雅思写作:高分结尾总结句

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雅思写作高分结尾总结句

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雅思写作高分结尾总结句

雅思写作:高分结尾总结句

雅思作文结尾段优秀句型,今天大家带来的是关于雅思作文结尾段优秀句型的详细介绍,供大家参考,希望对大家有所帮助。

雅思作文结尾句型推荐:

1)In short,it can be said that.。

2)It may be briefly summed up as follows。

3)From what has been mentioned above,we can come to the conclusion that.。.

4)in general/above all/with the result that/as a result/consequently。.

5)As far as I am concerned/as for me, .。.

6)This truth above seems to be self-evident。

7)Whether we examine the above, such things can happens anywhere anytime to anyone。

8)In my point of view, I like/prefer A much more than B。

9)I still prefer A, however, for they teach me not only to be ...but also to be...,both in...and in...。

10) There is no doubt that。

11) In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should efforts to。

12)To a large extent,..., therefore, reflects。

13)If all above mentioned measures are achieved。

14) Wherever you are and whatever you do, ...is always meaningful。

15)So clear/evident/obvious it is that there are quite different opinions on it。

16)Now, which one do you prefer-----the one...or the one...? Were it left to me to select, I should not hesitated a moment to choose the former/latter。

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雅思写作高分结尾总结句

雅思写作高分结尾总结句

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雅思写作高分结尾总结句

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第二篇:雅思写作总结


07年雅思写作走势 复习策略与重点题目

第一部分:题目规律与重点总结

首先,从题目上来说,20xx年的雅思主流写作体裁为优劣类(34%)、同意(32%)与不同意类及讨论类(18%),其它类别分摊了其余的16%(因果类、解决方法类、综合类等)。其次,从内容上来说,20xx年度的主考内容为社会类(50%)与文化教育类(31%),往年的高频题材科技类与家庭类在今年则明显处于下风。众所周知的是,20xx年是雅思的改革之年,它意味着新一轮测试周期的开始。从上面的变化我们可以看到,雅思主考单位(UCLES、BC以及IDP)将其写作测试目标放到了与公众生活最为密切的社会话题以及与留学生最为密切的文化教育类上来了,这与雅思改革“贴近实用”的目标是相符合的。在20xx年当中,出题特征仍然会围绕着这个目标。因此,社会类与文化类下的三类主流体裁必然是大家的复习要点。基于此分析,展望2007,如下的作文题目应该作为主要的练习重点:

社会类:道德角度:It seems that the level of public morality is decreasing.

Discuss the possible causes and results of this phenomenon.

心理角度:

援助角度:生活角度:Discuss the possible reasons of this situation.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

设施角度:Public transportations are superior to private ones in many ways.

Discuss the advantages of public transportation and the possible ways to promote it.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

青年角度:Ever-increasing numbers of teenagers are now committing suicide.

Discuss the possible reasons of this situation and what kinds of assistances should be given.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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就业角度:Most of the organizations have their own requirements for the minimum qualifications of candidates. And someone suggests that this is a kind of discrimination.

Do you agree or disagree and present your own idea.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 文化教育类

文物角度: Government should invest to developing new cultures instead of maintaining historical relic.

Do you agree or disagree.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 古文化角度:Vanishing cultures must be out of date.

现代文化角度: 家庭教育角度:学校教育角度:School education should not only make students appreciate the bright sides of our society but also make them realize that there are also evils.

Do you agree or disagree and present your own idea.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 全球类:

组织角度:International cooperation has greatly helped those underdeveloped countries.

Discuss the possible negative influences of it and present your idea.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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文化角度:International tourism is gradually changing the cultural identities of some countries.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion and present your idea.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

科技角度:Over-rapid development in information sectors will cause further polarization among various regions. Discuss this opinion and present your idea.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

卫生角度:International organization should figure out the ways to cure a certain disease by joint efforts. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this practice and present your idea.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

第二部分:难度略升与复习策略

回顾20xx年的作文题目,题目理解难度与题目写作难度,如下两例:

?(2006-1-21 A类)

(2006-4-8 G类) (2006-5-17G类)

上面的两篇作文虽不能代表全部的作文难度,但作文整体考试的组成部分也从一个侧面反映了20xx年的题目走势。 基于这样一种情况,我们暂且从题目理解难度与题目写作难度两个方面来制定20xx年的写作复习对策。

首先,从题目理解难度来看。所谓的题目理解困难可以归结为三个方面的问题:1. 词汇的不理解 2. 内容的不理解。作文首先从词汇角度来说,很多同学就在2006-1-21的A类作文中的arts这个词上犯了难,这里究竟应该是理解为艺术还是文科呢?2006-4-8G类作文中的nuclear family(小家庭) 和extended family(大家庭) 又作何解呢? 而2006-5-17G类作文中的pastime(消遣)又为何物?因此,同学们为了在以后的临场应试中避免遇到词汇理解方面的问题,那么就应该在日常多多阅读各类的作文题目。在明白了词汇之后,有些同学还是无法理解题目,这是为什么呢?这是因为大家在这个方面的知识是空白的。比如小家庭和大家庭是两个什么概念呢?只有通过日常的学习,大家才能理解所谓的小家庭就是不隔代的由两辈人组成的家庭(“草屋单见妻烹水,亭前稚儿捻苇帘),而大家庭则是由两辈以上的人组成的家庭(福禄寿喜七星至,耄耋孙小共言欢)。因此,大家平时还要加强各个方面书籍的阅读,只有这样才能够看到一个词就明白它的词义,而且要做到立即构思成篇。

然后,从题目写作难度来看。20xx年的题目写作难度与20xx年相比,差异不会太大。主要的写作难度仍然是集中在两个方面:破题与布局、证明与结构。

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首先,从破题与布局方面来看。当然,现在有很多的同学是不破题的,无论是什么体裁的文章,大家都习惯用一种思路来进行破题,就是一方面,有人认为,另外一方面有人认为,我认为首先,我认为其次,我认为再次,最后,总结来说。这样的一种思维模式已经成为了中国考生的灵魂,另审卷人汗颜的灵魂。在作文题目当中,明明没有说一些人与另一些人,而中国的学生就是基于这样的一种假设展开文章,在开头处便开始脱离轨道了。因此,在20xx年的备考当中,大家一定要以题目为中心,实事求是,不要假想。

此外,从证明与结构来看。考试改革后,很多的同学仍然在沿用以往的方式进行作文写作。无论基础如何,大家都对于模板趋之若骛。诚然,对于一些基础不好或者是所需分数较低的同学而言,模板还是有一定借鉴意义的。但是对于基础较好,而且分数要求较高的同学而言,模板就不是一个好的选择了。试想,考官拿到一卷作文,共30篇,每一篇开头都是With the

development of our society/ some people think that ,while other people think that

访谈:曹铭伟总结2006雅思写作

无忧雅思:各位网友,下午好,今天北京迎来了今年最大的一场雪,我们的嘉宾北京新航道学校的雅思名师曹铭伟老师冒雪准时来到了我们的聊天室,欢迎曹老师,欢迎各位网友,首先请曹老师和各位网友打个招呼。

曹铭伟:各位同学各位朋友大家好,马上就要迎来新的一年了,当然我说的是雅思留学的“心事”,祝愿大家在新的一年里都能实现自己的留学梦想!

