雅思写作讲义 Task 2 评分标准 Corrine
雅思写作 Task 2 评分标准及范文
雅思写作分为Task1和Task2，考官从四项:任务完成情况(Task1)、任务反应情况(Task2)、连贯与衔接、词汇和句式丰富性及语法准确性分别进行评分。
以Task1为例，四项评分分别要求为：
1.在任务完成方面，即审题方面，考察你是否能够在正确审题的基础上完成题目的指令。
2.连贯及衔接方面，即思路方面的要求，文章只有通过一定的衔接手段才能保持上下文的连贯性。衔接手段，经常用的有逻辑、语法和语义三方面的连接词。
3.词汇和句式多样性，即要求用词丰富(Variety)、句子结构注意变换。
（高分关键：词汇包括 词汇的准确 和 多样性（同义词， 避免重复）
句法结构包括 准确性（语法）和 多样性（非谓语动词，复合句）
4.语法准确性方面，指的是文章的语言表达。要获得5—6分的成绩，要求语法错误较少，用词和句子基本准确。
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雅思写作讲义 Task 2 评分标准 Corrine Band 5.0
Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge fro its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
What knowledge an skills should universities provide has been argued for many yeas. Some people think that the true function of universities provide knowledge for their own purpose, but nowadays, more and more people point out hat universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills according to the workplace.
The first reason for university should provide these knowledge and skill is the students’ needs. Obviously, the most of the students go to university purpose of is to get some knowledge and skills which could make them have the ability to get a job. If a university does not provide these knowledge and skills, the students might not get a job and they would be very disappointed. As a result, the university would lose its students.
Moreover, providing knowledge and skills need in the work place make a university progress. The new skills and information always are initiated in the workplace, so focusing on the needs of the workplace the university could get sound strategies to do research and make it more mordenization.
Lastly, providing these knowledge and skills could benefit our country which usually gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, students are more easy to get a job, and this can make our countries’ economy strong.
In conclusion, it can be said that providing the knowledge and skills which the workplace needs is every universities’ basic function.
评语：
1． 任务完成方面 ： 字数不足250， 没有全部回答问题。
2． 连贯衔接方面 ： 行文组织良好，有些地方连词使用恰当。
3． 词汇句式方面 ： 词汇量的缺乏，导致词汇严重重复，
4． 语法准确方面 ： 试图使用复杂的句式，但是有些地方使用不当。。
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雅思写作讲义 Task 2 评分标准 Corrine Band 6.0
Companies should encourage old employees (55 years old) to retire, in order to give opportunities to the new generation. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
According to a recent investigation, a number of individuals are cognizant of
sever competition in the
mass of employees who are more than 55 years old must
retire
development of a company can no
The main reason is that numbers of fresh employees mean that the company is filled with lots of new blood.
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for the development of companies in the future. Another reason is that many old employees are forced to gasp under the heavy burden and endless works
found it difficult to take overwhelming pressure
fail to
all the time. And the companies must send more wages
means there is an increasing amount of cost for a company.
On the other hand, most old employees have already worked for more than half of their lifetime,i
t is time for them to retire to enjoy life. The old employees have already paid out too much in order to look pursue their hobbies now.
In conclusion, old employees shouldn’t continue working for themselves. of society need a new generation.
评语：
5． 任务完成方面 ： 主要论点扣题，支持句基本明确。个别例子不精简。
6． 连贯衔接方面 ： 行文有逻辑性，连词使用良好。偶见错误。
7． 词汇句式方面 ： 尽量丰富的使用的词汇，但是词汇准确方面有些欠缺，
8． 语法准确方面 ： 表意清晰，尽量使用多样化的句式，但是标点，语法掌握不精练。
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Companies should encourage old employees (55 years old) to retire, in order to give opportunities to the new generation. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
According to a recent investigation, a number of people realize that the employees above 55 years old must retire under such a severe competition of today’s society. Facts show that some leaders of firms are undertaking the policy of asking the old people to retire.
The main reason for the trend is that firms need more fresh employees. Compared to older generations, the new has got more advanced technology and the energy to exploit in many ways, as well as having learned a great amount of academic knowledge in university or college. It is more useful in terms of the development of companies in the future.
Another reason is that many old employees are being forced to gasp under the heavy burden and endless works. Most of them find it very difficult to go through the pressure with the growth of their own. For employers, they can not work extra as before, keep a good vigor and cope with any emergences. In addition, most old employees have already worked for more than half of their lifetime, paying attention to their responsibility for jobs and family, so it is very time for them to enjoy their own life. For example, they will be able to pursuer their hobbies after being retired.
In conclusion, I fully believe that older employees are not allowed to continue working until 55 years old or above, because they need to make a living for themselves, and the society needs more opportunity for the young people. To ask old people to retire might be the best way to realize both of goals.
