2011考研英语（一）写作真题详解及参考范文 20xx年考研英语已经尘埃落定，写作部分比起20xx年超纲的“告示”和“变态”的火锅，难度大为降低，现解析如下。

Part A: 小作文

Directions:

Write a letter to a friend of yours to

1) recommend one of your favorite movies and

2) give reasons for your recommendation.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use”Li Ming”instead.

Do not write the address.(10 points)

题目译文

给你的一位朋友写一封信

1）推荐你最喜欢的一部电影并

2）给出推荐的原因。

真题详解

令广大考生欣慰的是，20xx年小作文并未考察大纲中已提到六年但并未考察过的摘要题型，也未考察20xx年刚刚考察过的告示题型，而是考察了广大考生最为熟悉、从2005到2009已经连续五年考察的书信。

回顾刚刚过去的20xx年，中国内地电影票房成功突破100亿元，成为旭日初升的朝阳产业。从年中的《唐山大地震》、《盗梦空间》、《山楂树之恋》到年底的三大贺岁片《赵氏孤儿》、《让子弹飞》、《非诚勿扰2》，电影已经重新成为全民关注的话题。今年的考研小作文即考察了“电影”这一热点话题。 本题属于推荐信，在拙著《2011考研英语高分写作》第64-65页详细讲解了推荐信的注意事项、写作方法，提供了经典范文及十大万能句型。同时，该书76页提供的关于《八十天环游地球》的读书报告范文完全可以用于本文写作，下面的参考范文即由该文改写而成。

需要注意的是，写给朋友的称呼应该直呼其名，不应写某某先生或女士。本题属于半正式文体中的私人书信，文中最好使用3-5次缩写、省略句或口语表达。两点提纲可以各写一段，第三段进行结尾。首段无需进行自我介绍，开门见山表明写作目的即可；第二段应该分析两到三点原因。

参考范文

Dear Bob,

As one of your closest friend, I'm writing the letter in purpose of recommending one of my favorite movies to you, Around the World in Eighty Days.

The primary factors for my recommendation as as follows. For one thing, this is a movie of science fiction which tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman,Mr. Phileas Fogg, who makes a bet with his clubmates and managers to travel around the world in eighty days. For another, it gives us a vivid description of the many difficulties and incidents which happen on his journey.

Wish you enjoy the movie. Looking forward to your reply. (104 words) Yours sincerely, Li Ming 参考译文

鲍勃：

作为你最好的一位朋友，我写这封信是为了向你推荐我最喜欢的电影之一：《八十天环游地球》。

我推荐的主要原因如下。首先，这是一部科幻电影，讲述了一位英国绅士的一个激动人心的故事。菲力·弗格先生跟他的俱乐部伙伴打了个赌，并设法在八十天之内环游了地球。其次，电影生动描述了他在旅途中遇到的困难和发生的故事。

希望你喜欢这部电影。期待着你的回信。

你真诚的， 李明 Part B: 大作文

Direction:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay ,you should

1) describe the drawing briefly,

2) explain its intended measing, and

3) give your comments.

You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)

（图略）

文字说明：旅程之“余”

真题详解

不出意外，20xx年大作文自20xx年以来连续第十二年考察了图画作文题型，三点提纲也与20xx年以来的提纲完全一致，考察了考研写作六大话题之一：“环境保护”。

“环境保护”这一话题考研写作已是第五次考察：第一次是19xx年考察了提纲作文“城乡环境差别”，第二次是19xx年考察了图表作文“保护野生物种”，第三次是20xx年考察了图画作文“保护海洋资源”，第四次是20xx年考察了书信“限制使用塑料袋”，今年是第五次考察了图画作文“旅游与环境”。今年的考试再次提醒广大考生：考研写作历年真题是考研写作复习的重中之重！ 参加过新东方培训的考生应该觉得今年的考题易如反掌。我们的内部教材《考研英语写作分册》第29-32页提供了1999和20xx年考生的三篇高分作文，很多表达均可使用。几乎我所有的班上均详细讲解了20xx年高分作文那篇万能框架，并仿写过三道最新真题，大家应该印象深刻。同时，我提供的二十必背范文中有三篇关于环境问题的范文，均可参考借鉴。我们还详细总结了考研写作六大必考话题，尤其关于环境的表达要求掌握。