我先说阅读,文章的重复率仍然比较高,稍统计一下的话可以发现有些重点文章甚至还出现了3次重复,比如“”06年中新出现的几篇热点文章在一年中就多次重复,比如今年5“7月很快重复出现了;“琥珀与龙涎香”6月第一次出现后也在1206年中露脸了,比如“育儿观点的改变”、

”等。

06年所有写作真题的情况来看,仍有2012月16号那个“幸福与经济收入关系”的题目,就与以前考过的“幸福为何困难”经济收入是否能衡量个人成功”的话题基本一样。大家知道北京考点一般每月三次考试,那么十二个月就有36次考试。在30多次考试中有20个左右的题是与以前相同或者相似,这不能不说是一

个非常高的比例了。

无忧雅思:对于明年参加雅思考试的考生,从写作和阅读方面考生应该加强哪些方面的训练?

曹铭伟:既然明白了过去一年中的情况,那么新的一年中该如何准备的问题就迎刃而解了。但是首先我要跟大家说的一点是:心态要保持稳定。最近我经常在课后被同学拦住询问“07年初变题”这样的问题。我想变题的问题要看你怎么理解,具体的题目是一定每次都在改变的,这个不用想都明白。从06年的写作来看,年度内没有出现两个重复的话题。

虽然题目在变,但是题型还是一样的啊。因此文章写法也没有变化。如果要说应对妙着的话,那么我的建议就是扎扎实实去做好自己的准备,特别是要关注以往出现的话题。因为刚才我分析了,虽然具体题目没有在年内重复,但是涉及的话题还是有重复情况的,比如“能源问题”在2月、3月、6月都出现了;“老年人问题”在2月、7月也重复了。如果要再比较一下前三年中写作所涉及到的话题,那你会发现更多的重复。

所以除了做好自己的写作练习以外,希望大家都去关注雅思常出现的话题,比如政府、教育、文化、环保这些大的方面,我敢保证07年将仍以这些话题为重点。

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:老师最近复习雅思作文头脑里一点思路也没有,老师能否预测一下20xx年2月3号的作文题会往哪个方向发展哈哈 望百忙之中给予回复

曹铭伟:好,接下来我回答一些具体的提问。关于写作思路的问题,我注意到,在这两年已经成为了大多数同学分数提高最大的障碍。

这个问题其实原因比较简单,也很容易解决。原因是因为大家对以刚才我说到的那些话题缺乏了解,一旦遇到出题角度刁钻一些,不是想不出论点就是容易写跑题。这位同学的提问就是属于这样的情况。

具体解决方法,我在这里谈两点建议:

一、大家首先要熟悉雅思命题所经常涉及到的大的话题。这可以通过收集整理以往考题来实现。就读新航道的同学,我们已经在使用的07年新版教材后的附录里,我已经把04到06年度的写作题目都收录了进去;如果不是新航道的同学可以登录无忧雅思论坛或者我的个人博客,里面有同样内容的帖子或者日志。

二、知道什么话题以后希望大家主动去搜索和积累这相关的论点。比如刚才来之前我在Google上实验了一下,输入8月26号考题中的关键词multicultural society就命中了相当多的文章,在命中的文章中我又搜索到了ethnic diversity, multiculturalism等术语。接着再用这些来搜索你就能看到更多的文章。

用这样的方法平常注意积累,常见的问题就那么几个,那么常见的各方观点意见也就是那些说法。这些都看过再去写哪有可能写不满字数呢?所以我轻易不敢写,因为我一写就容易把雅思作文写成3000字的论文。

这个方法分享给07年要考试的同学,因为07点论据重新包装以后嵌入到答题中去了。

网友:我07年1月20号就要考试了,,还是其它的呢?谢谢。

曹铭伟:准备07年1也更具有时代意义。比如刚才我提到的8月26号那个“”的问题,非常明显可以看出是在05

“红楼梦中人海选”当然是不可能出现在雅思里的:)

网友:老师您好,07年1~2

曹铭伟:大家对于即将进行的07年考试的关注真是大啊~~!好吧,1-2月考试的难度不会与其他月份有太大变化,否则岂不是影响了考试的公平性公正性。写作流程图的概率当然是有的,但不会是必考这样的几率。

这位同学可能有“恐flow chart”症:) 但我个人认为,其实流程图比数据图更好些。原因很简单,数据多了,整理的逻辑思路是很能考验一个人的思维的,往往很多人就写成了流水账。

而flow chart只要能看懂,并且把各个阶段中的重点体现出来就搞定了。

所以其实数据图的难度要大于流程图。那么关于数据图我多说一些。其实数据图的写法看题目要求就明白了:官方说了,得写出总体趋势,并且要进行对比。趋势和对比,只要你能写成这两层,一定是6分以上。而Task1大家知道得6还是7对于你写作总分7分是没有影响的。

网友:曹老师, 我做剑桥4、5,发现:

1.如果自己仔细定位以及做题,那么时间肯定不够,差不多完整的看完两篇后只有5分钟的时间

2.如果匆忙的根据时间而做题,往往定位又很不准确,又或者定位到了不能很好的解答。

两种却基本保持一样的错题率,大概错15-20个。我07年1月20日就考试了,就此您能给我点建议么? 另外,如果这次没有考好,三个月后再考,您能就阅读再给些建议么?

谢谢。ps:曾经是曹老师语法班的学生,很喜欢您!

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曹铭伟:刚说了写作,这边同学就有问阅读的了:)

你说的问题,我想是因为搜索方法的缺陷。你说上过我的语法课,看来是我的错,在语法课上没有跟大家谈到阅读的技巧吧 :)

其实对于你的问题,方法很简单。看来你是去生找Key Words,在一篇学术文章中去生找一个词,当然不可能那么迅速。

我的方法是我对文章进行思路分段,比如一篇文章讲了“定义——发展历史——现状——展望”四个层次,那么问到哪个方面我就只看这个层次的两到三段。这样一定就快。但是要有这个能力,你平常就得一定做好精读,只做题肯定是不够的。

另外你说到的定位到了又解答不对,那就是理解方面的硬伤了。这说明你某方面的语言基本功还存在欠缺。这种问题就得来一个灭一个,就地解决。这都是把功夫做到实处的基本功啦:)

网友:自己写的文章在内容上总感觉好像在别人的哪些文章中见到过,请问曹老师,雅思写作如何才能写出新意?

曹铭伟:这个问题提得非常好,也是我最近在思索的问题。某些最新“研究成果”我也已经在课上实验过,从同学的反映来看,大家还挺需要这些指导的。我想新意来自于两个方面:一、观点内容;二、语言表达。先说观点。一般的两到三个观点老生常谈大家都会想到,那你就不要写,可以作为开头引入或者反面论点出现。这是一个方法。然后做一些背景阅读,这样能帮你写出一些很有深度、题也顺手解决了:)达,用它来体现你的与众不同。考官看到这些一定会觉得很special里就是outstandingstand

out。

outstanding~!

网友:曹老师,结果碰到流程图的题,根本没有思路.写

曹铭伟:其实写作得5的问题可能还是Task207年一月的Task2而且我个人感觉——直觉啊,不准不要怪我——文化问题的可能性更大。翻一翻下半年雅思写作,几乎每个题目都与文化有关。原因很简单,一是因为这种题比较能考出一个人的思维深度和逻辑水平;二文化问题却是也是最近社会的热点问题,所以就是雅思官方对于Task2命题的界定:Contemporary issues of common interests.

所以我个人认为这个大方向应该是符合官方的思路的要求的。大家至少可以参考一下吧。

网友:自己做阅读题目的时候总是感觉都读懂了,题目错的却比较多,请问提高雅思阅读能力应该从哪些方面入手?

