ACT写作班教案——书信篇
◆五个步骤写好中考英语作文
一、认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注题材格式
1.时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。
2.说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。
3.根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。
4.如果句中出现了时间状语，时态则要遵循时间状语。
如ago，last…——过去时
next，in…——将来时等
5.人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。
例如：Thanks to the teachers, we have improved our English.
其中we和our就是人称的统一。
6.格式：注意书信格式的开头和结尾。
二、找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点
1.切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全，找齐信息点，建议用铅笔标出，写完后再涂掉。
2.可适当增加合理内容。
3.特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
三、成文时表述正确，文字流畅
1.切忌与汉语提示的一一对应，使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。
2.首先考虑句子结构（如主谓宾，主系表等）。
3.同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。
四、文章结构清晰，重点句型出彩，可使文章在得分上提高一个档次
考虑文章的篇章结构，使用适当的连接短语，使文章结构紧凑。
◆ 常用连接词：
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second…
And then，Finally，In the end，At last
2.表并列补充关系的：What ismore，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，Inaddition
3.表转折对比关系的：However，On the contrary，but
Although+clause（ 从句），In spite of+n/doing
On the one hand…
On the other hand…
Some…，while others…
4.表因果关系的：Because，As
So，Thus，Therefore，As a result
5.表换一种方式表达：In other words
6.表进行举例说明：For example，句子；For instance，句子；such as+n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact
8.表达自己观点：As far as I know，In my opinion
9.表总结：In short，In a word，In conclusion，In summary
文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。
宾语从句举例：I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous.
状语从句举例：If everyone does something for the environment, ourhometown will become clean and beautiful.
动名词做主语举例：Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.
It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.
◆常用状语从句句型：
1）时间when，not…until，as soon as
2）目的so that+clause；to do（ 为了）
3）结果so…that+clause，too…to do（太……以至于……）
4）条件if，unless（除非），as long as（只要）
5）让步though，although，even though，even if
no matter what/when/where/who/which/how
6）比较as…as…，not so…as…，than
五、认真检查，检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清晰，短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。
检查后，将草稿誊写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。
◆下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误：
1. We live more and more comfortable.
改正：comfortably（副词修饰动词）
2.ｗe can get many informations by reading newspapers.
改正：much information
（不可数名词由much修饰）
3.There has many programs in TV.
改正：There are many programs on TV.
（There be句型和介词短语）
4. I think ride a bike can keep our health.
改正：I think riding a bike can keep us healthy.（动名词作主语）
建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章，特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达方法，适当运用于自己的文章中。
书信体作文
一． 格式、内容
1. 问候
2. 内容
3. 结束语
4. 签名
参考折的法的ach coin has two sides.; June22,2013
Dear Sir, /Madam,/Professor,/Manager,/Editor,/Father,/Mother…
I ….
……
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,/truly,/faithfully,/respectfully,
Your student,/ Your friend,..
XXX
二． 中考真题再现
假如你是 Richard，今天是父亲节，请给爸爸写一封信。信的内容必须包括如下两点：
① 表达对爸爸的祝福与感谢；② 给出至少两个理由说服爸爸同意你每天打半小时的篮球。
要求：
⑴ 信中不得出现真实校名和姓名；
⑵ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；
⑶ 80字左右；信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Dad,
Today is Father’s Day…..
Yours,
Richard
满分作文:
Dear Dad,
Today is Father’s Day. I hope you are happy and healthy every day. Thank you for everything you have done for me. I know you are worried about my study, so you don’t want me to play basketball too much. But all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Sometimes I need to relax. I really enjoy playing basketball, which keeps me healthy. Could you allow me to play basketball for half an hour every day? I promise I will try my best in my study.
Yours,
Richard
三． 常用句型、妙语连珠
1. 书信开头常用语
I am very glad to receive your letter (hear form you).
Hello, Jane. Is everything going (on) well?
How is everything going (on)?
I’m writing to you for some advice on how to…
I’m writing to ask if you can ...
How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met.
Thank you for inviting me to ….
2. 书信结尾常用语
Best wishes (to/for you).
Wish you good luck.
(I am) looking forward to hearing from you.
3. 为某事而感谢某人 , 表达谢意 Thank sb for (doing) sth
I’d like to thank all the help that you’ve given me.
Be grateful to sb for sth
Be obliged to sb for sth
I would like to express/extend my gratitude to sb
I would like to say “thank you” to sb
4. 表祝福 I wish you + 名词(success, happiness, luck, good health, a long life and joy…)
I hope you +形容词(lucky, successful, )
I hope that-clause…
I hope all is going well with your family.
I hope you will make more significant achievements in the coming year.
May you +V
Have a good/wonderful time/luck. Have fun. /Enjoy yourself.
