2014届四川高考作文模拟预测及立意提示

1.阅读下面的材料，按要求作文。

人会长大三次：第一次是在发现自己不是世界中心的时候。第二次是在发现即使再怎么努力，终究还是有些事令人无能为力的时候。第三次是在，明知道有些事可能会无能为力，但还是会尽力争取的时候。

读了上面的材料，你有何感悟和思考？请自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇800字以上的文章。

考查维度：人对人的追问，引导考生思考人生。

不是世界中心（一次）→再怎么努力也无能为力（二次）→无能为力也要尽力争取（三次） 立意：人生是一个不断从理想回归现实的过程，也是一个不断从浑浊走向澄澈的过程，越接近现实人越要清醒。

名句：英雄不是没有眼泪，而是含着眼泪仍在奔跑。

2. 阅读下面的材料，按要求作文。

各美其美，美人之美，美美与共，天下大同。（费孝通）

读了上面的材料，你有何感悟和思考？请自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇800字以上的文章。

立意提示：这是一则价值取向明显、立意角度多维的作文材料。“各美其美，美人之美，美美与共，天下大同”是费孝通先生在其80寿辰聚会上，对民族文化问题而提出的意味深长的16字箴言。四句话，实为两个层次：第一个层次为“各美其美，美人之美”，意为欣赏自己的美和欣赏他人的美；第二个层次为“美美与共，天下大同”，意为将欣赏自己的美和欣赏他人的美结合起来，就可以达到天下大同。第一个层次应是基础，第二个层次是结果，审题的重点应落实在第二个层次上。所以如有考生只写“美”，什么是美，怎样美，或自然景物之美，表明未能读懂材料，此类作文应判为四类卷，如有考生只写“各美其美”、“美人之美”或每点都写，但都写不透，表明未能抓住材料中心，此类作文应判为三类卷，如考生能从“美美与共，天下大同”角度而写，应判为二类卷以上。当然这只是从审题的角度考虑，在实际操作时可根据立意、选用材料和文采上下浮动判分。

对立意的思考：

（1）“各美其美”，是指各自懂得美化自己的美德，欣赏自己的美，可写肯定自我，欣赏自我；发挥自身优势；每个人都应该自爱，每个人都可以从欣赏自我中获取自信。大而言之，可写民族的文化、精神，使国人充满民族的自信心，而不妄自菲薄。

（2）“美人之美”，是指赞美他人的美，可写学会欣赏他人，学习他人长处，“君子成人之美”。大而言之，我们要学会欣赏外族或外国的优秀文化，勇于借鉴接受外来文化，而不应闭关自守，夜郎自大。

（3）“美美与共，天下大同”，是指将欣赏自我和欣赏他人结合起来，方能建立大同世界。可写个体的互相尊重，互相欣赏，互相包容，互相融合，求同存异，也可写文化、精神相互欣赏、融合，共建和谐社会。

3. 阅读下面的材料，按要求作文。

美国著名盲人作家海伦·凯勒以惊人的毅力创造了非凡的成就。有人问她：“一个人可能遭到的最大悲哀是什么？”海伦·凯勒回答说：“有眼睛而仍然看不见。”

读了上面的材料，你有何感悟和思考？请自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇800字以上的文章。

这则作文材料呈现的对话可谓意味深长：整个材料有两个层次，第一个层次叙述了美国盲人作家海伦·凯勒凭借非凡的毅力创造了非凡的成就；第二个层次是在第一个层次基础上延伸出来的，他人与海伦·凯勒的问答可以做这样一个紧缩：“一个人可能遭到的最大悲哀是有眼睛而仍然看不见。”而这个紧缩句，其实就是材料要告诉我们的关键所在。作文的最佳立意就应该由此确定：有眼睛而仍然看不见是人生最大的悲哀！

周国平说：“我们看见利益，却看不见真理；看见万物，却看不见美；看见世界，却看不见上帝。

周国平：存在的一切奥秘都是比喻说出来的。对于听得懂的耳朵，大海、星辰、季节、野花、婴儿都在说话，而听不懂的耳朵却什么也听不到

雨果在一次演讲中说到：“我们都是瞎子。吝啬的人是瞎子，他只看到金子看不见财富。挥霍的人是瞎子，他只看见开端看不见结局。卖弄风情的女人是瞎子，她看不见自己脸上的皱纹。有学问的人是瞎子，他看不见自己的无知。诚实的人是瞎子，他看不见坏蛋。坏蛋是瞎子。他看不见上帝。上帝也是瞎子，没有看见魔鬼也跟着混进来了。我也是瞎子，我只知道说啊说啊，没有看见你们都是瞎子。”

