一、 商业

1、 雇主与员工Can employer obtain employees’ private information without

permission/should employee put the need of company in the first place/employers can

benefit more from old workers’ experience or new workers’ new ideas and

energy/employees should keep their personal activities away from wormkplace

2、 合作Is the Importance of teamwork overemphasized?/team with a strong team member

VS. a good team

3、 领导者Leader is someone who can perform the same task that he or she expects other to

perform /A powerful business leader has more opportunity to influence a community or a

nation than some government forces

4、 companies should resist changing their products and processes in response to each new

recommendation until those recommendations become government regulations 5、 变革Is change a harm to a company

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领导者

70"In any profession—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years. The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership." Position: Limiting the term of leadership is an effective way to prevent corruption and lack of initiatives.

A. When leaders have no fear of losing their power, they tend to abuse their power.

B. A new leadership usually has greater initiative and would bring in new ideas.

C. However, in private areas such as business it might not be so necessary to limit the term of leadership.

1.though creativity is emphasized ubiquitously in study, business, research, and thought, we should adopt is selectively.

2.new things always have many rejections in its application, and is not always on the right track. In the transformation of the leadership, efficiency of the enterprises will surely deteriorate and profit will decrease. It is a big challenge for any enterprises. In case the transform fails, it is disastrous to the enterprise.

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Issue全部官方范文的分析

全文结构：

一、awintro的关于issue部分的整理和归纳。（1楼）

二、官方满分范文的详细分析。（2楼至9楼）

三、总结。（10楼）

四、其他非主流版本官方范文的下载。（13楼）

五、我的习作（14楼）

附注：

（1）我把每一篇文章的分析(最上面的是我的分析)，文档放在附件里了，

并在后面附上了些别人的分析（基本上是网上能找到的全部,很全），有兴趣的朋友不妨下载来综合看看。

这里有一点需要说明：这些牛人的分析来源于几十位不同的牛人，由于时间紧无法一一将名字列出，请见谅！衷心谢谢各位牛人辛勤的工作！为广大G友们提供了丰富的思路！

（2）看分析之前最好要先看未加分析的原文，自己先对文章有点感觉，不妨多看几遍，然后再看分析，这样的效果最好！! m2 x1 X$ K2 L9 S) B& P

大家可以：下载附件中的全部范文，然后利用word的搜索功能找到我们着重分析的8篇满分范文。) E%

附注：

关于官方的文件，本人还有几篇文章，有兴趣的同学可以参考：

“全部issue官方范文的分析”/thread-1093482-1-1.html

“全部argument官方范文的分析”/thread-1093461-1-

3.html

“关于雷同问题的我的一点看法” /thread-1093543-1-9.html

“常用词汇总结”

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“AW的intro的解读”

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第一部分：awintro的解读

Each topic, presented in quotation marks, makes a claim about an issue that test takers can discuss from various perspectives and apply to many different situations or conditions.这一点从理论上说明了任何范文只是众多入手点的其中之一，每一个题目都有着不同的切入点以及破题方案。我们不能限制住自己Be sure to read the claim carefully and think about it from several points of view, considering the complexity of ideas associated with those perspectives这点很重要，对于每个题目的分析都不能是片面的，想的复杂一些！全面要比深入更为重要。Although it is important that you address the central issue, you are free to take any

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GRE考试Issue写作范文详解(1~19)

(1):

