高考英语作文模板及范文分析

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英语作文模板

名人名言

To choose time is to save time .( Francis Bacon , British philosopher ) 合理安排时间就是节约时间 。( 英国哲学家 培根. F.)

一、英语作文的框机架

★★★对比观点题型

(1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1. 有一些人认为??

2. 另一些人认为??

3. 我的看法??

The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.

Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

(2) 给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一). For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③---------------(为他们带来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤---------(反对的理由之二). Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).

★★★阐述主题题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发,按照提纲的要求进行论述.

1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.

2. 分析并举例使其更充实.

The good old proverb ----------------(名言或谚语)reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.

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First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明).

Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三).

In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.

★★★解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

1. 问题现状

2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ----------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).

Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).

★★★说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1. 说明事物现状

2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)

3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------(A的优点之二).

But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)

★★★议论文的框架

(1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型 )

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目. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to p People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some

In their point of view, on the one hand,On the other hand, is no doubt

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二_. Itis not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.

(2)利弊型的议论文

______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题

_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as fol Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides",is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with,一 .

into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of

( 3 ) 答题性议论文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.

As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. Fir In addition径二_____.

______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I woul

( 4 ) 谚语警句性议论文

语 has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It meaeoretically )

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______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____ With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语

_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..

★★★图表作文的框架

as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the

_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________. There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.

二、高考英语作文经典范文

名人名言

No one can degrade us except ourselves; that if we are worthy, no influence can defeat us. (B.T.Washington, American educator)除了我们自己以外,没有人能贬低我们。如果我们坚强,就没有什么不良影响能够打败我们。

为了大家能更多的得到写作部分的25分,我们特精选了以下范文,希望同学们务必研读背诵!(尤其注意:文中划线部分为该体裁的套话;黑体部分为写作中的经典表达。)

May you succeed in the coming college entrance examination.

(一)与报社等讨论稿(带手机利弊) [引出话题] whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones. [赞成]I think they can do that. Because students can keep in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun.

[反对] However, every coin has 2 sides. There are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom. 4

Another students is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages.

[个人观点] In conclusion, I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive, the owner should take good care of it.

(二)看对照表格写调查报告(孩子出国利弊)

[调查内容] A survey is taken on public opinions of the fact that many parents

spend a large amount of money sending their children to study abroad, some of whom are middle school students.

[调查结果]From it we can see that 38 percent of those surveyed think it is worth the money letting children study abroad to get a better education so that they can get pay in return in the future. However, not all are for it / some are against it. 62% of them hold the view that it is difficult for young people to live and study in a foreign country. It’s easy for them to fall / get into some bad habits and the cost of education in another country is ten times as much as that at home.

[解决措施]The survey shows that the government should set up different kinds of schools to meet the demands of different children. (句型do something /take measures / steps about sth.to do sth)

(三)读柱状图表写调查报告 [注意句式变换]

Middle school students have some ideas about their future jobs.

The most striking contrast is in teaching: 30percent of the girls would like to

become teachers while only 5percent of the boys want to do the job. 20 percent of the boys want to do business and another 20 percent want to become lawyers, while girls make up 15percent in these two fields. What boys like to do most is to become

managers and the second largest group would like to be scientists. Besides teaching, the second choice for girls is to be scientists and managers. The number is not small. Girls also expect to show their abilities in these two fields.

(四)写信(过去/现在对比) I once had a very happy family, but everything has changed because of my father.

He used to be a very good doctor and was often praised by his patients. He took good care of the family and shared the

housework with my mother everyday.

However, he is now quite a different person. He plays mahjong all night and often quarrels with my mother. I just can’t concentrate on my studies and my grades are 5

coming down. I’m very much worried and I’m afraid it will destroy my family as well as my father

(五)图画+个人想法

One day during the summer holidays, I met my classmate Li Ming, whose nickname is Tao taopi. We chatted for a while as we walked. I asked him where he would go during the holidays. He replied that he had to stay at home studying. Then I’d like to know why he didn’t go out for a tour. Much to my surprise, he told me that it was just because he failed to be accepted by key universities.

In my opinion/Personally/ I think, traveling during the holidays not only increase a student’s knowledge of his or her motherland but also makes life meaningful. What’s more, at the present time, we students are suffering a lot both at home and school. Why not go out to get relaxed.

六、幽默画

We want our schoolbags lighter

[图画内容]The picture shows us a schoolboy and a big woman. The boy is wearing a pair of glasses and carrying a big heavy bag. The woman is taking some exercise. The boy is saying to the woman jokingly: “Mum, if you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure you will easily lose weight….”

[社会实际]It’s quite common that Chinese students are overburdened with the

lessons and homework. What we do every day is to listen to the teachers’ lectures, take notes and do our homework which seems endless.

[个人想法]We do hope our teachers will help us get more knowledge with fewer

lectures, exercises and less homework. Only in this way can we have time to do sports every day. Then we will be mentally and physically healthy.

七、 补全图画

Yesterday afternoon I went to the park. It so happened that I saw a touching event. At that time there were some people boating on the lake. A girl and her parents were taking photos. All of a sudden, the little girl fell into the lake as a result of carelessness. Obviously she couldn’t swim and was struggling in the water. Her parents cried for help. Hearing the cry, a young man immediately rushed to the bank and jumped into the water without taking off his clothes. He swam to the drowning girl and managed to push to the bank. At last the girl was saved. The girl’s parents were very grateful to the young man. Many people were greatly moved by the young man’s deeds. What a kind and brave young man!

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八、广播稿(看图 海啸 ) At the end of 2004, a strong earthquake hit the west part of Indonesia, which brought on a terrible tsunami to some areas of western Asia. This disaster has caused millions of deaths and destroyed many beautiful cities. How terrible things are! Besides, millions more who have become homeless are in great need of help now.

At present many countries all over the world including China have sent rescue teams there and thousands of people in every corner of the world are donating money to show their concern for them.

It is true that many natural disasters can’t be avoided sometimes. But at least we can do something to help the people in the tsunami-hit areas. So let’s offer our pocket money to them!

九、通知 To help students learn more about computers, we have invited Professor Wang from the Computer Department of Qinghua University to give us a lecture on Saturday,

December 22nd. Professor will talk about the use of computer and how to learn through the Internet.

The lecture begins at 2;00pm in Room 204 of the Library Building. Any

computer-lover is welcome to attend the lecture. Please bring your questions in computer learning. Professor Wang will leave you time for questions.

Don’t forget to be on time.

十、欢迎词 have taken place in our class.

We used to listen and take notes in class, but had no time to think for ourselves. Because we were not interested in the lessons, we often felt sleepy while listening. After school we had to finish much homework, unable to have some sports.

However, things are different now. With the help of computers, the lessons are so lively and interesting that the students are active to answer the questions instead of 7

falling asleep. As a result, we have made greater progress than before, though we spend less time doing our homework. And we can enjoy ourselves after class.

The good teaching method is popular with all of us. We will try our best to study even harder.

十一、填写求职表格 (高三教材P140)

Family name: Zhou

First name: Lan

Sex: Female

Date of birth: March 25,1983

Place of birth: Zhuzhou, Hunan

Nationality: Chinese

Address: No 4 Middle School of Zhuzhou

Telephone number: 0733-8483628

Education: Graduated from Hunan University

Explain why you think you are suited for the job:

I enjoy working with people. I’m young and healthy, delightful, helpful. I can speak standard Chinese and I’m good at English. I once won the first prize

of English competition in our college. I’m very interested in traveling and know many places of interest in China.