曹铭伟:自己做阅读“感觉”都读懂了——问题是自己的感觉对不对呢?呵呵。

其实说到阅读能力,我不知道你是指整体的阅读还是具体的雅思阅读解题能力。不管你指哪个,总之我都说一下吧。 要说整体的阅读能力,你得有语言功底去进行词句的破译,还得有把握上下文从中推测的能力,更得具有从全局上把握全文思路结构理清脉络的能力。这些能力大家是否都具有呢?根据我的观察,可能大多数同学的理解还是在最起码的语言破译,也就是字面的把握上,这就是导致你说的问题的一个原因。因为只掌握字面九不得不时时刻刻去看那些单词,这第一慢,第二相当吃力。

再说做题能力。做题能力除了语言功底和整体阅读能力还得包括对试题思路的准确把握。有可能有些同学不知道题目思路和特点导致浪费时间,虽然最终也解出来了,但是效率很低。最典型的就是List of Headings。

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所以其实我觉得你得分析自己的问题。当然如果自己不具备这样的能力那还可以来新航道找我们老师咨询。

网友:如何使写作达到6分呀(短期之内),考了三次5分,急!

曹铭伟:5分的同学你一定是语言方面出了太多的错误导致。短期内要解决这个问题有一个建议:保守的方法,不要冒险那些没把握的句子。

当然这得在你文章结构清晰,论点明确有针对性的基础上。所以你的问题,一是要去消灭语言错误控制在合理的范围内,坚决保证不出句子结构问题大错;二是要保证自己思路清晰,同时希望你去熟悉命题,积累写作论点论据。

网友:我想咨询一下老师:我是第一次报名雅思考试,时间是07年2月10号的.平时做题我的错误在15-20个左右.现在离考试还有1个月的时间,我该怎么准备阅读才可以达到7分呢?能不能给下预测,看什么部分的机经会对考试有帮助?谢谢

曹铭伟:想得阅读7分的同学,你必须要切实去提高你的阅读实力,才有根本的保证。除了单词语法之外,一定要去仔细阅读你做过的每一篇文章,解决每个遇到的实际问题。两个月的时间还挺充裕的,希望你能做到。

另外预测的问题,我不想没根据地猜测,但是请你关注06年中出现的新文章,特别是那些没有重复过的。

06年题库:)

网友:曹老师,请告诉我们您的email

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雅思版块发帖。地址是~.51ielts.com,比如我的就是

20xx年雅思考试的视频点评和对07年考试的展望,请各位网友注意收看,同时欢迎光临曹老师的博客

,谢谢曹老师,谢谢各位网友,再见。

雅思作文中最好避免的句子

大概说下自己的情况.我IELTS也是考了N次,虽然最终过了,但是过得很勉强.所以决定在正式的MASTER上课前先读2个月的语言.目前已经上了2个星期的课,总体来说还是颇有些收获的.这2周内已经写了2篇IELTS作文,语言课程的老师从我们的ESSAY中挑出了一堆毛病.把错误之处一一讲解给我们.个人觉得很有用,编辑出来给大家,希望大家能够从中受益.

1. a lot of/lots of

这对词组一般不要出现在academic essay中,考官已经看烦了.可以用A considerable number of代替

2. Everything has two sides/every coin has tow sides

说了跟没说一样,明显的事实,以后也不要用了

3. Recently

这个词不好.按照他们的说法就是too imprecise,没有一个具体的时间.可以用 In the last 5 years…/since….代替

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4. There is survey……

老师是这么说的:has there been?/only say this if you actually know of one 也就是说考官知道这些都是你编的,最好不要用了

5. And, because, but

这三个词我们还是经常会用到.其实最好用in addition, therefore, however等代替

6. 不能用vivid 来形容world vivid可以用来说memories或者是dream之类的

7. No one can deny that…/Undoubtedly

这2个词组太绝对了,用来开头并不合适. 其实每个人都能持与你意见相反的态度

8. in a word

很多人会用它来做conclusion. 鬼佬的意见是:如果你准备用这个词组来引出你的观点,那你最好用一个词来概括,谁让你是这么写的呢

9. Meanwhile don’t use in general academic writing or for task 2—10. Nowadays

理由和3差不多, 这个词用在文章里显得太普通了, 11. It is a well known fact… 最好不要用,

12. advantages and disadvantages 换成13. In my opinion, I dis/agree with this

这是多余的表达相信大家都能看懂,就不翻译了

14. IELTS文章中千万不能用缩写, ,平时最好也别写缩写,多多注意,养成习惯

15. very不能用来形容16. human being MS这个词指的是动物+植物, 以后可以用man kind代替

阅读理解里做题,做到只要出现极端词汇的题,99。************************9%都是错的——相信无论是应试还是别个老师一定说过这句话。

如果这条成立,为什么在自己的作文里还会出现什么

as we all know?

it can not be denied?

除非你真的列举一些不可推翻的事实,比如:中国是世界上人口最多的国家——可是太过事实的事实,往往对你的作文毫无用处,就比如:every coin has two sides.都是写可写可不写的废话。

500条雅思写作实用片语

1.sign sb 与(球员明星)签约

2.be heavily influenced by

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3.His fee was then a British record of $ 28 million.

4.Despite repeated criticism, A has always been supportive of sb.

5.A is struggling to fight for....

6.It's an opportunity for sb to experience the coaching style of .....

7.De123ce has been a trademark of his team.

8.But A's problem this past year was more about sth than anything else.

9.The way you have the best chance to win a championship is to....

10.The big question still remains, ...

11.Will workers be OK with having to do more work?

12.A competent plan that we can follow and be successful with

13.government policy and market force

14.As far as saying that I'm going to do sth, there is nothing specific right now.

15.maximize the potential of sb

16.focus much of one's attention on

17.gain reputation as 被(人们)尊为.....

18.His dedication and love for the game earned him the respect of others.

20.virtually

22.bold exploration

24.at a primary stage of development

25.transient

26.I'm a native of Jiangsu province

27.lifetime occasion 人生大事(结婚等)

33.Sci-fi peaked in the 1970s. 科幻小说

34.Many firms use tactics designed to hide their intent to gather and profit from the data they collect.

35.We have done our part to provide up-to-date info.

36.With a shared vision for the future, 21st century will prosper.

37.innovative

38.motivate sb to do

39.provide easy access to English education for learners

40.The hosting of the 2008 Olympic games

41.the outbreak of SARS

42.exert a lot of pressure on me to do sth

43.The hope of....was shattered when we heard the news.

44.I have still got a big future ahead of me.

45.I are planning on playing football for as long as I continue to enjoy it.

46.It is never route to win a world title.

47.premarital * and homo*uality

48.My whole life is exposed to my parents, I hate this feeling.

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49.Since they have had less freedom, they've gone in pursuit of it.

50.No doubt, the development of information technology has contr123ted its bit in broadening or bending the minds of the 80's generation.

51.get in touch via QQ

52.The Internet is so much more to A than you can imagine.

53.a aspiring student

54.After years of ups and downs

55.It's a lot more mainstream, I think, than people realize.

56.trigger/cause

57.women outnumber men 2-to-1 with the disease

58.This in part, prompted her participation in the campaign.

59.stem the spread of disease

60.remake its image as a center of international activities

61.His subtle smile made him curious.

62.Boys have a strong tendency to fight than girls.

63.Freedom of action is one of inviolable rules of human behavior.

64.Their furniture was chosen for utility rather than for elegance.

65.He welcomes us with artificial smile on his face.

66.A doctor like him is a disgrace to our hospital.

68.Her thrift saved her enough money to buy a house.

73.technical foul 技术犯规///three-point shot///out-of-bound 界外

74.Believe you me! 76.credibility problem

77.The fact has silenced the doubters.

78.It's staging a remarkable comeback.

79.At Yahoo, spontaneity is out, order is in.

80.Wait a few years before we judge them as a group.

81.Different people have different views.

82.paint a picture of young people insecure about their future and deciding to do...

83.The book succeeded in doing a number of things,....

84.be quickly adopted by the media

85.It fails to take into account individual traits and differences between people of same age or background.