Issue　　"The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished."
　　观点陈述型作文/[题目]
　　"被置于媒体审视下的任何人，其名誉终将受毁损。"
　　Sample Essay
　　The intensity of today's media coverage has been greatly magnified by the sheer number and types of media outlets that are available today. Intense competition for the most revealing photographs and the latest information on a subject has turned even minor media events into so-called "media frenzies". Reporters are forced by the nature of the competition to pry ever deeper for an angle on a story that no one else has been able to uncover. With this type of media coverage, it does become more and more likely that anyone who is subjected to it will have his or her reputation tarnished, as no individual is perfect. Everyone makes mistakes. The advances in technology have made much information easily and instantaneously available. Technology has also made it easier to dig further than ever before into a person's past, increasing the possibility that the subject's reputation may be harmed.
　　[范文正文]
　　当今媒体报道的力度，由于当今时代所能获得的媒体渠道那前所未有的数量和种类，从而被极大地增强。围绕着对最具暴露性的图片及对某一题材最新信息所展开的竞争，使哪怕是次要的媒体事件也转变为所谓的"媒体疯狂".由于竞争的本质，记者们被迫就某一项报道作深度采访，以其窥探到一个任何其他人都无法揭示的视角。随着这类媒体报道的出现，任何被置于媒体报道之下的人，其名誉越来越有可能被玷污，因为"金无赤金，人无完人".每个人都有可能犯错误。技术进步使大量的信息在第一瞬间便被轻易获取。技术也使媒体得以比以往任何时候更深入地去挖掘一个人的过去，从而更增加了当事人名誉受损的可能性。
　　The above statement is much too broad, however. "Anyone" covers all people all over the world. There are people whose reputations have only been enhanced by media scrutiny. There are also people whose reputations were already so poor that media scrutiny could not possibly diminish it any further. There may very well be people that have done nothing wrong in the past, at least that can be discovered by the media, whose reputations could not be diminished by media scrutiny. To broadly state that "anyone" subjected to media coverage will have his or her status sullied implies that everyone's reputation worldwide is susceptible to damage under any type of media scrutiny. What about children, particularly newborn children? What about those people whose past is entirely unknown?
　　然则，上述陈述涵盖面过于宽泛。"任何人"涵盖了世界上所有的人。有些人的名誉反而会因为媒体的聚焦而陡然显赫起来。也有些人，其名声早就如此之糟糕，以致于媒体的聚焦再也无法让它受到更坏的毁损。笼统地陈述受媒体报道的"任何人"均会使其地位被玷污，这暗示着全球每个人的名声在任何种类的媒体聚焦下均易于遭诟病。那么，对于天真无辜的孩子们，尤其新生婴儿，情况会如何？对于那些其过去根本无人知晓的人来说，情况又会是什么样呢？
　　Another problem with such a broad statement is that it does not define the particular level of media scrutiny. Certainly there are different levels of media coverage. Does merely the mention of one's name in a newspaper constitute media scrutiny? What about the coverage of a single event in someone's life, for example a wedding or the birth of a baby? Is the media coverage of the heroic death of a firefighter or police officer in the line of duty ever going to diminish that person's reputation? It seems highly unlikely that in these examples, although these people may have been subjected to media scrutiny, these individual's reputations are undamaged and potentially enhanced by such exposure.
