中考英语作文英语作文模板：图表作文的框架

as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in　the　table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),

　　significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______

　　 to ______ in _____。 From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it

　　goes without saying that ________。

　　　　There　are　at　least　two　good　reasons accounting for ______。

　　On　the　one　hand, ________。 On　the　other　hand,　_______ is　

　　due　to　the　fact　that ________。　In　addition, ________ is　

　　responsible　for _______。　Maybe　there　are　some　other　reasons　

　　to　show ________。　But　it　is　generally　believed　that　the　above　mentioned　reasons　are　commonly convincing。

　　　　As　far　as　I　am　concerned,　I hold the point of view that _______。

　　I　am　sure　my　opinion　is　both　sound　and　well-grounded。

图表作文（讲解图表，结合实际，总结观点）

海淀：

十、文段表达（共15分）

根据中文提示和图表内容，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的文段。文段的开头已给出，其词数不计入所完成的文段内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

75. 现在的中学生每月都有一定数量的零花钱。某校对九年级（1）班的30名学生进行了零花钱用途的调查。结果如下：有的同学常买零食或书籍，有的同学把钱花在手机或其他方面，也有的同学把零花钱存了起来。请你任选图表中的2至3项简述调查结果，谈谈你是如何支配零花钱的，并说明理由。

               

Nowadays, most middle school students have pocket money every month, and we did a survey in Class 1, Grade 9.

海淀答案：

十、文段表达（共15分）

One possible version:

Nowadays, most middle school students have pocket money every month, and we did a survey in Class 1, Grade 9.

As the result shows, among the thirty students taking part in the survey, most of them often buy snacks; about a half spend their pocket money on books, and a few save some of it. [樊1] 

However, things on me are quite different.[樊2]  I usually spend most of the money buying good and educational books which I think make me more knowledgeable. Only a small part is spent on snacks as most of the snacks are in fact unhealthy for us. And I save the rest against a rainy day.

    It is true that we have more and more pocket money now and we must make good use of it because it is influencing the way we are growing up.[樊3]     

词汇注解：result n. 结果                          survey n. 调查                                snack n. 零食

              save v. 节省                            educational a. 教育的                    in fact 事实上

knowledgeable a. 有知识的   as 因为

      And I save the rest against a rainy day. 并且，我省下余下的钱，以备急用。

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说明图表中的调查结果

过渡句，承上启下，下文写自己如何使用零花钱。

结尾处进行总结，说明重要性，照应开头。

第二篇：中考英语作文范例全系列范文(书信,记述文,说明文,议论文等)

中考英语作文范例 You are one of the fans of Yao Ming. Please write a letter to him.

题目：假设你是姚明的球迷，试着给他写封信。

参考作文

Dear Yao Ming,

亲爱的姚明：

How are you these days?

你最近好吗？

You are a bit surprised to get this letter. You don't know me but I know you. I am your fan. I have collected lots of information about you. When you left Shanghai, I felt a little sad. I've been missing you all the time. But NBA is really a good place for a wonderful basketball player like you. You've made the right choice.

收到这封信你一定觉得很惊讶。你不认识我，但我知道你。我是你的球迷，我收集了你的很多信息。当你离开上海时，我有点儿难过。我很想念你。不过对于一个优秀篮球运动员来说，NBA确实是个很棒的地方，你的选择很正确。

How about your wound? Do you still feel pain? Take good care of yourself and I do hope to see you win each match in the coming year.

你的伤怎么样了？是不是还很痛？好好照顾自己，希望你来年能赢得每一场比赛。

Yours

你的

Weiwei

You are writing a complaint to the manager about the hotel.

题目：你向饭店经理写信投诉酒店服务。

(以e-mail的形式出现)

On the whole, my stay here was satisfactory. The hotel was comfortable and the room was bright, but it was too dirty. What's more the food was compeletely awful and the service was really terrible. I have stayed in your hotel for several times and everything is getting worse, though the price is fair.

总体而言，我在这边住得比较满意。酒店很舒服，房间也很明亮，但是太脏了。另外，这儿的食物太糟糕了，服务也很差。我已经在这里住过好几次了，虽然价钱还不错，但每件事都越来越糟糕。 1

Please try to clean the room a bit more often and find someone who is capable of cooking and who knows how to talk friendly to others.

