高考英语满分作文

1、表达观点类

    在英语课堂上，你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语，还是英语、汉语兼用？某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题，参考所给要点，选择一种授课形式，写一篇英语短文。

授课形式一：只用英语
　　优点：有助于提高听说能力等
　　缺憾：不易听懂等
　　结论：……

授课形式二：英语、汉语兼用
　　优点：易于理解等
　　缺憾：英语氛围不浓等
　　结论：……

注意：1.词数 100~120，短文开头已给出(不计词数)。
       2.参考词汇：atmosphere 氛围
                   I prefer my English classes to be taught in...

满分文(一)

　　I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.

　　However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.

　　Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.

满分文(二)

　　I prefer my English classes to be taught only in English because it is helpful for us to improve the ability of speaking and listening in a very short time. I have strong interest in English study and foreign culture, so I’d like to be totally immersed in the atmosphere of English so that I can quickly make progress. That’s why I prefer total English. However, since we are all English beginners, it’s really hard to understand all that the teacher says. Sometimes we need Chinese explanation. So my viewpoint is that we are taught not only in English but also using Chinese as a minor way to explain things that are hard to understand.

练习篇目：

请根据下列内容，在你校英语校刊上发表一篇稿件。

    1、目前中国西南部发生严重干旱。

    2、学生会将于5月6日中午12：30在餐厅门口举行用自己的零花钱为受灾地区孩子买水的活动。

       3、希望全校同学从我做起，节约水资源。

       参考词汇：干旱drought

       注意：词数不少于60。

2、演讲稿

假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛，本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者，你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。（2009·天津）

1. 说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；

2. 说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等；

3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。

注意： 1. 词数：不少于100词；2. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。

范文背诵：

Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen,

   Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. In order to improve the abilities of both English speaking and listening, we continue to hold the English speech competition. I believe it will be of great help to form the good habit of reading, too.

There are some important points every speaker should be aware of. Please listen to me carefully. First of all, the speech must be finished within five minutes. Second, you should speak fluent English. At last, everyone should pronounce correctly. We expect to hear the fluent expression and standard pronunciation.

  Finally, I’d like to wish the competition a great success and I hope every competitor can perform at your best!

Thank you!

练习篇目：

假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：

　　l 表示赞成。   　　l 提出你喜欢的栏目。     　　l 简要说明理由。

　　注意：　　1. 词数100左右。　　              2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。　　

              3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。　　4. 参考栏目：栏目—column

　

（3）利弊分析类

假设你班最近就圆明园是否重建开展了一场讨论，同学们观点有分歧，各自理由主要如下表所示，请根据表格提供的讨论情况写一篇英文报道。

注意：1．词数：150左右  2．标题、开头已经写好，不计入词数。3. 要自拟结论。

参考词汇：故宫the Palace Museum;  颐和园the Summer Palace

Should Yuanmingyuan Be Rebuilt?

Yuanmingyuan, “Garden of all gardens”, was burnt and fell into ruins in 1860．  Recently my classmates had a discussion about whether it should be rebuilt or not.

Supporters of rebuilding the garden say only by doing so can we see the original sight of the garden, which reflects the Chinese civilization（文明）. And it will be another place of interest for tourists. If partly rebuilt, it will provide a comparison and help us remember the history.

Those who disagree think it more reasonable（合情合理） to keep the garden like this. The ruins will remind us of the past. We should never forget the history. Other buildings like Palace Museum and Summer Palace can also be symbols of the Chinese culture, so it isn’t necessary to rebuild this garden. Some also worry that the environment will be destroyed when the construction goes on in this district.

Personally, it is advisable to rebuild Yuanmingyuan , which will add beauty to the city . What’s more , the new scenic spot will no doubt promote the economic development of the local.

练习篇目：

你叫李华。最近，你们班同学就“地球一小时”活动展开了一场热烈盼讨论。下表是这次讨论的结果。请你用英语给《中学英语报》主编写一封信，介绍你们班的讨论结果并阐明你自己的观点。

注意：1．字数120左右；

2．开头结尾已给出，不计人总词数。

参考词汇：做秀一show

不便一inconvenience

Dear Editor，

Last week our class had a heated discussion on Earth Hour．

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书信类（6）

假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.教中国朋友。注意：次数100左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

June 8, 2008

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.

Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try and write me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes

Li Hua

练习篇目

小明准备到外企求职，必须具备一定的英语水平。请发e-mail 告知他学英语的方法。

提示：1 养成良好的学习习惯（如…. ）

2多看英语电视和电影；扩大词汇量（enlarge your vocabulary）；

3 要有自信；多讲，多用，不要怕出错。（have confidence in yourself）

注意：1 词数为100左右；

2 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）；

3 以第一人称写。

Dear Li Hua,

I’m glad to offer you some advice.