　　对于这样一项笼统的陈述而言，它的另一个问题是没能明晰界定媒体聚焦的具体程度。媒体的报道毫无疑问存在程度上的差别。只在报纸上提及一个人的名字，是否算作媒体聚焦？对某人一生中单独一次事件（如婚礼或孩子出生）的报道这也算媒介聚焦吗？媒体对消防队员或警官因公而死的英雄壮举进行报道，难道也会毁损该人的名声吗？在这些实例中，其名声受损的事情极不可能发生。虽然这些人可能被置于媒体审视之下，但其名声却会完好无损，且潜在地可因这些披露而得以提高。
　　Without a doubt, there are many examples of individual's whose reputations have been diminished by media scrutiny. The media's uncovering of former U.S. President Bill Clinton's affair with Monica Lewinsky will most likely overshadow the entire eight years of his administration. Basketball superstar Michael Jordan's sterling reputation has been tarnished more than once by the media; first by media coverage of his gambling habits, then most recently （and in a much more harmful manner） by news reports of his marital infidelities and the divorce from his wife of thirteen years. Fame and fortune can turn an ordinary individual into a media target where reporters will stop at almost nothing to "dig up dirt" that will sell more newspapers or entice more viewers to watch a television program. It could even be argued that media scrutiny killed Princess Diana as her car sped away from the privacy-invading cameras of reporters in Paris. There is no doubt that there are a large number of people who have been hurt in one way or another by particularly intense media scrutiny.
　　毫无疑问，也有许多例子能证明一个人的名声会被媒体审视所毁损。媒体对美国前总统Bill Clinton与Monica Lewinsky的风流韵事的揭露极有可能会将其八年的执政生涯置于阴影之中。超级篮球明星Michael Jordan一世英名也被媒体不止一次地玷污，首先是被有关其赌习的媒体报道，其次是最近——且以一种更具致命性伤害的方式——被有关他婚姻不忠以及与其结婚13年的妻子分道扬镳的报道。当媒体记者不择手段去挖掘某些可促使其报纸销量大增的"猛料"时，或去诱惑更多的观众观看某一电视节目时，名和利就会将一个普通人转变为媒体追踪的目标。我们甚至可以提出这样一种论点，即正是媒体的审视将Diana王妃置于死地，随着她的汽车去竭力逃脱巴黎街头的记者们那侵犯隐私的相机镜头。毫无疑问，肯定有许多人被极其强烈的媒体聚焦以一种方式或另一种方式所伤害。
　　In summary, it seems impossible that for every person that is subjected to media scrutiny, his or her reputation will eventually be diminished. Millions of people are mentioned in the media every day yet still manage to go about their lives unhurt by the media. Normal individuals that are subjected to media scrutiny can have their reputation either enhanced or damaged depending on the circumstances surrounding the media coverage. The likelihood of a diminished reputation from the media rises proportionally with the level of notoriety that an individual possesses and the outrageousness of that person's behavior. The length of time in the spotlight can also be a determining factor, as the longer the person is examined in the media, the greater the possibility that damaging information will be discovered or that the individual will do something to disparage his or her reputation. But to broadly state that media scrutiny will diminish anyone's reputation is to overstate the distinct possibility that, given a long enough time and a certain level of intensity of coverage, the media may damage a person's reputation.
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　　归纳而言，对于每个被置于媒体审视的人来说，其名声将最终受到毁损似乎并不可能。每天，有数百万人被媒体提到，但他们仍设法我行我素，不为媒体所伤害。被置于媒体审视之下的普通人，其名声或可得到提高，或可蒙受毁损，取决于围绕着媒体报道的具体情况。一个人的名声受媒体毁损的可能性，与所其拥有的臭名昭著的程度，及其行为的令人厌恶程度成正比。受媒体关注的时间长短同样也是一个决定性因素，因为一个人被媒体审视的时间越长，于他名声不利的信息越有可能被抖落出来，或者该人越有可能去做出某些于其名声不利的事情。但只是笼统地陈述媒体的审视终将毁掉一个人的名声，即是过分夸大这样一种显著的可能性，即在足够长的时间和一度程度的报道力度这两个条件下，媒体是有可能毁掉一个人的名声的。

