关于助人为乐Should we help others in need?
1. 现在经常有这样的现象发生:路上有人摔倒,没人敢上前帮忙。
2. 这是人们的公德心缺失还是其他什么原因呢?
3. 你对此有何看法?
【参考作文】
Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. But what's strange nowadays is that people dare not show their helping hands to those in need. I would like to elaborate my views on this issue. 乐于助人在中国传统文化中一直是一种美德。可是很奇怪的是,现在的人都不敢伸出援手去帮助那些需要帮助的人
Firstly, I think people's moral sense has degraded. When egoism gains the upper hand, many people find it growingly hard to help others. Secondly, there is no denying that some tragic events turn out to be traps by people with evil intentions. So common people are becoming more risk-conscious and are more wary of traps and deceits.
首先,我认为人们的道德意识已经退化。当利己主义获得了上风,许多人觉得越来越难去帮助别人。其次,毫无疑问一些不幸的事件结果证明是有着不良目的的陷阱。因此,老百姓变得越来越有危机意识而陷阱和骗局也变得越来越谨慎。 In general, I contend the idea that we should be warm-hearted and offer help as well as look out for potential hazards so as not to be deceived. 总的来说,我主张应该热心肠,我认为我们应该热心提供帮助同时也留心潜在危险,以免被骗。
【点评】
第一句话介绍背景,使用"美德"virtue一词。第二句话为转折句,除了使用but这个表示强烈转折意味的连接词,还采用了strange和首句形成鲜明对比。 文章第二部分开始阐释人们公德心(moral sense)缺乏的原因。指出原因之一为自私。此处采用了egoism, 也可使用selfishness, 但不可使用
individualism,后者在英语语境中通常作褒义词讲,即崇尚自尊自立之意。原因之一是内因,原因之二是外因。Trap指陷阱,deceit指欺骗。第二段使用了内外因、主客观因素结合的方法,较全面地解释了公德心缺失的根源。
最后一段表明作者立场,提出既要坚持善良之心也要有防备之心。
第二篇:Should We Help Stranger
Should We Help Stranger
Helping strangers has always been considered a treasured virtue of human kind,not only because we need help from others throughout all our life,but also because it brings us tremendous happines。However,some consider that helping others can sometimes put us to trouble。Because there are cheats who take advantage of our sympathy,and sometimes we are not able to provide the help needed—if we cannot swim,it is dangerous to help someone being drownned。
In my opinion,we should still try our best to help strangers。On the one hand,everyone needs help from others。No matter when one travels to others places or stays at home,it is hard to imagine how a man can live without the help of strangers,because nearly everything he uses is made by others。On the others hand,we take delight in helping others。We feel great joy when we are trusted and neened by others。
In a word,I contend that we should help others。At the same time,we should also learn to protect ourselves from being harmed。
Nowadays,the issue of help strangers has triggered a heated discussion.Some of people believe that helping stranger are great and necessary,because helping strangers is a treasured virtue of human kind.
However,some people hold the opinion that helping others can put us in trouble.It is known that more and more traffic accidents caused Hit-and-run driver by fled the scene,which will do the great damage to the people who help injurer.
As far as I am concerned ,just as every coin has two sides,it is true to the above phenomenon.In my opinion,we should still try our best to help strangers.On the one hand,everyone needs help from others.On the others hand,We feel great joy when we are trusted and needed by others.In a word ,we should also learn to protect ourselves when we help others.
In recent months,it is becoming increasingly common that lots of people opening a microblog.It is not only including the stars, celebrities,but also government officials.It is known that the most users of microblog are ordinary people!
People using the microblog can get more and more information about live,news,and so on .But ,just as every coin has two sides, microblogs might give rise to some problems as well. Some people would express their thoughts and ideas by writting them down in the microblogs rather than communicate with their friends or family members.Day and day ,microblogs tend to draw people away from real life.
In my opinion,microblog is a good platfrom for people to express their personal experiences .However, people should adjust the time and aviod spending the whole day on it.