20xx年北京中考英语作文答题解析及范文

题目：

成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫刘明，是美国中学生爱丽丝的朋友。你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。（一定要仔细看这里，这个是写作的基本内容要求！）

Hi! LiuMing,

I'm so sad. Angela is a close friend of mine. This morning she wanted to borrow some money from me. If I lend her the money, I am afraid she won't pay me back. I don't know what to do. Do you have the same problem? I need your help.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours, Alice 命题形式：

2011的中考作文题目以书信形式，即“假如你是XXX，你的美国朋友XXX给你写了一封信，请你根据来信内容，写一封回信…” 内容要点：

1. 回答她的问题

2. 提出建议

3. 对于此事谈谈你的看法

来信内容简要说明：

Alice表示自己的好友Angela问自己借钱，但自己不知是否该借给她，担心对方可能不能归还。问刘明是否遇到同样的问题？请刘明给自己一些建议，期待回信。

解题思路（如何写这封信）：

首先，大家一定要看清楚信的内容。然后看清楚题干要求你答哪几点，务必把三个内容要点都答上去，才能不丢分哦。

其次，安排文章结构，分为三部分。

文章第一部分，首先要做的就是在来信中找问题，很明显，只有一个问句” Do you have the same problem?” ，所以作文中应该开门见山：I have met things like this. / I have never met things like this. 而且，来信的第一句话为” I’m so sad。”， 所以第一部分内容可以表示安慰 “ Don’t worry” 或者表示理解对方的感受 “I can understand you。” 文章第二部分，根据第二个要点，提出建议。可能涉及到如下几种建议，如：

l If it’s not a lot of money, you can lend it to her。（如果钱不多的话，可以借给她）

2 If she wants to borrow a lot of money from you， you’d better suggest her ask her parents for help. （如果她想要借很多钱的话，你最好建议她去问她的父母寻求帮助）

3 If you decide to help her， then trust her， because she is your close friend。（如果你决定把钱借给她的话，就要信任她，因为她是你的好朋友。）

文章第三部分，根据第三个要点，谈谈自己的感受，其实，也就是回答“why”，即：为什么要给出如上建议的原因。如：

l Friendship is more important than money， if your close friend needs help， you are supposed to give him / her a hand and trust him / her. （友谊和信任比金钱更重要，如果你的好朋友需要帮助，你应该帮助他/她，并且给予信任。）

2 We students don’t have jobs to earn money but depend on our parents. When we need some money, it’s always a better choice to ask our parents for help instead of turning to our friends. Meanwhile, we should be honest to our parents. （我们学生没有工作，不挣钱，需要依赖我们的父母。当我们需要用钱的时候，问父母要总比问同学借要好。同时，我们应该对父母保持诚实。）

得分要点：

1， 首先要把题干要求的内容都写上。

2， 努力确保句子正确，单词拼写正确。

3， 文章话题属于生活化细节问题，文章内容一般不涉及难度过大的词或句子。句式灵活多变，用词准确、丰富，逻辑通顺，或者出现一两个从句，会为文章加分哦。

One possible version：(范例)

Hi！Alice ,

I'm glad to hear from you． Yes，I sometimes face the same problem．

I think if she really needs the money，you'd better lend it to her．You don't need to worry too much．She'll probably pay you back when she has money．If you don't lend her the money，I'm afraid you may lose the friend．

I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other．So when my friends need money，I will try my best to help them．Maybe I'll get it back，or maybe I won't．

I hope what I said can help you．

Yours，

20xx年北京市中考英语写作（5月16号最新更新） 某英文报纸就家务劳动（Housework）话题征文，请你投稿。

每个家庭都有许多家务，人人都应该学做一些。谈谈你经常帮父母做哪些家务，有什么体会，并打算在暑假为家里做什么。

提示词语：every family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, be/feel proud of

内容要点：

1，谈谈你经常帮父母做哪些家务

2，有什么体会

3，并打算在暑假为家里做什么

解题思路：

第一部分：用一两句话引入话题，并进入第一个内容要点的阐述。 Every family has lots of housework. Everyone should learn to do some of it.

开始谈谈我在家都干什么家务：I often help my parents do some housework such as washing dishes(洗碗), mopping the floor(擦地板), and cleaning the bathroom(清洗卫生间).

第二部分：有什么体会

By doing housework, I’ve learned how to take care of myself and be helpful to my parents. (通过做家务我学会如何照顾自己以及如何对父母有帮助。)

Doing housework gives me pleasure. I feel very happy when the house is clean and tidy. (做家务给我乐趣。当我看到家里干净又整洁感到非常开心。) I feel proud of myself because I am helpful to my parents. （我感到非常自豪，因为我可以帮助父母。）

第三部分：并打算在暑假为家里做什么

The summer holiday is coming. I will try to learn cooking. My parents can enjoy the dishes after a long day’s work. (暑假马上就要来了，我打算学习做饭。父母上了一天班之后可以品尝到我做的菜。)

参考范文：

Every family has lots of housework. Everyone should learn to do some of it. I often help my parents do housework such as washing clothes, cleaning the room and watering flowers.