请时常打扫一下房间，找个真正懂烹饪的和懂得跟别人和睦相处的员工！

题目：请根据以下提示写一篇不少于60单词的文章。

An Accident

1 四个孩子刚出校门回家

2 一卡车经过，车速较快，掉下几只西瓜

3 一骑车人倒下，身边有血

4 孩子们有的打110，有的打120，有的保护现场

5 他们向警察陈述经过，救护车把伤者送医院

参考作文

Last Thursday afternoon, four students were on their way back home.

上周四下午，四个学生正在他们放学回家的路上。

Suddenly they saw a truck coming round the corner at a high speed and

somewatermelons fell off. At the same time, a middle-aged man on a bicycle fell to the ground. Blood came from his body.

突然，他们看到一辆卡车从拐角处快速地开过来，几个西瓜从上面掉下来。同时，一个骑车的中年男子摔倒在地，身上流血。

One of them called the policeman, one dailed 120. And the others were taking care of thecyclist. Soon the police came and they reported what they had seen and

an ambulancetook the cyclist to the hospital soon.

他们当中其中一人拨打电话报警，另外一人打120，剩下的两人则照顾伤者。不一会儿，警察来了，他们向警察报告了事情的经过，然后救护车把伤者送进了医院。

题目：请以“Changes in Shanghai"为题，写一篇不少于60单词的作文。

Changes in Shanghai

1 300年前的上海

2 上海的今天（东方明珠、金茂大厦）

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3 上海的明天（20xx年的世博会）

参考作文

Shanghai was a small town three hundred years ago. There were only a few thousand people living here. Many of them were fishermen and farmers.

300年前，上海只是个小镇，只有几千人居住在这里，其中很多人是渔民和农民。

Today, Shanghai is becoming an international city. Many tall building have been built. Some bridges have been put up over the Huangpu River. More and more foreigners come to Shanghai for a visit every day.

今天，上海已变成一座国际大都市，并建成了很多高楼大厦。黄浦江上架起了很多桥梁。每天都有越来越多的外国人前来旅游。

Shanghai has already won the bid for holding the World Expo 2010. I think the

environment will be better and better and the city will be more and more beautiful. 上海已经取得了20xx年世博会的举办权，我相信上海的环境会越来越好，并且越来越美丽。

点评：虽然20xx年世博会已经结束，但关于城市发展的话题依然热烈，除了上海，像广州、北京、深圳等大城市也有可能是考试的热点。

题目：请根据以下提示写一篇文章，不少于60单词。

Growing Pains and Gains

1 一个戴深度近视眼镜的女孩面对一大堆的作业。

2 一个小女孩在弹钢琴，母亲站在旁边拿着尺。

3 小女孩和许多人在开生日晚会，脸上露出微笑。

4 小女孩孜孜不倦地在看书。

I think I have a happy life, though I cannot do the things I like. For example, I like reading different books in my spare time, especially some detective stories. But my mum always asks me to practise playing the piano one hour every day. That's boring. 我觉得自己生活得很快乐，虽然我不能做自己喜欢的事情。比如说我喜欢在课外阅读不同的书籍，尤其是侦探类故事。但我妈妈总是让我每天练习一小时钢琴。这很无趣。

I like having parties with my friends during the holidays. But I have to do lots of

homeworks. Teachers always give us more homework when we have holidays. That's my growing pains and gains.

我喜欢在节假日和朋友聚会，但我总是有做不完的作业。我们老师总是在节假日来临的时候布置很多作业。这是我成长中的代价和收获。

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题目：请以“Everyone Needs Help”为题，写一篇不少于60单词的作文。

Everyone Needs Help

1 Did you get any help from others?

2 Did you give any help to people when they needed?

3 Tell your story

参考作文

In our daily life, we are dealing with different kinds of people, no matter at home, in school, or at some other places. Everyone needs help, I think. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.

在我们的日常生活中我们会遇到各种各样的人，无论是在家里、学校，还是在其他地方，我觉得我们都需要帮助。并且只有那些愿意帮助他人的人会获得别人的帮助。

One day I saw a little girl in the street carrying a heavy schoolbag on her back. She was walking happily.

一天，我在街上看到一个背着沉重书包的小女孩，她正开心地走着。

Then suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street. She ran towards him at once, but she was too short to help him to stand. I helped her and we together

brought the old man to safety. He thanked us over and over. I think the little girl was, though very young, a very warm-hearted person.

