高考作文真题汇编
北京卷
情景作文(20分)
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来,向校报投稿。
注意:1.日记的开头已为你写好。
2.词数不少于60。
Saturday,June2 Fine
This morning
第二节 开放作文(15分)
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand he picture and what makes you think so.
一、情景作文
Saturday June 2 Fine
This morning, when I was walking on the street, I saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. It seemed they were lost. I went up to them and asked how I could help. They told me they were looking for theTempleofHeaven. I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No. 20, which could take them there directly. They appreciated my help greatly. Before long, the bus came. We waved good-bye to each other. Seeing them on the bus, I felt a kind of satisfaction.
解析:
1. 给分要点:发现两个外国人;询问是否需要帮助;告知路线;与他们分别
2. 词汇分析:
1) …, looking puzzled. 非谓语做状语,表示状态。这种用法可以出现在我们的作文中,尤其在描写人物表情或心情的时候使用。
2) the Temple of Heaven 天坛。作为北京的考生,应该了解北京一些重点景点的英文名称,如长城,故宫,天坛,颐和园,鸟巢,水立方等。
3) appreciate 感激,此处为动词,用来替换thank。其名词是appreciation,常用在“表达感激”的短语中:express sincere appreciation
4) Seeing them on the bus, …. 再一次出现非谓语做状语的情况。其实,这样的句型在20##年北京卷的范文中也出现过。
3. 总体分析:这篇范文写的中规中矩,出现了所有的要点,以及少量的心理描写。分数大概在12分-14分之间。但是,范文中也有些问题,如几乎没有出现连接成分,也没有重点描写心情。另外,如果文章可以加一个结尾的话,那么分数会更漂亮一些。
二、开放作文
I think the white pencil, looking proud and delighted, is laughing at the black pencil by saying “You’re nearing the end!” The black pencil, on the other hand, remains clam. The white pencil’s words let him fall into deep thoughts. He clearly remembers he has been used in writing and drawing. It’s true that he’s approaching the end but he has been living a memorable life and there has rarely been a dull moment.
In reality, we should learn from the black pencil: not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.
解析:
1. 立意:此范文的立意为“要自信,不要在意别人的观点”。显然,除了这个立意之外,个人认为,只要是和“心态”相关的立意都行,比如,“要尊重别人”,或者“尊重老人”等。
2. 词汇分析:
1), looking proud and delighted, 这是一个插入语,用来描述“白铅笔”的状态。显然,插入语属于加分结构,但是在写作的时候,一定要注意前后的主谓一致。
2)let him fall … 让某人做某事。除了用let之后,还可以有have/ make sb. do sth.,或者ask/get/drive/cause/lead/enable/allow sb. to do sth.
3)fall into deep thoughts 陷入沉思
4)memorable 难忘的,值得纪念的;rarely很少地,罕有地;dull 无趣的
3. 总体分析:这篇范文的分值大概在10分-12分之间,包括了描图部分和分析部分。不过,本范文在分析的时候,并没有过多的联系实际,所以这个部分有些失误。
江苏卷
.生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。
参考范文:
Conflict with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it was Su's fault but Li was also to be blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They eared too much about winning and losing.As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.
To avoid such conflict, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put camly and other's place.
Don't be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.
浙江卷
你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动,该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句(quote)并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子:”Your future depends on many things but mostly on you”:请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文:
1.针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法;
2.举例说明理由
注意:短文的开头已给出(不计词数)
In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: " Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you. "
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参考范文:
In the English Reading Week, one of m classmates recommended a quote to us which goes like this : "Your future depends on many things but mostly on you. " I can't agree more with this view. It's true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.
Take Abraham Lincoln, for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.
20##安徽卷
假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流,主题是高中生对文,理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,向他们介绍你所做的选择,并说明选择的理由。
注意:1.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.词数120左右;
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
参考词汇:文科arts;理科:science
Good afternoon ,everyone.
Welcome to our school ! High school students are faced with a choice between arts and science. It was not an easy choice for me to make. After careful consideration, though. I decide on science as my main subject of study. The reason are as follows.
First , Science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China . Second, the science major help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Third, my parents wish me ti study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science student . Last but not least , my physics teacher is my role model, whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.
It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice.
Thinks!
20##安徽卷
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
某校英文报开辟了一个专栏:Experience。本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“My Approsch to Difficulties in Learning”为题,用英语写一篇短文。谈谈自己的一些做法。 要求:1.词数100左右 2.短文中不能出现本人的相关信息。
My Approach to Difficulties in Learning
As high school students, we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning. Everyone has their own way to deal with them. Here I would like to share mine.
When I am faced with a dificulty, I ususlly choose to refer to relevant learning materials or Web pages. In this way, I can not only it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself.
However, when it is something beyond my sompetence, I turn to classmates or teachers for help. Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice. As a result, I have made steady progress in my studies.
20##安徽卷
若你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动,内容要求你在电视、手机(cell)和网络三考中,放弃其中一个并陈述理由。以“Which would you give the TV, cell, or”为题,写篇英语短文。100字。
新课标全国卷
假定你是李华,从互联网((the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准。注意:1.数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Li Hua
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'JI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Regards,
Li Hua
大纲版全国卷
假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加,要点包括:⒈ 时间:周五晚8点至9点⒉ 地点:学生俱乐部⒊ 内容:生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等
⒋ 要求:备小礼物
注意:⒈ 词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;⒉可以适当增加细节,以便行文连贯;⒊ 答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。
Hi, Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday.
Hi, Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday. We’d like to invitee you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We’ll gather at the Students’ Club at 8 p.m. this Friday, after the evening classes. And it’s going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we’ll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cut and we’ll sing songs and play games. It’ll be nice to see how excited he will be. I’m sure you’ll have a good time at the party, too.
Yours,
Li Hua