4.阅读下面的材料，按要求作文。

某班主任给班里所有家长的一则短信:无论成绩好坏：每个孩子都是种子，每人花期不同。有的花起初就灿烂绽放；有的花需要漫长等待。不要看自己的那颗还没动静就着急，细心呵护慢慢长大，陪他沐浴阳光风雨，何尝不是一种幸福。相信孩子，静等花开。也许你的种子永远不会开花，因为它是一颗参天大树。

读了上面的材料，你有何感悟和思考？请自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇800字以上的文章。

考查维度：人对人的追问，引导考生对教育和人生的思考。

班主任认为每个孩子都是种子，每人花期不同。相信孩子，静待花开。这折射出此班主任的育人观：有教无类，众人平等。得出题旨，教育是一种“慢”的艺术，教育忌快速，教育忌速成。

立意：留给孩子足够的成长时间；教育是一种“慢”的艺术；聆听孩子慢慢成长的声音。

5.阅读下面的材料，按要求作文。

小麦花开放大约5分钟，是世界上寿命最短的花，但它结出来的果实，却养育了世界上千千万万的人，千百年来谁也离不开它。桂花在所有的花中几乎是最小的，它的花簇生于叶腋，几乎被硕大的叶子遮挡住，可它散发出的香味却是许多比它大得多的花所不及的。无花果不开花吗？其实，无花果是开花的，它一年春秋两季要开上两次花，只因为它的花悄悄隐藏在新枝叶腋间，人们一般看不见，所以就误以为它不开花。

读了上面的材料，你有何感悟和思考？请自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇800字以上的文章。

三段“花语”，实际上深有寄托：生命最短的，养育甚众；体积最小的，馨香远播；隐身幕后的，孕育硕果。它们意义各有侧重，但又都包含辩证统一的两面——隐与显、藏与露、名与实、短暂与永恒、有尽与无穷、索取与奉献，都能引发对人生价值与意义的深长思考。 以此题写作，首先要理解材料借花喻人、托物言志的实质，再联系社会与人生深入思考。可以从以下几个角度立意：1.生命有限，但是追求不止，意义无穷，所谓“我们不能决定生命的长度，但是我们能拓展生命的宽度”；2.不图索取，默默奉献，即“给永远比拿更快乐”；3.不图虚名，唯求实干；4.不显山、不露水，韬光养晦，蓄积实力，涵养美德；

5.甘为人梯，退居幕后，牺牲自己，成就他人。 需要强调的是，无论从哪个方面立意，都要兼顾隐与显、藏与露、名与实等对立的两面，写出思辨的色彩。如采用第一种立意，就可以深入论述“短暂亦能创造永恒”，而“永恒往往凝固于一瞬”。采用第二种立意，就应进一步看到不图索取可能终身清贫，但由此又能收获最为充实、饱满的人生。再如采用第三种立意，就应进一步探讨越是不务虚名真抓实干的，越是令世人仰望，令后人铭记，越能声名远播。套用一句古诗讲，就是“德馨声自远，非是藉秋风”。

6. 阅读下面的材料，按要求作文。

古人谈读书:王安石：贫者，因书而富；富者，因书而贵。黄庭坚：三日不读书，对镜

觉面目可憎，向人亦语言无味。陈眉公：天下事利害恒相半，唯读书则有全利而无少害。观书一卷，则有一卷之益；观书一日，则有一日之益。曾国藩：读书第一要有志，第二要有识，第三要有恒。

读了上面的材料，你有何感悟和思考？请自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇800字以上的文章

考查维度：人对社会的追问，引导考生对读书的思考。

这个作文属于一材多头式，即一个材料中包含了多个维度的立意，四个名人即有四个方面的立意。

立意：王安石：读书可以让贫穷的人变富裕，富裕的人变高贵。提炼一下就是“读书可以改变人生。”

黄庭坚：读书可以改变人的容貌，提升人的精神。

陈眉公：读书百益而无一害。读书好处多。

曾国藩：读书成功的三要素：意志力、见识、恒心。读书成功=意志力+见识+恒心

第二篇：高考作文范文集

一． 2015全国卷1 应用文书信

The “Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students .It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative .400words would be fine.Can we have your article before June 28?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you .

Yours ,

Li Hua

二． 2015全国卷2应用文书信

Dear Lucy,

I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.We ‘ll go and make dumplings and

cakes with the elderly people there.We’ll also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing games,which we hope will make them happy .We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us,please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours ,

Li Hua

三． 2015 福建卷 看图写故事 “凿壁偷光”

,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy ,being poor,couldn’t afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal “light from his neighbor’s house to read at night.The moral of the story is :spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

Of course things are totally different today.It is not the story

itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.