突然，一位老人在穿过街道时摔倒了。她迅速地奔向老人，但是她太矮了，没法把老人扶起来。我过去帮助她把老人扶到安全地带。老人一再感谢我们。我觉得这个小女孩虽然年轻，但是一个很热心肠的人。

题目：请以“Saving Water”为题，并根据以下提示写一篇不少于60单词的作文。

Saving Water

1 What do we use water for?

2 Why water is very important in our daily life?

3 How do we save water?

参考范文

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As we all know, water is essential in our daily life. We drink water every day, we use water to wash things and cook food, we also use water to make machines. People can't live without water.

我们都知道水对于日常生活的重要性。我们每天喝水，用水洗东西和烹制食物，我们还用水来制造机器。离开水，人类就无法存活。

Though about 75% of the earth is covered with water, only 3% of it is fresh water. So we must save water by having a shower instead of a bath. We can save water

by fixingdripping taps immediately and we can also save water by not washing under a runningtap.

虽然地球75%都被水覆盖，但其中只有3%是淡水。所以我们应该用淋浴代替泡澡来节约水，同时及时修好滴水的水龙头，并且不要开着水龙头洗东西。

题目：请根据下面的题目和提示信息写一篇不少于60单词的作文。

Leaving School

1 Old school life

2 Teacher(s) and schoolmate(s)

3 Future plan

参考作文 I don't want to leave school, because my old school life was full of fun and I had many good friends in my old school.

我不想毕业，因为我的校园生活丰富多彩，我在学校有很多好朋友。

We used to share our lunch together. We used to play ball games together. We often did some surveys during the holiday. All of my teachers and schoolmates are very friendly and helpful. Now I have to leave school, I hope I will keep in touch with them and my new school life will be more enjoyable.

我们曾一起共享午餐，也曾一起做球类运动，我们还经常在假日里一起做调查。所有的老师和同学都很友善，并给予帮助。现在我即将毕业，我希望能和他们保持联系，也希望新的学校生活能更加有趣。

假如你陪你校的外籍教师Smith先生去音乐厅听音乐，在门口的布告栏里看见一张观众须知，内容如下：

观众须知

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1、一人一票，凭票入场；

2、场内严禁吸烟；

3、食品和饮料请勿带进场内；

4、演出时请勿照相；

5、演出时请勿使用传呼机和移动电话；

6、提前30分钟入场。

Smith先生不懂中文，他很想知道布告栏里写着什么。现在，请你把观众须知的内容用英语告诉Smith先生，并把要讲的话写出来。

Mr. Smith, it is a notice to the audience. It says that we should enter the concert hall 30 minutes earlier before the concert starts. Entrance to the hall is by ticket only, each one each ticket.

史密斯先生，这是一则观众须知。上面说我们应该在音乐会开始前30分钟入场，每人凭票进入。 As a rule, food or drink should not be taken into the hall. Of course, smoking is not allowed in the hall either.

按照规定，食品和饮料不得带进场内，吸烟也是不允许的。

Please don't bring your digital camera with you because no photos can be taken during the concert. And what is more, beepers and mobile phones must be off during the concert.

请不要携带数码相机入内，因为场内严禁拍照。另外，音乐会期间，传呼机和手机必须关闭。

点评：文章的用词和句式有一定的难度，特别是关联词的运用，如of course，as a rule，and what is more使文章读起来朗朗上口，层层紧扣，环环递进，体现了作者较高的写作技巧和水平。

这是04年某省的中考题目：根据美国朋友Bob来信的内容写一篇英文回信。

Dear friend,

亲爱的朋友，

Hello, I'm your new friend. My name is Bob. I'm fifteen. I'm American. I live in New York. 你好，我是你的新朋友。我的名字叫鲍勃，我十五岁，是美国人，我住在纽约。

I am a middle school student. I'm good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like music. My friend and I often sing pop songs together.

我是一个初中生，我擅长数学，它很有趣。我最喜欢的运动是篮球，我不仅仅是一个篮球迷，也是一个很好的选手。我喜欢音乐，我经常跟我的朋友一起唱流行歌曲。

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After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I am learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day.

