高中生申请美国大学推荐信范例

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高中生申请美国大学推荐信范例

出国留学有几封推荐信是必不可少的,那么本科留学推荐信要怎么写呢?下面为大家介绍一下本科留学推荐信的内容及推荐信范文。

本科留学推荐信的内容:

(1) 申请者的学业成绩或特质,是否具有领导才能,是否具有很强的分析能力等。在这一点上要注意适度,不能因为谦虚对优点加以掩盖,也不能夸夸其谈过高的估计申请者。

(2) 充分挖掘申请者自身的特殊之处,例如有很强的沟通能力,或者是擅长某种语言等。

(3) 就你所了解的范围而言,该申请者有什么比较重要的成绩或是成就,学业上的或是其他方面的。

(4) 该申请者是否有何弱项,例如之前有过某些方面的挫折,但是从这个失败的经历中获得了什么经验教训等。

(5) 对申请者未来潜力的描述,即解释推荐人愿意对该申请者做出推荐的原因,以及一旦该申请者获得到该校继续深造的机会会有什么 发展等。

接下来就可以正式动笔了,不同的学校对推荐信的要求可能会略有不同,但是基本上一封结构清晰明确内容翔实的推荐信都应该由以下几个部分组成:

(1) 介绍部份。首先应该清楚明确的介绍推荐人的情况,工作单位、职位、与被推荐人的关系以及与被推荐人相处的时间长短等。在这一部份也可以给被推荐人一个总体的评价。

(2) 主体部分。重点讲述被推荐人一至两个优秀品质,并且用有力的事实证明加以辅佐。要注意掌握对具体事例的选择,这不是简单的把申请者简历上的经历等内容进行一个拼凑,而是要要举出几个最有代表性的能够充分体现申请人人格魅力的例子。

(3) 结论部份。解释为什么申请人的申请计划是适合他本人的,并且说明你认为该申请人在未来会对这个被申请的学校做出什么样的贡献。最后可以再次强调你对推荐该申请者充满信心,为能够推荐他到更好的院校进行深造感到十分自豪,同时表示学校在审核材料的过程中可以随时联系你,不要忘记附上你的联系方式。

本科留学推荐信范文:

吴可馨,20xx年8月考入深圳市百年老校南头中学高中部,在精英荟萃的一班就读,我有幸成了她高中阶段第一任班主任、第一任语文老师、第一任年级组长,得以熟悉并了解她。 可馨有着强烈的进取心和求知欲,并且很独立、很主动地设计着自己的人生。她不喜欢轻易跟着别人转。在中考结束后大多数学生都去狂欢放松的时候,她选择了暑期语言进修。这使她后来的中文成绩、英文成绩在年级近千名学生中一直遥遥领先。她很擅长写作,这除了得益于她的想象力和创造力,更多依赖于她思维的个性和深度。她的随笔有一种独特的韵味和有别于常人的思考,她不喜欢写空话,无论是写自己生活的琐屑,还是发表对他人、对时事的看法,她绝对说真话。所以她的文章总是吸引很多人,大家还常常被她文章中的悲悯情怀所打动,一个被辞退的教师,一位答不上题的同学,一只流浪的猫等等,都会让她顿生恻隐之心。更难得的是,她还剖析这些事件背后的文化意义,这就使得她身上散发着一种古老的人文精神,和她的独立态度和自由精神一样,这是她超越同届学生们的地方。作为一名热爱读书的女生,她有很敏感的心,对语言尤其有一种细腻而透彻的悟性,这使得她的文字温婉而不失一种张力。

她热爱团队,有较强的合作能力和组织能力。她是学生会社团部部长,曾策划了社团一系列活动,这也显示出她潜藏的领导才华;另外,兴趣的广泛和知识的丰富,以及对工作、

对生活的热情,也使得她在同学群中颇受欢迎。

因为读书和随笔的原因,我们走得较近,她的聪慧、热情以及诚实、勤勉,给我留下了很好的印象;并且教学相长,她在某种程度上也促进了我教学的发展。所以在此我诚挚推荐吴可馨同学入贵校学习,并期待着她的学业、她的人生在更大的空间里有着更大的发展。 推荐人:深圳市南头中学刘耀娟