5. 常用过渡性词语
（1）句子间连接词：
At first; at last; in the end…
then/next/after that…
when/while/as soon as/not… until…
at the same time; at times; once in a while;
To one’s surprise/joy
Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…
in a word/in all
（2）议论某观点时常用
表示并列：either…or; neither…nor; both…and; not only…but also;
表示递进：besides; what’s more; what’s worse; (moreover);
表示原因：because; for…; because of…; thanks to…; (for the reason that…);
表示结果：so; as a result; so…that…; therefore;
表示目的：so that…; in order that…; (in order) to…; for…;
表示对比：while; on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has two sides.; prefer…to…; would rather do…than do…;
表示转折：however; but;
表示举例：for example; for instance; such as…; like…; that is to say…
表示总结：in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last;
表示利弊：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; …have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.;
表示喜爱：love/like/enjoy…; be fond of…; be interested in…; show great interest in…; lose oneself in…; put one’s heart into…; be good at; be poor at; be weak in;
表达个人想法：I think/believe…; (as) for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally;
其他：in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up one’s mind to do; in a way;
5. 万能句式总结
I will work hard to make my dream come true.
I hope your dream will come true one day.
It takes sb. +时间+to do…
Sb. spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+on sth./ (in) doing sth.
It’s important/necessary/useful/useless/common…(for sb.) to v…
It’s nice/kind of sb. to v..
It’s time for sb. to do sth.
It’s a waste of time to…
It’s …years/days since sb. +ved
It’s great fun to do=sb. have great fun doing
It’s a pity that…
It’s an honor to…
I’m/We’re not allowed to …
I’m afraid of making mistakes…
There be …doing…
Great changes have taken place in…
sth is/are well worth v-ing.
It seems/seemed that…
It seems (im)possible to v…
It is said that…
As the saying goes, …
…and …. are different in many ways.
too + adj./adv. to do
There are many differences between … and …
I have made up my mind to …
I am sure that…
I am not sure whether/if…
I would rather …. than …
It doesn’t matter if…
Thank you for v-ing.
If everyone can make a contribution to the earth/ nature/ society, our life will be better and better.
6. 万能短语总结
² have/look for a chance to do
² do outdoor activities
² be/get used to (doing) sth.
² learn…from…
² be proud of/ take pride in…
² play an important/active part/role in…
² agree with sb. to do sth.
² with the help of sb.=with one’s help (反义：without one’s help)
² be/get ready to do sth.= be/
² get ready for sth.
² pay attention to…
² take good care of …
² make friends with…
² get on/along well with …
² wish you successful/success
² as time goes by…
² graduate from…
² looking back to the past three years,…（用现在完成时态）
pass the (final) exam
² stick to doing
² keep you mind on your goals
² make up one’s mind to do sth. (on sth.)
² make a decision to do
² work hard at English
² once in a while/ at times/ now and then
² from then on
² in the future（将来）/ in future（从今以后）
² increase our knowledge/ enlarge our vocabulary
² in fact/as a matter of fact
² in the beginning/ at first
² feel like giving up
² have trouble/difficulty in (doing) sth.
² have (no) time to do
² have experience in (doing) sth.
² follow one’s advice/suggestions
² master some basic … skills
² be required to do
² ask sb. for help
² can’t wait to do
² be supposed to do
² encourage sb. to do
² deal/do with …
² work out/solve the problems
² all sorts/kinds of…
² at home and abroad
² one of …
² be full of…
² learn sth. by oneself
² come up with good ideas
² be surprised at sth.(to do sth.)
² in order to
² keep healthy/fit
² a good way to v…
² keep (on) trying
² worry about…/ be worried about…
² in one’s spare/free time
² be kind/friendly to
² be strict with
² help others
² say thank you to…
² have fun/enjoy oneself/have a good time
² plenty of +C/U
² worry about/be worried about
² ask sb. for help/ turn to sb. for help/call sb. for help
² be popular with…
² share sth. with sb.
² know little/much about …
² do/try one’s best to v…
² be/feel sorry for…
² help sb. (to) do sth./ with sth.
² in/during class
² before/after class
² teach sb. to do sth.
四． 实战操练
（一）翻译句子
1. 感谢你为我所做的一切.
2. 我希望爸爸身体健康.
3. 首先,身体好有助于学习进步.
4. 只工作不玩耍,聪明的孩子也变傻.
5. 我希望我能每天能打半个小时篮球.
6. 你能让我玩一会吗?
Keys：
1. Thank you for everything you have done for me.
2. I wish my father a healthy body.
3. At first, a good healthy body contributes to the progress of the study.
4.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy。
5. I hope I can play basketball for half an hour every day.
6. Can you let me play for a while?
（二）作文
假如你是Carl,是一位 初三(3)班的学生, 即将结束初中阶段的学习生活, 请你用英文给你老师写一封信, 表示感谢和祝福（20##年中考英语）
要求: 1. 可以列举事例
2 .条理清晰, 连贯,语句通顺, 标点正确
3. 信中不可以出现真实的校名和姓名.
4. 80字左右
参考词汇:
无尽的 endless, 真切的 really, sincerely,..
描述人物的：patient，warm-hearted, outgoing, responsible, hard-working …
满分作文:
Dear Mrs. Liu,
How is everything going with you? I’m writing this letter to thank you for your help with my study.
You are a very responsible English teacher. When I began learning English, my pronunciation is very poor. You noticed that I worried about my pronunciation. Then, you not only offer me many suggestions to improve it, but also often corrected pronunciation mistakes for me. At last, my pronunciation has greatly been improved with your help.
I’d like to thank all the help that you’ve given me, Mrs. Liu. Wish you a healthy and happy life.
Yours sincerely,
Carl