十二、求职信

Dear sir,

The other day from China daily I know that your company need a travel guide. I’m writing to apply for the job.

I’m Chinese, female. I was born on March 25,1983 in Zhuzhou, Hunan province. I graduated from Hunan University last month. I enjoy working with people. I’m young and healthy, delightful, helpful. I can speak standard Chinese and I’m good at English. I once won the first prize of English competition in our college. I’m very interested in traveling and know many places of interest in China.

I think I’m suited for the job. If you can let me have this chance I will try my best to do it well.

Expecting you answer. You can connect me by posting a letter to No 4 Middle School of Zhuzhou or dial this number:0733-8483628.

Yours sincerely,

Zhoulan

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十三、 回复公司关于面试的信件(高三教材P144)

No 4 Middle School of Zhuzhou, Hunan

July 28, 2005

Dear Mr Lively,

Thank you for your letter of July 20 asking me to come to inter view on Friday, August 2 at 2:30 pm.

Unfortunately, I shall not be in that day, as I have another appointment. May I suggest another date for the interview? I could come to an interview on Thursday, August 1, or the morning of August 2.

I hope one of these dates will be possible for you, as I am extremely interested in the post.

I look forward to hearing from you.

2007高考英语作文范文

最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。

60%的同学认为

1.不应该收门票 2.公园是公众休闲的地方 3.如收门票,需建大门、围墙,会影响城市形象

40%的同学认为 1.应收门票,但票价不要太高

2.支付园林工人工资

3.购新花木

注意:1.信的开头已为你写好。

2.词数:100左右。

3.参考词汇:门票---entrance fee

Dear Editor.

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’

s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.

With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used 9

to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?

Yours truly, Li Hua

Dear editor,

I’

m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public to go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be built for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred think that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price of the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used to pay the gardening workers and buy different kinds of flowers and trees. As for myself, I really think parks are good places to go to at weekends and on holidays. At the same time, we, as visitors, should pay the entrance fee when we enter a park. After all, it takes a lot of money to maintain a park in good working order. Do you agree with me, dear editor?

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public. They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure. They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged. The city will not look so beautiful as it should have. Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn’t be out of control. Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees. For myself, I’d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?

Yours truly,

Li Hua

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%. They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public’s enjoyment. If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and so have the walls on the four sides. If so, city will not lo 10

ok as beautiful as it would. Otherwise, those in favour of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%. They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees. The truth lies in the hands of the majority. Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor?

Yours truly,

Li Hua

高考英语作文模板及范文分析

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Of all us who have joined in the discussion, 60% share the point of view that an entrance fee should not be charged while 40% share the opposite view. Those who don’t agree with the idea think that a park is a place where the public can spend their spare time for pleasure. Those in support of the idea think that entrance fee for parks can’t be beyond control. Those against the idea think that a city’s appearance will be damaged because a gate and wails will be built if an entrance fee is to be collected. Those who agree with the idea think entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new kinds of flowers and trees. I think it does more good than harm to charge an entrance fee for parks. Am I right, editor?

Yours truly,

Li Hua

书面表达(满分25分)

假设你是刘英。最近你就流行节目“超级女生”(Super Grls)或“快乐男生”(Happy Boys)收集了同学们的不同看法。请根据下表内容给征稿的某英语报刊编辑写封信,并谈谈你自 2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯;

3.参考词汇:

误导——mislead

挑战——challenge

Dear Editor,

Yours,

Liu Ying

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Dear Editor,

Recently, I've collected some different opinions from my classmates about the program Super Girls or Happy Boys.

Some of them argue that it offers a good chance for young people to discover their own strong points as well as weaknesses. Meanwhile, it can get them ready for any challenges and enrich their life experiences. However, st)me of my classmates don't think so. They feel that it could mislead those youngsters. Especially to the school girls and boys, it may cause some troubles. For example, it may affect their study badly.

In my opinion, every coin has two sides. So long as we have a correct attitude and good self-control, it's still OK to join in it.

Yours,

Liu Ying

51、外国留学生Tom是你的同学,他住在友谊宾馆。你到宾馆请他参加明天下午李明的生日晚会,碰巧他不在。你给他留个条子,邀请他参加晚会,同时告诉他去李明家的路线。图中标有*号的地方就是李明家。

52、

写一短文论述书本的价值。

53、

假设你最近去旅游一次,请把活动情况记述下来。

54、

写一则失物招领启事。

在操场拾到绿色书包一个,内有两本新教科书、练习本、袖珍英汉词典一本及铅笔盒一个,请失主到高三年级办公室认领。

高三年级办公室

19xx年9月1日

55、

假定你的名字叫李童,上个月学校派你去美国。在美国期间,你住在Jane家里。她带你参观和浏览了许多地方。Jane的妈妈为你做了许多可口的饭菜,这一切使你在美国度过了十分美好的日子。写一封感谢款待的信,表示对Jane及其家人的感谢。希望今后有机会在中国以同样的方式招待她。

56、

假定你现在在英国进行短期参观访问,你的英国朋友George和Angle给你寄来一张邀请卡。读后写一封拒绝接受邀请的回信。说明你星期五上午要离Oxford去London。在信中 12

表示你希望这次聚会成功、大家玩得高兴。假使你在英国的住址是29East Avenue,Oxford 。

57、

假定你叫田兵,你的妈妈身体不太好,家中有许多家具。前些日子你家刚刚搬入一个新单元中。在搬家时,你的外国朋友Jack主动帮忙。给他写一封感谢信。表达谢意。信中谈到你将举行一个乔迁之喜的聚会,盼望早日在聚会上再见到他。

58、

写一封抱怨信,诉说你日前购买某厂生产的一双皮鞋穿了三次就坏了这一状况,要求厂方退回货款。

59、

用英语给朋友写一个便条,告诉她今天早晨开会你去晚了,因为自行车出故障了。请她别生气。

60、

写一则遗失启事。

李燕,高二(4)班学生,本月4日下午在本校大教室遗忘红色长大衣一件,大衣的一个口袋中装有一个小笔记本,另一口袋中装有自行车的钥匙。拾到者请交高二(4)班的班长或本人,我将不胜感谢。高二(4)班教室在1号楼204室。

参考范文:

51、

June 6th

Dear Tom,

I came to see you but you were out. Tomorrow is Li Ming's birthday. We will have a birthday party at Li Ming's tomorrow afternoon. We would be very happy if you will come. Li Ming's home is not very far from your hotel. When you come you may go straight along Blue Road. Turn right at White Road. Then go across Stone Road. you will find a cinema on your left. Li Ming's' house is just beside it.

Hope to see you at the party.

Yours,

Tong Hua

52、

Books are called “King's Treasures/Wealth” because they have something as valuable as gold and silver. They have the riches of knowledge.

Kings keep their valuable objects carefully locked up and keep the keys themselves. Nobody can touch their valuable things. Yet the riches of knowledge are entirely different. Anyone can have the key to the riches of knowledge. The key is simply “READING”. Anyone who can read can open the door of the treasure house and go in and take what 13

he likes. Why don't we therefore learn to read and fill ourselves with the riches of knowledge which everybody admires?

53、

I went for a pleasant outing on Saturday with some friends from school. We went to a lovely lake about a hundred kilometres north of here. We left by bus at seven o'clock in the morning and arrived at the lake at eight thirty. We spent the morning swimming and rowing small boats. Then we had lunch in a small restaurant by the lake. After lunch we climbed a large hill behind the lake and enjoyed the beautiful view from the top. We got back to the bus at around four o'clock and then we came back to town. We had a wonderful time.

