第一部分 小作文 信件(邮件)
小作文信件共10种题材:
1、邀请信(2013)2、感谢信(2010)
3、建议信(2011) 4、投诉信(2012)
5、求职信 6、推荐信7、辞职信8、询问信 9、请求信
10、道歉信
★辞职信最简单可以提前准备好模板,考的可能性较小,可以熟悉; 小作文准备重点:求职信、推荐信/申请信/道歉信
(一)道歉信★★★
Dear Qin,
I am writing the letter for the purpose of offering my sincere apology for you.
You know, as one of my best friends, it is impossible for me not to give you an invitation , I did list you as one of the guest who should come to congratulate my birthday. It purely happened by chance, as I should go slipping for the party, I asked my sister to give everyone of you a phone call to come, but she was not familiar with you and mistook you for another person whose name was similar to yours.
Please accept my heartfelt apology, I hope to obtain your forgiveness for my careless.
Yours truly,
Zhang Wei
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(二)申请信★★★
Dear Sir or madam,
My name is Zhang Wei , a teacher currently working in a high school. I am writing the letter for the purpose of applying for the 2000 yuan worth of fund in an effort to initiate a program aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged.
It would be highly appreciated if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor. The following is how we will go about using the money. We intend to spend 1,500 yuan purchasing some stationery for those needy students in the school. The rest of the fund would be used to award a model student, who will give a speech as a motivational speaker, talking about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions.
Modest as our efforts may sound, we believe they will warm some hearts. We could be much obliged if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely
Zhang Wei
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(三)求职信★★
复旦MBA院校刚刚毕业,求BIZ manager 工作---无经验类型 第一步:定位-----求职信
第二步:归纳要求----1.求工作 2. 原因 3. 面试机会
第三步:模具对号入座 1.开门见山就说事-----求工作
2.打拳---------------------过度句
3.肥肉(2个万能句)----录用原因
4.结束语------------------给面试
Dear Madam/Sir,
I am writing to apply for a position of the business manager in your company. I am pretty sure when it comes to management work, I am your best candidate.
As you can see from my resume, during the past 3 years, my top priority has been given to learn management theories, which makes it easier for me to cope with major challenges in work as a team leader. So I have confidence that such overall and systematic learning is likely to contribute to my good performance in management position.
I hold an expectation that you will offer me an opportunity for interview. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Zhangwei
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(四)推荐信(有工作经验者) ★★
Dear Madam/Sir,
I am writing the letter in the purpose of recommending to you Lilei one of my best friends, She is seeking employment as an English teacher in your school.
As far as I know, her qualifications just amply meet your requirement. For one thing, her previous working experience as a middle school teacher has laid a solid foundation for the work here. For another, she is a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn. Accordingly, I am certain that she deserves your consideration.
Thank you for your due attention to this letter, I genuinely hope you could schedule an interview with her at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely,
Zhangwei
推荐信(应届生)
Dear Madam/Sir,
I am writing the letter in the purpose of recommending to you Lilei one of my best friends, She is seeking employment as an English teacher in your school.
As far as I know, her qualifications just amply meet your requirement. For one thing, with her outstanding leadership and cheerful personality, she was elected chairperson of the Student Union of her University several times. Busy as she is, she completed her major
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with an outstanding school record. For another, she is a good team player, self-motivated and eager to learn. Accordingly, I am certain that she deserves your consideration.
Thank you for your due attention to this letter, I genuinely hope you could schedule an interview with her at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely,
Zhangwei
(五)辞职信★
My dear boss,
I am writing to apologize that I will have to quit the job. I firmly believe that when we worked together in the past few years, I really had a wonderful time.
As you know, when I get older, my happiness depends in large measure on the family. So I strongly feel that my top priority should be given to take care of the family, which makes it more likely for me to be a good wife and mother.
I hold an expectation that you will approve of my decision. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Zhangwei
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(六)20xx年中美文化交流项目感谢信
第一步:定位-----感谢信
第二步:归纳要求----1.感谢 2. 邀请
第三步:模具对号入座 1.开门见山就说事-----感谢
2.打拳---夸项目,为彼此骄傲/ 或回顾很开心
3.肥肉(2个万能句)--沟通促成交流
4.结束语------------------邀请来中国玩 My dear friends,
I am writing to express my sincere thanks for your warm reception, when I joined the Sino-American cultural exchange program. which makes the journey in US impressive and pleasant. (善于利用前提). As is known to all, this program enjoys great popularity and reputation all over the world, so I am proud we can become a part of it.