第二篇：【教你写好高考英语作文】详细讲解 + 分类 + 提供例子积累 + 划出重点句+……

【如何 写好 高考 英语 作文】

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基本类型:

记叙文---- 写事记叙文、 写人的记叙文

议论文---- 对比观点议论文、说明利弊议论文

说明文---- 事理类说明文、事物类说明文

应用文---- 书信、通知、日记、海报、便条、启事、欢迎词、欢送词、告别词、广告

一、 记叙文

写事记叙文--- 叙述已经发生的事情，包括故事发生的时间、地点和人物

写人记叙文--- 人物的成长经历、爱好、特长、家庭背景和成就

写事记叙文

【写作分析】

写事记叙文，以时间为中心组织材料，围绕中心事件，将人物、时间、地点、 原因和结果, 即 五个“W”（ what, who, when, where, why）和一个”How”

【几点注意】

1.正确使用时态和人称

①时态：多用一般过去时，灵活使用其他时态

②人称：第一人称（记叙本人的经历或耳闻目睹的事件）

第三人称（记叙他人的经历或事件）

2.叙述内容要突出中心，详略得当，清楚连贯, 事件信息点的表述不要完全按照所给的顺序，要适当重组信息点，正确运用一些过渡词及短语，使故事有条理、连贯、流畅

3.常见叙述线索

①以时间为线索，按时间的顺序展开

②以地点为线索，以地点的转移为顺序展开

③以事件发展的过程为线索，或以人物出现的先后次序展开

4.正确运用描写事件的词汇和句型

【常用词语】

①表达时间

at about 4:30 p. m; on Thursday; be doing?when..;

②表达地点

at the crossing; at the end of street; near our school; five kilometers to; on the spot;? ③表达交通情况

a traffic accident; on one’s way to; be very crowded in the street; a car coming from behind; high speed; knock sb. over; be seriously injured;drive a car; ride a bike; drive off; traffic lights;turn left; lead to; a number of; report?to?

例文1

昨天下午放学时，你目睹了放生在同学林涛身上的一次交通事故。请根据下面图画，用英语写一篇120字左右的短文，向一家中学生英文报社的故事专栏投稿。

【范文】

At 4:30 p.m. yesterday（时间）, when I was on my way home after school, I saw Lin Tao, a student of Senior One in our school, riding along the street. When he was crossing the street

（地点）, a car coming（事件） from behind him cut in. The next moment I heard a big noise and saw Lin Tao was knocked over by the car. The driver didn’t stop but drove off （过程）at great speed, leaving Lin Tao helpless on the spot. He was hurt seriously. I ran up to Lin Tao and helped him. Obviously, it was the driver’s high speed（原因） that led to the accident.

I noticed the number of the car and reported it to the police（结果）. Now the driver has been caught and will be punished for his wrong doing.

【评析】

1.作者看懂并深刻理解通过图画所传达的全部信息，以时间为线索，清楚叙述了事件发生的时间、地点、事件、过程、原因和结果。层次分明、结构紧凑、叙事完整、详略得当。

2.根据情节变化灵活运用人称（I, Lin Tao）和动词时态，合理使用过渡词，使文章有鲜明的层次感、立体感和动态感。

3.语言规范，表达准确。文章运用了一些高级句式，如定语从句、同位语、现在分词作宾补（I saw LinTao, a student of Senior One in our school,riding?）；现在分词作定语（a car coming from behind him）；现在分词作状语（leaving Lin Tao helpless）、 强调句等，增加了文章的亮点。

例文2

你和李明参加了一次野外生存训练。以下5幅图画表现了野外训练活动的过程，请根据图示写一篇英文日记。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.日记的开头与结尾已为你写好。

生词：指南针：compass n.

手电筒：flashlight n.

急救包：first-aid kit

宿营地：campsite n.

Saturday, May 4, 2002 cloudy Li Ming and I took part in wilderness survival program yesterday, and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school. ____________________________________

____________________________________

The two of us spent the night in the forest.

We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems .It was quite an experience for us both ,which I’ll never forget for the rest of my life .

【审题】

形式：日记

文体：记叙文

人称：第一人称（we, I）、第三人称（Li Ming）

时态：一般过去时

图画信息：

图1：太阳、背包中的物品；

图2：木板、河流；

图3：书包放在木板上与人一同过河；

图4：迷路、在指南针的帮助下找到营地；

图5：月亮、营地的活动

内容要点：

1.出发 2.背包中的物品 3. 爬山 4.过河 5. 找路 6.宿营

【范文】

Saturday, May 4,2002 cloudy

Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday , and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school .

Early in the morning ,we set out .Li Ming was carrying a compass and a tent in his backpack, and in mine there was a flashlight, a map, a knife,a first-aid kit, some matches ,candles ,food ,and clothing .

On the way to campsite, we climbed a hill, and then we swam across a river, pushing the backpacks on a large piece of wood we had found by the river .

As we got into a forest, we lost our way .Luckily,we found the right direction with the compass. By the time we arrived at the campsite, it had already been dark. Li Ming then put up the tent,and I made a fire and started cooking.

The two of us spent the night in the forest.

We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems .It was quite an experience for us both, which I’ll never forget for the rest of my life .

写人记叙文

【写作分析】

写人记叙文，一般为肖像描写、行动描写、语言描写、心理描写以及对细节的描写，应根据要求，灵活掌握，突出重点。

【几点注意】

1.使用正确人称和时态。

①时态：

一般现在时--描写人物外貌、性格、兴趣等

一般过去时-- 描写人物出生、教育背景、经历、事迹

②人称：第一人称或第三人称

2.介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等，包括所给的全部信息点，不能遗漏或随意添加。

3.对所给的信息进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。

4.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。

【常见词语】

①外貌特征：

pretty, beautiful, good-looking，handsome,ordinary-looking, with a big nose, with a big smile, short, tall,thin, strong, white-haired，1.80 metres tall, ?

②性格特点：

absent-minded, charming, attractive, bright, wise smart, confident, naughty，talkative, diligent, lazy, friendly, generous, be ready to help others,kind-hearted, warm-hearted, patient, humorous,

have a good/ bad temper, independent,narrow-minded, ?

③童年情况：

as a boy of 15, be born on, during his childhood, live a happy/hard life, the son of a poor family, spend his childhood in, ...