54、

Found

September 1, 1995

A green school bag was found on the playground yesterday afternoon. Inside of which there are two new textbooks, exercise books, a pocket English—Chinese dictionary and a pencil-box. Loser is expected to come to the Office of Senior Grade 3 to identify it. 55、

No 15 Middle School

Xuanwu District

Beijing

China

August 10,1995

Dear Jane,

Thank you so much for your hospitality and kindness last month. It was very kind of you to put me up at your house while I was in America. I really appreiate your taking me around delicious. Surely I had a wonderful time in America.

I hope I can repay you in the same way in China some time in the future.

Best Wishes,

Li Tong

56、

29 East Avenue

Oxford

December 6th

Dear George and Angie.

Thank you very much for the invitation to your housewarming party this Friday. I'd love to come, but I can't because I will leave Oxford for London on Friday morning. I hope you all have a good time and that your party is a big success.

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Yours sincerely,

Wang Mei

57、

2 Doorway 1 Building 5

Xi Luo Yuan

Feng T District

June 3 1994

Dear Jack,

I am writing to thank you for all the help you gave us in moving into our new flat.

As you know, my mother is in poor health and there is a lot of furniture. I know we would never have been able to move all the things into the new flat without your help. I am arranging a housewarming party soon and I look forward to seeing you then. Thank you again for everything you have done for us.

Love.

Tian Bing

58、

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you to complain about the shoes I bought a week ago from your shop. Although I have only worn the shoes for three times, the soles are worn out, and the shoes are out of shape. At your price, I expect high quality.

I am returning the shoes to you by post. I expect to receive another pair of better quality or the full refund of the shoes.

Sincerely,

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Catherine,

I'm sorry I was late for the meeting this morning. There was something wrong with my bicycle. I hope you're not angry with me.

Sally

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I was careless and lost my red long overcoat in the lecture room on the afternoon of 4th of this month. In one of the pockets there is a small notebook and in the other pocket there is key to my bike. Will the finder please send it either to the monitor of Class 4, Senior Grade 2 or to myself? Many thanks to the finder. Our classroom is in Room 204, Building 1.

Li Yan

(Loser

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⊙ 江西省临川一中 陈清鹏

预测一

根据漫画,请以“烟”为题,用英语写一篇短文,描述下面的内容,并就此发表你的评论。

要求:1. 文章必须包括描述和评论两部分;根据内容适当发挥,注意行文连贯。

2. 词数:100词左右。

高考英语作文模板及范文分析

【预测依据】

看图类写作是高考写作的热点之一,具有一定的难度。内容上多为中学生日常生活中熟悉的经历,社会热点,具有一定的交流性、应用性、时代性、教育性。

【写作指导】

1.要审清写作要求。

2.此题只提供了一幅相关的图画信息。通过观察及写作要求,我们可以确定:(1)体裁:夹叙夹议;(2)人称:须用第三人称;(3)时态:可用一般现在时。

3.审清图画的主题和梗概:一个年轻人在工厂,嘴里正吸着烟,这时他看到工厂里的一个禁止吸烟的标志牌,而工厂本身也正向大气中排放滚滚浓烟。年轻人顿时觉得困惑不解??由此,作者发表评论:相关部门应当采取措施禁止工厂污染自然环境的行为!

4.增加细节,连贯成文,做到层次分明,结构严谨,并准确选用相关词语、句型表达图画内容。

【参考范文】

Smoke

This is a funny and instructive picture. In the picture, a young man is smoking happily in a factory when he sees a sign which means “No smoking” on the wall. But he finds that the factory is giving off large quantities of heavy smoke which makes him feel very puzzled, “Why does the factory forbid people to smoke while the factory itself emits so much poisonous smoke?”

Nowadays, many factories know the danger of smoking to themselves and don’t allow people smoking in the factory. However, they don’t pay any attention to the danger that they cause to the whole society. And they let out lots of polluted smoke which does great harm to our environment.

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In my opinion, we could live without most of the industrial products, but we could not survive without nature! Therefore, something must be done to prevent the pollution caused by all factories!

【范文点评】

本文首先对图片内容进行了简短的介绍,接着发表了作者的简短评论。文章结构严谨,审题准确,语言流畅,过渡自然。文章的得分亮点也较多。如最后一段,一句“In my opinion, we could live without most of industrial products, but we could not survive without nature.”,便不入俗套地点明了要采取相关措施的原因!可谓一语惊人,令人深思!

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I and Olympic Games

Olympic Games is window, I keep watch. This is a maximum window, had been rubbed bright. Through it, those that see are worlds. Here, it is changing every day, here burgeoning thing is being replaced. Have only me, this loyalty keep watch, it is paying attention to it every day, hopes to know it more. Olympic Games is crossing, I am pedestrian. There are many persons who pass here every day, there is Asian, have European, there is old person, have child. Here is traffic fort, joins the friend of all corners of the country. I pass the one of persons of hundreds of millions of here merely, cross it, go to another world. Olympic Games is Holy Land, I am volunteer. This is the land with pure flat, has holy fire from start to finish to accompany in side. Just because it is so, I pay out voluntarily for it, I will let my strength, let this slice of land more clean, let more ones know it, is also willing to devote oneself to it as me. I still help to the person who comes to here, let them enjoy the happiness of this slice of Holy Land. Olympic Games is platform, I am host. It has put up platform for us , lets world know us; It has built bridge for us , lets us and world link up better. This platform may let us display self wantonly. I am the host of here, I am proud to be the host of here. I will let the friendship of landlord, let guest experience enthusiasm and happiness.

2008奥运会作文英语作文:申奥的得与失

Bidding for Olympics: Gain or Lost?

Bidding for and hosting the Olympics uccessfully is, perhaps, the ultimate glory for a city. However, before transforming the dream into reality, the benefits and drawbacks of bidding for the Olympics should be weighed carefully.

Hosting the Olympics surely would bring about much gain to a city. Boom of the local economy, more jobs, and the possibility of generating income all sound extremely attractive to the municipal government. At the same time, better infrastructure, cleaner environment, enjoying the spectacular game with hundreds of sports elites and entertainment stars, and the opportunity of contacting people from all over the world also seem exciting to the citizens. Besides, the bidding will definitely promote the patriotic emotion and pride, as well as the moral behavior in local people. In most cases, bidding for the Olympics is well supported by both the public and the central government.

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Unfortunately, this is not the entire view of the pretty picture. If looking from another angle, the Olympic bid might bring about some side-effects to a city.

First of all, the environmental impacts, including the increasing exhaust fumes of cars, more pressure on water resources, huge amount of wasted leaflets and other materials used for public activities, are most probably neglected. In order to broaden the streets, some trees may have to be cut. Near the construction site, the tiny dust may linger in the air for a long time. Reduction of farmland may be caused by the need of setting up new sports centre or accommodation facilities. These environmental consequences can be especially serious in a resource-limited and densely-populated city in a third-world country.

Besides, if talking about the economic benefit, it should not be forgotten that a quick boosting may lead to bubble growth, which may easily crash. If not well managed and organized, the big event may not be so ofitable, and the new facilities may be forever empty after the games. Yes, there have been cases that host cities ended up with enormous debts.

Finally, let’s think about the low-income groups in the city. What will they get from the Olympics bidding? More tax, more fees, more expensive property prices, and higher cost of living. These definitely are not good news for them.

To bid or not to, this is a question. It is up to the choice of the municipal government, and the local public. After the decision, what they can do is to make the most of the benefit, and reduce the drawbacks to the least.