拙著《我的满分考研写作书》（湖南文艺出版社，20xx年11月）150-153页详细讲解了1999-20xx年真题，在考研大作文十大必背范文中，有三篇关于环境的范文：分别是211页20xx年真题范文以及228-232页关于“全球变暖”和“低碳经济”的两篇模拟题范文，诸多表达均可使用。

另一本拙著《2011考研英语高分写作》（20xx年3月）第154-159页详细讲解了1999-20xx年关于环境问题的真题，并提供了四篇经典范文；198-199也也提供了关于“环境保护”和“环境污染”两篇必背范文；232-233页还总结了关于环保的很多补充词汇。广大学子如果认真研读过上述两本写作书籍，今年应有喜出望外之感。

值得注意的是，近三年的考研写作真题与专业四级写作真题存在某种微妙的联系。20xx年专四写作考察了“网络”这一话题，两年之后20xx年考研大作文考察“网络”；20xx年专四写作考察了“志愿者活动”这一话题，两年之后20xx年考研小作文考察了“志愿者活动”；20xx年专四写作考察了“旅游与环境”这一话题，两年之后考研大作文再次如约考察“旅游与环境”。20xx年我在班上曾经专门分析过这道题目，没想到一语成谶。

之所以出现这种现象其实可以理解。考研写作命题组成员多为全国各重点大学英语系教授级人物，对于英语专业学生必考的专四考试当然了如指掌。 本题文字说明是：旅程之“余”。“余”字的双引号一语双关，一方面指旅游之后，垃圾遍地，环境遭到严重污染和破坏；一方面指作为个体的”我“在旅游之中应该提高意识，洁身自好，注意爱护环境。

根据三点提纲，最好写成三段。首段图画描述，越充分越好，切忌使用太多模板或万能句型，引起阅卷教师反感。首段是最重要的段落，也是判卷教师最重视的段落，亦是考研大作文难点所在。每点提纲各占三分之一分数，即七分。首段不描述图画直接扣七分，归入低分档，切忌发表太多空洞的议论。描述越多越好，议论越少越好。首句可进行总体描述：人物+动作+环境；次句可进行细节描述，力求详细；尾句可翻译文字说明或点出象征寓意。

次段意义阐释，五句左右即可。一般首句是主题句，点出象征寓意；中间进行具体论证，可从因果、举例、正反等多方面进行论证；尾句进行小结。末段可写成归纳结论或建议措施，呼吁人们提高公德意识，在大力发展旅游的同时，加强环境保护。

本文只要写成与环境或环保相关即可，即使没有提到旅游或者公德意识，也不用过多担心。只要语言基本正确、结构比较清晰、内容没有跑题，即可取得及格分（12分左右）；如果语言精彩、结构严谨、论证充分，即可高分在握（16分或以上）。祝大家梦想成真！

参考范文

As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon, two toursits are taking sightseeing on a small boat while discarding their picnicing leftovers casually into a lake. Unfortuantely, the lake is already littered and teamed with flowing rubbish like plastic containers, fish-bones, banana skin, watermelon rind, bottles, tins, food wrappings, and so on. And below the drawing, there is a topic which says: "after" the travel or "me" in the travel.

From the portrayal, we can conclude that the painter wants to convey such a message: a good many popular places are flooded with visitors, who spoil the beauty of nature by creating and leaving behind

God-knows-how-much trash. On the one hand, tourism, as a

multibillion-dollar business, is booming everywhere. Some people,

laboring under the belief that tourism serves as an engine of economic growth, seem to ignore its negative effects on the environment.

Nevertheless, it is my view that these are not concerns that we can shrug off lightly. On the other hand, tourism has exerted great pressure on the environment we are living in: water is polluted, the ecological system is disturbed, and natural resources have been excessively used.

