"有一批要到中国投资(invest)的外国企业家在我国某城市参观考察。假定你是接待人员,要向外宾们简要介绍这个城市的概况,请你用英语写一篇100包括以下几点内容:
1、 这是一座新兴的现代化城市,建于本世纪80年代初。
2、 海陆空交通便利,又有一条与北京相连的高速公路(freeway)正式启用。
3、 自然资源(resources)丰富,电力能源充足。
4、 社会次序良好,政府多方面支持外国投资者。
说明性短文:简单打招呼;自我介绍;并说明发言的目的。
列出信息中的"信息"。
词组有:ladies and gentleman, a new modern city, set up, the early 1980's,
by air, by sea, by land, another freeway, be used, connect with, be rich in, natural resources, energy resources,
support foreign visitors.
词组列出后,判断体裁是发言稿(说明文),可用一般现在时来书写,把句子组合一番后,文章即可大体成型。 modern city. It was set up in the early 1980's, but it has been developing rapidly. From here you can travel to anywhere by sea, by air or by land. Recently another freeway connected with Beijing has started being used. The places around our city are rich in natural resources. And we have enough supply of electricity and energy resources. The public equipment is very nice.
Besides the government of our country and our city support foreign investors in many ways. That’s all. Thank you. 117’
…give a brief introduction about… …at an amazing speed…
…improve its investment environment and offer a favorable policy to foreign entrepreneurs.
有一批要到上海投资的外国企业家来上海参观考察。 假定你是接待人员,要想外宾们简要介绍这个城市的概况,请你用英语写一篇120-150字左右的发言稿。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen.
说明性短文:简单打招呼;自我介绍;并说明发言的目的。
城市概况应包括:人口、地理位置、经济发展状况、交通和文化等。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen。 Shanghai is the biggest city in China on the coast of the East Sea. The Huangpu River runs from north to south through the
city, across which are Nanpu Bridge, Xvpu Bridge, Lupu Bridge and Yangpu Bridge. It has highly developed including highway, railway, waterway and airway. It is quite easy for people at home and abroad to travel to Shanghai. Shanghai has been increasing at an amazing speed since our country’s open and reform policy was carried out, which attracts more and more overseas entrepreneurs to invest here. Meanwhile, the Shanghai government has been trying its best to improve its and Shanghai is also with a long history. There are many places of interest, such as Longhua Temple, Yu Garden Jade Buddha Temple and also many tourist destinations, such as the Bund, the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, and People’s Square, etc,.
general idea about Shanghai and wish you a good trip in Shanghai. ’
第二篇:高考英语作文写作指导—发言稿
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发 言 稿
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假设你是李华,福建省某中学高中学生,今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为“WATER FOR LIFE”的交流活动。请你以参访代表的身份,根据以下图片提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 根据图片的内容适当展开,以使行文连贯;
2. 开头与结尾已写好,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息;
4. 词数:120左右
参考词汇:短缺 shortage ; 资源 resource
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning, I’m Li Hua from Fujian, China. It’s my great honor to be here to say something about the global water shortage and ways of dealing with it. _____________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________.
That’s all. Thank you.
