20xx年12月大学英语四级真题作文范文及点评
题目：Create a green campus
1.建设绿色校园十分重要
2.绿色校园不仅指绿色环境
3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该……
新东方版范文(一)
It is of great importance to make and maintain a green campus in our university or college. Obviously, a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do that in the present days, since the concept of “a green world” has become the focus of the society.
The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment. To begin with, the development on the campus is to be sustainable and recyclable. Some of the authorities' budget should be on how to reduce of the waste. What's more, we'd better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us. Thus the idea of environmental protection may become a common occurrence in our daily life. It is necessary that effective actions should be taken to protect our campus from waste and pollution, and hence these activities are to play an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Certainly, there is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campuses. (字数：167)
点评：本次作文还是延续四级一贯成熟的风格，偏重校园生活。当然也结合了时下流行的话题，绿色环保。上面这篇文章尽管有些不妥当之处，但能较好的符合四级考试作文的核心：无论题目怎么变，都是以考察学生的语言为核心，不是考查思维和知识面的。所以只需关注语言的应用就行了。还是可以灵活套用固定的套路，中心句＋逻辑词的方式，做到不变应万变。相信大多数同学应该能够习惯的应用新路老方法走的思路。但是，还是这句话，无错表达才是四级语言表达合格的核心。
新东方版范文(二)
In recent years, extravagance and waste have become increasingly serious in some of the university campus. We can see that papers, bottles and cans are thrown away after use; food is wasted just because of its poor taste; clothes are discarded simply owing to their old fashion. As a consequence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on creating a green campus. There are at least two criteria to distinguish what is green campus. On the one hand, natural resources must be conserved and made full use of, for example, we, as college students, should take the wise use of papers and second-hand textbooks into account. On the other hand, education to build up thrift habits must be promoted by relevant departments and professionals at various levels.
Accordingly, it is necessary for us to take effective steps. For one thing, university authorities should respond with the demand for more rigid conservation of our natural resources, such as water, electricity, and so on. For another, we should enhance the awareness of college students that creating a green campus is of utmost significance to both our society and ourselves.
恩波版范文
范文：
Create a Green Campus
“Green campus” is, to some extent, a relatively new concept to us. It not only means creating a green environment on campus, but also refers to that the students should be educated and have an environmental sense in their mind. Of course, this concept is very important for the students because it sets goals toward the future of the world.
The young generation is under the burden of severe environmental problems and the hopes of environmental improvement are lying in them. Therefore, campus plays a more important role in educating the young generation. The creation of “Green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities; most importantly, students will be educated to take environmental problems seriously as their own mission and responsibility. Under such stimulations, students may grasp the chance to learn every necessary course for the harmonious and sustainable development of the world.
To bring “green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken. First, based on its education function, campus should bring the theory of “sustainable development” into classrooms, set environmental management rules and conduct environmental education activities. Second, campus also needs to strengthen its ties with the society, tries to communicate with parents and experts so as to ensure that students could have a better participation in the practical activities. Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could “green campus” work smoothly and bring benefit to people's well-beings.
恩波版真题作文点评
此次的作文题目出的相对生僻，因为大多数考生对于“绿色校园”这个概念不大熟悉，这可能是最大的障碍，给考生着手写作文带来一定的困难。尽管“绿色校园”概念相对生僻，但此题中寓含的另一个概念“环境”却不可忽视，因此，考生应当从环境问题着手，着重点放在校园在“环境保护”中所起的重要作用，这样问题就能够迎刃而解。
首先要理清概念。“绿色校园”不仅指校园的绿色环境，“绿色学校”是指学校在实现其基本教育功能的基础上，将以可持续发展理论为导向，在全面的日常工作中将可持续发展思想纳入管理中，通过制订环境管理制度，开展有效的环境教育活动，创设环境保护的文化氛围，促进师生、家长和专家参与环保和可持续发展的实际行动，全面提高师生的环境素养，共同为社会的可持续发展做出贡献。从概念就能看出“绿色校园”的重要性。
其次要弄清“绿色校园”的重要性。“绿色校园”不仅仅是带领学生参与各种环境保护活动，更重要的是教育学生，使学生具有环境意识，从而使学生从自己意识的角度来理解当前的环境问题，为未来的环境改善打下坚实的基础。
最后就是要采取的措施。要很好地建设“绿色校园”光靠学校自身是不够的，这需要全体社会的动员与支持。只有在整个社会的共同努力下，“绿色校园”才能充分发挥其作用。从学校的角度来讲，学校应当在学校全面的日常管理工作中纳入有益于环境的管理措施，并持续不断地改进，充分利用学校内外的一切资源和机会全面提高师生环境素养的学校；鼓励师生的民主公平地共同参与学校环境教育活动，加强学校与社区的合作和联系，在实践参与的过程中发展面向可持续发展的基本知识、技能、态度、情感、价值观和道德行为，即提高全体教职员工和学生的环境素养，落实环保行动。
从总体写作来看，这篇作文总的可以分为三段：
第一段：着重写“绿色校园”的概念，从其概念引出“绿色校园”的重要地位。
第二段：此段的重点就是“绿色校园”的重要性，它能够促进学生们积极地参与到实际的环境问题中去，而且还能树立学生们的环境保护意识，对社会做出重大的贡献。
第三段：鉴于“绿色校园”的重要性，我们应当采取什么措施来建设“绿色校园”，把“绿色校
园”的作用发挥到最大。
文都版范文
范文：
I am the part of the Green Campus
The Olympic Games was hold in our country last year. “Green and Environment-protecting ” is one of the Three Themes of it. Our government has made a great effort in order to protect the environment, build more green project to keep the ecological balance, push the recycling economy, and protects the water resource.
