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Who Are Teachers’ Pets, Boys or Girls?

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Nowadays, a growing number of people tend to think about a question: who do teachers like more?

Reading this table, we can get some information and analyse the result via the figures. Obviously, teachers favor girls over boys in primary school. As far as I concerned, the most indispensable reason is that girls are quiet, smart and well-behaved during that age. While in junior middle school, hat might seem to be no difference between boys and girls. In a word, there is no prejudice and gender discrimination at that time. Nevertheless things are getting change when coming to senior high school. The most

reasonable explanation is that girls are superior to boys in math and physics up to the age of ten, fall behind from then on. under that circumstance, teachers is shown to call on male in class far more than female students. While in college, teachers seem to have no preference in student because of the less attention and unawareness

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标题：How to Improve Your English

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

字数180字左右，给出分论点后需用举例手法论证

English is an important language to communicate with individual from other countries. Therefore, it is our obligation to improve English if we are eager to develop our ability to communicate with foreigners. My suggestions about improving English as follows.

In the first instance, you ought to read more English books in place of Chinese books. It is a wonderful ideal for you to increase vocabulary and expand vision from foreign literature. My brother was absorbed in foreign literature in university and read a large number of books about it. He can communicate with foreigners in daily life fluently even he will work in the United States next month.

Watching English movies or listening to English music is a great way that must be taken into consideration. The most rewarding result of doing it for me is that I got gold medal in the English speech contest. It is a simple thing for you to listen to music in your spare time or watch English movies relax yourself when you feel tired.

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标题：大学生参加社会实践

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled College Students Should Take Part in Social Practice following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

1、 很多大学生缺乏社会实践

2、 大学生应该参加社会实践

3、 我的观点

范文:According to a survey, in recent years, many universities ignored the phenomenon that college students did not have enough chance to take part in social practice leaded to they lacked the ability to adapt to society in the future. When we asked college students whether they had engaged in social practice, most of them said no. I take it for granted that social practice can bring many benefits to college student. In the first instance, social practice can offer students adequate chance to meet various people in society. They can accumulate enough experience and use it in the future career. The second thing that must be taken into consideration is that it is a great opportunity for them put theory into practice and improve their In a word, I take the attitude that social practice is a critical thing for university students and they should also learn how to balance between study and work.

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Read or do

While it's quite obvious that there are good many advantages brought by doing, virtually, thoughts of people with not much reading can't be elevated by doing in some way.

People taking actions to alter for the better surround us all the time. Significant passion in running small business, such as selling packed meal and directly delivering fresh fruits to the dormitory, is evident. And many colleges seriously love to be a part of the association activities, even have no idea of what's going on in the activity. Whereas many of them who act instead of reading more make little advancement both in their mind or knowledge, for almost everyone give their concentration on their external activities, ignoring the insight of their hearts. Nevertheless, it is of more importance to reach the mind's pinnacle, and only by this way, difficult matters in the frustrating life become nothing.

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The person I love/ admire most

要求

1. No less than 90 points by Pigai.

2. No less than 26o words.

3. Deadline Nov. 3.

作文号:357928 教师:邵春 字数:260~500 满分:100

Attitude

要求

For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Attitude by commenting on the famous saying, “A man can succeed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm .” You should write at least 260 words but no more than 500 words.

作文号:357929 教师:邵春 字数:100~500 满分:100

第一篇

The person I love/ admire most

Everyone has someone in his heart that he admires most, who may be a scientist, a writer, a musician or a movie super star. But,as for me,the most admirable person of mine is Christian Ronaldo, who is one of the greatest football player in today's world. Ronaldo was born in 1985, He was played for the Manchester united and now plays for real Madrid, when he was 18 years old he became a main force of Portugal national team. As for the world’s most brilliant super football stars, he not only has a handsome appearance, also has a special skill and efficient scoring ability. However, this is not reason why I admire him, the really point let me be his fans is his gratitude feelings and persistence of perseverance.

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Life is a treasure , and it contains many interesting and colorful things . We gain a lot from life , in the meanwhile the life teach us plenty of things that involve many aspects . So the problem of what is the best way of learning about life has aroused people’s concern in recently years.

Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends.They've done a lot of learning in their lives , so they can give you suggestions before you make a decision,even set you examples in school,family,enterprise and other aspects.

Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. No one else can teach you how to improve yourself,how to enjoy your life and how to choose things what you like most. In some cases, there's no real substitute for personal experience.For example,I am not good at math,only practicing by myself can make me a great improvement in this subject.The personal experience is the only key in some cases.

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初中作文批改评语范例

一、字迹

A、书写清秀、整洁，犹如海滨小城的街道一样，找不到一点脏??端端正正的字迹， 让人看了真舒服??你的字像印的一样漂亮??

B、随随便便，字哪能不像猫掏的似的??字不在格子中间，当然看起来不顺眼??你

的字东倒西歪，是不是今天风太大，才刮成这样的??我不相信你的字写不好，永远就这么 潦草??认真耐心地写，你会写的比我还要棒??

二、内

容

A

、这般丰富的内容，简直和作家写出来的差不多呀??你的习作有血有肉，读起来真 是一大享受??你的作文内容具体，我读的十分过瘾

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内容紧贴现代生活，新颖别致，把握时代脉搏，尽现时代气息。

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脉络分明，层次感强，叙气说井然有序，纤毫不乱。

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详略得当，主次分明，思路清晰。精挑细拣，素材似为主题量身定制。

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叙述详细具体，细节描写生动逼真，人物个性鲜明突出，形象丰满，跃然纸上。

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以环境烘托人物的心情，情景交融，情现景中，景随景现。

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想像丰富，构思奇特且不脱离生活的真实，扎跟于生活的联想，拓宽了读者的思维， 让人觉得生动有趣。

7.

景物描写传神逼真，遣词造句贴切得体，景随情生，情景交融，

呈现在读者面前的恰

似一幅生动传情的写生画。

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想像奇妙，既源于生活，不失生活的真实，又高于生活，开阔读者的视野，充满了艺 术魅力。

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事件过程描述详细具体，

内容虽多但显得有条不紊、

井然有序，

体现了作者清晰的思

路与谋篇布局的能力。

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外貌描写生动形象，

人物容颜逼真、

穿着恰当合体，

宛如反映人物性格的一面镜子，

真是所谓“相由人生”

。

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环境描写客观真实，环境为人物的性格服务，更好地解释了人物性格形成过程中的 来龙去脉。

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神态描写生动传神，寥寥数语，将人物的性格特点勾勒得一览无遗，人物的言谈举 止具有了鲜明独特的个性。

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