④兴趣爱好： be delighted in doing, be good at , be interested in , be fond of , be crazy about, be pleased with, do well in, enjoy doing, have a strong desire to do, long for/long to do）, take a pleasure in doing,?

⑤教育背景： be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a master’s degree, get on well with one’s lessons, go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from,major in, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, take an active part in, ?

⑥ 成就或事迹：

become a member of the team, encourage sb to do sth, give up one’s life for sth, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, set a new world record of,win the first prize in, win a gold /silver/ bronze

medal, have a talent for, make up one’s mind to do sth., put one’s heart into, work hard at, concentrate oneself to, devote oneself to,do sth.with great determination and perseverance, ... ⑦他人评价：

an inspiring leader, a model worker, an advanced teacher, be respected by , be honored as, be considered/regarded as, be famous/known as,his hard work brought him great success, make great contributions to our country, set a good example for , be highly spoken of for, ... 例文

你班要举办以“Ordinary but Great”为题的英语主题班会。

2、文章的题目和开头已经给出。

3、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

提示词：首席技师 chief technician

Ordinary but Great

We are all ordinary people, but following what we are interested in and doing what we are good at can help us make great achievements for society and go far. Here’s a convincing and inspiring example.

______________________________________

【范文】

Zhao Yu, the chief technician in the Benz Company,is regarded as a great success. However, his success is no accident. As a young boy with a sense of creativity, he was eager to learn and to make a lot of inventions. Being an ordinary worker in the Benz Company for 17 years, not only did he do well in his job, but he also made efforts to teach himself English and to learn how to use computers. Now it is easy for him to read English materials about cars. Besides, he became expert at solving various technical problems.Because of his great contribution, he has received awards many times. Zhao Yu has set a good example that ordinary people can stand out by doing their jobs with interest and enthusiasm.

【评析】

1.作者运用了所给出的全部信息：姓名、职务、经历。对所给的信息进行了适当重组，突出了重点信息（赵郁的经历），内容完整、详略得当，体现了话题“Ordinary but great”所表达的内容。

2. 正确使用人称（第三人称），灵活使用时态（一般过去时、一般现在时）；合理使用过渡词，使文章层次分明、结构紧凑。

3. 语言规范，表达准确。文章运用了一些高级句式，如同位语、介词短语、分词短语、倒装句、同位语从句等，增加了文章的亮点。

二. 议论文

（一）定义：

议论文又叫说理文，是一种剖析事物、论述事理、发表意见、提出主张的文体。作者通过

摆事实、讲道理、辨是非，以确定其观点正确或错误，树立或否定某种主张。

（二）三要素：

论点、论据和论证方法。

（三）类型：对比观点、说明利弊、评论、杂文、感想等

对比观点议论文

写作步骤：

1、引言段：引出要论述的话题

2、3主体段：用证据说明赞成和反对的观点

4、结论：作者自己的观点（赞成或反对）

参考模板

There is a widespread concern over the issue that （话题）.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.

Some people say A .In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as

follows: in the first place, 支持A的理由一.What is more/ In the second place, （理由二）. Moreover, （理由三）. So it goes without saying that __A__

However / On the contrary, others differ in their opinions on this issue. They hold the view that __B__ for the following reasons. For one thing, （支持B的理由一）. For another （thing）, （理由二）.Thirdly （Finally）,（理由三）.Therefore, there is no doubt that __B__.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support that _A或B__. It is not only because （原因一）， but also because （原因二）. The more _____, the more ___. For me, __A或B_ is surely a wise choice .

例文1

请你以该报英语编辑的身份，根据上表调查结果，以May Day Long Holidays, Kept or Cancelled? 为题，为报纸写一篇110左右的简短英语报道。开头已为你写好，不记入总词数。

May Day Long Holidays, Kept or Cancelled ?

Recently, we carried out a survey on whether the May Day holidays should be cancelled or not by means of questionnaire. The results are as follows:

【写作指导】

文体：议论文--（对比观点）：赞成和反对

步骤：

1.引出话题（已给）

2. 赞成（数据、原因 ）

3.不赞成（数据、原因）

4. 结论

时态：一般现在时

【范文】

Recently, we carried out a survey on whether the May Day long holidays should be cancelled or not by means of questionnaire. The results are as follows:

About 24% of the surveyed people are in favor of the canceling the holiday. They state the May Day long holidays contribute to many problems. For a start, many tourists choose to travel during the long holidays; as a consequence, the traffic is very crowded, which brings a lot of inconvenience to the people who need to make regular trips. What’s more,with the tourists flowing in, the scenic spots are damaged and some cultural relics are ruined. So it goes without saying the May Day long

holidays should be cancelled.

However, another 76% differ in their opinions on this issue. They hold the view that the May Day long holidays shouldn’t be cancelled for the following reasons. For one thing, May is a good time for outing and to experiencing spring. For another （thing）, the tourism economy is promoted,especially sales of commodity in the tourism destinations. There is no doubt that the holiday should be kept.

Anyway, every coin has two sides. We should balance the pros and cons before making any decision.

说明利弊议论文

写作步骤:

1、引言段：引出话题

2、3、主体段 ：用证据说明利与弊的观点

4、结论 ：总结归纳, 表明观点（利或弊）

参考模板

Nowadays more and more people话题.话题plays an important part in? In fact,

like everything else,话题has/have both favorable and unfavorable aspects/both advantages and disadvantages. Generally,the favorable aspects/advantages can be listed as follows.

Firstly,? Secondly,? In addition /What’s more?

Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”. 话题 is no exception.The negative aspects/disadvantages are also apparent/obvious. To begin with?; To make matters worse?; Worse of all?