肥肉万能句:沟通促成交流
It is believed by many people that communication between China and America is a significant cause of cultural development. So I strongly feel that when I return home, the top priority should be given to bring the best part of your culture to our land, which makes it easier for Chinese people to understand the western world.
I hold an expectation that you will pay a visit to China soon. I am looking forward to seeing you.
Yours Sincerely,
Zhangwei
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(七)2011表弟考上复旦大学的恭喜信:
第一步:定位-----恭喜信
第二步:归纳要求----1.建议 2. 指导
第三步:模具对号入座 1.开门见山就说事-----恭喜
2.打拳---夸复旦,为其骄傲
3.肥肉(2个万能句)--建议努力学习
4.结束语------------------祝福
Dear Liming,
I am very happy to learn that you will go to FD University/you have been admitted by FD University/you have gained admission to FD University/you have enrolled by FD University.
As is known to all, FD University enjoys great popularity and reputation all over the world, so I am proud that you become a part of it.
It is believed that ones success depends the large measure on hard work and dedication, so I do suggest that your top priority should be given to learn useful and helpful knowledge in college, which makes it easier for you to step into the workplace, become an excellent candidate after graduation.
I hold an expectation that you will have bright future/you will have a good prospect in the future.
Yours Sincerely,
Zhangwei
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第二部分 大作文
第一类:数据图表分析题
20xx年大作文--看图表:某高校大学生兼职情况 p184 第一段:数据图表引子: 图表类的引子万能句)college students’ participation in part-time jobs .,part-time jobs for seniors, who are going to graduate. 88.24% of them are engaged in internship before they start to work. 最高明之处在于换词,这三句话怎么不重复--- 参加兼职工作。
第二段核心:8个字变80个字
原因: 1.获得经验 2. 提升自我价值
提问:What accounts for the fact that students in the last year of college are the most likely to spend time in part- time jobs = seniors enjoy the highest percentage of participation in part- time jobs? 8
过渡:As far as I am concerned, there are 2 reasons, contributing to 获得经验 2. 提升自我价值 students are involved in part-time jobs after school. (被动句式)
固定补充句:As we know, such experience plays a crucial role in boosting the job opportunity after graduation.
students are able to improve their value, when they work as an intern and have access to experience in workplace.
固定补充句:As a result, it makes seniors more likely to acquire a decent job after they leave school.
第三段:总结趋势
引子:As described in the chart, we can see that dramatic work satisfaction among employees with a wide range of ages none of people in their 40s show happiness to what they do in office, workers aged less than 40 get pleasures
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from their jobs. more than50 take the greatest delight from what they work on. with the current duties.
第二段What accounts for the fundamental differences? As far as a sense of financial security has been established by people over 50, working efficiency and satisfaction.
such a group of workers are faced up with less pressurethey are more experienced in handling duties the decline of pressure to happiness in work. 大作文总思想 三段论:
1.引子(一共只有三种引子)只有引子有区别 其它相似 2观点+2个原因
3.总结
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第二类 正反观点(硬币原理)
2009 手机短信 好还是坏 话题
本文话题:It is known that text message has both advantages and disadvantages. Some people think that it is a blessing, while others regard it as a hell.
要求:选一个立场
给出原因
本文思路:硬币原理 一定要选好的一面
1.引子:现在有热门的争议---一部人觉得手机短信坏,然而越来越多的人觉得好
2.观点:而我也觉得好
两原因:第一增进沟通 促进关系 增强友谊 promote/boost/increase/strengthen/enhance/further第二 了解外面信息(天气预报和新闻)
3.总结:手机短信 好
正文:
1.引子 whether text messages enjoy advantages in our life and work. 人认为坏,另外一些人认为好: Some people think that it is
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contact via text messages,
2 观点 :我认为好
our life.
过渡句:There are at least 2 important factors, leading to my friendship and communication will be promoted messages for best wishes,care and greeting by phone.(if A,B句型) 补充: As we all know, they play a crucial important role in tackling and boosting relationship.
know what is happening in the world, they can read weather report and news service by phone. they our life more colorful and convenient.
3.总结:modern and innovative world.
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第三类.现象分析(坏现象原理)
大作文---------毒奶粉问题
作文话题(泰祺最新模拟卷):一段时间以来,"毒奶粉"、"毒龙虾"等严重食品质量问题层出不穷,在广大消费者中引起巨大反响,很多人开始自问:我们吃的食品中,还有什么东西是安全的?
请对此现象说说你的看法,给出你的建议。
本文的思路:1.引子(把话题整合成自己会的语言 翻译一下)无非两个点:
一是毒奶粉(坏东西)进入市场
二是人们担忧
2.观点+两个原因(为什么导致? 1是什么 2 是什么)
3.总结(给出建议)
1.本文的引子是: 一个现象 导致人们担忧
2.观点: 什么导致食品安全问题???