四． 2015湖南卷 半开放作文，“老师当众表扬你”

I still remember a maths lesson.My maths teacher copied a challenging problem on the blackboard and asked the whole class whether there would be one student who knew how to work it out. Several minutes passed but the whole class was in completely silence. As a matter of fact, I came across the problem in a reference book the other day,so I gathered my courage ,walked to the blackboard and worked it out in no time.What a surprised expression was on my maths teacher’s face！I felt so happy that he praised me in public,saying that I was an intelligent student . At that moment , I became the focus of the whole class and full of great pride and confidence. Since then，maths has become one of my favorite subjects,and I have made rapid progress in maths.I appreciate my maths teacher’s praise and encouragement very much.

五 . 2015陕西卷 应用文，自荐信应聘志愿者 ’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.

I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability,communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.

As an outgoing girl,I get along well with my classmates.Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully，I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class,which has been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.

I’m sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours truly ,

Li Hua.

六． 2015重庆卷

写作一“If you could give your younger self one piece of

advice,what would you say?

写作二Bookcrossing.com 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享（wild release），即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享（controlled release），即直接把书传递给另外一名参与者。

范文一

Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes,living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward.If only I could go back and reset my goals.

范文二 Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide,I’m writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.

You’ve introduced two ways to share books:wild release and controlled release. Of the two,the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release,I only need to deliver books to

other participants,not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.

If you could provide more specific information,I would be well grateful.Looking forward to your reply.

Yours ,

Li Hua

七． 2015 四川卷 提纲式作文，语言学习 普通话）.

I felt honored to have the chance to help you with your Mandarin learning. I’m good at speaking standard Mandarin.I have been a broadcaster in the school’s broadcasting station for years. When it comes to how to speak fluent Mandarin, I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first,which are quite different from the English ones.Another suggestion is to practice speaking.As one saying goes,”Practice makes perfect.” However ,my English is just OK and I have many problems with my study. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English. I believe we both can

make much progress with each other ’s help.

Looking forward to your reply soon.

Yours ,

Li Xia

八． 2015北京卷

写作一

假设你是红星中学学生李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营（Dragon Boat Training Camp），希望他一起参加。邮件内容包括：

1.介绍训练营的相关内容（时间、地点、参加者等）；

2.说明你打算参加的原因；

3.询问对方意向。

写作二

假设你是红星中学学生李华。根据下面四幅图片顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园”活动中，向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程，并以“A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊的“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。

提示词：一个面团 a piece of dough 面人 dough figurine 范文一：

Dear Jim，

I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I

intend to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if you’d like to go with me .

This camp will open on July 20th. It offers teenagers ,like you and me, a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.

Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.

范文二

Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines.

When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively .Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently . Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.

九． 2015安徽卷

A Famous Chinese I would Like to Interview

The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.

I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.

If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained . I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally ,I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting .

十． 2015湖北卷

Questioning can lead to searching for an answer. If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true, we can find the correct answer and learn more.

Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class. Although the answer seemed a little strange, nobody but I doubt it. Thinking that his solution might be wrong ,I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way. Half an hour later ,I managed to find the correct answer. When I showed my answer to him, the teacher

praised me for my independent thinking.

From this experience I have learned that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.

十一． 2015 天津卷 电子邮件

Dear Chris,

How are you doing? I’m chairman of the Student Union in Chenguang High School .Our school will donate some books to the Chinese class of the friendly exchange school in the USA . We will give away different types of books which include language learning, Chinese history, Chinese poetry and others. There are , in total, about 300 books. Hopefully ,these books will help the students to know and learn Chinese better.

By the way ,when I come to your school to take part in the summer camp in July this year, I will take the books along with me .If there is something else we can do for you, please contact with me in time.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours ,

Li Jin

十二． 2015 浙江卷

When I Have a Different Opinion

We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.

Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I have an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmate into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.

When I Have a Different Opinion

We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.

The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum,but most of my classmates wanted to go to a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and

we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.

十三． 2015江苏卷

The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.

Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large—scale construction of roads and highways. There is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What ‘s worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.

In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don’t secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matters. It is everybody’s duty to observe them to keep our society in order and being on the right track.

十四． 2015 广东卷

写作一

你接受了一项写作任务，为英语校报写一篇科技报道。 请根据以下信息，介绍国外医疗行业出现的一项新技术，内容包括：

技术名称：DNA检测

检测方法： 唾液样本分析

检测费用：125英镑

检测时长：4到6周

检测用途：1.预防重大疾病

2.预知食物偏好

3.提示合适的锻炼方式

检测影响：1.增强健康意识

2.易引起过度焦虑

提示词：saliva sample

写作要求：只能用五个句子表达全部内容。

评分标准：句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 写作二

用150词写一篇短文，内容包括：

1.你们班最突出的问题是什么？

2.针对该问题你会设计一条什么班规？

3.你认为该班规会带来什么影响？

范文一

DNA test ,a new technique, which is done by analyzing the

saliva sample,appears in the foreign medical industry. Lasting for 4—6 weeks, the test costs 125 pounds. As for its function, not only can the technique be used to predict major diseases, but it also enables people to foresee the examinee’s food preference. With such a technique ,examiners are able to provide various suggestions on appropriate ways of exercise for examinees. It is said that the test will enhance the examinees’ consciousness of health, but on the contrary it will also be more likely to result in over anxiety .