Through above analysis/All things considered, we can see that the positive

aspects/advantages outweigh the negative ones/disadvantages. Therefore?

例文2

近来，越来越多的学生申请出国留学，掀起了出国热。请你谈谈出国留学的利与弊。

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【写作指导】

文体：议论文--说明利弊

步骤：1.引出话题

2.利（原因）

3.弊（原因）

4.结论时态：一般现在时

【范文】

Nowadays more and more young people are going to study abroad. In fact, like everything else, studying abroad has both favorable and unfavorable aspects.Generally, the favorable aspects can be listed as follows.

Firstly, by attending a college in a foreign country they can learn not only useful knowledge, but also the culture and customs of other nations. Secondly, they can take advantage of this opportunity to gain a good command of the foreign language they are learning very quickly.

Moreover, they can meet different people and experience different cultures, which may help to broaden their horizons.

Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides,” going to study abroad is no exception. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with, the costs are much higher than those in their native country. Most overseas students have to work for a living, which can’t allow them to pay all their attention to study. To make matters worse, they may feel very lonely.

All things considered, we can see that the positive aspects outweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I am in favor of going abroad to study.

三、说明文

类型：

事物类说明文--产品介绍、地点介绍、现象说明

事理类说明文--调查报告、事情的发展变化等

形式：

文字提示、图表（表格table， 曲线图graph，饼状图pie chart, 柱状图bar chart）

写作步骤：

1、文字提示说明文

①根据一定的中心，重新分类要点，把全文划分成几个相对独立部分，概括每部分大意。

②使用过渡词把每部分大意连接起来。

2、 图表说明文

①开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题。

②分析数据间的主要差异及趋势,然后描写（分类式或对比式）, 并阐明必要的理由。

③ 归纳总结或发表评论（有时第三步可省略）。

例文1

一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传，请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容应包括：

1.地点：距白山入口处500米；

2.房间及价格：单人间（共20间）,100元/天；双人间 （共15间）, 150元/天；热水淋浴；

3.餐饮：餐厅（中、西餐），咖啡厅（茶、咖啡）；

4.游泳池：全天免费开放；

5.欢迎预定。

注意：

1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【审题】

文体： 事物类说明文 ---地点介绍

形式: 文字提示 人称： 第三人称

时态： 一般现在时

【范文】

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

Our hotel has an ideal location, only 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. The price is very reasonable: 100 yuan per day for a single room and 150 yuan per day for a double room. It provides different services: three meals a day in the dining hall with choices between Chinese food and Western food, You can also enjoy yourself at the cafe drinking tea or coffee in the evening. The swimming pool is open all day free of charge. Reservations in advance are advised because it is a popular choice for tourists. Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel.

例文2

最近，你在本班学生中就关于影响选择音乐的因素进行了调查。请详细说明调查结果，简略介绍针对一个数据反映情况的看法。词数120左右。

【审题】 文体：事理类说明文--调查报告 形式： 图表

人称：第三人称—调查结果

第一人称—自己的看法

时态：一般现在时

话题：影响选择音乐的因素

要求：详细说明调查结果，简略介绍针对一个数据反映情况的看法。

内容要点：

1. 50%的学生认为TV/Film影响选择音乐；

2. 30%的学生认为受朋友影响；

3. 20%的学生认为受收音机影响；

4. 10%的学生认为受家长影响；

5. 针对四个数据中的一个谈看法。

【范文】

Recently I have carried out a survey among the students of our class. This chart displays the results of the survey on what influences the music we listen to.

As is showed by the percentage in the chart, TV and films have the strongest effect on teenagers' choice of music, 50 per cent of the students sharing the opinion. About 30 per cent of the students say they are influenced by friends when deciding what to listen to. Radio comes third, with 20 per cent of the students choosing it. Parents seem to have very little influence. Only 10 per cent of the students say they listen to what their parents recommend.

In my opinion, one of the major reasons why TV and films influence our choice of music so much is that the music in the film usually goes with beautiful pictures, or expresses certain feelings of heroes. Good film music, as is often the case, can accompany a person’s entire life.

例文3

某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下：

请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你一个看法。词数不少于60。

生词：图表chart

【审题】 文体：事理类说明文--调查报告 形式： 图表 人称：第三人称—调查结果 第一人称—自己的看法 时态：一般现在时 话题：中学生课余活动 要求：根据两幅图的信息描述中学生每天的课余活动，并针对某个数据写出自己的看法。 内容要点： 1. 图表1中六项活动及所用时间 2. 图表2中一个数据反映的情况

3. 自己的一个看法

【范文】

Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after--class activities. The students put the most time－93 minutes－into their homework, and next in line is watching TV, which takes up 46 minutes. They put in about the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer, 34 minutes and 30 minutes each. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework. As is shown on Chart 2, only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. I think the school should encourage the students to do more exercise after class.

This way, they may be healthier and more energetic.

四、应用文

类型:

书信、通知、日记、海报、便条、启事、欢迎词、欢送词、告别词、广告

书信

书信类型:

事务书信和私人信件 （求职信、投诉信、慰问信、建议信、说明信、感谢信?）

基本写作格式：

信头（Headings）、称呼（Salutation）、正文（Body）、结束语（Closing）、签名（Signature）

高考重点考查的几类书信：

建议信、求职信/申请信、抱怨信/投诉信

几种书信常用的表达式

①建议信

You have asked me for my advice with regard to? and I will try to make some suggestions. I would like to suggest that?

It is important to?/ It helps to ?/ It should be a good idea to?