放学之后，我喜欢上网，通过网络，我了解了很多关于中国的事情，现在我在学汉语，我希望有一天能去你的国家游览。

Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

请给我回信说说你的生活吧，我期待着你的来信。

Yours,

你的，

Bob

鲍勃

点评：仔细审题，了解Bob想知道你哪方面的情况，要有针对性地回信，注意写回信的格式。

题目：请向你未见面的笔友写一封自我介绍信，字数不少于60单词。

Dear Bob,

亲爱的鲍勃，

Yesterday I heard from you. I am very glad to be your pen friend. My name is Peter Zhang. I am sixteen years old. I live in...

昨天我收到了你的来信，我很高兴成为你的笔友。我的名字叫张彼德。我今年十六岁，我住在...... I am a middle school student, too. I like English and maths very much. I also like sports. I am good at singing. I know a little about America. Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter?

我也是一名中学生，我非常喜欢英语和数学。我还喜欢体育运动，我很擅长唱歌。我对美国的了解不多，下次来信时能多跟我聊聊你们国家的事吗？

Please write to me soon.

期待着你的来信。

Yours

你的

Peter Zhang

张彼德

点评：回信简洁明了，句子间的衔接自然、紧凑，文中作者把自己的情况大致向美国朋友作了介绍，达到了回信的目的。

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题目：请以”It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment”为题，写一篇不少于60单词的作文。

It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment

保护环境是我们的义务

It's our duty to protect our environment. Where do we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is.

保护环境是我们的义务。我们居住在哪里？地球。地球是我们唯一居住的地方，所以可想而知环境对于我们的重要性。

But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. It's terrible if we still do it.

但是现在，很多人都在破坏环境，比如砍伐树木，在公共墙壁上乱涂乱画，随地扔垃圾。如果我们继续这样下去是非常可怕的。

Now, it's time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. It's our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful.

现在，是人们保护环境的时候了，这是我们的义务，我们都要为改善环境做贡献，我们应该努力让我们的环境变得更好。

点评：作者多用学过的词语，不但保证了正确，还巩固了所学的知识，并且注意句型的多样化，如长句、短句、疑问句，使用了“if，so，now，but”等词，整篇文章读起来朗朗上口。实际上，写文章就像串珠子，连接词就在于把一个个单词串起来。

议论文常用的句型有：

1、论点：

Computer is important.

We must learn English well.

It's very important for us to...

In my opinion...

2、论证过程常用一些衔接词可使文章读起来流畅、紧凑。如：

Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Lastly, ... Above all, ... 等。

3、结尾强调观点，最好用不同的句型来表达相同的观点，如：

So we must...

So it's very important for us to...

I believe...

We should...

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题目：请以"Why Are Trees Important"为题，写一篇不少于60单词的作文。

Why Are Trees Important

树为什么重要

Trees are very important to us. Do you know why? Let me tell you.

树对于我们非常重要，你知道为什么吗？让我来告诉你吧。

Trees take in carbon dioxide from the air and make oxygen. That's important. People and animals need oxygen to live. Many small animals and inserts live in the trees. Some of them also get food from trees. Trees can also stop water and soil from going away. If we have a lot of trees, we stop deserts from being large. I think this is very important. You know, trees are green. They can make our country even more beautuful.

树木可以吸收二氧化碳，并释放氧气，这非常重要。人类和动物需要依靠氧气生存。很多小动物和昆虫居住在树里，有些从树里获取食物。树木还可以防止水土流失。如果我们有很多树就可以阻止沙漠扩大。我认为这非常重要。众所周知，树是绿色的，它们能使我们的国家更加美丽。

Trees are our good friends. We should plant more trees and take good care of them. 树是我们的好朋友。我们应该种更多的树，并好好照料它们。

点评：文章先阐明观点，接着论证，最后重申自己的观点。

说明文是就某一件事说明清楚，一般总是以空间顺序展开的，可以自上而下，自左而右，从里到外，从整体到局部等等。写物的文章常用“某处有某物”的句子表示物的存在。

常用的句型如：

There be...

I have got a/ an...

It is red/ green/ colour/ round...

I like... best.

It looks like...

I like it very much.

I will keep it forever.

题目：请以“Our Language Lab”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。

Our Language Lab

我们的语音室

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There is a language lab in our school. It's on the third floor. It's big and clean. 我们学校有一个语音室，它位于三楼，大而整洁。

There are 50 desks and 50 chairs in it. There are 50 computers and a control desk in it. There are 50 headphones on the desk.

语音室里有50张桌椅，50台电脑和一个操纵台，桌子上还放着50副耳机。

Every week we have our English lessons here. We watch slides, TV, video and listen to tapes. Then the teacher asks us questions. We like our language lab and always keep it clean and tidy.