86.They are seen to share a general attitude.

87.Great strides have been made in science since 1950.

88.We had a very fruitful discussion in the classroom.

89.in urgent need of medical supplies///overshadow sth

90.There 's evidence to suggest that the onion has a high level of nutrition.

91.A is believed to have the ability to prevent disease.

92.Rest is as crucial as exercise.

93.Proponents say cyclic fitness duplicates the physiology of how humans evolved.

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94.conventional

95.They will not ,he believes, get the health benefits(such as losing weight) without putting sufficient time into their exercise.

96.redraw the line between what is private and public

97.The SARS outbreak deprived A of the chance to display her talent.

98.But,on second thought, I see that

99.give more weight to

100.His "sleepless in the dorm" problem is hardly unique.

101.an 11pm light-out rule 11点熄灯

102.Judge me on the basis of result, and not on style.

103.You must calculate all the advantages and disadvantage before coming to a discussion.

104.convenience store 便利店

105.guarantee financial security

106.win a place as 占有一席之地

107.the world beyond the school walls.

108.market segment 市场份额

109.The price of sugar soars.

110.With continued growth it will surpass Japan by 2020.

111.The long-term trends lend support to the optimistic view.

112.on the cover of magazine

113.That is my priority.

114.We must be more selective in what we choose.

115.A can make fiction a reality in this decade.

116.give sb an edge over sb 给予.....

down to work.

123.The things that they catch or miss often determine whether a game will become a top seller or a failure. 124.In the US, the sale of liquor is restricted to people less than 21 years old.

125.It is a reminder that, behind their smiles and skills, they are as imperfect as the rest of us.

126.Tunes fuelling growth in cell phone market.

127.The mood was light.

128.greet each other by saying....

129.There are so many novel things there.

130.China's Internet population hit 68 million by the end of June.

131.Netizens between the ages of 18 and 30 are the driving force.

132.As the number of china's Internet users grows so does the junk mail.

133.Volunteers help develop backward regions.

134.have gone through a similar progression.

135.Following ringer tones(手机铃声) in popularity are games.

136.We've had a doubling of the number of a every month since 1999.

137.The coming month promise even more content.

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138.in the very near future

139.acquire knowledge ("learn knowledge" is wrong!)

140.We study science to gain insight into the world we live in.

141.The doctor had great prestige among the members of his profession.

142.The trend of modern living is away from many customs.

143.They made a systematic search for the lost car.

144.I hesitated about taking his side until I know the whole story.

145.He reacted my question with much surprise.

146.Her plan was upset by the change of the weather.

147.You must learn to behave in a mature way.

148.The economic gap between A and B has been narrowed.

149.You stood me up. 放我鸽子

150.China is offering preferential politics to encourage retuning scholars to start their own business.

151.The government was accused of paying insufficient attention to the growing AIDS crisis.

152.More than 55% of the people questioned in a recent sina.com survey said that....

153.sidesplitting

154.As the water unexpectedly hot, he jerked his hand out.

155.What bliss it is to be able to lie in bed instead of working.

156.He'll start receiving a pension after he retires.

158.Such a movie is not wholesome to children.

160.endanger one's health

168.bet my future on more study.

169.A school can only be a temporary buffer against social risks. One day, they have to go out.

170.Education has become a lengthier process.

171.But fear of joblessness is not the only thing that sends grads back home.

172.helpful to keep a line between work and personal life.

173.professional conflicts of interest.

174.compete for the same promotion 为同一个竞升职位而竞争

175.Most importantly, an office relationship might make the loves believe that they have a lot more in common than they actually do.

176.Sad breakups show that love and work make a disastrous mix.

177.jet lag 时差

178.Many students share the same opinion that...

179.find a job that is related to their professional knowledge

180.We shouldn't have such high expectations on our future jobs.

181.slid(slide) from fourth to seventh

182.Students are no exception.学生没有例外

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183.When you take shoes off plants nearby die and small birds fall to earth unconscious.

184.Time to do sth

185.Be most upbeat about future

186.A is already being feted as the new "king of .." but time will tell whether he is the real deal. 187.Today,everyone everywhere recognizes A.

188.For underneath all the posing and preening is a man who puts his family's desires alongside his own. 189.have a passion for sth

190.They remain, underneath all the brashness, traditionalists at heart.

191.A great many cancers can be cured, but only if properly treated before they begun to spread. 192.He left his successful business and life of luxury to become a monk.

193.be appropriate for

194.relevant evidence

195.You should not appropriate other people's belongings without their permission.

196.consider all of the possibilities carefully.

197.His wages are not adequate to support his family.

198.A man who is careless in what he does will never succeed.

199.It's impolite behavior to smoke in...

200.The ice on the roads is a hazard for driving and walking.

209.go into the politics

210.No doubt about it.

212.What would Jazz be without ..

213.It's just a term.

214.China is not developed to its fullest potential

215.The broken lock facilitated my entrance into that empty house.

216.Despite the opposition from his family,he remained resolute in his decision.

217.The habit of travelling by air is becoming more prevalent each year.

218.The answer to the question is affirmative.

219.a petty problem

220.They deprived the criminal of his right to vote.

221.She could not restrain her curiosity to see what was in the box.

222.Will you swear to the truth of your statement?

223.Scientists are now on the threshold of a better understanding of how the human brain works. 224.Fame,power,wealth -- all is vanity before death.

225.I have a sensation that ...

226.sociable

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227.We attr123te Edison's success to intelligence and hard work.

228.Our friendship began with a casual meeting.

229.There are hundreds of children who need to be nourished.

230.a exclusive club

231.The discipline of his early hardships contr123ted to his cuccess.

232.Because of advances in medical technology,heart surgery is not as risky as it formorly was.

233.She took the initiative in getting acquainted with sb.

234.She has supersition that breaking a mirror brings bad luck.

235.This one would be even more demanding. 要求更高

236.bring many benefits and conveniences to people

237.The establish of more courses that are contr123tory to the shaping of a sound psychology for students in high school derives form the current social demand.

238.The evcr-increasing improvement in all the realms of human life has necessitated the priority particitation of those who are in possession of adequate expertise, upright conduct and a competent mental condtion.

239.be beneficial to both A and to society as a whole

240.enable sb to stand the sundry emotional social strains

241.exert a huge influence upon...

246.They sacrifice too much.

247.It's not unreasonable that.... ...不无道理

248.Sb should be more supportive of..

255.dreamlands for small children

256.dragon's descendants 龙的传人

257.add to their knowledge something they will never acquire in the classroom

258.research facilities

259.gradually rises to 10% at 8:00 and maintains the same for the next 2 hours

260.There is ... increase ... ,however, after that it drops.

261.During the period from .. to .. , the output increased.

262.This is not a matter of the-earlier-the-better when we discuss sth.

263.It's difficult for them to cope with problems that others find easy to handle.

264.near-sightedness and stunted growth

265.sb should be on guard against sth.

266.Many people hold optimistic attitude towards... ,and are confident of the positive alterations it will bring to the present world.

267.transformation

268.People who believe in different religions may learn to give understanding to one another.

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269.I hope you will place strong emphasis on living a healthy life in order to be truly happy.

270.The 'healthy' in question refers to being at the same time mentally and physically healthy.

271.From this prospective, sb can be considered as...

272.receive higher education

273.His work is more meaningful to the society he lives in.

274.Economists and merchants may serve as perfect examples to verify this point.

275.One's earning can not be solely determined by his education background.

276.We should decide how we are to define "personal income" before finally judging who should own more. 277.He set the tone in the house. 在家里说了算

278.There is not a great deal of difference between A and B.

279.The figures bottomed out in ...

