文：The media report crimes in details

　　本文剑桥雅思考官写作范文的Topic是Should the media report crimes in details?。剑桥雅思考官写作范文对于雅思考生来说具有很好的参考价值，望考生从中学习到其优点，在今后的雅思写作当中合理运用。

　　Topic:Should the media report crimes in details?

　　题目：媒体报道犯罪活动时是否应该报道细节。

　　剑桥雅思考官写作范文：

　　Nowadays the media often cover news of crimes such as murder, rape andarmed robbery in great details. While such information may warn the public ofthe potential danger and help reduce crimes, providing too much informationabout crimes might lead to certain negative side effects. In my opinion, theinformation about crimes should be made accessible to the public but the mediashould refrain from reporting crimes in an irresponsible manner.

　　To begin with, there is no doubt that people should have the right toinformation about crimes committed in a community. If someone in theneighbourhood were murdered, the chance of other people being killed would alsoincrease. The people should be notified of the event as well as any actions theauthorities had taken immediately. Any attempts to block the news about thecrimes would violate people's right to know the truth. Yet, the necessity ofinforming the public does not mean full details have to be disclosed.

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雅思写作中议论文一般出现在A类考试中，也就是Task1中，通常考题以图片、表格坐标、曲线图为基本形式，考生根据所给的资料，写出150个字以上的文章来叙述主题，组织并探讨主题，提出比较支持的论点。

那么雅思写作中议论文有那些地方是需要我们谨记的呢?这里就为大家整理了“雅思议论文写作中的6个不要”，希望能对同学们有所帮助。

开篇的引用过于俗套

考官对模板深恶痛绝的程度可能超过很多考生的想象，而且，如果考生在第一段还使用大量恶俗的模板，还在第一句说with the development of society，那他会发现他的成绩单上的作文得分会在4分左右。

其实，翻翻雅思考官的范文，我们会发现，考官在第一段只干了两件事情：引出背景+表明观点，甚至很多考官只干了第一件事情(引出背景)，仅此而已。但是，考官的首段会很具体，会和文章特定场合挂钩。

不会使用段论

很多考生对四段论的框架貌似了解，一谈起作文段落安排就会滔滔不绝：第一段引出主题，第二段陈述支持的理由，第三段陈述反对的理由，最后一段总结。这其实是一个非常害人、没有任何说服力的段落安排。

如果翻开剑桥雅思考官给出的满分范文，几乎每篇文章都在告诉我们这样一个真实有用的段落安排：

第一段引出主题及拓展+ 第二段反面论证及支持理由+ 第三段对方观点及驳论+ 第四段总结及补充说明。

而且，段落之间的巧妙衔接也增强了文章的论证能力。建议考生多多研读考官范文，真的能看出门道出来，而不是沉浸在自己似是而非的理解里。

作文加标题

英语考试有一个国际惯例(common practice)：写作文时不需要加标题，直接写正文就行。加标题属于浪费感情，浪费表情。而且，这个标题可能太大，一篇250字的文章不能承担标题之重;这个标题可能太小，只照顾到你这篇文章的一小部分;这个标题可能加错了，意思与文章相反，反而会误导考官。总之，不需要加任何标题。

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二．适用人群

1．初次备考雅思的考生，或参加过雅思考试但提分效果不明显，对雅思题型不清楚、备考方向不明确仍在摸索中苦苦挣扎的考生；

2．雅思考试做题达到一定熟练程度，但对提分遇到瓶颈、希望通过官方模拟试题的检验、雅思教学专家的专业指引，双管齐下，找到症结，突破瓶颈，快速提分的同学；

3．雅思备考达到一定高度，但是有更高目标要求，需要专业靠谱的实战平台，寻求更专业、更具针对性解题引导，锁定高分的同学；

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生活需要游戏，但不能游戏人生；生活需要歌舞，但不需醉生梦死；生活需要艺术，但不能投机取巧；生活需要勇气，但不能鲁莽蛮干；生活需要重复，但不能重蹈覆辙。

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互作用，使得各种雅思写作辅导书上充斥着扭曲这种美感的材料。许多基础薄弱并缺乏判断力的考生因此陷入窘境。

本文的文本分析的材料来自20##年登陆中国大陆的剑桥雅思7册中考官所给的范文；

本文的分析标准来自雅思官方网站上的评分标准；

本文的目的在于重新回归雅思写作TASK 2部分的评分标准；

本文试图通过严肃性的学术分析，将考试的标准和考官的表现对应起来，按图索骥，找到可以借鉴的正确写作方法。

希望给正在备战雅思写作的考生一点复习的方向。

我们先来看剑七上第一篇雅思考题和考官的文章：

TEST 1 WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task

Write about the following topic:

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

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《剑桥雅思7》官方范文解析

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

×观点比较选择类的题目， 题干中有两个观点 ：

观点一：先天具备

观点二：后天养成

比较两个观点并且给出自己的看法，则应该给出两个观点的合理之处，比较之后在进行自己的选择表态

This model has been prepared by an examiner as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.

The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.（开头段落描述题干所讨论问题的普遍性。开头句式简短，不冗赘，一个复合句搞定。插入语的使用避免了题干的机械性重复， 同时保证了句子的连续性）

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大陆考生雅思满分作文赏析 （陈先忠）

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题目：

The traffic has become one of the major problems in the cities. Some people think that this problem can be solved by telecommuting from home. What is your opinion? Can you suggest others solutions?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. （每篇作文都有这个指令，请注意。）Write at least 250 words. 范文： today throughout the world has

morning and evening.

these days, such is not always

necessary because people can do these things from home. We can see this everyone had access to the technology and the

opportunity to work from home, it is unrealistic to think that everyone would want to. Even though the technology for working, studying or shopping on-line makes this option a possibility, nevertheless it would mean people had less freedom of choice and less social contact in their lives. This would Even though the technology for working, studying or shopping on-line made this option a possibility, nevertheless it would mean people would have less freedom of choice and less social contact in their lives. This would have a

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