I think I’ve learned how to take good care of myself and my family by doing housework. Sometimes cleaning all the windows is an enjoyable experience. I really feel proud of myself. And doing housework is also a kind of exercise.

The summer vacation is coming. I’m going to learn how to cook some dishes. My parents will be happy to enjoy them.

20xx年北京中考英语作文解析及范文

十、文段表达（15分）

根据中外提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于６０词的回信，信的开头结尾已给出，其词数不计入完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

75. 假设你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给托尼写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍北京良好的公交服务，并谈谈你的感受。

Hi! Liu Jing,

My grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he has heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himself. He says the bus service in Beijing is very good now, and people can go anywhere by bus. Is he right? Can you tell me something more about it?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Tony

Hi! Tony,

I’m glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing. ___________________

_________________________________________________________________

If you have more questions, please ask me.

Yours,

Liu Jing

来信内容简要说明：

托尼的爷爷要来北京玩，他听说北京的公交服务很好，人们可以坐公交到任何想去的地方。他问刘京是不是这样的，希望刘京告诉他更多北京公交服务的情况。

内容基本要点：

1回答他的问题

2介绍北京良好的公交服务

3并谈谈自己的感受

解题思路：

文章第一部分：

回答问题： 可以说 Yes. Your grandpa is right.(你的爷爷是对的。) 或者说：What your grandpa said was true. (你爷爷所说的是事实。) 文章第二部分（紧接上一句写，无需分段。）

介绍北京良好的公交服务：The bus service in Beijing is really good now.（北京现在的公交服务确实很好。）或者：The bus service in Beijing has really been improved a lot these days. (北京公交服务现在确实大大改善

了。) 然后在这一段补充介绍北京公交情况，比如线路（bus lines），时刻(time)，价格(cost)等。例如：There are bus lines all over Beijing from 5 o’clock in the morning to 23 o’clock at night. The ticket costs only 1 Yuan. If you use a public transport card, it will be much cheaper. （关键词汇用桔色标出）

文章第三部分：

谈谈自己的感受：可以说公交车方便，又环保。Buses are very convenient and environmental friendly. 或者说：虽然有时候车上人多拥挤，但还是应该大力提倡人们多多使用公共交通来节约能源。Though sometimes it is a little crowded on the bus, we still need to support public transport to save more energy.

范文

One possible version:

Dear Tony,

I’m glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing.

Your grandpa is right. The bus service in Beijing is really good now. There are bus lines all over Beijing and buses can even take you to a small village. Besides, special seats are offered on buses. People do not have to spend a long time waiting for a bus and the tickets are cheap. I like taking a bus because I think it’s comfortable and also good for the environment. So it’s a good choice for your grandpa to travel in Beijing.

If you have more questions, please ask me.

Yours,

Liu Jing

第二篇：20xx北京中考各区县二模英语作文及范文

丰台

74. 假设你是学校的安全宣传员，请利用下面本地学生道路伤害事故原因统计图表，写一篇英文短文，向你校的外籍学生介绍那些事故的主要原因，提醒他们注意个人交通安全，针对这些主要原因提出几点保障出行安全的建议,最后，表达你对他们在这里安全、愉快生活和学习的良好祝愿。

Road safety is important for every student, especially for the new comers from other countries or places.

范文

Road safety is important for every student, especially for the new comers from other countries or places. For the safety of our new friends, I’d like to tell you first about top two causes of the student accidents that happened here last year. Most of them happened just because some students ran the red light, then because they crossed roads carelessly, like not using the crosswalk or listening to music while walking across.

Those accidents have taught us a big lesson. So please follow the road safety rules while you’re using the road. For example, do not run the red light anytime. Use a crosswalk to cross a road. Look both ways carefully when you are crossing a road. That’s all for my story and tips. I hope they can be of some help to your safety. At the end, I wish you all a pleasant, safe life here.

通州

66. 假设你叫张明，收到了你的笔友Tom的一封信，请你给他写一封回信。在信中回答他的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。

I have a problem these days. I don’t think our English teacher likes me. She wasn’t satisfied with me because I got a C in the exam. My classmate Lucy got a C, too. But she praised her. She said Lucy had tried her best and spent most time on English, but I didn’t. It makes me unhappy. I think it’s unfair. Do you have the same problem? What do you think of my English teacher? What should I do?

Yours,

Tom

______________________________________________________________

范文

I have the same problem as you. I can understand you. But I don’t think your idea is right.