This simple ten words, give infinite power of Chinese people, especially for I but the speech is also a kind of strong spirit to encourage, this is the slogan of the Olympic game of 2008 Pekings.

The Chinese people's Olympic game to 2008 Pekings is total to take a kind of expectation.Remember at the beginning process of bid for the Olympic game, the Chinese committee of Olympics also obtains 2008 Olympic games to hold the power with difficulty.This time the Olympic game of 2008 Pekings, for China is a develop of a fair show, is also a fair show that emerges the Chinese magic power toward international community.

The meeting badge" China prints Peking that dance of · move" of the Olympic game Chinese special features.The characteristics of Peking and Olympics exercise the chemical element handiness combine.Red, in China always is to represent the good luck pleased to celebrate the color.Meeting the badge adoption red, represented the Chinese people to the international community of fine wish the wish." Chinese Peking, welcome the friend of the world-wide locations" adopted the Chinese Chinese brush-pen word Chinese characters simplified Chinese style, design special.Explain out without reserve the calligraphy magic power that China spreads fame the overseas.

China is an everyone's court for harmonize, we are living under the environment that dulcify thus, everybody is a happy child.The mascot" the FU WA" of the Olympic game also just represented us this is happy.Innocent child.

The FU WA is be"ed face"" clear and bright"" the NINI" of" the shell shell" by" the HUANHUAN" five be filled with the Chinese race special features of doll constitute.The homophonic of five FU WA name add exactly" Peking is welcome you".This expressed the Chinese people's amity to the people in the world aga 18

in.The color of the FU WA also acts in cooperation the Olympics at the right moment five yellow turquoise blue of red orange of wreaths, expressed perfect annotation of Olympics to spirit of Olympics of Peking.

The Olympics of 2008 Pekings, the dream of a Chinese, bears in the applause of the world and the tears of the Chinese nations.Be a member of the Chinese nation, I will use the most sincere voice, saying loudly:

" Bless you, belong to China, belong to Peking, belong to our 2008!" 诚实有益(It Pays to Be Honest)

1. 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象。

2. 诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实。

这是一篇论说文,从题目看,应从正面论证诚实的益处。第一段,举例说明在社会上

存在的诸多不诚实现象,给社会和个人都造成了极大的伤害。第二段,从正面说明诚实既利人又利己,通过举例说明做人应该诚实。

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As society and economy develop, dishonesty is no longer a stranger to us. Manufacturers and businessmen may promise more than their products can guarantee so as to make more profit. Doctors and nurses may lie to their patients for their patients’ benefit. Students may cheat on exams for better scores. As a matter of fact, dishonesty has become so widespread that wherever you are you find cases of dishonesty.

However, it is honesty that brings benefit both to yourself and to others. By being honest, manufacturers and businessmen build up mutual trust between themselves and customers, which in the long run generates more profit. By telling patients the truth about their conditions so that they can make their own decisions, doctors and nurses enhance their own credibility and honor their profession. By giving honest answers to questions, not only can students themselves learn about their own strengths and weaknesses, but they help their teachers evaluate the quality of their instruction as well. Therefore, it pays to be honest and everybody must learn to be honest.

如何交朋友(How to Make Friends)

Everyone needs friends. A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happiness. But how can we make friends?

First, to make friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. You should try to make a stranger feel at home wherever 19

he happens to be. Think more of others than of yourself and never judge a person by his appearance and clothes.

Second, friends should negotiate instead of quarrel. When you don't agree someone, please discuss with him.

Finally, never believe in those who leave you when you are in trouble. And never leave your friend when he is in trouble. Remember, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Friends should be faithful to each other. So long as you can put your friend's interests in front of yours, you will have a lot of good friends.

如何交朋友

人人都需要、朋友。朋友可以给我们以帮助,与我们共事困难和快乐。但是,怎样交朋友呢?

交朋友首先要对别人友善。你对别人微笑;肯定别人也会报以微笑。要使陌生人感到亲切,关心别人要比:关心自己为重,决不以貌取人。

其次,朋友之间应该商量而不是争吵。当与别人有分歧时,要和他一起讨论。

最后,不要相信那些在危急关头背离你的人,也不要在朋友危难时离开他。记住:患难之中见真情。

朋友应该以诚相待。只要你把朋友的利益置于你的利益之上,你就会拥有好多好朋友。

你相信有人有特异功能吗?(Do You Believe There Are Persons with Supernatural Power?) 提纲:

1.据说有的人有特异功能。

2.你相信吗? 说明你的理由。

It is said that there are persons who have supernatural power, such as someone who can see things next door through the wall, see gas pipes underground and the organs in a human body, someone who is able to get things out of a covered bottle by his will, and someone who is capable of reading with his palm.

Although there are quite a lot of phenomena in the world which seem inexplicable and quite a number of things which we don't under stand, I don't think there are persons with supernatural power. Those so-called supermen may be only persons who wish themselves to be supermen and therefore become supermen in their own imagination. Then they will show wonders through magic tricks. I don't believe it because no scientific experiments have proved its truthfulness yet, and I have never seen any person who has supernatural power. As the proverh goes, seeing is believing. Perhaps I'll believe it when I meet someone who will show me his supernatural power. With the development of scien 20

ce, the question whether there are persons with real supernatural power will become clear.

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电视(Television)2008-01-31 02:16:36 第1英语作文网

提纲:

1.电视展现给我们一个五彩缤纷的世界。

2.电视的教育作用。

3.然而,电视也会有害。

电视(Television)

Television presents a vivid world in front of us. We can bring the theater, art, con certs, and sports events into our homes when we might otherwise never be able to see them. Television brings the world to people who cannot travel.

Television can abe play an educational role in our daily life. Not only can we hear and see news as it happens, we can actually observe the paces and the people involved. Also people are able to take college courses by television. We are more knowledgeable of the whole world because of television.

However, television can also be harmful. Many of the programs now available show violence and scenes which are harmful to young people. Some students watch television instead of studying and doing exercise. Even though TV can educate and bring the world to us, we must carefully select the programs to watch.

电视

电视展现给我们一个五彩缤纷的世界。当我们不能亲临现场时,电视把剧场,艺术表演、音乐会和体育赛事带到我们家中。电视把世界风光带给不能周游世界的人。电视在我们的日常生活中起着教育人的作用。我们不仅能够听到、看到事件的发生,而且可以实际观察到事件发生的进程和涉及到的人。人们还能够通过电视学习大学课程。因为有了电视,我们对整个世界更加了解。

然而,电视也会有害。现在许多节目是表现暴力和暴力场面的,这对青年人是有害的。有些学生为看电视而放弃学习和体育锻炼。尽管电视是有教育意义的,它把世界呈现在我们面前,我们也应该认真选择观看的节目。

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礼貌)

写一篇关于礼貌的文章,大致内容如下:礼貌对每个人来说都非常重要。有礼貌的人从来不在别人危急的时候讥笑他,相反却去帮助他。办事的时候要说“请”,“谢谢”。在公共场合不要大声喧哗。当你打喷嚏时或吐痰时要用手帕。作为一名学生上课不要迟到。如果迟到了,要向老师道歉。

可以合理添加相关内容,词数 100 左右。

提示:打喷嚏— sneeze ;吐痰— spit

Manners are important to happy relations among people. No one likes a person with bad manners. A person with good manners never laughs at people when they are in trouble. Instead, he tries to offer help. When he asks for something, he says “please” and when he receives something, he always says “thanks”。 He does not interrupt other people when they are talking. He does not talk loudly or laugh loudly in public. When he sneezes or spits, he uses a handkerchief. As a sutdent, it is a bad manner to come late to class. If you are late you should say “I'm sorry.” to the teacher at the time or after class.