As a university student, we should play an active role in the actions aimed at the realization of green and environment-protecting home and. We will start it from ourselves, our classmates, our friends and other people around us. We can stop cars running through our campus streets. And in the bathrooms, we will never leave the water running on after using. We will never throw things everywhere without thinking, They are wrong. These things are taking place everyday everywhere in our school. So, let's begin to act! Don't talk loudly in public places. Turn off the water tap after using it. After washing the clothes, use it to flash the toilet. Go to school by bike or by bus instead of by private car. Save your pocket money and contribute to environmental protection organizations. Collect waste paper or bottles for recycling. Plant more trees and flowers.
We can start from every little thing around us to truly realize the green campus. Publicize the theme of green and environment-protecting, and let us really reach the “Green and Environment-protecting” goal in our generation. This is the responsibility of everyone who loves life and peace.
文都版真题作文点评
作文是绿色校园的问题，包括在文都我们每一次对作文从三个角度去做预测，一个是结构，一个是主题，一个是它的材料，进行一个预测，但是这一次我总结有点对不起我的学生，因为这次尽管结构，首先第一个就是我们的绿色校园的重要性;第二是绿色不仅仅是环境的问题，也是列举的问题，除了环境以外还有什么别的方法，第三是怎么去做，其实这个结构老师在预测的过程中预测到了，但是主题坦白地说这一次徐可风没有预测中，还好后面的材料那块，我是给了学生五个材料，其中有一个怎么哥本哈根的会议闹得很凶的，气候跟绿色那是可以接上轨的，这次听过我的课的学生在重要性上可以来这么一句话，如果说哥本哈根会议是很重要的的话，那么建设绿色校园也必然很重要，有了这么一句就跟时实有一个结合，这就是个亮点，怎么说找亮点这就是亮点，所以上结构上我们是预测中，在主题上没有预测中，但是在材料上怎么说吧也中了(笑)。
写作这一块大概是这么个情况，但是我现在很担心一个问题，同学们在考场上的时候思路打不开，我一直很担心这个问题，尽管知道一个结构但是思路打不开，现在我们就结合我们这次写作的讲得细一点。第一个关于重要性这块，我觉得我们在思路说可以不可以去联系一些我们在校园里看到的能够跟绿色环保扯得上关系的一些现象，大家是不是可以看到校园里面的湖、池塘飘的可口可乐、康师傅的塑料瓶，这些是不是体现出一种对环境一种很污染，这肯定是不绿色，我们每次晚上看到校园里面的教学楼灯光很辉煌，一看是不是很多学生都在自习啊，是不是很多学生在很认真地学习呢，到了教室一只鬼都没有，就是开着灯光，这就浪费了一种电，是不是也是不绿色的体现，我发现有一些尤其是男孩子，他们我不知道他们洗一双袜子用多少水，但是我感觉他洗一双袜子的水够我洗个洗澡，这是不是也是一种浪费，对资源的不重视，就是不绿色的行为，其实这些我们都可以结合身边的校园的事情去表达，
一下子你的思路就打开了。
关于第二点绿色不仅仅是指环境的问题，我们可以再想想绿色还包括什么呢?刚刚除了提到的一些浪费的问问题，再想想，是不是包括刚刚考完试的同学有没有作弊过呢，这作弊是不是不诚实的问题，从道德的角度来说也是个不健康的，只要不健康的我们都可以把它称为不绿色，这些也可以结合去谈，是道德上的东西，还有有一次我突然想起来有一次我去检查宿舍，到宿舍里面去看进一个男生的宿舍，进之前我在走廊上听男生一直在发出一些感叹声，我进去一看一大批男孩子围着一个电脑不知道看什么，我进去说，我说你们在看什么内容，他们一看到我立刻就闪开了，感觉脸色有点不太好意思，我走过去看看电脑屏幕一看什么都没有。我当时想为什么我一来大家就全部闪开了吗，他们说是普通网页，徐老师也曾经年轻过，不要骗我，他们在上网看什么很清楚，这是不是也是不绿色的东西，东西这些除了环境以外，我们的道德，我们的上网，包括我们说话的习惯，我们说话的很多的学生尤其是男同学说话很有个性的，动不动就是一些国骂，其实在英文里面有一个词专门叫F words,那个单词我们不用说出来了，这种是不是是一个语言上的不绿色的表现，所以我觉得这里第二段的内容会写得内容非常非常多，敢于展开你的思路。
第三段是怎么去做，才能够比较的绿色，对绿色校园应该怎么去做，对于这一块我们首先可以地点从环境上保护环境，第二从节约上，节约电力，节水。