请以"My Classmate"为标题写一篇记叙文
要求:1、主题明确,语言流畅,思路清晰。 2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨:
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school,he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived,and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom,the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
第二篇:小学英语作文
我不喜欢被拿来比较 I Hate Being Compared
When the Spring Festival comes, all of my relatives will come to visit my family, at this moment, I am so awkward, because the unavoidable thing is that I will be compared with their kids. Like my aunt will ask me how my study is, then they will show off their kids’ high score in front of my parents. I really hate to be compared, i am who I am, so I will always ignore the question,
当春节来到的时候,所有的亲戚都会来拜访我们家,这个时候,我会很尴尬,因为不可避免的事情就是我会被拿来和他们的孩子做比较。比如我的阿姨会问我的学习怎么样,然后他们会在我父母面前炫耀他们孩子的高分。我真的不喜欢被拿来做比较,我就是我,因此我总是会忽略这个问题。
我得到了表扬 I Got Praised
I Got PraisedToday, I was so happy, because my English teacher praised me. Last week, she asked us to hand in the paper about describing the father. When she gave back the paper, she praised me in front of the class, because I wrote the paper with all my heart. She said she was moved by what I wrote. I was inspired, I wanted to learn English well.
今天,我很开心,因为我的英语老师表扬了我。上周,她叫我们交作业,是关于描述爸爸的。当她发回作业时,在全班同学面前表扬了我,因为我全心全意地去写。她说被我写的感动。我受到了鼓舞,想要把英语学好。