评语：
1． 任务完成方面 ： 主要论点扣题，支持句基本明确。但是关于退休跟给予新一代更多的 机会之间的关
系没有扩展。
2． 连贯衔接方面 ： 行文有逻辑性，连词使用良好。偶见错误，或出现逻辑混乱。
3． 词汇句式方面 ：词汇使用丰富，准确。偶见拼写错误
4． 语法准确方面 ： 表意清晰，语法使用准确。但是有大量使用了简单句。
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雅思写作讲义 Task 2 评分标准 Corrine Band 7.0
Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas ( in words, pictures, music, or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I agree with the statement that there should be government restrictions on creative artists who express themselves in the way they do and that they must be given freedom fro the same. Expression has always been the keynote in a person’s life. It is the result of mere expression of our thoughts that we are able to communicate. Restrictions on how we present our thoughts is senseless.
Creative artists play a major role in our society, be it the government, old people, the youth or the children. Their works enlighten our minds, no matter it is factual or entertainment based. It is deserving that after a days work when we want to take some time off for ourselves, we look out fro some leisure. Fro instance, either pleasant music or family movie which soothes the mind. Entertainment give us an overview of a new side of life which every individual respects. There is almost everything good in what is given to us through the media world which his made up of artists.
On the contrary sometimes these artists tend to be unscrupulous. They convert rumours into facts and present them before us. This might impair the reputation of some illustrious people in today’s society. On such occasion, certain restrictions are understandable. Nevertheless we all do know hat is right or wrong. Rules and regulations no always are the solution to how artists present their own ideas. Hence it is doltish to be impetuous and the government should enforce alternatives ways to control media.
Respect fro ones ideas is not only hypothetical but must be practiced. It is through respect that each one of us can be recognized as a unique person in the world. This can be achieved by looking at the bright side of what media i.e. the creative artists display fro us. Not a day can go by when we dont look out fro colourful dreams and a beautiful life which we can find either through music, poetry, films pictures; everything that the creative artists offers us.
评语：
1． 任务完成方面 ： 主要论点扣题。 但是有些观点过于笼统，支持句，举例不明确。
2． 连贯衔接方面 ： 行文有逻辑性，连词使用良好。偶见论证难以读懂。
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雅思写作讲义 Task 2 评分标准 Corrine
3． 词汇句式方面 ：词汇使用丰富，准确。偶见词语使用不当，搭配不当。
4． 语法准确方面 ： 表意清晰。但是有些拼写错误，有些表达不准确。
Band 7.5
Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are a lot of advertisements on television or radio these days. Some say that the advertising boosts the sales of goods and at the same time encourages people to buy thing unnecessarily. This argument may be supported by some cases. In China, many advertising companies make advertisements with celebrities. People, especially adolescents or young adults, purchase the good they recommend, although they do not realize the practice of the goods.
Also, some people sometimes tend to buy something that looks so gorgeous on TV screen but they might not really need. Consumers may not actually need it but they buy goods impulsively soon after they watch the advertising. Furthermore, as many customers buy a particular product due to its advertising campaign, the other people may be affected by the trend, even if the product is not of the real needs of the society.
On the other hand, not all people believe what commercials say alone. Moreover, it is people’s choice to make a decision to buy goods. Individuals have their own spending habits. If they have got enough disposable income, then the right to make decision is given to them. No one actually can judge whether the goods sold are the real needs of the society or not.
Overall, as customers have their own strong opinions and standard of good quality goods, it is better to leave them to make their own decision in buying goods. It is fairly difficult to say everyone is swayed by advertising and buys goods impulsively. However as to the reliability of advertisement, the news departments concerned of the Government should publish more effective policy to require, and give a harsh punishment to the advertising that makes heavily negative influence in society.
评语：
1. 任务完成方面 ： 论据充分有力度，充分的进行了举例或扩展。
2. 连贯衔接方面 ： 篇章组织良好，思想连贯。但是有太多连贯错误，连词有些使用不当。
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3. 词汇句式方面 ：词汇使用丰富，准确。偶见一两处词语使用不当，
4. 语法准确方面 ：精确的使用了复杂的句式结构。但是有太多小的语法错误，如主谓一致等。 Band 8.0
Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the word’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Traveling by air has become very common among people from most segments of the society. Some people are of the opinion that air travel is responsible for a greater percentage of air pollution and consumption of fuels and so it is should be restricted. But I am of the opinion that air travel should not be restricted.
Recent studies by the Boeing Company have concluded that the current day airplanes are more fuel-efficient than the cars that we use everyday. For the same traveled by a single person car, the automobile use more fuel resource than what an airplane uses per person per kilometer. Similarly the smoke emitted by an airplane contains lesser amount of carbon mono-oxide and hydrocarbons, which are responsible for the ozone layer depletion, according to the study. The combined emission of the automobiles on the ground is far greater than the emission from the airplanes into the atmosphere.
Air travel is faster and convenient and it considerably reduces the time taken to travel between places. It helps business people to increase their business locations and also to take care of their business units spread across different geographical locations. It has given more opportunities to vacationing in a place far away from the place of residence and so people are able to visit many more countries now than they could previously.
In conclusion, it can be seen that air travel doesn’t cause as much pollution nor does it consume large quantities of fuel compared to other modes of travel. It has more advantages that outweigh these disadvantages and so it is no good idea to restrict air travel.
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