20xx年10月25日

某同学与我相处了四年之久,其特点在我心中如繁天星斗,明灭可辨,却又数之不尽。

某同学与人为善,这向来为众人所称道。入某(你所在中学)中学以来,从未与同学发生过争执,更未曾顶撞过老师。他处处与人方便,时时笑脸待人,深得大家的喜爱。即使老师偶尔批评他,他也是坦然面对,有时加以解释,而从不恼怒。

某同学喜爱文艺。在诸多学科中,尤以中国汉语见长。在语文课上,常常即兴配合课文内容进行人物表演。其语文成绩也多次名列班级前矛。久而久之,其表演才能更扩大到了小品、相声、讲故事等范畴,并数次在学校艺术节上获奖。除此之外,某同学非常爱好音乐,至今已学习钢琴多年,在学校艺术节和家长会上多次表演,得到了老师、同学和家长的好评。上学期,他与同学合作,自编、自导、自演,参加了市中学生形象大赛,获得第七名。这个星期,他又刚刚和我班另外两位同学一样,闯入了恒福中学第三届中学生形象大赛个人赛的决赛。

某同学热爱运动,其中篮球是他最喜爱的运动之一。在班级篮球队里,他是绝对主力。虽然不是太高,但他以灵活,以技术见长。再忙、再累,也阻止不了他对篮球这项运动的热爱。某同学喜爱运动,但并不盲目,他的运动很有规律。除了在校运动之外,他还定期到附近的健身俱乐部锻炼。在那儿,他可以跳舞,锻炼肌肉,以及游泳等等。所以某同学总是精力充沛、形象健康。

在电脑科技方面,某同学更是显示了异于常人的热情。为了得到一台电脑,他曾许诺并真正进入了班级前十名。此后,他很快就成了班级里众多“电脑技术论坛”的中心发言人。

某同学是多才多艺的,作为他的老师与朋友,我感到很自豪。面对即将离别的现实,我有些不舍。但我仍然很高兴地将某同学推荐给你们学校。我相信他一定会成为你们学校的优秀学生,并成长为一个真正的男子汉。

在多加一些关于英语方面的内容!说你的英语水平!等等!

下面是一封Carlton原创的高中生就读美国大学本科的推荐人推荐信,历时一整天完成。 推荐信从班主任和物理老师的角度来描述评判被推荐学生。部分语句和段落可以直接套用。

Recommendation for XXX

Dear Sir or Madam:

As the Physic teacher of Miss Han, I have known her for 4 years during which time I’ve shaped a overall image of her. Generally, she’s included in the category of top-notch students I’ve ever acquainted with. Thus, I’m happy to give an introduction outlining her junior high school life here, to enable you to assess her suitability for acceptance to your esteemed university.

开头固定模式,介绍推荐人与被推荐人关系,简要提到推荐人的职位(最重要的一个)。这一段力求简练精干。

I taught Miss XXX, where she left me with an impression of her intellect, industry and independent thinking. During the 2 years in my class, both her assignments, which are meticulously finished, along with test scores on Physics subject almost always come out excellent. On the whole, she performed fairly competitively in most subjects in junior high. 这一段是从第一个侧面来描述被推荐人,本文是从学术角度评价被推荐人的。

With a different frame of reference, I’d like to focus the picture on her merits of art talents and perseverance. Her active participation and many awards in art contests guide me to speculate about longtime practice of playing piano and painting which has later been

confirmed by her. It seems that her serious attitude toward school courses has something to do with the art practice. Though suffering from a broken arm since an accident in a sports activity, she didn’t give up practicing piano and finally passed the certificate exam of that year. Having conversed with her parents about the story, I come to understand this connection.

与前段不同,该段描述了被推荐学生在艺术上的才能,但在下面一段我们更进一步叙述了被推荐学生应用其艺术才能为团队做贡献的实例,可谓一石二鸟。

Not only does she exhibit many talents but also employs them to aid the class in various activities. Assigned to take charge of activities related to arts, she fulfilled her duties pretty well in selecting songs for the chorus, teaching them word by word and finally

accompanying their vocals in the contests. Besides, another case would prove her an able student to balance and make schedules. Even with approaching final exams and heavy courses work, she still kept classroom bulletin board updated by tips about courses and instant news about campus. Probably she takes it as a manner in which her painting skills could be applied while class activities were assisted.