Undoubtedly, tourism could not be banned in any country as it does help to shore up the economy in places which offer few sources of income. The significant point is that the unchecked growth of the travel business may render the development of an economy unsustainable. It is high time that we enhanced people's awareness to rectify this by taking the environmental protection into consideration. (255 words)

参考译文

如图所示，两名游客正在一艘小船上观光，同时把野餐的剩余垃圾随意丢入湖中。不幸的是，湖中已经堆满了漂浮的塑料盒、鱼骨、香蕉皮、西瓜皮、瓶子、罐头、食品包装等各色垃圾。在图画下方，有个小标题写明：“旅程之‘余’”。

从漫画中，我们可以得出结论：画家想要表达下述信息：成群的游客涌入很多景点，通过生产并丢弃大量的垃圾从而破坏了大自然的美观。一方面，旅游业作为一项数十亿美元的产业，正在世界各地迅猛发展。有些人认为旅游业是经济发展的引擎，似乎忽视了其对环境的负面影响。然而，我认为我们必须充分关注这一问题。另一方面，旅游业已经对我们生存的环境造成了巨大的压力。水受到污染，生态平衡遭到破坏，自然资源被过度开发。

毫无疑问，由于在其他收入很少的地区，旅游业确实有助于发展经济，因此任何国家都无法禁止旅游业。重要的是旅游业毫无节制的发展可能使得经济发展不可持续。通过考虑环境保护因素，我们早就该提高人们的意识来扭转这个现象了。

第二篇：20xx年研究生入学考试英语作文范文

20xx年研究生入学考试英语作文范文

作文范文（一）

When we use the word “love”, we do not simply mean an attraction to a person of the opposite sex, which is a very narrow definition of the word. The picture below illustrates the real meaning of love, by stressing the fact that love is emotional strength, which can support us on matter how dark the world around us becomes. In fact, throughout history people of many different cultures have regarded love as the noblest of human emotions.

As an example of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year. Although their incomes are still low by international standards, people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can——be it money or goods——to help their needy fellow citizens. Moreover, they do this with no thought of gain for themselves.

In my opinion, the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. In this way, we can help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines.

作文范文（二）

In this picture there is a very symbolic display of love and how powerful and important it is. The picture shows a lamp all alone in a dark place. However, there is a glorious bright light coming from it. It means that the darker life becomes, the brighter love will shine. In other words, love can conquer all.

The message of this picture is very true. There was a time in my parents, life when their love was tested. Everything around them seemed to go wrong. My mother was sick, and my dad was losing his job. It was very difficult to survive and have money for food and shelter. However, we had each other, and through this love my mother’s health improved and my dad got an even better job. True love is the glue that can hold everything together, or the bright light in the middle of the darkness.

There are many ways that people express their love, such as saying it, buying nice things, and showing it through affection and support. I think the best way to express love is by showing it with your actions. This means to be physically kind and gentle while supporting the other person mentally and emotionally. In this way you will always be the light in their darkness and if it is true love, they will in return do the same for you.

作文范文（三）

The meaning of the picture is that love brightens every dark place. The darker the place, the brighter love will shine. This means literally that in a situation where there is great cruelty, pain, hurt and suffering, love will be more obvious because it is so opposite of the conditions of the situation.

One situation that could be relevant is orphans in Africa. Many of these orphans once had parents, but they died of AIDS. These orphans may have AIDS too, and they do not have long to live. Their lives are dark, painful, hopeless and full of suffering. Imagine the impact, then, of a group of people coming to take care of the children, love them and give them a home. Their love is brighter than anything these children have ever experienced. Love brings hope.

The best way to show love is to give of oneself. Why should we be so lucky? Why should we keep all good things and pleasures to ourselves? We can all do a little without, so that others can have more. You can best do this by volunteering for humanitarian projects to help people who are suffering. If you do this, they will see your selfless love. It will be brighter than the sun.

作文范文（四）

In this vivid picture, an oil lamp with a happy smile twinkles in the dark. Around it is the caption reading “Love is similar to a light shining brighter in the dark”. The picture means that love is considered more precious in more difficult situations and more needed by those who are in urgent need of help.

Only when love is offered to the people in greater need, can it better achieve its value. I can exemplify this conclusion with the Poverty Alleviation Project. In its spirit——to help the poor in backward regions, many college students, upon graduation, volunteer to work in poor areas where they are most needed and their knowledge can be made better use of. Dedication of love is their choice. Seeing how excited the people there are when they witness the changes these dedicators bring about, we can know how much the devoted love and help are cherished.

The best way to show our love, in my opinion, is to follow the above-mentioned example, giving love to the people during the hours of darkness. So when we see someone in difficulty or in distress, we shouldn’t hesitate to offer our hands.