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保护森林-Protecting the Forests2008-01-30 03:00:04 第1英语作文网

Protecting the Forests

Now in some places of our country, a number of people have been cutting down the trees in the forests because they need wood and more farmland. The areas of forests are getting smaller and smaller. Some scientists say that there will be no vast forests in 20 or 30 years. It is really a terrible thing. Where the forests disappear, dust storms will occur occasionally. The weather will get hot and dry. The whole earth will become a big desert. A lot of plants and animals will disappear.Crops will not grow anywhere. Life will be difficult for everyone. The human beings will be punished for their forest-destroying activities.

Therefore, we should realize the importance of taking care of our forests. We should do our best to protect our living environment and keep our mountains green,the water clean, and the sky blue.

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保护森林

在我国的一些地区,由于需要木材和得到更多的耕地,许多人一直在砍伐森林中的树木,森林面积正变得越来越小。一些科学家预言二三十年后将不会再有大片的森林,这真的是一件可怕的事情。森林在哪里消失,沙尘暴就在哪里发生,天气会变得炎热而干燥,整个地球会变成一个大沙漠,大量的动植物会消失,没有地方再长庄稼,生活会变得很艰难,人类因为破坏森林的活动将受到惩罚。

因此,我们应该认识到保护森林的重要性,尽最大努力保护我们的生存环境,保持山绿、水清、天蓝。

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我的秘密-My Secrct欢迎访问Freekaoyan作文站2008-01-30 03:00:00 第1英语作文网

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Oct. 10 Saturday Fine

This evening there was a broadcast of an exciting football match on TV. It was between Chinese team and the team of the United Arab Emirates. I am a loyal football fan and I had expected the match for a long time, so after class I hurried home. But on the way, I found a little boy crying. He lost his way. Considering his parents must be very worried, I immediately decided to send him home. Seeing their son back, the boy's parents showed their gratitude. They also invited me to stay for supper. But thinking of the football match, I refused them politely.

When I got home, it was very late. Therefore, I missed the match,However, I felt very happy because I helped other people.

Although my mother asked why ! came back so late, I said nothing.Perhaps this will become my own secret.

10月10日 星期六 晴

今天晚上电视播放了一场令人兴奋的足球比赛。这场比赛是在中国队和阿联酋队之间展开的。我是一个忠实的足球迷,而且我盼望这场比赛很长时间了,所以放学后我就匆忙往家赶。但是在路上我发现一个小男孩在哭。他迷路了。考虑到他的父母一定很担心,我立刻决定送他回家。看到他们的儿子回来,小孩妁父母感激之情溢于言表。他们留我吃晚饭,但想着足球比赛我婉言拒绝了。

我到家时已经很晚了,因此我错过了比赛。然而我很高兴因为我帮助了他人。 23

尽管妈妈问我为什么这么晚回来,我什么也没说。或许这将成为我自己的小秘密。

Oct. 10 Saturday Fine

There was an exciting football match on TV this evening. It was played between China and the United Arab Emirates. As a loyal football fan, I had expected the match for a long time, so after class I hurried home. But on the way, I saw a little boy crying. He told me that he lost his way. Maybe his parents were worrying about him. Thinking of this, I decided to send him home. It' was a long way. It took us much time to reach his home.Seeing their son, the boy's parents were very grateful and asked me to stay for supper. I refused politely because I still wanted to watch the match.

But when I arrived home, it was so late that the match had been over.What a pity! However, I was very happy all the same because I helped others. I told nobody about it. It was just my secret.

10月10日 星期六 晴

今天晚上电视播放了一场令人兴奋的足球比赛。这场比赛是在中国队和阿联酋队之间展开的。作为一个忠实的足球迷,我已盼望这场比赛很长时间了,所以放学后我就匆忙往家赶。但是在路上我看见一个小男孩在哭。他告诉我他迷路了。可能他父母正担心他呢p想到这,我决定送他回家。那是一段很长的路。到他家花了很长时间。看到他们的儿子,小孩的父母非常感激并留我吃晚饭。我婉言拒绝了,因为我依旧想看比赛。

Mobile Phone-手机 论文网 lunwen5.com

某校周刊在中学生中展开了就中学生能否在校园使用手机的大讨论。请你根据以下提示,发表自己的看法.

1.手机是高科技的产物,它不仅体积小,重量轻,携带方便,而且通信快捷。它的功能齐全,既能用于通话,又能传递短信息和上网等。

2.有不少中学生把手机带进学校,与家长和朋友保持联系,取代书信交流;有的学生甚至在考试中用手机传递答案,作考试作弊之用。

Mobile Phone

Being a product of high-technology,mobile phones are being more and more widely used. It's small in size, light in weight and easy to carry, offering fast and convenient service for communication.It's of multi-function. The users use it for calling, sending short messages and internet-surfing.

In recent years, mobile phones have become popular among middle school students. Quite a few use them at school to keep in touch with their families and friends instead of 24

writing letters, which, of course brings convenience to them. But I don't think it's good to do so.

In spite of the advantage mentioned above, student users often waste a lot of time chatting over the phone in their spare time, some even use them to cheat in exams. In addition, mobile phone bill is also a heavy burden on students' families.

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网吧-Net Bar2008-01-30 02:59:27 第1英语作文网

With the development of the Intemet, the net bar plays an important role in people's life. More and more people, especially students, like to go to net bars. They are absorbed in playing video games, making bad friends and having a chat with "Meimei" on the net in the bar. Some students often go on playing late into the night in the net bar. As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies. Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing. But some students go by bus to the net bars at suburbs to play.

Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it. Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province. It is quite necessary for the students to get rid of the bad habit.

随着因特网的发展,网吧在人们生活中扮演了重要的角色。越来越多的人,特别是学生,愿意到网吧去,他们沉迷于在网吧玩电子游戏、结交坏朋友以及和荚眉聊天。一些学生常常在网吧玩到深夜,这些会导致学生的健康和学习问题。现在北京市已关闭了一些网吧,但是,一些学生乘车到郊区的网吧去玩。

庆幸的是,越来越多的家长和学校已经意识到这点。最近,辽宁省锦州市六千多名学生保证远离网吧。学生摆脱掉这种坏习惯是非常必要的。

Recently, more and more students would like to go to net bars, especially students. It has become quite commom to go there. They waste too much precious time on playing video games in the net bar. As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies. Their health becomes worse and worse and their studies are neglected. Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing. But some students go to the net bars at suburbs to play.

Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it. Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province. Most students are making full use of their time and devoting themselves to their studies. It is a good thing.