I think it would be a good idea/ more beneficial if you could?

Why not??/ Why don’t you??

I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful. ②求职信/申请信

I learned from?/ I read?in （the newspaper ） ?

I am thinking I am suitable for the job/position.

I graduated from ?/ I have rich experience in doing?

I will devote myself to it if I can get it./ I would appreciate it if you can give a chance. I’m looking forward to your reply （interview）./ Hope for an early reply.

③抱怨信/投诉信

I am writing to make a complaint /to express my dissatisfaction about?

I would like to get this matter settled by the end of this month.

I hope you can give me a satisfying reply and deal with this matter seriously.

I trust you will take my complaint seriously and do something to this matter.

I must warn you that unless you do something about the situation, I will be forced to take

legal action.

例文1

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据要点写封回信。 要点：1. 参加中文学习班

2. 看中文书刊、电视

3. 学唱中文歌曲

4. 交中国朋友

注意：1. 词数100左右

2. 可适当增加细节

3.开头语已为你写好

June 8, 2008

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.____ _______________________________

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【写作指导】

信件类型：建议信

内容： 写信人就某事或某问题提出建议

主体时态：一般现在时

正文部分：必须给对方问题明确答复；建议的内容要层次清楚，目的明确，具有合理性和说服力；语言要正确、清晰、礼貌、体贴，易于对方接受。

【 范文】

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is Important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.

Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try and write me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

例文2

假如你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。

要点：

1. 问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信； 该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新，无配件，无法维修。

2.要求：公司应尽快予以更换。

注意:1. 词数为100左右

2.参考词汇：配件 ——spare part

3.电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you for the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China_____________________________________________

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely yours

Bu Manyi

【写作指导】

信件类型： 抱怨信

内容：写信人针对未能解决的问题提出抱怨，希望得到对方的帮助

主体时态：一般过去时

正文部分：

①切中要害，客观说明存在的问题。

②怨之有节，重在解决问题（ 有礼有节，说明存在的问题对自己造成的不利影响或危害；必要时也可提出自己对存在问题的解决办法或建议）。

③语言力求简洁。

【 范文】

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you for the mobile phone of ... Ten days after that, it didn't ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that. How can I wait that long? Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Bu Manyi

例文3

假设你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作，你需要用英文给该公司经理写一封信，介绍自己的基本情况，信件必须包括下面全部内容：

姓名: 李华；出生年月: 19xx年8月；

出生地: 广东省佛山市；

学历: 1994—2000 佛山第一中学

2000—2004 广州大学计算机系

2004—至今在一所中学工作

所学主要课程: 计算机、中文、数学、英语、体育

特长：计算机编程

爱好: 音乐、游泳（曾获大学游泳比赛一等奖）

联系电话：5673678

E-mail: lihua6688@

要求：简介必须包括以上全部内容（信的开头和结尾已经写好）

Dear Manager,

___________________________________________

I am looking forward to your reply.

Thank you very much.

Yours Truly,

Li Hua

【写作指导】

信件类型：求职信

内容：写信人申请工作

主体时态：一般现在时，一般过去时

正文部分：

1、介绍信息来源（开篇交代句）。

2、表明求职心愿（写信目的。）

3、介绍个人简历。

4、摆出求职优势。

5、提出获职打算。

6、请求答复联系。（通讯地址、邮政编码、电话号码、电子信箱等）

7、表明感激之情。

【 范文】

Dear Manager,

I learned from the newspaper that your company wanted to hire a computer engineer. I am interested in this position and writing to apply for it. Now I’d like to introduce myself. My name is Li Hua and I was born in Foshan City of Guangdong Province in August 1981. I studied in Foshan No. 1 Middle School from 1994 – 2000, and then I came to study in the Computer Department of Guangzhou University for four years. I majored in computer science, but my strong point is

computer programming.

In addition, I studied Chinese, maths, English, P.E. and now I am working for a high school. I also like pop music and swimming very much, and I once won the first prize for swimming in the school competition.

If I am accepted, I’ll work hard and try my best to make a contribution to the company. My telephone number is 5673678.

E-mail: lihua6688@

I am looking forward to your reply.

Thank you very much.

Yours Truly,

Li Hua

如何增加文章的亮点

一、适当地多使用一些词组、习语或高级词汇代替普通单词，以增加文采，丰富文章的表现力。

1. To tell you the truth, I don’t really like your new novel.（ 普通）

To tell you the truth, I really show no interest in your new novel.（高级）

2. A new building is being built in my hometown. （普通）

A new building is under construction in my hometown. （高级）

3. As a result, the plan was a failure. （一般）

The plan _turned out to be__a failure. （高级）

二、合理运用介词或名词短语、非谓语动词代替句子，使文字清新简练

1.介词短语代替句子

1） I was pleased to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you something that has taken place in our school.（ 普通）

I was pleased to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you something turned out to be.（高级）

2）I picked up the case. I shouted at the man loudly. But he didn’t hear me and rode away.（普通）

After picking up the case , I shouted at The man loudly, but he rode too fast to hear me.（高级）

3）Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. （一般）

Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. （高级）

4） When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. （一般）

At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow. （高级）

2. 用替代词代替名词、句子

It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite different from the way of education of China.（普通）

It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite different from that of China.（高级）

3. 用with+ n.+ doing/done/介词短语

The trees and grass disappeared and the forest became wasteland （普通）

With the trees and grass disappearing .the forest became wasteland. （高级）

4. 用非谓语动词代替从句

1）But later people wanted to grow crops. They began to destroy the forest （普通） But later in order to grow crops, people began to destroy the forest.（高级）