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人人都能学到北美范文ISSUE的精华，好东西，下了不后悔

回报太傻－－如何学习北美范文ISSUE部分

虽然有些大牛对北美范文不屑一顾，我自己读到后二十篇也感觉模式化太强，读得有点恶心了。但是这毕竟是北美人写出的，里面的语言是地道的书面语言，对于没有思想的同志还可以直接借鉴它的思想。我感觉对于一般民众学北美范文还是很有帮助的，许多帖子也都反映背北美范文的用处大哦，可是见也有不少人见了北美范文就头疼，不知道怎么学。我把自己学北美范文的一点体会分享出来，希望能给诸位正在学或者打算学北美范文的考G勇士们起个抛砖引玉的作用。

我敢说，用我这版本的北美范文可以大大节省大家学北美范文的时间，直接把握它的精华思想，精华语言和精华例子。节省大家把宝贵的时间，把精力更多地用

在自己写，自己列提纲方面。

个人感觉把一百多篇文章都背下来是不现实也没必要的，但背是必不可少的，每类里面挑几篇自己感觉最顺的背上个三五篇应该就行了吧。其他的文章就照我下

面的方法来进行，学其思想，背精华句子。

言归正传：我是这样学习北美范文-ISSUE部分的：

学之前，先把韦氏词典电子版打开，然后建一个新的文档做草稿，再把我的北美

范文打开。 开始工作！

（蓝绿色部分是模板语言，从中可以学其如何破题以及如何表达自己的立场。大

红色部分是我感觉好的句子和短语，浅红色是我学的生词。）

学北美范文学什么，怎么学？

一句话，借其思想，学其表达。 看它的有的有见地的观点，更重要的是看它怎么证明自己的观点。

看它怎么开头，如何在开头段明确地表达自己的立场。看它在中间段落歌分论点

如何展开。看其段落之间如何衔接。

看它如何使用例子，注意其用词用句，学它的句式，如反问句，强调句，感叹句，

倒装句的运用，甚至揣摩其标点符号的用法。尤其注意当看到它精彩的名词或动词短语后自己要顺手在一草稿文档里敲一遍。不懂的单词敲到韦氏词典电子版里

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Subject: Students should choose fields of study which more likely lead to jobs

1. Today’s parents attach too much importance to the job prospects of their children’s education.

2. However, empirical evidence suggests that young people are more likely to succeed in a career that

interests them.

The statement that students should base their choice of study on the availability of jobs is generally incomplete and inaccurate in my viewpoint. Admittedly, when choosing the field of study, one should take career expectation into consideration. Whether jobs in a field are available is not predominant in the decision of study fields. Instead, one should focus more on intrinsic interest and talent and decide which field to study independently.

At first glance, the balance of empirical evidence would seem to lend considerable credence to the speaker's claim. Nowadays, one of the most popular fields of study for students is the finance which is characterized by a relative glut of job opportunities. Graduates with degrees in science or engineering often abandon their chosen fields because they prefer more "practical careers in search of better job opportunities. However, upon further reflection it will be clear that the large cluster in the job market around certain industries and types of work does not necessarily mean students should all chase those popular areas.

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剖析GRE写作中issue的写作方法

在备考GRE的过程中，我们能看到一些同学复习很用功，拿到了新GRE写作满分。那么他们有哪些复习方法呢？今天小编这里就分享给大家——剖析GRE写作中issue的写作方法： ISSUE作文写作三步曲

其实，GRE考试就每道题而言，逻辑结构取决于思路，思路取决于对ISSUE问题理解的深度。因此，对一个ISSUE题来说，我们应该争取对其有较深刻的了解，而不是一味地背一些别人的提纲。因为死记提纲无助于对问题的了解，纵然能在考场上写出提纲，而若无对每一论点的了解和逻辑体系的支撑，思想便很可能混乱，所作之文仍会有逻辑不清，说理不透之嫌。

针对ISSUE作文的特点，具体地介绍一下 ISSUE作文写作的三大步骤：分析题目、论证分析、提纲写作。下面一个具体的例子对这三个步骤进行阐述。

例如：“It is dangerous to trust only intelligence.”只相信智力是危险的。

【分析题目】

拿到一个题目后，我们不要忙于去写，GRE写作范文一定要先对题目进行详细的分析。通过题目我们知道主要论证的是intelligence的作用，因此，智力是这个题目最关键的突破点。

【论证分析】

知道了题目主要围绕什么展开论述，那么我们就此进行进一步的分析。GRE写作满分智力即是我们所说的智商，智商对一个人固然重要，它是人们成功的基础，但是并不是唯一的因素。一个人的成功还取决于其他的因素，如自身的勤奋、努力和勇敢等等。

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另外，新GRE作文题目可以再引申去论证智商的作用，那么有了智商就自然引出了情商这一概念，智商和情商，都是人的重要的心理品质，都是事业成功的重要基础。这样，题目就可以论证智商与情商两者中，谁的作用比较大。长期以来，人们习惯于将智商作为衡量人才的标准，而现代研究表明，人才成功的决定因素不仅仅是智商，还有情商。如果没有智商的话，我们的知识领域，无论是自然科学还是社会科学都是一片荒芜，因此，智商对我们人类社会的发展与进步起着重大的作用，我们不能忽视智商的作用。但是，智商并不是社会进步发展的唯一推动力，如果一个人光靠智商的话，待人接物都不付出感情的话，那么他就处于精神的不毛之地，精神的空虚状态，这也正是情商所起的作用。情商主要反映一个人感受、理解、运用、表达、控制和调节自己情 感的能力，以及处理自己与他人之间的情感关系的能力。情商所反映个体把握与处理情感问题的能力。

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