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最近,越采越多的人,特别是学生,愿意到网吧去,这已经成为一种普遍的现象。他们花费了大量的宝贵时间泡在网吧里玩电予游戏,结果不仅损害了他们的身体,也对他们的学习产生了不良影响。他们的身体变坏了,学习被忽视了。现在北京市已关闭了一些网吧,但是一些学生乘车到郊区的网吧去玩。

庆幸的是,越来越多的家长和学校已经意识到了这一点。最近,辽宁省锦州市六千多名学生保证远离网吧。大多数的学生充分利用时间,全身心投入到学习中去。这是一件大好事。

人生成功的途径很多,请你根据你的理解,谈谈自己的看法。

Success, as is known, is the pursuit of many ambitious people. It requires much of a person. In my view, above all, one should be a person of strong perseverance. Rome was not built in a day. On our long way to success, there are undoubtedly many difficulties standing in the way. If we lose heart and give up halfway, nothing can be achieved. Throughout history, we have had many famous successful people in the world, of whom no one is weak-minded. Take the great American scientist Edison as an example, he tried experiment after experiment and had one failure after another before he finally invented the bulb, which lighted up the whole world. So we can conclude perseverance can surely be one of the secrets of success. Furthermore, one needs to work hard to realize his dream just as the famous saying goes “Hard work leads to success”. Look at these around us and we’ll find diligent people are always the favor of our society. They usually achieve more than expected. Why do so many of our classmates of average intelligence go far ahead of others? Hard work is definitely supposed to be the answer. And still, I hold that one must keep in pace with the informative world. There’s no denying that our world is changing every day. So one can never be locked alone inside his own room, doing his research work and dedicated to book knowledge. How can an isolated person be well-informed enough to go ahead of others? If so, that could be ridiculous. Success is what one desires. So long as one is perseverant, hard working and up-to-date, I am sure success is near at hand.

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations(我对考试作弊的看法) 整理

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school

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minations whichare too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don't work hard at our lessons. So when taking examinations, some students sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.

In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it break the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What's more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations. (121 words)

我对考试作弊的看法

大家都知道一些学生考试作弊。作为学生我们经常参加各种考试。有时有些考试对我们来说太难了。另一方面,我们中有些人学习不用功,所以当他们参加考试时,他们为拿高分去取悦父母和老师有时就会作弊。

依我看,作弊不对,违反校规。我们学生应当诚实,用努力学习采取得好成绩,而不是依靠作弊。还有我们要改进学习方法,为考试做好充足准备。

How to Make Friends(如何交朋友) 整理论文网 lunwen5.com

How to Make Friends

Everyone needs friends. A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happiness. But how can we make friends?

First, to make friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. You should try to make a stranger feel at home wherever he happens to be. Think more of others than of yourself and never judge a person by his appearance and clothes.

Second, friends should negotiate instead of quarrel. When you don't agree someone, please discuss with him.

Finally, never believe in those who leave you when you are in trouble. And never leave your friend when he is in trouble. Remember, a friend in need is a friend indeed.

Friends should be faithful to each other. So long as you can put your friend's interests in front of yours, you will have a lot of good friends. (162 words)

如何交朋友

人人都需要、朋友。朋友可以给我们以帮助,与我们共事困难和快乐。但是,怎样交朋友呢?

交朋友首先要对别人友善。你对别人微笑;肯定别人也会报以微笑。要使陌生人感到亲切,关心别人要比:关心自己为重,决不以貌取人。

其次,朋友之间应该商量而不是争吵。当与别人有分歧时,要和他一起讨论。

最后,不要相信那些在危急关头背离你的人,也不要在朋友危难时离开他。记住:患难之 27

中见真情。

朋友应该以诚相待。只要你把朋友的利益置于你的利益之上,你就会拥有好多好朋友。

世界上最重要的东西是什么2008-01-30 02:59:03 第1英语作文网 The Most Important Thing in the World

Directions:

A)Title:The Most Important Thing in the World

B)提示:有人认为,世界上最重要的东西是“钱”。许多人不同意这个看法。

请就这个问题谈谈你的意见。

C)Time limit:30minutes

D)Word limit:150~200words

E)Your composition must be written clearly on the Composition Sheet.

The Most Important Thing in the World

In my opinion,the most important thing in the world is TIME.However long one may live,his life consists of a certain number of years,and a year has only12months,a month30days and one day24hours.Once you waste one hour,you can not get it back no matter how much you would pay for it.

Even though you are the richest person in the world,you can not afford to waste your time,because it means that you are wasting your life.Even though you are the most powerful person in the world,one hour has60minutes for you just as for everyone else who struggles at the bottom of the society.

Some people think that the most important thing in the world is money.In their opinion,if you have enough money,you will have everything you want.I would like to ask them a simple question:Can you buy time?

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The only thing with which we can win more time is efficiency.If you work with high efficiency,you can do more in a certain period of time than other people.

高考范文-空气污染-隐形杀手

来源:互联网 作者:787q.cn 发布时间:2008-03-16 点击次数: 62

Directions:

A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in about 200 words.

B. Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET Ⅱ.

C. Your essay should meet the requirements below:

1. Describe the cartoon and the message conveyed

2. Draw a conclusion and give your comment on the cartoon

Pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world. As is shown in the cartoon, two cars are giving off waste gas and three people are trying to avoid breathing in the poisonous gas by masking their face with 29

高考英语作文模板及范文分析

高考英语作文模板及范文分析

高考英语作文模板及范文分析

高考英语作文模板及范文分析

their hands. The poisonous gas sent off by factories, domestic appliances and automobiles has made the air unhealthy for people to breathe.(对图画进行描述)

There is no denying that automobiles are indications of civilization, progress and development; nevertheless, automobiles cause the serious problem of air pollution. Scientists have warned that unless effective

measures are taken, the problem of pollution will eventually get out of hand. Actually, people are showing a real concern over the problem. For example, there is an increasingly loud voice from the public(公众) for firm action against pollution from automobiles.(寓意)

Indeed, the earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our descendants. In my opinion, we should work out concrete solutions to the problem of pollution from poisonous gas given off by automobiles. For example, the automobiles should be equipped with a device which can dispose of waste gas so as to prevent it from polluting air. Only in this way can we really solve the problem of air pollution caused by automobiles.(措施、建议)

高考英语作文范文:水资源

来源:互联网 作者:787q.cn 发布时间:2008-01-16 点击次数: 640

人们总以为淡水是取之不尽的,实际上淡水资源是很有限的。请谈谈你的看法。

It is generally believed that there is a good supply of fresh water. But to our disappointment, the fact is just the opposite.

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高考英语作文模板及范文分析

高考英语作文模板及范文分析

高考英语作文模板及范文分析

高考英语作文模板及范文分析

As we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by day. So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population. What's more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles

produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of water. Though fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be used. Only quite limited fresh water resource is available to human beings. So it's high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource. Stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth.

With fresh water, the world will be prosperous. (130words)

假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。

注意:

1.词数:100左右:

2.参考词汇:房租—Tent(n.).

I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确,意思表述完整,行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用,还使用了以‘which,’引导的非限定性定语从句,从而使文章层次分明,富于变化,不愧为考场佳作。

Dear Bob,

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Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.

I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.

Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.

Best wishes !

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文格式正确,内容完整,表述清楚,衔接紧密流畅,时态语态使用准确,特别是结尾末段适度的发挥,既充实了内容,又符合逻辑,成为本文与众不同的亮点。

Dear Bob,

How are you these days?

I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.

There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内在逻辑性很强,由远及近。由外及内,层次分明,错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处,很出彩,再则结构完整,从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

作文:

Dear Bob,

I’m glad to hear from you.

Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you. The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.

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It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.

Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you want another one? Just let me know. I’ll try my best to help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

满分理由

本文内容详实,描述具体细腻,用词适当准确,如“suitable house”、“not far from’’等,另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。

话题一:中学生的爱好与兴趣

Spare time(业余时间), favorite(最喜欢的), Interest(兴趣), hobby(爱好), appetite(嗜好),taste(口味), read novels(也小说), play football/basketball(打足球/篮球), surf the internet(上网), chat online(在线聊天), play games(玩游戏), collect stamps(集邮), make e-friends(交网友), climb mountains(爬山), watch TV(看电视), enjoy popular music(喜欢流行音乐),be interested in(对…感兴趣), develop an interest in(在…方面发展兴趣), be fond of(喜欢…),be keen on(喜欢…), have love for(喜爱…), have a taste in(对…有兴趣) 等。

话题二:劳动与劳动观念

Work(工作), be at work(在工作), work hard(努力工作), produce(生产), worker(工人), labor force(劳动力), labor(劳动), voluntary labor(义务劳动),serve the people(为人民服务),heart and soul(全心全意),physical labor(体力劳动), mental labor(脑力劳动), labor viewpoint(劳动观念), labor Day(劳动节), workday(工作日), means of labor(劳动方

式), honorable(光荣的), be devoted to(奉献于..), value(价值), earn money(赚钱) , personal interests(个人利益)等。 话题三:创建和谐社会

harmonious(和谐的), friendly(友好的), civilized(文明的), honest(真诚的), credible (诚信的), be public-spirited(有公德心的), balanced(平衡的), be in order(有序的), peaceful(和平的), live in harmony(生活和谐), sustainable development(可持续发展)等,help each ether(互助), care for each other(互相关心), have deep love for (热爱), be concerned with (关心), build(创建), cherish(珍惜), take an active part in(积极参与), pay attention to social moral(讲究社会公德), protect the environment(保护环境), save energy(节省能源)等。No pains, no gains. 不劳无获。…can be achieved by hard wok. …可以通过劳动获得。It is difficult to find work in the present situation. 在当前形势下,很难找到工作。It is honorable to … …是光荣的。If everyone … for others and the society, our world will be …如果每个人为他人和社会做…, 我们这个世界将会…。Every one should … and devotes himself to building our motherland into a strong country.每个人应该 …,为把我们祖国建设成为一个强壮的国家而奉献自己的力量。

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话题四:招聘与求职

employ(雇佣), look for(寻找), take in(吸纳), full-time(全职的), part-time(兼职的), well-paid(薪水高的), be paid by the hour(按小时发工资), requirement(要求), résumé(个人履历),schooling(受情况), subjects(课程), working

experience(工作经历), qualification(合格证明), trans cript (成绩单), health(健康状况), present address(现在通讯地址)等,apply for(申请…), graduate from(毕业于), major in(以…为专业), degree(学位), scholarship(奖学金), good

grades(良好的成绩), hobby(爱好), favorite(最喜欢的), be skilled in(在…方面熟练), be good at(擅长…), experienced(有经验的), confident(自信的), English and computer ability(英语和计算机能力), healthy(健康的)等。

话题五:中学生的健康问题

Physical and mental condition(身体与精神状态), strong(强壮的), un/healthy(不健康/健康的), overweight/fat(肥胖的), thin(瘦的), near/short-sighted(近视的), mentally unhealthy(精神不健全的), normal(正常的), abnormal(不正常的), energetic(精力旺盛的), unhealthy eating habit(不健康的饮食习惯), eat much junk food (吃太多的垃圾食品)等,

Stay/keep healthy/fit(保持健康), build up one’s body/ improve one’s’ health(强身健体), enough sleep(充足的睡眠), take regular exercise(进行有规律的运动), roper diet(合理的饮食), good living habits(良好的生活习惯), lose weight(减肥), remove heavy burdens(减轻负担), be good for/do good to(对…有益处), nutrition(营养), go on diet(节食), form. a … eating habit(养成一个…的饮食习惯) Breathe in as much fresh air等。

话题六:环境保护

Pollute(污染),Waste is scattering here and there.(到处撒满了废弃物),protect the environment(保护环境) ,send out smoke and poisonous gases into the air(散发出烟和有毒气体),cut down trees(砍伐树木), pour waste water into the rivers(把废水注入河流),It is a shame to throw rubbish around. (乱扔垃圾是可耻的),form. good habits to protect the surroundings(养成良好的习惯来保护环境), take active measures to protect rare animals(采取积极措施保护稀有动物), take good care of our forests(关心我们的森林),plant more trees to improve the environment (多植来改善环境),The terrible pollution have done great harm to us as well as to the surroundings. (可怕的污染已经给我们自己还有我们的环境带来了很大的危害。)

话题七:校园文明与安全问题

School rules and regulations(学校规章制度),obey(遵守), observe(遵守), keep/observe discipline(遵守纪律), behave well(表现良好),be neatly dressed(穿戴整洁), respect one’s teachers and parents(尊敬师长), be on time(准时), keep the environment clean(保持环境干净), civilized(文明的) break the rules(违反规章制度), discipline(纪律), spit(吐痰), throw rubbish everywhere(乱扔垃圾), cheat in the exam(考试作弊), get in line (插队), fight with sb.(与…打架), punish sb. for (因…处罚某人)等。The students are told not to break any of the rules of the school. 学校要求学生不要违反任何规章制度。The students are expected to … 学校期望学生…。It must be made clear that the students

should … 必须明确的一点是,学生应该…。 … is of no good to a friendly and harmonious society. …对创建友好和谐的社会是毫无益处的。It is honorable to obey the principles and rules of our school.遵守学校的规章制度是光荣的。 34

It is worthy of praise to ... …是值得表扬的。It is shameful to … …是可耻的。What we should do is that … 我们应该做的事情是…

话题八:友谊

get to know sb.(认识某人), know sb. really well(熟知某人), make friends with sb.(和某人交朋友), a strong personality (一个很强的个性), personal matters(隐私), friendship(友谊), friendly(友好的), a close friend(一个亲密的朋友), trust each other (相互信任), precious(珍贵的), worthy(有价值的), understanding(通情达理的), share …with sb.(与…分享…), be loyal to(对…忠诚), keep in touch with sb. (与…保持联系), keep company with sb.(和…结交), stay best friends with sb. (和…保持很好的友谊)等。在描述此话题时常用的句型有:

1. Friends give us … 朋友给予我们…。

2. A good friend is someone you can … 一位好朋友就是一个我们能够…的人。

3. The first time I met …, he was … 当我第一次遇到…的时候,他…。

4. Friendship plays an important part in … 友谊在…中扮演一个重要角色。

5. You can … to be a good friend. 你可以…来成为别人的好朋友。

6. We can turn to ... when we feel down. 当我们心情糟糕时,可以求助于…。

7. … makes a good friend. …成就好朋友。

8. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真知。

9. ... is one of the things people value most in a friend.

… 是人们在朋友身上最重视的东西。

10. … have a friend of … years with sb. … 与… 有着…年的友情。

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【编者语】 本文涉及华南虎风波、文化造假、生态文明、人性关怀、道德操守等,让同学们在了解新素材的同时,获取新认知。

1. “华南虎风波”折射科学文明缺失

据《新京报》报道,自从20xx年10月12日,陕西省林业厅公布该省安康市镇坪县发现了华南虎之后,引起了社会各界的广泛关注。

陕西省林业厅组织了野生动物和影像专家鉴定,结果证实照片是真实的。随即,有人质疑照片的真实性,陕西省林业厅 35

17日出面驳斥照片“造假说”,并声称该地区可能有多达8头华南虎。

中科院植物研究所种子植物分类学创新研究组首席研究员傅德志在网站上指出,周正龙所拍华南虎照片有假,说“自己敢以脑袋担保”,并劝周“早日投案自首”。日前,周正龙作出回应:“看他的脑袋能保多久。”周称,如果照片作假,他可以去坐牢,儿子也可以坐牢。

为此,有人在20xx年10月23日《证券时报》撰文说,以科学与法律的标准来审视华南虎风波,应是这个时代的一种最基本的视角。围绕华南虎照片的真伪掀起的这场“赌命”闹剧极大地背离了科学与文明的本义,泛起一股强烈的市井吵架中的粗鄙与庸俗气息。

