高分作文标志:
1:是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3、用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词; 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
1. 适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾20xx年x月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2. 善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?
3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,
people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。 Computer and I
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth. google 替换 search
an army of 替换 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什
么事情; Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular
Coincident with ? 非常地道的句型,表达“与?一致”的意思,替换 With ?
Advancement 替换 development
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into
Current ( currently )替换 now
Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替换 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型, 说某事是毫不夸张的 沪江四六级
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start 替换 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先There is no denying that这个句型,还有however作为插入语, function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to
Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing )
Net citizen 网民,属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ,do 强调
Positive 替换 important / good 等
A slice of 替换 a part of
Unfavorable 替换 bad
Impacts 替换 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入语
Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象, merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) Facet 替换 aspect
以下是30个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下:
1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising (有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad
如果bad做表语,可以有be less impressive替换
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.
When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.
注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要有词。
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that?.同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语,所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8: shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits )
10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.
Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly
13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.沪
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth
23.desire 替换want.
24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替换remember
26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
27. interaction替换communication
28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible
第二篇:六级英语高分作文闪光点总结
六级英语高分作文闪光点总结: 是否长短句交叉; 是否会使用插入语;
用词是否多样,准确,形象,
尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词; 句型使用是否准确、地道 替换:
1. Every coin has two sides. Every sword is two-edged. Everything has its pros and cons. No garden has no weeds. 2. people,persons individuals 3. some
a slice of , several, quite a few 4. thing
affair, business, matter 5. think
harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that 6. in my opinion
for my part ,from my own perspective 7. very
exceedingly, extremely, intensely 8. more and more
increasing(ly), growing 9. remember
bear in mind that 10. pay attention
pour attention into 11. reasons for sth.
There are several reasons behind sth. 12. cause
give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 13. customer
shopper, client, consumer, purchaser 14. good
positive, favorable, rosy, promising, superior, perfect, outstanding, excellent, pleasurable 15. bad
dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill, be less impressive 16. helpful, useful
beneficial, rewarding 17. for example, for instance to name only a few 插入语:
善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插
入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词
后,两边分别加上逗号。如however / therefore /for
example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动
词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.
We should ,therefore, take advantage of both traditional education and online education. 句型变化
1. 适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I We should pay attention to… Attention should be paid to… 2. 巧用句型
It’s important that…
It’s of importance that…
图表作文型
Model 1 Model 3 1. 解释说明图表的内容和特点 1. 描述图表内容 As is vividly indicated in the above chart, According to the chart, it is clear that (图表主题). Especially in (图 (关 键时间), (图表最大特点). 2. 分三方面说明原因 The reasons for are as follows. Firstly, 1). Secondly, (原因2). Thirdly, (原因3). 3. 分析带来的影响,给出建议 From the changes reflected in the chart, we can predict/see that . On the one hand, 1). On the other hand, (产生的影响2). Model 2
1. 分析图表得出整体变化趋势 From the charts/According to the charts/figures given in the chart, we can see that (图表 数字的变化趋势). 2. 针对图表中的变化细节给出相应的原因 We can see from the statistics given that (图表变化细节1). This means that (说 明原因). In addition, the figures also tells us that (图表变化细节2). From it we can see that (说明原因). 3. 得出结论 Judging from the figures, we can predict/see that (得出结论). 表反映的总体现象). 2. 分析现象产生的原因 There are many reasons accounting for (相关现象). On the one hand, (原因1). On the other hand, (原因2). What’s more,
(原因3). As a result, (结论). 3. 阐述自己的观点 As to me, (自己的观点). For one thing, 理由1). For another, (理由2). To conclude, (总结观点).
Graph (曲线图) Bar Chart (柱状图) Table (表格) Pie Chart (饼状图)
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