280.This is one of the side effects brought about by this modern world.

281.Failure to take this responsibility constitutes delinquency as parents.

282.be eliminated from the chance to get a proper education

283.The juvenile crime rate will undoubtedly be rapidly brought down and controlled.

284.The overwhelming burden of educating children falls upon the teachers' shoulders.

285.job market

286.I feel that it is not too much to say that modern human beings to being slaves of machines.

287.care nothing about job satisfaction and enjoying life

292.it is less tasty and less nutrition

and calculate are not mutually cxclusive.

299.potential harmful impact on sb

300.such worries have proved to be unfounded

301.They don't care about winning or losing.

302.produce better foodstuffs in terms of quality and quantity

303.GM(Genetically modified) technology opens a new dimension for scientific research.

304.bring the whole plant growth process under our control

305.With careful regulation and control, the advantages wil far outweight the disadvantages.

306.high tuition fees 复数

307.make sure that money does not corrupt this international goodwill sports gathering

308.dissolve tensions between countries and promote harmony between their people

309.deter would-be crimials

310.fortitude

311.private proerty is inviolable

312.did a great service for society

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313.He is faced with problem of finding a high-paying job related to his past studies and interest.

314.pursure sth to the highest extent

315.For people fresh from universities,experience is what they are in great need of.

316.Work experience is equivalent to work expertise.

317.Conversely, aiming at a position beyond one's ability at the beginning of the interview,thought it appears to show ambition,usually proves to be impractical,and is therefore doomed a failure.

318.This dose involve some expence in terms of good food and medical treatment.

319.companion

320.They only eat the leftovers of family meals

321.Sensational stories such as these cause great uhappiness to the people concerned.

322.They are highly-skilled professionals who are aware of all the latest development in their fields of interest. 323.develop many interpersonal skills and become more tolerate,more emotionally mature

324.They adapt so much to weatern culture that they have problems readjusting when they finally return home. 325.infrastructure such as road system and electricity supply

326.Both government and private groups can share in the provision of most services.

327.sth is not an essential feature of modern education.

329.Jealousy can be very destructive, especiall at an early age.

330.There are often many difficult issues to cope with.

relationship succeed.

332.cut short one's lifetime

334.arrange sb's time

335.handle various unexpected crisis

341.pronograghic items

342.It's shortsighted to do A instead of ..

343.Any country which falls behind in the "information race" will become economically backward.

344.China is still struggling to achieve modernization.

345.But I'm far from advocating neglect of culture and art.

346.enhance their sense of identity and solidarity

347.make students proud of belonging to their school

348.Besides, uniforms enhance discipline, which is what most young students lack.

349.sth result in hostility toward...

350.military uniforms 军装

351.People's suitability for a position should be a reflection of their performance in the job.

352.Workers who can still demonstrate the capacity to carry out their work should not be asked to retire simply because they have reached a certain age.

353.You may do well to look again at their policies.

354.While a person can study a foreign language in his or her country, it can not compare with constant use of the language in academic and everyday use.

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355.There is no better opportunity to improve second-language skills than living in the country which it is spoken. 356.living and studying abroad offers me a new and different perspective of the world

357.While any anxiety about A is certainly understandable, it is important to remember that the benefits offered by the experience make it well worthwhile.

358.The media,representing the value of their owners,tend to report wars with a bias.

359.clothing styles

360.A popular figure such as Michael Jackson would never be so well known were it hot for the media's extensive reach into every society on the globe.

361.For a parent with young children,this may be a blessing.

362.One substantial benefit for sb is that there will be no need to travel to work.

363.Sth will serve not only to change the way we work but also the way we live.

364.Sb should engage in educational pursuits in their spare time.

365.It's not contr123tive to do sth in the process of growing up.

366.take painting or drawing

367.The experience of researching and understanding is both useful and thoroghly satisfying.

368.It's true that in today's competitive age it 's essential for children to be adequately educated in order to be successful in the future.

369.Playing sports teaches children about cooperation and goals.

370.a wide range of subjects

371.The pressure to do well.

372.It's not common these days for sb to do

undergo discomfort.

381.Sth is of great importance for sb

382.Sb is undergoing fast physical development.

384.A reasonable amount of exercise guarantees a good appetite and sound sleep at night.

385.The colorful pictures and vivid characters of PC games are far more exciting than dull black letters in textbooks.

386.contain violence pornography

387.PC games have contr123ted a lot to failing eyesight among teenagers in recent years.

388.use sth in a more rational and controlled way

389.With one parent at home, the family will enjoy a lot of advantages that it has never experienced before.

390.There is often something exclusively for adults involved in them, such as the adoption of *ually appealing scenes. 391.As we know, young people are susceptible to bad influences.

392.Sb try every means possible to attract people's attention

393.mislead young people in choosing their lifestyles

394.Teachers should give priority to practical courses over such traditional ones as history and geography.

395.These days there is a growing tendency for college students to have difficulties in finding jobs when they graduate.

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396.hold the opinion that lack of practical knowledge contr123te to this situation

397.emphasis on practical course is demanded by our ever-developing society

398.If a student has little knowledge of computers or business, he will lag behind the times.

399.They are either too theoretical or too academic.

400.There is no denying the fact that.....

401.the balance should be tipped toward practical courses in school curriculums.

402.Women are more law-abiding than men.

403.The number of vehicles is increasing much more rapidly than the building of roads.

404.Many people, including drivers, pedestrians do not obey traffic rules properly, carefully at busy intersections. 405.This undoubtedly worsens the already grave situation.

406. I'm confident that it will not be long before city traffic in China follows in a smother and more efficient manner.

407.come up with their own solutions to problems they encounter instead of turning to their parents for help 408.find it easier to adapt to modern society, which is full of competition when they grow up

409.Children have less time to communicate with their parents, which may eventually create a gap between them, and weaken family ties.

412.The maintenance of sth is futile.

416.Pigs are used in the battle against drugs.

as a whole, will arise in the future.

s with ancestors’ experience but also help us to avoid going off the right path.

423.social intercourse

424.intense academic atmosphere can guide us to reach a balance between academic and practical activities. 425.Sb have made great progress in supplying sb with more and more field trips and practical courses.

426.accululate experience helpful for our future enterprises

427.from the historical prospective

428.achieve spectacular business success

429.have every reason to lend support in

430.suffer under the colonial rule of western powers

431.the further development of rich countries is dependent upon

432.rebellious

433.be under an obligation to give sb a helping hand in improving sth

434.The situation is completely unacceptable.

435.make allowance for 体谅

436.is a necessary supplement to the knowledge they gain from school course

437.reinforce children’s sense of responsibility

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438.help them understand the famous saying” no pain no pain” better

439.corporal punishment

440.numerous studies have been done on

441.The mission of educating the young to be useful to society and to avoid wrongdoing can be fulfilled in many ways. 442.should learn more about the inner world of youngsters, try to understand them, and guide them to acquire a sense of self-worth.

443.Whether sth is the best measure for handing any problem caused by children is up to the parents to decide—not the schools.

444.malnutrition

445.disturb the natural balance

446.a powerful corrective

447.Don’t forget to flush. 便后要冲水

448.dyed yellow hair

449.It is not absolute that an intelligent couple will have a clever child.