范文二

Confronted with the misbehavior of her new class, Sally emphasized the idea of “we are family” and afterwards worked out 10 rules to regulate the students’ conduct. Amazingly ,she earned respect from her students,all of whom later grew to be confident,considerate and well—behaved.

The most obvious problem with our class is lack of interaction or teamwork. Everyone is interested in his or her own things, thus giving rise to inefficiency in their study and even putting a limit to the fulfillment of their potential.

To address the issue, I would make it a rule that every Friday a project of a certain subject should be assigned by teachers and completed by every study group consisting of four students.

The final presentation will be a result of group work.

From where I stand ,this rule will definitely exert a profound effect on students’ academic performance . First and foremost , a harmonious but competitive interaction in a group will help with everyone’s learning. Additionally, we can combine our skills and knowledge as well as motivate each other to achieve greater accomplishments . Last but not least, studying in group, we can share our experience in solving problems more efficiently . It is for these reasons that I firmly believe that this rule will promote the learning atmosphere and our teamwork spirit.

With continuous efforts, our class, a big family ,will compose an extraordinary harmonious symphony .

2014全国卷1 应用文书信写作

Dear Sir\Madam，

I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six—week English course . First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class . I’d also like to know how much I

have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included . Would there be host family or university dormitory ? I am looking forward to your early reply .

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

2014 全国卷2 life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty—eight years old by then. I will have my own family ,probably with a lovely child . I hope I’ll work in a computer company as a program designer.I’ll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I’ll do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I’ll continue to take regular exercise ,such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays,I’ll travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

2014湖南卷 My Magic Shoes

As is known to us all, shoes play an important role in our life, for it can protect our feet from being hurt. However, as a boy who has athlete’s foot, I am looking forward to inventing a pair of shoes helping my feet keep dry and me walk conveniently .

Therefore, this new kind of shoes has come into being recently. To keep the feet dry and comfortable, this new kind of shoes is equipped with a micro—fan. When you walk, a small machine the energy produced by walking into electric energy and stores it. If you stop walking, the micro—fan can work immediately to dry your feet. However, what amazes you most is the following new function. There is a special red button in each of the shoes. If the road you are walking is flat, you can press the red button,which helps your shoes change into a roller skate,with two rollers appearing beneath your shoes, and you can reach your destination quickly. On arriving at your destination,press the red button again ad the rollers will return to your shoes, so you can walk normally like others.

That’s my magic shoes. Do you like it or would you like to have a try?

2014重庆卷

写作一

“My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry.”

要求：1.就此材料发表你的看法；

2.紧扣材料， 有明确的观点；

3.词数不少于60 。

写作二 “最好的礼物”

范文一

When I hear that someone says,” My friend falls, I laugh;my phone falls, I cry.” I feel rather annoyed and surprised. What he says suggests that he cares little about others’ pain or problem,even if they’re his friends. Moreover , it seems that he always thinks more of himself than of others.

Personally ,it is completely wrong of him to behave with such an attitude towards others and life. As a matter of fact, none of us can live alone in society. We all depend on others sometimes to some degree. If everyone does and thinks as he does,he’ll not live any longer in the world.

I argue that every one of us should try our best to help those in need. Then we can have someone to turn to when in trouble.Otherwise ,we’ll have to answer for our selfishness sooner or later. That is what the saying goes:” A fried in need is a friend indeed.” Only when you learn to give can you expect to receive.

范文二 that gifts should be worth time and energy if you want to send

them to someone you love. It doesn’t matter whether it is expensive or not. What really matters is whether it comes from your inner heart.

Years ago,I received a gift from a friend on my birthday, who is now living far away. It delighted me at the light. It was a piece of paper cutting, a Chinese traditional art. With the gift, he included a letter, in which he told me that he had made the paper cutting himself. It took him several weeks to learn to make it. That’s why I value it more than any other gift I received that day.

Now, it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom. Whenever I look at it ,I couldn’t help thinking of my friend. However far away we are, we feel close to each other. So I think a gift full of love and effort is a true and most valuable one .

2014江西卷

Good morning,everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my pinion on what to learn in senior high school.

In the morning three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly ,we should learn to learn efficiently . Personally,I used to effective methods to achieve my academic goals. Developing a good habit is also of great importance.It really benefit me a lot

to preview lessons, get actively involved in class,and review what had been taught after class.

In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. I n school, I respected teachers and was friendly to classmates.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.

Finally , we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently .They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.

No pains no gains, I am sure that with your great efforts,you will enjoy a colorful and faithful life here .