新东方老师总结的四六级作文闪光点

时间:2024.3.19

作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板,和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后,如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点,必定会使你的作文如虎添翼! 高分作文标志:

1:是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3、用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词; 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:

1. 适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾20xx年x月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

2. 善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,

people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)

下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I ( By Simmy )

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly 替换 very

thrilling 替换 exciting

sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth. google 替换 search an army of 替换 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing

popularity

of

computers.

Coincident

with

the

advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular Coincident with … 非常地道的句型,表达“与…一致”的意思,替换 With … Advancement 替换 development

Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into Current ( currently )替换 now

Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth. Growing individuals 替换 more and more people It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型, 说某事是毫不夸张的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.

For a start 替换 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动 Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides Deliver 替换 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures,

AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先There is no denying that这个句型,还有however作为插入语, function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to

Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing ) Net citizen 网民,属于精彩用词

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides Computers do play ,do 强调 Positive 替换 important / good 等 A slice of 替换 a part ofUnfavorable 替换 bad

Impacts 替换 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语 Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象, merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) Facet 替换 aspect

以下是30个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下:

1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising (有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good

3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害

的)替换bad

如果bad做表语,可以有be less impressive替换

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.

4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a

multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many. 注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要有词。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.

5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语,所以要加that) 7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing

8: shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits )10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion

11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.

Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly 13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,

14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer 15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very

16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换unnecessary, avoidable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in

18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.

19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear

21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.

22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth

23.desire 替换want.

24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替换remember

26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思) 27. interaction替换communication

28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance

30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible


第二篇:新东方老师总结的四六级作文闪光点


作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板,和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后,如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的

闪光点,必定会使你的作文如虎添翼!

高分作文标志:

1:是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3、用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词; 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:

1. 适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾20xx年x月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time

that

some

applicable

approaches were implemented by the

service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

2. 善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、

动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,

people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)

下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课

讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I ( By Simmy )

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling

an

army

of

useful

information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting

sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth. google 替换 search an army of 替换 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity

of computers. Coincident with the advancement

of

science

and

technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular

Coincident with … 非常地道的句型,表达“与…一致”的意思,替换 With … Advancement 替换 development Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into

Current ( currently )替换 now Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.

Growing individuals 替换 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型, 说某事是毫不夸张的 For a start, we can, freely, search

desired information at any moment .

Little by little, our knowledge will be

well enriched, and our horizons will

be greatly broadened. Additionally,

we can get huge recreations online by

chatting, playing games, or delivering

email.

For a start 替换 To begin with We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched,

and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动 Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替换 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the

disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

There is no denying that , however,

computers can function in the

disservice of human beings, 这个句子

有三个精彩之处,首先There is no

denying that这个句型,还有however

作为插入语, function in the

disservice of 替换 do harm to

Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替

换 disappearing )

Net citizen 网民,属于精彩用词

As a classic proverb goes that no

garden has no weeds. Computers do

play

a

positive

role

in

the

development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

No garden has no weeds 替换 Every

coin has two sides

Computers do play ,do 强调 Positive 替换 important / good 等 A slice of 替换 a part ofUnfavorable 替换 bad

Impacts 替换 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入语

Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象, merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage (

defects

disadvantage ) Facet 替换 aspect

以下是30个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下:

1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)

2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising

(有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good

3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad

如果bad做表语,可以有be less impressive替换

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.

4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.

注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要有词。

Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.

5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some

6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,

hold the view that, it is widely shared that,

it is universally acknowledged that)替think

(因为是书面语,所以要加that) 7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing 8: shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 替换get many

benefits )10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion

11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more

and more( 注意没有growingly这种形

式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.

Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.

12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly

13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer 15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely

替换very 16.hardly

necessary,

hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a

tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb

take interest in / sb. be interested in

18.capture one's attention替换attract

one's attention.

19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect 20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate,

suggest ,fear

21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.

22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth 23.desire 替换want.

24.pour attention into 替换attention to

25.bear in mind that 替换remember 26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)

27. interaction替换communication 28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth

29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible

pay

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