最后强调了被推荐人良好的平衡能力,即使学业紧张,但仍出色完成工作任务。

XXX has been a real asset to Beijing NO.XX middle school, both in academics and in extracurricular activities. I am quite sure that she will prove equally valuable to your university, and am convinced that she will prove an outstanding undergraduate student. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require further information regarding this remarkable student.

最后一段仍然是模式化的语言。

Tips on DIY留学申请推荐信

高中生申请美国大学本科推荐信Sample

To Whom It May Concern:

I am very pleased to recommend Martha Holden for admission to your university program. As her guidance counselor for three years I have watched this young woman develop both academically and personally into a mature individual ready in every way for her college years.

Martha is bright, energetic, compassionate and genuinely well rounded. Her grades have been consistently above average in all of her courses, and she has actively participated in

a diverse assortment of extracurricular activities ranging from track and field and chorus to the school yearbook and our drama club.

Martha has also spent considerable time outside the school involved in the

community. This has included work with Meals on Wheels and volunteering 10 hours a week at one of our area's shelters for battered and abused women.

They think so much of her at the shelter they have offered her a paid internship for next summer. Previously, this internship had never been awarded to anyone before the end of their college sophomore year. Despite all the preparations that will be required for going off to college next fall, Martha told me she is absolutely thrilled about this opportunity and feels it will enhance her university studies.

Unlike many students who are not sure which field to pursue, Martha has made clear to us all that her goal is to do Social Work. To this end she has worked tirelessly in our pilot program for mentoring Special Education students mainstreamed into our school.

In closing, let me take a moment to recount an incident which I believe speaks volumes about the superior nature of this candidate. Two years ago I was returning from lunch to my office when I saw ahead of me in the hallway 90 pound Martha, arms stretched out between two 180+ pound students, one a Special Ed student and the other a school bully. Other students were standing by motionless or laughing while Martha showed the leadership and courage to immediately put an end to the embarrassing fight that had erupted.

It is clear to me as I hope it is to you that this young woman, Martha Holden, is an

exceptional candidate, one that would contribute greatly to any program. I wholeheartedly recommend her and wish her the very best in all future endeavors.

Sincerely,

Jean Atkins

Senior Counselor

Alexander Hamilton High School

最好的推荐信样本

SAMPLE LETTERS (with modifications and deletions in order to preserve anonymity)

SAMPLE A

"I first knew X in the spring of l986 when she was a member of my Freshman Seminar, '. . . .` In such small groups teacher and students come to know one another in a way that is seldom, if ever, possible in large lecture courses. In either forum something can be learned about a student's academic ability, but only in the former can one get a reliable measure of the student as a person. . . . Having kept in touch with X in the intervening years, I am confident in my knowledge of her.

To begin with, she is an excellent student, with a lively curiosity that makes her

dissatisfied with superficial explanations. That curiosity frequently led our seminar down avenues and into areas that, otherwise, would have remained unexplored. . . .

One has only to speak to her to recognize her openness and eagerness. It is easy to

mistake this for naivete, an error I made when she first told me she had signed up to be an apprentice teacher in one of Boston's more notorious inner city high schools. . . .

Throughout the term, often at great cost to her own peace of mind, and sometimes in explicit conflict with the regular teacher, she continued to insist on a high level of

performance from her students. She not only survived the term but won the admiration and respect of students accustomed to being patronized by teachers content to believe that nothing much can be expected.

I would expect X to bring these same qualities of character to . . . . That is, an openness to new places, peoples, cultures and customs; a keen intelligence, with which to analyze and order her experience; irrepressible curiosity; and an unusual ability for dealing with people of all ages and conditions. Those qualities, combined with her toughness of character. . ., will enable her to understand and empathize with others while never losing touch with who she is."

SAMPLE B

"X has been an assistant in my laboratory during the past year, and has proven to be

exceptional in several respects. First, X is exceptionally intelligent. He proved to be a very quick study, learning the elements of experimental design and the uses of

microcomputers in record time. Furthermore, his questions are always thoughtful and penetrating. X threw himself into his assigned projects wholeheartedly, and shows every

sign of having real talent in . . . . I was a little surprised by his high degree of enthusiasm because I knew that X was not primarily interested in . . . . When I mentioned this to him, I discovered that he has well defined career goals that mesh with the projects he was working on . . . .