两个原因: 动名和名词的搭配要会说 比如制定法律 缺乏诚信 忽略质量
a. 政府无颁布好的食品安全法(提供offer/ provide 拥有have 出台issue/release 颁布 制定 建立establish make/ set up实施impose通过pass引进 introduce)
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b商家缺乏诚信意识lack integrity/honesty 忽略产品质量forget /neglect /ignore不重视质量pay little attention to/ put little emphasis on 低估质量 underestimate 不建立/提升/加强-----责任意识 strengthen/boost/enhance/promote/increase----
responsibility
c.公众 无建立 健康意识 the public fails to set up a sense of health.
3.总结:给出建议(谁应该怎么做)
1引子: 现象------Nowadays there is a phenomenon that (现象类引子的万能句)poor quality food, which is likely to put a negative and unfavorable impact on people’s health,is flooding into the market. Therefore (逻辑词), an increasing number of people worry that(一定要头开起来) such food will enjoy/bring great disadvantages on our life/to the modern market. (替代bad这样的儿童语言)
两句话搞定引子
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2.观点: What accounts for the growing unhealthy food=What accounts for the fact that unhealthy food has been delivered into market? (此处不讲poor quality food改成unhealthy food-----一定要学会不断换词)? 什么导致问题????此处问题=越来越多的有毒食物
我认为: As far as I am concerned, there are at least two important reasons, leading to such a phenomenon..
First of all, it is acknowledged that(别忘记开头)a stricter food law has been not introduced by the government(记得:第一个原因被动句引入),so producers are not afraid to deliver bad food to the market..
原因讲完 再补充一句话 请用熟悉而简单的语言:As we all know,(头开起来) regulations/rules play a crucial important role in improving the business/market. Secondly, research has shown that some manufacturers fail to establish a sense of social responsibility and integrity when they make food.
补充一句:As a result, their acts and behaviors make the market worse and worse.
3.总结:To sum up, I suggest that government should impose实施better rules and producers should create a new responsibility deal(交易/合同)with business.
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笔记:
一、作文的五种开头:
1. I am sorry to say/tell that
I am happy to learn that
2. As is known to all
3. it is believed/assumed/said/ acknowledged by many people that
4. I come to realize that
I am firmly convinced that
As far as I am concerned that
In the eyes of most people
5. Everyone in biz has been told that
二、五个表示“好”的句子(表示“坏”)
1.A is likely to put a positive and profound impact on B. (negative and unfavorable)
2.A enjoys great advantages in all means of our life/in the modern market.(disadvantages)
3.A plays an increasingly important role in B/doing B. (negative)
4.A may benefit us all of our lives.终身受益 (will not)
5.备胎:A makes our life more colorful and convenient. (worse and worse)
三、常用形容词扩展句
1. be popular/be famous: enjoy great popularity an reputation all over the world.
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2. be cheap: enjoy a low price
3.be important: play a crucial role in the modern market
4. may: be likely to
should: be supposed to
can: be able to
四、因果关系万能句
1. A depend in large measure on B
Success depends in large measure on hard work/dedication/diligence/greet efforts.
2. A give rise to B
Lack of communication may give rise to social conflict.
3. A is a significant cause of B
The low price.good quality and superior service are a significant cause of the popularity of domestic cars in the modern market.
4. A is supposed to contribute to B
Lack of environmental conservation awareness is supposed to contribute to global warming.
五、数据图表常用词汇
1、增加、提高、上升等
动词:go up\climb\rise
名词:increase
词组:gain a momentum \on the rise\increase as cendence
2.剧增、猛增
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动词:soar\rocket
名词:jump
词组:shoot up
3.下降、减少
动词:decrease\shrink\decline\ \drop
名词:decrease\shrink
词组:fall down\go down\on the decline
4.暴跌
动词:slump\名词:slump
5.显著地、飞快的
dramatically\greatly\sharply\significant
6.缓慢的、柔和的
Slowly\slightly\steadily\in a moderate way\remain stable
7.波动
动词:fluctuate 名词:fluctuation
8.最高:Top peak\summic、最低:bottom
六、其他
大一freshman\大二sophomore\大三junior\大四senior
一月 Jan. January \二月 Feb. February \三月 March Mar. \四月 Apr. April \五月 May \六月 Jun June \七月 Jul. July Jy. \八月 August Aug \九月 Sep Sept. September \十月 Oct. October \十一月 Nov. November \十二月 Dec December
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