450.a more environmentally friendly place to live

451.the dangerous gas given off by exhausts of cars , bus and lorries

452.plain looking face 平凡的长相

1.图表作文。

这些词整理一下包括:

increase decrease

rise drop

grow fall

shoot up(非常得快) decline

reach a peak

reach a number

fluctuate(wildly/mildly)

________ level off, to stablize,to maintain a trend

形容快慢的词:

rapid(ly) *dramatical(ly) *slight

*sharp(ly) *gradual(ly)

*quick(ly)

*superising(ly)

sluggish(ly) *stead

带* 的我比较常用:)

还有就是注意要比较数据之间的关系(same ,similar,twice...),通常在文章的结尾给出一定的猜想,例如趋势什么的。 还有实心的线(solid line),虚线(break line),点线(dot line) 图表作文,要看到就写,因为就是让你描述这个图说了什么,数据之间的关系,所以不用想太多,留点时间给下面的部分。第一句话经常是: this graph shows(illustrates)

2.不知道怎么叫(呵呵)

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首先是文章的组织结构。思维方式的差异,外国人的文章我们会发现,都是简单明了,一般是让你看了它的第一段就知道,他要说什么,甚至就知道了文章的组织结构。实际上我觉得文章的组织结构是很重要的,要在文章的组织结构下点功夫。 其次,就是一些连词的使用。通常我们的中文写作是没有这样的连词的使用的,但是在英文写作中,连词就变得很重要。如果不能合理的使用连词,有的人甚至没有使用,那就大大的糟糕了。因为通过连词,别人能发现你要做什么比如说

furthermore, 那么别人就知道你要进一步的说明。如果是however 那么别人就知道你要转折了。这些连词在读文章的时候也是很重要的,引人注目的地方。

还有就是句式的结构,只要不出大的错误叫好。

经常用的连词有这样一些:

however,on the other hand,furthermore,in addition,

表示因果的:result in , lead to,result from.consequently

还有一些,在北外的写作那本书上有,那本书这点不错的,还有一些其他方面的练习,对考试很有帮助。

好了说说最重要的组织结构吧:

第一段,一般是概括全文 ,首先一般是定义,要是单独的argument, 这种文章,接下来就要说你的观点了,然后就是outline, 章就按照这种理由的顺序来写,是in conclusion,sum up 什么的。

如果是discussion, 题目不这样写不行,那么通常的结构是:第一段 优点和缺点,我给的我的文章的advertising 就是那样的outline 分别有双方面的理由。然后的以后的段落,基本上是先说你的最后不同意的观点,1,2段 4,5,6 自己比较倾向的观点写的多些。最后 虽然是 议论文,你还是要有自己的观点的。 argument 比较好写,两方面论证比较繁。想不10 分钟来想怎么写,什么

对啦差点忘了说了,还要注意 每段的结构,一般是topic sentence 放在最前面,topic sentence 很重要啊。段与段之间也可以用一些呼应,就是什么the first argument in favor of xxxx is, 下一段:another aspect of xxx ....

实用的写作7分心得

8月26日的雅思成绩出来了,第一次考,总分有6.5,写作出乎意料的有7分。惊喜之余将自己的心得写出,仅供参考。 考试之前,我一篇完整的大作文都没有写过,实在写不出来,每次写一半就会扔掉,而小作文我也仅完整写过一篇。真正复习作文,我大概只用了5天不到的时间,3天看范文,1天总结出自己的一套写法,1天背诵。就因为自己没写过,加之紧张,考试时我小作文用了28分钟,大作文相当吃紧。好在周围考生和我速度也差不多,没有让我心里很慌张;也幸好我自己加快了速度,否则会和周围考生一样大作文只写出100字左右。 几个复习要点:

1.小作文注意词汇的多样性和句子的连接。开头不用说,就是很固定的第一句写内容,第二句写趋势。后面2段抓住不同的重点作出比较就ok。

上升和下降的词汇一定要多准备,背熟,考试时几乎没有让你想的时间。句子的连接使文章既简明又突出了比较,绝对是加分的重点。

2.大作文一定要就不同的问法准备一套自己的套路。个人认为准备2+1和question&suggestion式2套足以,因为2+1稍作

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修改就是对称式嘛,我拿到题目时打算写2+1,后来发现时间不够,写成了对称式,只要能自圆其说,一样7分。自己的套路,不是让你去搬人家的模板,而是在阅读10-20篇范文的基础上,写出适合自己水平的,大词不多但又格外地道的开头、结尾、连接句。这里推荐严春华老师的blog:/user1/66/index.html(感谢萝卜友情推荐),和牛牛的教你写英语8级作文(我参考过其中的经典句子)。

3.做到心里有数是关键。给你任何一个题目,你可以不写出来,但是要去想想我每一句话要写什么,哪里是套用模板,哪里是论点,哪里是论据,哪里该描述现象,一定要很明确。

我只复习了几天作文,也算是找到了捷径。但是以上方法仅建议9月的考生参考,若有时间,还是多练多改,提高整体水平是硬道理。不然一个运气不好,论据部分写的太差,给批为模板作文,谁也救不了你。

关于作文里的错误,经常听老师说鬼子们一旦发现你的拼写或者语法错误,就不会给你6分以上,不知道是否如此。反正我的作文里非常清楚的拼错了language,小的语法错误我想也应该会有,所以这些都不是关键,考试时不用太紧张。放松心态,就会得到惊喜!

雅思作文经典结尾

Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.

更多过渡短语: to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus

更多句型: Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

更多句型:

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.

第一部分、用于雅思小作文开头部分经典句型

1、通过第一个曲线图,我们可以知道____,___

2

3、当前有一张涉及______,然而其他人倾向于___

4、目前,共同之处是_________,因为_______除此之外还由于_____ Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like ______________ because ______________. Besides,

______________.

5、(图表所示)_____,就像许多其他事物,被____更加喜爱,然而这一观点正被________

所抨击,一些人认为_________,他们指出___________

______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ______________.

While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider

______________. They point that ______________.

6、每种事物都有两面性和________,是没有异议的,包括利和弊

Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both

advantages and disadvantages.

7、_____作为_____被观察了许多年,但是人们现在像发现新大陆一样注视着它

For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________. But people are

taking a fresh look at it now.

8、政府保证________,对于这份保证,大多数人做出了强烈地回应,因为_____

It has stipulated by the government that ______________. To this stipulation,

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many people respond actively because ______________.

9、_______出现在我们日常生活中是很平常的,无论我们做什么,_______都是不可避免的 ______________ is a common occurrence in our daily life. Whatever we do, ______________ can't be avoided.

10、_____在人群中已经成为热门话题,特别是在年轻人中,激烈的争论无休止

______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the

young, and heated debates are right on their way.

11、最近,_______已经成为社会焦点,这样,人们涌往______

Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this way..

People swarm to ______________.

12、_____在我们日复一日的生活中起到了越来越重要的作用,它为我们带来了许多好处,

同时也减少了许多问题

______________ has been playing an increasingly important role in our

day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious

problems as well.

13、人们正面临着一个很严重的问题_______,首先______,然后________

Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and

14、现在,越来越多的人开始意识到________的严重性

______________.

15、最近几年人们基本意识到_________

______________.

16、有一个旧的说法________- 正确的

17、英国谚语_______

18、_____是______,同时又是______,我们应该做些什么解决 ________面对目前的环境

These two factors have caused ______________. Then what shall we do to solve

______________ in the face of such a situation.

19、一位远古的哲人说过,________,中国人已经铭记于心

One of our ancient philosophers said, ______________. Chinese people have

always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.

20、一位非常著名的作家说过______,如果这是真的,目前的状况应使我们沉思______ One of the great early writers said that ______________. If this is true, the present situation should make us ponder over ______________.

第二部分、用于雅思小作文中间部分经典句型

1. 最明显的原因_______,因此_________

The most obvious reason for this phenomenon is that ______________.

Consequently, ______________.

2. 无论你喜欢与否,_____已经变得越来越流行,这是有原因的

No matter you like it or not, AAA has become more and more popular and there are

many reason for it.

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3. 对我们来说,改变这个不利的环境________是非常紧急的

It’s an urgent task for us to change this unfavorable situation: ______________.