我们每周都会在这儿上英语课，我们在这里看幻灯片，电视，视频和听磁带。然后老师会向我们提问。我们很喜欢这个语音室，并且总是保持它的干净整洁。

点评：这篇文章写了"我们的语音室",按照一定的空间顺序，先写设备，再写功能，让人对语音室的概貌有一个全面，准确的了解。

题目：请以“Hot spring Let Me Have A Rest”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。 Hot spring Let Me Have A Rest

温泉让我得到休息

We took off our coats and ran quickly into the lemon spring. When I first put my feet into the water. I cried out, "Wow, it is hot!" I didn't know the water was so hot, and I was a little afraid that it would burn me...So I walked carefully into the spring. One step,two... I felt the heat slowly climbing up my body.

我们脱下外套，快速奔向柠檬泉，当我第一次把脚伸进水中时，我大声喊道：“哇，水是热的！”我一开始不知道水如此热，所以我有点儿担心会被热水烫到。于是，我小心翼翼地走进温泉，一步，两步......我能感觉到热量慢慢地进入我的身体。

点评：要写出生动有趣的事，除了把事情的来龙去脉说清楚，还一定要注意增加文章的细节，这是必不可少的，丰富的细节描写能为你的文章增色不少，使人读起来具有一种身临其境的感觉。另外，本篇时态运用十分得当，整篇文章的动词过去时一脉相承。

请以“Our Class Meeting”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。

Our Class Meeting

我们的班会

Last Friday afternoon we had our last class meeting in our classroom. All the students and our class teacher took part in it.

上周五下午，我们在教室举行了最后一次班会。班上的所有同学和班主任都参加了。

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We held a warm discussion about our future life. Each of us spoke at the meetingactively. After the discussion, we all decided to study hard so as to make our life better and better.

我们热烈讨论了今后的生活，每个人都在会上积极发言。讨论完后我们都下定决心好好学习，让我们的生活更加美好。

点评：这篇文章条理清楚，记叙完整，短短的五句话有简单句，也有复合句，交代了时间、地点、人物、原因、经过、结果六要素。

常用的叙事句型有：

It took place/ happened...

Last week/ year/ Monday/ Tuesday...

One Friday morning...

题目：请以“My Class Teacher”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。

My Class Teacher

我的班主任

My class teacher is Mr. Wang. He is strict but kind. He has taught us Chinese for two years.

我的班主任是王老师，他是一个要求严格而亲切的老师。他已经教了我们两年语文。

He always tells us to study hard but not all the time. Sometimes he plays with us. He says, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." I think he is a good class teacher. 他总是告诉我们要好好学习，但不是时时刻刻学习。有时他会和我们一起玩。他说：“只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。” 我觉得他是个很好的班主任。

点评：这篇文章取材的是身边熟悉的人，作者也有东西可写，更具有可读性。另外，写人时把主语稍作调整，读起来轻松多了。

I am a 15-year-old girl. My name is [ename]Cherry[/ename]. Now I am studying in the middle school. I want to be an actress because I think it is a funny and exciting job... 写人的常见句式如：

This is my friend, Mary.

She is... years old.

She is a teacher/ an artist/ a singer...

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She/ He gets up at 6/5... / early/ late.

She/ He has sports at school.

She/ He likes...

She/ He is strong/ fat/ slim/ kind/ thin/...

She/ He looks like...

She/ He is good at English/ maths/ Chinese/ physics...

请以“My Best Friend"为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。

My Best Friend

我最好的朋友

My best friend is one of my classmates. Her name is Mary. Every day, we go to school together and go back home together. We often help each other and learn from each other in study.

我最好的朋友是我的一个同班同学，她的名字叫玛丽。我们每天一起上学，一起回家。我们经常互相帮助，并向对方学习。

We have the same hobby-collecting stamps. She has many nice stamps. She is very proud of them. Sometimes she gives some of them to me. I think she is a very good girl. We will be good friends forever.

我们有着相同的爱好——集邮。她有很多漂亮的邮票，并为此十分自豪。有时，她会把其中的一些邮票给我。我认为她是个非常好的女孩。我们会成为永远的朋友。

点评：这是一篇记人的叙述文。先交代了My Best Friend是谁，接着通过事例交代了为什么“我们是最好的朋友”。最后阐述了主题。

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