2）When he arrives, please give me an e- mail.（普通）

On arriving/his arrival , please give me an e-mail.（高级）

3）She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.（普通）

Followed by many students , she walked out of the lab.（高级）

4）If the weather permits, I'll come tomorrow.（普通）

I'll come tomorrow, weather permitting . （高级）

5）He is so kind that he can help me.（普通）

He is so kind as to help me .（高级）

三、改变传统句型，促成灵活表达

1.改变句子开头

We can learn much by being brought into contact with other minds. （普通）

By being brought into contact with other minds we can learn much.（高级）

2.改变时态

The bell is ringing now. （一般）

There goes the bell! （高级）

3.改变语态

People suggest that the conference be put off. （一般）

It is suggested that the conference be put off. （高级）

4.灵活使用强调句、被动句、倒装句、感叹句、特殊句型

使用倒装句

By doing this, we will become a harmonious society. （普通）

Only in this way can we become a harmonious society . （高级）

使用强调句

1）What he said encouraged us.（普通）

It was what he said that encouraged us.（高级）

2）Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920. （一般）

It was not until 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began. （高级）

5.灵活使用各种主从复合句

使用主语从句

1）I happened to have met him. （一般）

It happened that I had met him. （高级）

2）To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（普通）

What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.（高级）

使用定语从句

1）The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. （一般）

The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. （高级）

2）So when wind blows, the sand on the ground flies into the air. It is harmful to the environment and our health. （ 普通）

So when wind blows, the sand on the ground flies into the air, which is harmful to the environment and our health. （高级）

3）There was a thick forest on the hill. A great diversity of animals and birds live there. （普通）

There was a thick forest on the hill, where a great diversity of animals and birds live.（高级）

使用状语从句

1）I won’t believe what he says. （一般）

No matter what he says , I won’t believe. （高级）

2） I picked up the case. I shouted at the man loudly. But he didn’t hear me and rode away.（普通）

Loudly as I shouted at him after picking it up, the man was riding so far away that he couldn’t hear me. （高级）

使用并列句

1） If you go through the gate, you’ll find the entrance to Bear Country. （一般） Go through the gate , and you’ll find the entrance to Bear Country. （高级）

2） I was walking aimlessly through the street. At that time, I saw a fruit shop. （普通） I was walking aimlessly through the street when I saw a fruit shop.（高级）

使用虚拟语气

The ship didn’t sink with all on board because there were the efforts of the captain. （一般）

But for the efforts of the captain, the ship would have sunk with all on board. （高级） 综合使用

Suddenly, I had an idea. I stopped a taxi to catch up with the man. I caught up with him at last.（普通）

I was wondering what I should do when an idea suddenly struck me. I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could so as to catch up with the man.（高级）

四、有效使用语句间的连接成分，使文章结构紧凑，思路清晰，过渡自然

Some students think that our school should play music during break time.

Music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Music provides us with relaxation, which reduces the tiredness. And listening to music also makes us feel comfortable.（ 普通）

Some students think that our school should play music during break time. To begin with , music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Furthermore , music provides us with relaxation, which reduces the tiredness. Last but not the least, listening to music also makes us feel comfortable.（高级）

五、使用不同结构、不同长度的句子，尽量使句型多样化，避免单调乏味的表达方式

There is a new classroom building on one side of the road. There used to be a layground on the other side. But there is a library now. There are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines in the library. There is a new playground in the front of the school. There are a lot of trees in and around our school. （普通）

On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be , now stands another new building-- our library, in which you can find all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in the front of the school. We have also have planted a lot of trees in and around the school. （高级）

高考写作中常用的过渡性词语

1. 表并列补充

what is more, besides, also, as well, moreover, furthermore, in addition, what’s worse, worse still?

2.表转折 、对比

but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, in contrast to, compared with, despite, in spite of, unlike, years ago?today, the former? the latter, then?now, once?now, on one hand?on the other hand, some?others...

3. 表因果

since, as, because （of）, for, so, thus, therefore, as a result （of）, as a consequence , consequently ， so that?

4.表条件

if, on condition （that）, as long as, unless, or else?

5.表顺序

above all, first of all, firstly, first, second（ly）, the next, finally, in the end, at last?

6.表时间

when, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this

morning/year/century, now, after, presently, later, somewhat later, finally, at last, all of a sudden?

7.表同位

in other words, that is to say, that is, namely, to put it another way?

8.表相似或相同

in the same way, like, similarly,?

9.表目的

for/with this purpose, for the sake of, in order to, so as to, so that, in order that?

10.表过渡

as for, as to, speaking of, considering（鉴于）, with regard to（关于）, considering（关于）

11.表观点

I think/believe, as far as I know, personally, in one’s view, in one’s opinion,?

12.表进行举例说明

for instance, for example, like, such as, take? for example,?

13.表陈述事实

in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth?

14.表总结

on the whole, in short, all in all, in a word, in conclusion, in summary, to sum up, all things considered?

随堂演练

假如你叫李华，你的家乡原来有座茂密的森林，但现在已变成了荒漠。请根据下面几幅图的内容，向一家英文报社写一篇“Protecting The Forest”的短文。注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头已为你写好

Protecting The Forest

My hometown used to be a beautiful place.

内容要点:

1、家乡原来青山绿水，很美。

2、人们毁林种庄稼，过度放牧，造成水土流失、土地荒漠化。

3、发表你的看法。

分析下面学生习作，找出问题，并修改。

（1） Some years ago, my hometown used to be a beautiful place. There is a forest on the hill. Many animals and birds lived there. But later people wanted to plant crops. They began to destroy the forest. They also feeded their crows and sheep on the grass. The trees and grass disappeared. And the forest became wasteland.