Second, X is exceptionally diligent and hard working. He worked many extra hours over the summer. I vividly recall coming into the lab late in the evening. . . and finding X at work. X invariably finished projects well in advance of our projected target date. X was always cheerful during this intense period, and was a joy to have in the lab.

Third, X is very good at working with other people. He is exceptionally nice and

considerate and sensitive. X is not only good humored and friendly, but also is good at gauging other people's level of knowledge and attitudes. . . .

All in all, I think X has a very bright future, and I am sure that he would benefit from . . . . Given his great intelligence and sensitivity, I am sure that he could put . . . to good use. In short, I give X my highest recommendation, and very much hope that the committee judges his application favorably."

SAMPLE C

"I am writing in support of X to . . . . I have known X since September, l986. He was a member of a small . . . tutorial that I taught in l986-87. . . . X was an active and

conscientious member of the class. He challenged the rest of the class to consider issues from new perspectives and often asked very penetrating and important questions. He chose to take on difficult topics and handled them well. His assignments were well-written, well-supported, organized, neat, and timely. It was evident that X really desired to learn more and challenge himself. . . .

X also has interest outside of academics. He has been an active member of . . . , a Harvard singing group, and a member of the campus . . . club. He is also a member of the . . . House film society. X's personality is wonderful. He is outgoing and friendly, but not dominating. He has an obvious and sincere concern for others. . . .

X would be a wonderful student to have at . . . . He has skills that he is eager to share, but he is just as eager to learn. . . . I feel very confident that he will be extremely successful in all his future endeavors. He is a focussed and determined young man. I highly

recommend him for . . . ."

SAMPLE D

"I am pleased to write to you on behalf of X, who is applying for a fellowship to study . . . . I have known X for two years. She took my course in . . . . More recently, I have been advising her on her thesis.

X has done well in Harvard's . . . concentration. The concentration includes preparation in . . . . In addition, she has had substantial exposure to the "practical" aspects of her topic, for example through her work at . . . . Thus she is extremely well prepared to fulfill her proposed project.

X has selected an area, . . . , which is of growing interest. . . . In my view as someone who studies . . . among other topics, questions such as this are severely under-researched. The proposed topic - . . . - seems to be both worthwhile and feasible, and should prove very interesting.

X is an independent self-starter. While she has no trouble working in groups, or interacting with others, she can also work well on her own. Furthermore, she is mature and

personable. I would expect her to perform well in a wide range of environments. In fact, her personality and skills should place her high on any list of good "representatives" for the U.S.

I hope that you will consider her application strongly."

SAMPLE E

"This letter is in support of X, who is applying for a . . . grant. I have read his statement of purpose with great care; in fact, I have had many discussions with him about his project, which I find both compelling and important.

X is a rare combination: he is already at this young age a seasoned expert in both literature and iconography . . . . Having taught him in a language-intensive course last year, I can bear witness to his superb command of German . . . .

His project's focus of interest, the . . . , is admirably suited to someone of X's talents and industry. The . . . Institute is the ideal place to carry out such research, and I am confident that X`s discoveries will in the long run make an impact on learning in that field.

Add to all this that X is a very congenial person, well-liked by teachers and fellow-students alike, and you will see why I am so positive about this bright and energetic young scholar. I endorse his candidacy with confidence and enthusiasm."

Derek Bok Center for

Teaching and Learning

Harvard University

To Whom it May Concern,

I am privileged to write in support of my dear friend and student, Dan Peel. Dan studied in my classroom and laboratory program for close to three years, during which time I

witnessed his tremendous growth and development. This development came not only in the area of scientific achievement and discovery, but in maturity and character as well.

Dan entered Whitman at the young age of 16,a precocious high school graduate. At first, he had difficulty accepting his place as a young, less experienced lab member. But soon, he learned the valuable trait of humility, and enjoyed the opportunity to learn from his older

peers and his professors.

Dan quickly learned to manage his time, work in group situations under strict deadlines, and to recognize the importance of a strong work ethic, persistence, and intellectual integrity. He has long since become the most valuable member of my student-lab team, and a role model for his newer classmates.

I recommend Dan to your program with absolute confidence. He has made me proud, as his teacher and friend, and I am sure will continue to do so as he grows in your program and beyond.

Thank you for the opportunity of correspondence,

Sincerely,

Dr. Amy Beck,

Professor, Whitman

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