4. 这个图片会让你想起一些奇怪的东西,这种现象还是会继续存在这个社会

The picture can reminds you of some strange, yet familiar phenomena existing in our society.

5. 提供了大量的解决方案,一些人建议______,另一些人建议______

A great number of solutions are being offered. Some people suggest that

______________. Others argue that ______________.

6. 对于____,我们应该____

Confronted with AAA, we should take a serious of effective measures to cope with the situation.

7. 然而,______引起了许多为问题,

However, _____________ may cause some problems. First, it is ______________. Second, ______________. Finally, ______________. So, it is clear that ________ has its advantages and disadvantages.

8. 虽然_____有一个______的非常大的好处,但是它不能完全在方面 compete with ______________ in ______________.

9._____也许更喜欢_____,但是_____忍受_____ disadvantages that ______________.

10._____的有利之处比______

_________. 11.

12.

13. On the contrary, there are some people in favor of ______________. They believe ______________. Moreover, they think ______________.

14. There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can ______________, there are a number of advantages of __________. Another solution is to ________.

15. It is high time that something was done about it. For example, ______________. In addition, ______________. All these measures will certainly ______________. 16.

There are some other people, who ______________. Their reasons are different, something for ______________, sometimes for ______________, and sometimes simply for ______________.

17. ______________ is necessary and important to our country’s development and construction. First, ______________. What’s more, ______________. Most important of all, ______________.

18. However, if not managed properly, ______________ can create many problems. Sometimes ______________. Furthermore, ______________. Therefore,

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______________ has been gaining public concern.

19. 有很多原因____,………

①There are probably many reasons for ______________. First, ______________. ②Second, ______________. Finally, ______________.

There are, I think, two main reasons for ______________. In the first place, ______________. In the second place, ______________. Therefore, ______________.

③Well, why is there ______________? I think there might be two reasons. One is ______________, and the other is ______________.

④Why ______________? For one thing, ______________. For another,

______________. Perhaps the main reason is ______________.

⑤Why ______________? The first reason is that ______________. The second reason is ______________. The third is ______________. For all this, the main cause of ______________ is due to ______________.

20. It is no easy job to find the reasons for this tendency which involves several complicated factors. For some ______________. For others ______________.

21.

22. ______________?

23. brings this result? The main reason rests with.

24. ①

become more and more common.

25.

that ______________.

26. Nowadays, ______________ has become a problem we have to face. Though it’s with the help of modern technology, we now have many means to solve it.

27. 对于这个图,说明了_____

①The graph shows the general trend in ______________.

②According to the figures/numbers/statistics/percentages in the table/chart/bar graph/line graph, it can be seen that ______________. Obviously,

______________, but why?

③The figure indicates/shows/suggests/proves that ______________. There is a steady/rapid development/trend of ______________.

④From the graph/chart, we know the statistics of ______________ and

______________. It can be seen easily that ______________.

⑤According to the two graphs presented, it can be observed that _____

In the left graph, ______________. At the same time, ______________ as the right graph shows.

28. 现在我们经常听到_____,但是真的如此吗?

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①These days we are often told that ______________. But is it true?

②These days we often hear about ______________. But is this really the case?

29. 一位著名的作家曾经说过_____,

One of the great writers once said that ______________. Now it still has a

realistic significance.

30. 回看历史,______的想法从来都没流行过,一方面_____另一方面______

In our history, the idea that ______________ never has been so popular. On one

hand, ______________, on the other hand, ______________.

31. 人们中有许多像____不同的意见,一些人认为_______

There are different opinions among people as to ______________. Some people

suggest that ______________.

32. 一些人认为________对_______来说在许多方面都是好的,然而,其他人不同意 Some people hold the opinion that ______________ is superior to

______________ in many ways: Others, however, disagree with it.

33. 现在虽然越来越多的人______,但仍有一些_____的人,他们也许认为_____

Nowadays although more and more people ______________, still there are some

访谈:任晓冬谈雅思写作高分策略

无忧雅思:各位网友,下午好,今天访谈的主题是“雅思写作高分策略”

无忧雅思:请您谈一下考生应该如何准备才能取得6.5以上的高分呢?

任晓冬:关于雅思考试取得6.5中听力部分的词汇,这同时也是为了将来同学们出国后的生活及学习打下良好的基础。或者无法正确进行拼写。这些就需要同学们针对雅思考试的考试方式进行有重点的学习以及应试能力培养。

网友:老师,我不想得高分只想保6就够了,因为我的听力和口语比较好,在新航道的模考中拿了6分,结果上次考试作文只有5,我回来也有大量的在看作文,可是就是没什么效果,明天就考试了,上个月基本每3天一篇,可是效果不好,这是为什么?

任晓冬:雅思写作部分5、6分之间的差异在于考生的思路新颖以及表达的准确性,这一点就要求考生在思路上能够求新,求变。在考试时如果考官发现你的思路与大部分考生的思路相似或者一致,那么,在这一部分的评分中就无法占到便宜。其次,在表达方面5分的同学应当具备了一定的复杂句写作能力,但是在细微的语法方面及词汇准确度上依然把握的不够,这就要求考生在复习时重点从自己的文章中找出表达方面的不足,再跟大家一起探讨思路,力求思路的新颖,这样写作部分就会有一定的提高。

网友:雅思作文是写简单句好呢,还是写复杂句好呢?

任晓冬:这并不是可以一概而论的,正如我上面所提到的雅思考试中对于复杂句的书写是有一定要求的。因为英语复

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杂句的写作是能够集中体现出考生的英语语感及语言操作能力的,这里面同学们需要注意的是,写作部分在评分标准中明确说明复杂句应当是包含多于一个独立动词的句子,而并不是只要长就好。当然,简单句也是有必要出现的,在写作中应该是简单句与复杂句交替出现。我在教课时总是和学生讲在表达方面尽量使自己的文章“安全”.比如说在写分论点句时,如果对这句的复杂句写作形式没有充分的把握,那么简单句的出现就是必要的,因为,论点句不仅影响着表达评分,同时也决定了思路评分。所以,一定要确保考官能够看懂你的文章及思路。

网友:雅思写作中用的词汇要用很专业吗?

任晓冬:雅思考试大纲中所列出的要求大纲内词汇在7000左右,这些词汇也就是我们在生活及学习中所必备的,在量上6级词汇水平基本上就够用了。在写作里面对词汇的专业程度并没有很高的要求。在写作时不一定要写出考官都不太熟悉的专业词汇,但是,在词汇的广度及深度上是有要求的。一、体现在词汇量是否丰富,同义词,反义词的替换能力是否到位,二、写作中所用的词汇是否得体,正确。这一点尤为重要,尤其是在雅思G类写作的书信中,对于语域的把握就是词汇的得体程度及深度的体现。

网友:请问对于高中生想拿到6分的话应该咋在两个月内该做哪些准备呢?

个雅思培训班,尽量用必要的应试技能弥补语言基础的不足。

网友:老师,你好,我3月31日考试,6分争7分,请问写作在短时间内提高可能吗?如想达到理想的分数,在这不到2,?谢谢!

06年的067分对于语法及词汇的

网友:雅思中心词汇重要么?

任晓冬:重要!但是,在听说读写四大方面的体现是不一样的。

网友:我看到有网友说只写了一个TASK2也得到了6分,是不是写作最好从TASk2开始写呢?1和2的时间分配大约应该如何分呢?

任晓冬:是的,写作部分大作文的评分是高于小作文的,科学的时间分配应该是大作文用40分钟时间完成,小作文用20分钟时间。当然也建议考生先先写大作文以保证大部分分数。

网友:我是一名G类考生,但是现在很难找到专门针对G类考生的学习资料,请问老师我上培训班和做题按A类考生的准备可以吗?据说A类更难些,是不是按A类准备沾光?