So when wind blows, the sand on the ground flies into the air. It is harmful to be environment and our health.

In our opinion, people should be punished for the bad result. We must ask the public to protect the environment. If every of us take action, we can live better.

【分析】

【修改】

如何增加文章的亮点

一.适当地多使用一些词组、习语或高级词汇代替普通单词，以增加文采，丰富文章的表现力

1. To tell you the truth, I don’t really like your new novel.（ 普通）

To tell you the truth, I really _________________your new novel.（高级）

2. A new building is being built in my hometown. （普通）

A new building_____________________. （高级）

二.合理运用介词或名词短语、非谓语动词代替句子，使文字清新简练

1.介词短语代替句子

1） I was pleased to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you something that has taken place in our school.（ 普通）

I was pleased to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you something ______________.（高级）

2）I picked up the case. I shouted at the man loudly. But he didn’t hear me and rode away. （普通）

____________________, I shouted at the man loudly, but he rode too fast to hear me. （高级）

2. 用替代词代替名词

It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite different from the way of education of China.（普通）

It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite different from______ of China.（高级）

3. 用with+ n.+ doing/done/介词短语

The trees and grass disappeared and the forest became wasteland （普通）

__________________________________, the forest became wasteland. （高级）

4. 用非谓语动词代替从句

1） But later people wanted to grow crops. They began to destroy the forest （普通） But later_____________________, people began to destroy the forest.（高级）

2）When he arrives, please give me an e- mail.（普通）

On_________________, please give me an e-mail.（高级）

3）She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.（普通）

___________________________, she walked out of the lab.（高级）

4） If the weather permits, I'll come tomorrow.（普通）

I'll come tomorrow, ___________________. （高级）

5）He is so kind that he can help me.（普通）

He is so kind_________________.（高级）

三.改变传统句型，促成灵活表达

1.改变句子开头

We can learn much by being brought into contact with other minds. （普通）

_____________________________________ we can learn much.（高级）

2.灵活使用强调句、被动句、倒装句、感叹句和it句型

1） What he said encouraged us.（普通）

__________________________________.（高级）

2） By doing this, we will become a harmonious society. （普通）

___________________________________________. （高级）

3）People suggest that the conference be put off.（普通）

_________________________________________ （高级）

3.灵活使用各种主从复合句

1）So when wind blows, the sand on the ground flies into the air. It is harmful to the environment and our health. （ 普通）

So when wind blows, the sand on the ground flies into the air, ___________________. （高级）

2）There was a thick forest on the hill. A great diversity of animals and birds live there. （普通）

There was a thick forest on the hill, __________________________________. （高级）

3）I was walking aimlessly through the street. At that time, I saw a fruit shop. （普通） I was walking aimlessly through the street _____________________（高级）

4）To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（普通）

____________________is that the little girl knows so many things.（高级）

5） I won't believe what he says. （普通）

_____________________________, I won't believe.（高级）

6） I picked up the case. I shouted at the man loudly. But he didn’t hear me and rode away. （普通）

I shouted at him picking it up, the man was riding so far away . （高级）

7）Suddenly, I had an idea. I stopped a taxi to catch up with the man. I caught up with him at last. （普通）

I was wondering what I should do . I stopped a taxi so as to catch up with the man.（高级）

四.有效使用语句间的连接成分，使文章结构紧凑，思路清晰，过渡自然

Some students think that our school should play music during break time. Music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Music provides us with relaxation, which reduces the tiredness. And listening to music also makes us feel comfortable.（ 普通）

Some students think that our school should play music during break time. ______________, music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere. Furthermore, music provides us with relaxation, which reduces the tiredness._______________, listening to music also makes us feel comfortable. （高级）

五.使用不同结构、不同长度的句子，尽量使句型多样化，避免单调乏味的表达方式

There is a new classroom building on one side of the road. There used to be a playground on the other side. But there is a library now. There are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines in the library. There is a new playground in the front of the school. There are a lot of trees in and around our school. （普通）

On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, _____________, now stands another new building-- our library, _____________________all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in the front of the school. _______________a lot of trees in and around the school. （高级）

（1）Some years ago, my hometown used to be a beautiful place. There is a forest on the hill. Many animals and birds lived there. But later people wanted to plant crops. They began to destroy the forest. They also feeded their crows and sheep on the grass. The trees and grass disappeared. And the forest became wasteland.

So when wind blows, the sand on the ground flies into the air. It is harmful to be environment and our health.

In our opinion, people should be punished for the bad result. We must ask the public to protect the environment. If every of us take action, we can live better.

【分析】

该篇文章段落清晰,但准确性较差，主要体现在语法错误较多，另外，也缺乏生动性，读起来毫无生气。

【修改1】

Some years ago, my hometown used to be a beautiful place. There is （was） a forest on the hill. Many （ A variety of/ A great diversity of ） animals and birds lived there. But later people wanted to plant （grow） crops. They began to destroy the forest. They also feeded （ fed ） their crows （ cattle ） and sheep on the grass. The trees and grass disappeared （gradually）. And the

forest became wasteland.

So when wind blows, the sand on the ground flies into the air. It is harmful to be environment and our health.

In our opinion, people should be punished for the bad result. We must ask （call on/ appeal to ）the public to protect the environment. If every of （ each of/every one of ）us take （takes） action, we can live better.（ improve our living conditions and live in harmony with society）

【分析】

该篇语句通顺，无语法错误,使用了个别短语（A variety of/ a great diversity of, call on/ appeal to 和修饰语（gradually），使文章略显生动，但文章连贯性、紧凑性较差，缺乏恰当的连接词.