She wasn’t satisfied with you because she thought you should work harder. She is strict with you.

It’s good for your study. I think you had better spend more time on your study, and try to improve

your English. Your teacher will be pleased when you have a great progress. As a student, we

should work hard at our lessons and try to understand our teachers.

海淀

范文

Dear Jack,

I’m glad to hear from you. It’s my honor to be with you and show you around

Beijing. Now I will tell you about my plan for your two-day stay here.

On the first day, I am going to take you to my school and study with me. In the

morning, you can choose 3 classes to listen to. In the afternoon, there will be

different kinds of clubs after class. I am sure you will fall in love with my school.

On the second day, I plan to have a bus tour to enjoy the sights of Beijing. We

will get off at Tian’an Men Square, where we can feel the perfect mixture of the past

and the present. After walking on the magnificent square, we can visit the Palace

Museum. Here you can see some wonderful buildings and learn about Chinese

history better.

So, what’s your decision? I just can’t wait to meet you and you’re always

welcome！

Yours,

Li Fei

昌平

还有一个多月就要中考了。为取得好成绩，老师让我们思考怎样改进学习，提高学习效率。你是怎样想的？你准备怎样改进自己的学习？

senior high school entrance exam, efficiency (效率), improve, think, find, listen, do, ask, hope

范文

Senior high school entrance exam is coming soon. Our teacher asked us to think how

to improve our learning and get better efficiency. I think it important and necessary to do so. I have learned a lot in school. I’ll go over what I have learned and find out where my difficulties are according my revision plan. And then I’ll ask my teacher and classmates for help. Keeping healthy and good mood will also do good. I hope I will get good scores and enter my ideal school. (88)

我们的家乡正在发生着日新月异的变化，为配合我区举办的“礼仪门头沟(Charm

Mentougou)”活动的开展，

60词的英语作文参赛。

内容包括：1. 守时，不说脏话；2. 礼貌待人，热心助人；3. 遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；4. ??

注意：1. 文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2. 内容可适当扩展。

How to behave well? 请你以“How to behave well?”为主题，写一篇不少于

延庆

74. 学校志愿者协会招募新成员，打算在暑假期间组织志愿者活动。假设你是Li Hua，请你写一篇60词左右的短文给志愿者协会，报名参加此次活动。内容应包括：你自己的简要介绍；你要去哪个地方做志愿者？你能做什么事情？你对志愿者工作有什么感受或体会？请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

提示词：Li Hua，student, Class Four, Grade Three , the Old People’s Home, sing, dance, 范文

In the lake of my memories, there is a photo which always shines like a pearl. It’s a gift from my former teachers and classmates in Shanghai – the best one I’ve ever got.

Before I came to Beijing, they gave me this photo. I was shocked that the photo was taken a year ago during our spring outing. All my teachers and classmates were in the photo. At the back of the picture, there are 48 signatures and best wishes from them. I read them one by one. I didn’t realize that my tears were running down my cheeks until my friends hugged me.

I love this special present so much because it shows me the wonderful time which I spent with my dear classmates and teachers. Besides, it is their wishes that fill my heart with love and warmth all the time. I’ll always treasure it as the most valuable pearl in the world. (155 words)

怀柔

假设你是学校的安全宣传员，请利用下面本地学生道路伤害事故原因统计图表，写一篇英文短文，向你校的外籍学生介绍那些事故的主要原因，提醒他们注意个人交通安全，针对这些主要原因提出几点保障出行安全的建议,最后，表达你对他们在这里安全、愉快生活和学习的良好祝愿。

Road safety is important for every student, especially for the new comers from other countries or places. 范文

Road safety is important for every student, especially for the new comers from other countries or places. For the safety of our new friends, I’d like to tell you first about top two causes of the student accidents that happened here last year. Most of them happened just because some students ran the red light, then because they crossed roads carelessly, like not using the crosswalk or listening to music while walking across. Those accidents have taught us a big lesson. So please follow the road safety rules while you’re using the road. For example, do not run the red light anytime. Use a crosswalk to cross a road. Look both ways carefully when you are crossing a road.

That’s all for my story and tips. I hope they can be of some help to your safety. At the end, I wish you all a pleasant, safe life here. 132 w

Version 2

?For the safety of our new friends, I’d like to tell you first about top two causes of the student accidents that happened here last year. Most of them happened first because some students ran the red light, then because they crossed roads carelessly.

Those accidents have taught us a big lesson. So please follow the road safety

rules while you’re on the road. For example, do not run the red light anytime. Use a crosswalk to cross a road. Look both ways carefully before you go across. All this is good for your road safety. Do remember it anytime. At the end, I wish you all a pleasant, safe life here. 112 w

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范文

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