任晓冬:在大作文层面上是的,但是,在小作文方面却无法匹配,G类的小作文是书信写作,对于语气,语域的要求是比较高的,换句话说A类小作文是体现客观事实的描述能力,G类小作文是体现生活语言的得体与否。网友:大学英语四级,

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已毕业十年,移民要求两个7分,两个5分以上,请问怎样备考?需备哪些参考书?任晓冬:请参考我对5380网友的回答。但针对四级水平而言,词汇量及深度的把握是需要重点突破的一关。

网友:我今年高二,在一个双语高中,准备报暑假的雅思基础班,请问下个学期该做哪些准备呢?学习完基础班,大概能考个几分呢?

任晓冬:看你的英语基础能力,因为培训班的学习是不能够替代英语基础能力培养的,通过培训班可以在总体分数上提高0.5分-1分,主要还是要取决于考生的真实英语水平。

网友:老师,我想请问一下雅思作文7分需掌握多少词汇啊?我是六月考试,接下来的时间在作文方面我该怎么准备啊?把机经上的题都写一遍会有用吗?谢谢!

任晓冬:请参考我对5385网友的回答。对于机经的题目做一遍还是有必要的,毕竟熟能生巧。

IDEA:老师,我还有两个月考,此前参加过环球,老师叫我们听LISTEN TO THIS我也听了并且严格按老师的方法听的,但这几天听剑桥3效果很差,老师我现在要绝望了,我只要求6分,请老师帮忙!!!

LISTEN TO THIS这本书,

网友:今年的雅思写作会有什么变化吗?

涉及。

网友:老师,我要在明天考试,很担心会不会考流程题,关于流程题目有什么写作诀窍吗?

任晓冬:重点注意在流程图写作中考官重点要看到的是流程的有序介绍以及每一步骤的工作作用或原理,这两点是要涉及到的。

网友:希望老师能够建议一下现在该看什么写作书,还有两个月考试

任晓冬:《雅思高分作文》胡敏第四套教材,可以参见一下。

网友:雅思写作一定要用到举例论证和因果论证么?谢谢!

任晓冬:不一定!还有对比论证和让步论证。

网友:老师,对于三月作文考题应该复习哪些范围?

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任晓冬:该复习的所有范围:)我们是老师,不是巫师:)

网友:能概要介绍一下举例论证、因果论证、对比论证和让步论证都在什么情况下用吗?

任晓冬:这个是不一定的,要看你的文章思路设计了。

网友:网上的一些试题预测可以相信吗?

任晓冬:可以参考,但不能过于依赖预测。

网友:哪些网站的内容对提高雅思写作水平有益呢?

任晓冬:无忧雅思网: ,雅思官方网站:,新航道的网站:。

无忧雅思:您在教授雅思写作的过程中,提倡“三部节络法”,请谈一下这方面的详细情况。

"三部"指的是文章的总分总结构,"节"指的是段落中句与句"络"指的的语法错误,这同时也是雅思的一大评分标准。

的视频采访,“三部节络法”,请大家关注无忧视点栏目,谢谢任老师,谢谢各位网友,再见。

IELTS写作中你不应该用到的表达

大概说下自己的情况.我IELTS也是考了N,,但是过得很勉强.所以决定在正式的MASTER上课前先读2个月的语言.目前已经上了2个星期的课,.这2周内已经写了2篇IELTS作文,语言课程的老师从我们的ESSAY中挑出了一堆毛病.把错误之处一一讲解给我们.个人觉得很有用,编辑出来给大家,希望大家能够从中受益.

1. a lot of/lots of

这对词组一般不要出现在academic essay中,考官已经看烦了.可以用A considerable number of代替

2. Everything has two sides/every coin has tow sides

说了跟没说一样,明显的事实,以后也不要用了

3. Recently

这个词不好.按照他们的说法就是too imprecise,没有一个具体的时间.可以用 In the last 5 years…/since….代替

4. There is survey……

老师是这么说的:has there been?/only say this if you actually know of one 也就是说考官知道这些都是你编的,最好不要用了

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5. And, because, but

这三个词我们还是经常会用到.其实最好用in addition, therefore, however等代替

6. 不能用vivid 来形容world vivid可以用来说memories或者是dream之类的

7. No one can deny that…/Undoubtedly

这2个词组太绝对了,用来开头并不合适. 其实每个人都能持与你意见相反的态度

8. in a word

很多人会用它来做conclusion. 鬼佬的意见是:如果你准备用这个词组来引出你的观点,那你最好用一个词来概括,谁让你是这么写的呢

9. Meanwhile don’t use in general academic writing or for task 2—but it is ok for describing a process in task 1 10 Nowadays

理由和3差不多, 这个词用在文章里显得太普通了, 老师的原话是it does not mean very much

11 It is a well known fact… 最好不要用, 有的考官会扣分

12 advantages and disadvantages 换成13 In my opinion, I dis/agree with this

这是多余的表达,就不翻译了

14 IELTS文章中千万不能用缩写, 例如I’m ,,多多注意,养成习惯

15 very不能用来形容16 human being MSman kind代替

9999999999999999999999999%都是错的——相信无论是应试还是别个老师一定说过这句话。

如果这条成立,为什么在自己的作文里还会出现什么

as we all know?

it can not be denied?

除非你真的列举一些不可推翻的事实,比如:中国是世界上人口最多的国家——可是太过事实的事实,往往对你的作文毫无用处,就比如:every coin has two sides.都是写可写可不写的废话。(

环境类写作考题范文:全球变暖

Many people believe that human activity is causing the earth’s temperature to rise. They say that this global warming will have dreadful consequences for our environment, such as drought and flooding.

What should governments do to help prevent global warming? Give reasons for your suggestions.

The earth’s temperature is rapidly changing. As a result there has been a lot of climate change such as heat waves, droughts and floods. Scientists believe that this is the result of human activity, which is polluting the Earth’s

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atmosphere. This could become a disaster if governments do not act to help prevent global warming. They can act in three ways; by supporting research, by making laws and by keeping the general public informed.

Firstly, governments can support research. For example, they should encourage companies to develop vehicles that cause less pollution. They should also support alternative sources of electricity from wind and water rather than from oil and coal. As well, they should sponsor conferences to discuss the effects of greenhouse gas emissions and possible solutions to the problem.

Secondly, they should make laws that limit the amount of greenhouse gases that companies can emit. Private companies should be rewarded for following these laws. They should also be punished for creating pollution. Finally, everybody is affected by global warming. Therefore, it is important that governments involve individuals in the problem solving process. For example they should encourage households to save as much energy as possible by using more efficient light bulbs or less hot water. They should also encourage the public to recycle, and this should be compulsory for everyone. Another way of saving energy is by public transport systems. Governments should spend money on public transport to make it as easy as possible for the public to save energy. They

雅思写作反驳对方观点的一些简单句型(英)

Two sides of an argument

Give the other side

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? While it is true that… … I believe… Despite the fact that millions of people die every year from lung cancer, many people think it is cool to smoke. Although many people think that…., I feel that Although it is often said that…, in fact the opposite is true

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? It is undoubtedly true that… …However… It is often argued that… However, it is Some people say that… They claim… However, I feel… Supporters of this viewpoint say that… However, it is

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One sentence (While, although)

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7分范文:个人幸福取决于什么?

题目:Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on completely other factors. Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion. In recent years, the discussion of whether personal happiness is directly associated to economic success has become a controversial issue. Notions toward it differ widely from person to person.

阿s multiple life domains, ders happiness. What’s more, It is indisputable that ask for more time.

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