剑桥雅思9真题及解析Test3写作(3700字)

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剑桥雅思9真题及解析Test3写作

写作名师点题:

这个题目属于argumentation辩论型题目。题干中包含discuss both sides,则必须使用对称式结构。从思路上来说,比校难写,不容易找出理由。可以围绕以下思路:人们现在的工作、学习压力大,没时问运动:人们在空闲时一般都看电视、上网.不做运动等。

雅思写作高分范文:

A problem of modem societies is the declining level of health in the general population. One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more active lifestyle. However, there are some people who doubt whether the solution would have effects.

Advocates of this solution believe that increasing the number of sports facilities is the best way to improve the weU-being of people. First of all, nowadays people have to devote more time and energy to their careers and therefore they are too busy to spare time for physical exercises. If there were easy-to-reach local sports facilities, they would be more likely to take part in physical activities

regularly. Another reason is that today's sedentary lifestyle means that physical activity is no longer part of people's leisure time. If more sports facilities were offered, doing a variety of sports would be much more attractive than just sitting in front of a screen every evening.

However, there are some reasons why the solution may have little effect. In the first place, interest in sports is not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract those who are already fit, not those who need them badly. What we should do is to help children develop a positive attitude to exercise at an early age. In the second place, there may be better ways of tackling this problem. For example, high tax penalties

剑桥雅思9真题及解析Test3写作

剑桥雅思9真题及解析Test3写作

写作名师点题:

在统计数据类图表作文中.较少出现四幅图的考查形式.本题是四幅饼图.而 20xx年2月2日的考试中给出的是四幅柱状图,剑7Test 4也是四幅饼图。此类图表作文有一定的共同点.都足用两幅图说明一件事情,另外两幅图说明另外一件事情,而且两组图之间也存在一定的联系。四幅图.信息多,在写作时容易超字数。解决办法是,每幅图都要描述,但不要描述得太详细,而且要阐述各图之间的关系。

雅思写作高分范文:

The four pie charts illustrate information on the ages of the population of Yemen-and Italy in 2000 and predictions for 2050.

We can see from the first two pie charts that in Yernen, people under 14 years occupied the first

position in 2000, while people from 15 to 59 years will have the highest percentage in 2050. There will be a growth in the percentage of people from 15 to 59 years and people over 60 years from 2000 to 2050. However, the percentage of people under 14 years will decrease over the 50 years.

It can be seen from the second two pie charts that in Italy, people from 15 to 59 years have the highest percentage in 2000 and 2050, and the percentage of people over 60 years is higher than that of people under 14 years. There will be a rise in the percentage of people over 60 years from 2000 to 2050. However, the 50 years will witness a decrease in the percentage of people

under 14 years and from 15 to 59 years.

In 2000, in terms of people under 14 years, the percentage of Yemen was higher than those of Italy. However, in 2050, as for population over 60 years, the percentage of Yemen will be much lower than that of Italy.

作文结构分析:

范文由四段组成:第一段为引言段,主要介绍该图标展示的是什么方面的信息;第二段对前两幅饼图(也就是也门的人口比例)进行描述;第三段对后两幅饼图(也就是意大利的人口比例)进行描述;最后一段对两组饼图(也就是两个国家的人口比例)进行比较归纳。

亮点词汇:

第一段:

Illustrate 以图表的形式说明

Prediction 预测

第二段:

Occupy 占据

Growth 增加,上升

Decrease 减少,下降

第三段:

Rise 增加,上升

Witness 目睹,见证

第四段:

In term of 在…方面

As for 关于,至于

亮点语句:

1. We can see from the first two pie charts that in Yemen, people under 14 years occupied the first position in 2000, while people from 15 to 59 years will have the highest percentage in 2050.

从前两幅饼图我们可以看到,在也门,14岁以下的人口在20xx年占据第一位,但是在20xx年15岁到59岁的人口将占最高比例。

2.there will be a growth in the percentage of people from 15 to 59 years and people over 60 years from 2000 to 2050.

从20xx年到20xx年,15岁到59岁和60岁以上的人口比例会上升。

3.however, the percentage of people under 14 years will decrease over the 50 years. 然而,在这50年间,14岁以下的人口比例将会下降。




第二篇:小黑雅思《剑桥雅思9》-写作解析T1 300字

Task 1

【真题题目及类别】

真题题目:比较同一座小岛在配备旅游设施前后的差异

题目类别:地图题(历史变迁型)

【范文译文】

这两幅地图分别描述了同一座小岛配备旅游设施前后的情形。

首先看配备旅游设施前的地图,我们可以看到一座广袤的岛屿,岛屿西部有一片沙滩。岛屿全长约250米。

再来看第二幅地图,我们可以看到小岛上建起了很多高楼大厦。岛上有两处住宿区域,一处位于西部的沙滩附近,另一处位于该岛中部。 在两处住宿区中间,北部有一家餐馆,中部有一个接待处,接待处四周环绕着机车轨道。这一轨道向南延伸到码头,人们可以去小岛南部的海域中航海。此外,游客们还可以在西部的海边游泳。 与西部住宿区相连的一条人行道也可以通往海滩。

总体说来,两幅地图相比表明小岛在配备旅游设施前后有很大区别。岛上不但修建了很多设施,而且大海也被开发成活动场所。新的岛屿成为旅游观光的好地方。

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