【分析】 事实上,这场“华南虎风波”都是因为缺失起码的科学理性与法律文明而造成的。华南虎的有无,完全可以交给相关的科考专家判断;华南虎照片的真伪,完全可以由技术来进行鉴别。对真相进行不懈地探求,必须对科学有起码的尊重。而“以脑袋担保”的科学工作者与“以拉上儿子一起坐牢”的现代公民,却在以暴力与漠视生命的方式对待问题分歧,这是对科学理性的侮辱,是在亵渎文明的尊严。

【适用话题】 科学的“真与伪”、法律意识、捍卫真理、文化造假、科学文明……

2. “制造”天敌

弱肉强食是动物界的法则,谁也改变不了。但《羊城晚报》近期登载的一篇文章中描述了这样的两个镜头,将这种“宿命论”颠覆了。

镜头一:一群牦牛正在荒野中寻找青草,突然,几只同样在觅食的狼出现在不远处。一头牦牛发现了狼,它抬头望了狼一眼,其余的牦牛也纷纷抬头向狼望去。领头的牦牛继续站在原地,丝毫没有逃离的意思,所有的牦牛也站在原地。狼在牛群边虎视眈眈地转悠了好一阵,最后见没有下口的机会,就知趣地走开了。

镜头二:一只蝎子在沙漠中缓缓地爬行,突然与几只獴狭路相逢。獴小心翼翼地靠近蝎子,蝎子趴在那儿,仍一动不动,既不逃跑,也没进攻。獴反倒警觉起来,对峙了几分钟后,獴只好走开,去别处寻找好对付的猎物。

【分析】 其实,狼未必一定是牦牛的天敌,獴也未必一定是蝎子的天敌。牦牛和蝎子“以静制动”的应对方式,从一个侧面说明:天敌有时是自己“制造”出来的。牦牛和蝎子敢于与强敌对峙,比没命奔逃可能更容易保全性命。

【适用话题】 勇敢、命运、战胜自我……

3. 天使吻过我

《青年心理》刊载:一个青年,他脸上有块胎记,很吓人。但他很友善、幽默,和他打过交道的人,都会不由自主地喜欢上他。他常常参加演讲。起初看到他的观众都很担心,这个样子的他从相貌上就失分了,不过等到他讲完,掌声已经如雷一样热烈。

为何如此?有一天,他道出了个中原由:“我向来以它为荣呢!正是因为有了这块胎记,我才会不断奋斗,才能取得今天的成绩,它何尝不是天使的吻痕呢?”很小的时候,他的父亲就告诉他:“儿子,你出生前,我向上帝祈祷,请他赐给我一个与众不同的孩子,于是上帝给你作了一个记号,你脸上的标记是天使吻过的痕迹,上帝这样做是为了在人群中一眼就能找到你。”

【分析】 父亲的话,让他消除了自卑,使他产生一种优越感,并激发他积极努力、不断奋斗,最终取得了很好的成绩。 36

【适用话题】 爱、自卑、自信与自强、美丽的谎言、心理健康……

4. 可以低头,但不弯腰

《政府法制》刊载:苗家人房屋的建筑最有特点,一个不大的屋子里面可以有几十个房檐和门槛。令人不明白的是,虽然有这么多的障碍,可从来没看见他们当中有人因此撞到房檐或者是被门槛绊倒。要知道,对于一个外乡人来说,即使是空手走在这样的屋子里也会经常碰头、摔跟头的,何况,他们的身后还背着那么重的背篓。后来,一位当地的老人家告诉旅人,要想在这样的建筑里行走自如,就必须记住一句话:可以低头,但不能弯腰。

【分析】 老人家的话令人沉思,“可以低头,但不能弯腰”,低头是为了避开上面的障碍,看清楚脚下的门槛,而不弯腰则是为了有足够的力气承担起身上的背篓。我们对生活的态度,不也正应该如此吗?

【适用话题】 正视困难挫折、集中精力、生活……

5. 史玉柱:“最刺痛我的一句话”

《巨人不死密码》写道:从巨人大厦的“倒塌”,到脑白金奇迹般的崛起,再到“征途”游戏的成功,史玉柱尝过人生百味。当初失败后,史玉柱曾闭门几天。最痛苦的时候,压力最大的时候,史玉柱把全国分公司经理召集到一起闭门开批判会,请大家批判他自己,一共批判了三天三夜。

回忆当初情景,史玉柱说:“我的第一个分公司经理,她说她感觉这么多年来我不关心他们这些员工。这句话深深刺痛了我。作为我这样曾经失败过或者说至少有过失败经历的人,应该经常从里面学点东西。人在成功的时候是学不到东西的,成功时候作的报告你别听,全是假的,只有失败后总结的教训才是深刻的,才是真的。我在19xx年之前,经常作报告,现在回头一看,那东西第一是幼稚,第二是在骗人,那些东西说出来都是虚的。”

【分析】 “不关心”后面还有一句是“不尊重”。人在顺境的时候、在成功的时候,沉不下心来,总结的东西自然是很虚的东西。

【适用话题】 尊重、顺境与逆境、失败乃成功之母、正确看待失败、善于听取意见……

6. 你凭什么坐在这里

《文汇报》刊载:上世纪30年代,著名曲学家吴梅曾任教北京大学,当时,唱曲子还被传统学问家视为“小道末技”。北大聘请吴梅讲课,在社会上引起了轩然大波。连北大的大学者黄侃也非常不满。一次,黄侃讲完课,发现吴梅坐在教授专用沙发上休息,于是怒问:“你凭什么坐在这里?”吴梅理直气壮地答道:“我凭元曲。”西南联大(现四川大学)中文系教授刘文典是著名《庄子》研究专家,他在抗战时期跑防空洞,有一次看见作家沈从文也在跑,很是生气,大声喊道:“我跑防空洞,是为《庄子》跑,我死了就没人讲《庄子》了,你凭什么跑?”

【分析】 先不论两位先生责问的对错,仅从另一个角度看,这样的责问也不乏意义——你凭什么站在这里?是凭真才实学,还是凭不学无术?美丽明亮的舞台上,你凭什么站在这里?是凭精湛艺术功力,还是凭哥们关系,凭请客送礼,甚至于凭“潜规则”?每个人都有自己的位置,坐在这里要坐得心安理得,问心无愧;站在这里也要站得堂堂正正,让人服气。

【适用话题】 学问与平等、真才实学、位置……

7. 一个国家为孩子调慢半小时

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有一个异想天开的孩子,给委内瑞拉总统查韦斯写了一封信,他在信中说,因为每天要起很早去上学,所以已经有很久没有看到早晨的太阳了。孩子说自己最大的梦想就是能让早晨的时间停下半小时,这样,就可以每个早晨都能迎着太阳去上学了。

孩子的来信,深深打动了查韦斯总统。查韦斯最后决定:全国时间调慢半个小时,从20xx年9月开始实施。这个决定,令许多人感到震惊,有人说这是查韦斯一时心血来潮,还有人干脆说他疯了。“我不介意别人说我发疯了,新时制将实行下去。”这位总统在电视节目上说,“这半个小时,就可以让孩子们能够在天亮以后起床,而不是在日出之前就得爬起来去上学了。”

【分析】 “异想天开”与“心血来潮”中,蕴涵的却是对童真的呵护,折射出的却是一种独特的领导气质。

【适用话题】 关爱孩子、以人为本、开拓创新、领导者的风范……

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