【修改2】

My hometown used to be a beautiful place. Green trees and grass could be seen all over the hills. Some years later/But later, people began to destroy the forest to grow more crops. Besides, they cut down the trees or burned them. They let their cattle and sheep eat the grass on the ground. The trees and grass disappeared faster and faster. At last, the forest turned into a wasteland. As a result /As a consequence, when it rains, the soil is washed down the hills and into

the rivers. What’s more, winds blow away the soil in the fields. People can’t grow crops or feed their animals on the land.

In my opinion, we shouldn’t develop our economy in this way: destroying the forests and breaking the balance of nature. I hope all the people will take good care of the forests and plant more trees. By doing this, we will become a harmonious society.

【分析】

该篇语句通顺, 较恰当地使用了连接词，结构清晰，但句式较为简单，修饰语较少，使文章显得较为平淡。

【修改3】

My hometown used to be a beautiful place. Green trees and grass could be seen all over the hills. As time went on/ With time going on, people began to destroy the forest to grow more crops, cutting down the trees or burning them. What’s more, they cut down the trees or burned them. They let their cattle and sheep eat the grass on the ground.

Gradually, with the trees and grass disappearing faster and faster, the forest turned into a wasteland.

As a result /As a consequence, when it rains, the soil is washed down the hills and into the rivers. Worse still, strong /heavy / fierce/violent winds blow away the soil in the fields. People can’t grow crops or feed their animals on the poor/ barren land.

As far as I am concerned, we shouldn’t develop or economy by destroying the forest and breaking the balance of nature. I appeal to all the people to take good care of the forests and plant more trees. Only in this way can we become a harmonious society.

【分析】

该篇语言流畅，连接词和过渡词使用恰当；层次分明，结构连贯、紧凑，同时合理运用了一些修饰语（strong/heavy/fierce/violent winds，poor/ barren land、较高级的词汇（appeal to, As far as I am concerned）和复杂句式（As time went on/With time going on,? cutting down?，?with the trees and grass disappearing?, Only in this way can we become? ）使语言更加丰富、生动，是一篇较优秀的文章。

书面表达七大禁忌

1、白板一片，众人皆知

2、偷天换日，蒙混过关

3、逐句翻译，句不成文

4、胡编乱造，生搬硬套

5、语言简单，句式单一

6、误解题意，离题甚远

7、内容无挑，卷面欠雅

【全国各地高考英语作文统一评分标准 + 答题技巧 + 答题方法】

1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3. 词数少于 80和多于 120的，从总分中减去2分。

4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。

5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。

6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。

【各档次的给分范围和要求】

第五档(很好)；(21-25分)

1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。

2. 覆盖所有内容要点。

3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。

4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。

5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。

第四档(好)：(16-20分)

1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。

2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。

3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。

5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

6. 达到了预期的写作目的。

第三档(适当)：(11-15分)

1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。

2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。

3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。

4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。

5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。

6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。

第二档(较差)：(6-10分)

1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。

2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。

3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。

4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。

5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。

6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

第一档(差)：(1-5分)

1. 未完成试题规定的任务。

2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。

3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。

4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。

5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。

6. 信息未能传达给读者。

不得分：（0分）

未能传达给读者仟何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

【作文答题技巧、解题方法】

写作短文时，要注意审题，对写什么和怎么写必须有一个清晰的思路。很多考生动笔就写，错了以后再涂改，严重影响卷面整洁，也影响了成绩；其次要在遣词造句上多下功夫。尽可能运用较熟悉的词组、短语或成语；第三要力求变换各种句式，当然，也不能片面追求花哨文字，拼凑错误百出的句子，使成绩大打折扣；行文连贯是阅卷教师比较看重的一个方面。要有好的开头和好的结尾；为了使文章结构严密，增强说服力和感染力，考生应该在句与句之间，恰当地使用一些过渡性词语。

另外，考生很容易出现句与句之间不使用连接词的错误，这是英语写作中的大忌。

最后，考生应该把写完的作文阅读两遍，认真检查是否有拼写方面的错误，是否有时态、语态方面的错误，是否存在中式英语等等。

【作文答题技巧、答题方法】

１、仔细审题，弄清大意。审题是写作的关键所在，仔细审题才能深刻理解题目所要表达的主要意思。不论是汉语提示写作还是看图写作，都要仔细审题，弄清写作内容，如背景、人物、时间、体裁等的要求。 ２、编拟提纲，拟出要点。在弄清了题目所要表达的主要意思后，便可根据主要内容列出提纲，即整理出内容要点。理清要点的目的就是为了把握短文的脉络，不至于遗漏内容的要点。

３、紧扣要点，扩写成文。在列出要点后，依据要点扩写成文。扩写时，可运用想象适度发挥。但切记不可随意乱写，要紧扣画面或汉语提示，适当描述，连贯通顺即可，不能把汉语提示全部译成英语。

４、反复检查，修正错误。扩写成文后，考生应将扩写后的文章认真读一读，检查是否有错误。在检查时，着重看短文是否扣住了提示或图画的内容，要点是否有遗漏。同时，还要注意有无语法错误，如时态、人称等，是否符合文体特点、格式等等。

5、写作，要注意留够时间，一般需要20分钟。最好能打草稿，这样可以减少错误，书写也比较清晰工整。作文注意内容要点要全，语言要通顺。提倡用小词小句来写，适当用复杂结构。