分析指导:
文体信息
试题属于应用文中的发言稿。发言稿是参加会议者为了在会议上表达自己的意见、看法或汇报思想、工作情况而事先准备好的文稿,它能节省时间,集中、有效地围绕议题把话讲好,不至于走题或把话讲错。 发言稿的使用范围很广,多用于各种大小会议、交流活动、广播录音、电视录像等口头表达。从广泛意义上说,欢迎辞、欢送辞、口头通知及各种致辞,都属于发言稿的范畴。
写作关键
(1)题目信息表明试题为半开放性的试题。对此试题的写作,应根据试题给出的图片中的内容要点判断写作的重点,并围绕其合理展开。
(2)注意发言稿的结构。有时发言稿内容较多,自己的感受和体会颇多,直接写出问题或
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自己的想法时,可能会比较零乱,因此要多使用表示序号的词语(如:firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally, in a word等)。注意文章的逻辑性和段落层次性。
(3)注意发言稿的对象 。发言稿是直接面向听众的,所以发言的时候观点要鲜明,感情要真挚,能给人以可信性和可靠感,这样才能打动人,引起听众的共鸣。
(4)注意发言稿的语言 。语言要直白简洁,句子精悍有力,文字朗朗上口,语言节奏感强。因而发言时注意多采用简单句,语言要口语化,多用排比句,多使用重复修辞格,注意合理采用祈使句,运用设问句等。
谋篇布局
一般的发言稿在格式上和书信有点类似,格式一般由称呼语、正文、结束语三部分构成。
(1)称呼。称呼顶格书写。常用的称呼有Dear Mr./Mrs./Miss.…, Dear Sir/Madam, Ladies and gentlemen等。也可以不用称呼,直接写正文。
(2)正文。写作应该开门见山提出问题及对问题的看法,然后说明理由,最后照应开头对全文作简明扼要的总结,总结要一定要简练有力,切中要点。在汇报经验、情况等的发言中,要注意对情况的叙述、介绍、自己的体会或者收获等系统总结,内容完整,不遗漏要点。
(3)结束语。发言结束时,一般常用“Thank you for listening.” “That’s all. Thank you.” “Thanks a lot.”等表示感谢,不过有的发言者还在结尾时直接向听众提出希望,发出号召。 写作提示
(1)问题:全球缺水。(global water shortage)
(2)原因:干旱、污染、人口。注意:该部分不是写作重点。(warming, pollution and ever-increasing population)
(3)解决问题:蓄水、海水淡化、循环用水等。(reserve, turn into, recycle)
(4)总结。意识问题、保护水资源。( be aware of, protect)
经典句型
I’d like to tell you something about …
Let me give you a brief introduction about…
Please allow me to introduce the travel arrangement to you.
I feel greatly honored to be here to say a few words to welcome you.
I am sure we will benefit from the lecture.
Personally, I think it is a good idea for us to…
Firstly, we are expected to … Secondly …Lastly …
It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of…
The first thing we can do is to …. As we all know… What we can do next is to … For example… Besides…
范文点评:
本文要点齐全,层次清楚,完美地展示题目中提供的信息,并进行了总结。第二段引起话题,突出重点;第三段按照要求层层展开试题中的知识点,条理清楚,叙述合理;第四段总结言简意赅,紧扣主题。文章使用了简单句,并列句,以及非限定性定语从句等句式,但文字浅显易懂,符合发言稿的语言特点。本文在过渡上衔接自然,尤其是一些过渡词的使用
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写作导练:
假设你是李华,在美国某中学做交流生。你的同学对中国宴请赴约的习俗很感兴趣,特请你用英语写一篇发言稿,介绍中国的宴请习俗。内容包括:
宴请地点(酒店);就餐习俗;饮酒习俗;宴会结束。
注意: 1.词数120左右,信的开头和结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数);
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯;3.参考词汇:banquet宴会Hello, everyone. Hello, everyone. I feel greatly honored to be here to tell you something about Chinese banquet customs. ________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________.
I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful to you. Thank you for listening!
Possible version:
Firstly, banquets are usually held in private rooms in restaurants which have been reserved for the purpose. Guests will be met at the door and led to the banquet room where they will be guided to their places. Occasions are rare when guests sit where they please. Next, while at banquets, guests don’t begin to eat until the host raises his chopsticks. And it’s rude to stop eating in the middle of a banquet. Drinking also takes an important place during Chinese banquets. As a Chinese old saying, “There is not banquet without wine”. Banquets always begin with a toast, with the host expressing his welcome. Finally, when the last dish is finished, the banquet has officially ended. Generally, the host will say good-bye to everyone at the door and
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