篇一 :历年高考作文结尾作文结尾技巧点拨

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高考作文结尾技巧点拨

古人在谈到结尾时常以“豹尾”为标准,是指结尾时笔法要简结、明快、干净利落,犹如豹尾劲扫,响亮有力,给读者以咀嚼回味的余地。请看近中考满分文的结尾技巧。 技巧一:首尾呼应,凸显主旨

(首) 都说生活的船不能没有理想的帆,都说生活的理想就是为了理想的生活,而理想的生活中最快乐的时光,便是梦想的花季。

(尾) 花季中,我希望自己能永远记住先哲的那句良训:生活的船不能没有理想的帆。生活的理想就是为了理想的生活。 (选自湖荆州中考满分文《把梦想带给花季》) 技巧点拨 :首尾呼应是考场作文中最实用的方法之一,一般情况是作者先在开头提出文章的中心,然后在结尾时再次强调,照应开头,从而使文章的中心鲜明突出。你看,在上例中,小作者运用首尾呼应的方式,以优美的诗一般的语言凸显了文章的主旨――理想的生活中最快乐的时光,便是梦想的花季。

(首) 有一种光华,笼罩着中华民族的精神家园;有一种火苗,跃动在民族灵魂的奥林匹克山上;有一种烈焰,温暖了绵远的文明情思,那就是友善!

(尾) 我们不能因为屡受伤害就失去与丑恶斗争的信心,因为我们需要守卫我们的精神火种――友善! (选自河南中考满分文《守卫精神的火种》)

技巧点拨 :这是一篇考场议论文的开头与结尾,与上例相比,此例为简洁明快,开头提出论点,迅速入题,结尾再次反复,呼应开头,加强了论证的力度。

技巧二:言为心声,呼唤号召

让我们大家行动起来吧,把爱心带给他人,带给那些失学儿童,带给那些孤寡老人??带给身边的每一个人。当你把爱心献给他人时,你也获得了莫大的幸福。要相信,只要人人都献出一份爱,世界将变成美好的人间。 (选自湖北荆州中考满分文《把爱心带给他人》) 二十一世纪,我们是祖国的春天,我们不是我们的父母,热情奔放是我们的性格,我们不需要守那些规矩,打破陈规,让我们脑中的那团热情火燃烧得更猛烈,把我们的笑声、爱心串在一起,让全世界笼罩在爱之中。要笑就笑个痛痛快快,要哭就哭个歇斯底里,不要

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篇二 :历年高考作文范文

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Dear Peter,

I read in a newspaper today that a “Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs” Foreigners’ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July

18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you’ll have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.

Yours, Li Hua 05

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.

As a student at Oxford University , I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?

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篇三 :历年高考作文范文

2013 【范文赏读】

From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.

It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.

Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.

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篇四 :历年高考英语作文范文

20xx年上海高考作文及范例

古人云:―天生我材必有用‖(There must be a use for my talent)。 通过描述你

生活中一件事,说明人各有所长,无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。

There is an old English saying that there must be use for my talent. I have regarded it as my motto for many years. From my point of view, there is no difference between one person and another. With some useful talent, you will make your contributions to this society.

When I was ten years old, there was an old man living at the corner of xx Road. He didn’t have the opportunity to study in school, but he learned how to make wood furniture. Every time people went to ask him to solve some problems of furniture, he was willing to help them.

To my surprise, in his spare time, he would make some toys with small piece s of wood. Some of them were sold to the toy store and others were given to us. The moment I see the lovely toys made by this old man, I would remember the happy childhood.

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篇五 :历年高考作文题目分析及例文展示

历年高考作文题目分析及例文展示

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1994年高考作文题目

请以“尝试”为题写一篇记叙文,不少于700字。

思路分析

此次考命题作文,是科举考试以来的传统命题方式,仅有[尝试]二字,且限定为[记叙文]。对于这一命题褒贬不一,众说纷纭。笔者认为:易写难工。

所谓易写,是指题材宽泛,不受限制。[记叙]一体,自小学到高一,反复的练习,当可驾轻而就熟了。再说这种命题,对于中学语文教学也是一大促进。几年以来,议论文的训练几乎已成师生的思维定势,而记叙文和说明文的训练却相对有所放松。此次考考记叙文,再杀一个“回马枪”,以期引起重视。

但易写并不意味着容易写好。尝试的题材虽广,但取材会分优劣,剪裁自有当否,命意定有高低;记叙文体虽然易于下笔,但构思会有巧拙,布局当分好坏,语言自有死活,书写定有美丑。一言以蔽之,易写的题材,易为的文体,自然会写出高、中、低不同档次的文章。作为高考的选拔,自然要求是高水平的,所以说是[易写而难工]。

笔者以为:恢复高考以来的命题作文凡三次,前两次,一次是《先天下之忧而忧》,作议论人;一次是《习惯》,文体不限。这次是《尝试》,要求作记叙文,既不违背中学语文教学大纲,又可选拔人才,何以限制不得文体?

今年高考作文总的印象有二:一、题材丰富。有写学习、工作、文体活动的尝试的,有写家务劳动、农副业生产、乡镇企业的尝试的,有写南下打开、下海经商的尝试的,还有写初恋而尝试苦果的……有成功的尝试,有失败的尝试,可谓酸甜苦病,应有尽有,见出学生对于自然、社会、人生等有全方位的尝试,有开放意识,时代精神。其语言高卓为审者虽然不多,但能揭示人生真谛、生活真理,给人启迪者却不少。且因其尝试真切,读来清新可人,很少有音调乏味之感。二、写法各异有专写一次尝试的,有写两次或多次尝试的,有以议论开篇接续尝试事例的,有首叙尝试事实,末尾议论点题的;有整篇叙写尝试而题旨藏而不露出。有叙写尝试为止,夹叙夹议而题旨显害豁的……可谓百花齐放,异彩纷呈。文字功底扎实,叙事简洁生动,行文流畅而兼文采,善于驾驭复杂记叙文之章法技巧的文章,往往被评为上乘之作而获高分。此外,有良好书写习惯的考生也多少受益。

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篇六 :历年高考作文类型及范文

20xx年高考英语作文真题:四川卷(含范文)

第二节 书面表达(满分35分)

假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初,你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。

1、对英语学习的认识;

2、自己目前的英语水平;

3、自己英语学习存在的主要问题;

4、对英语教学的两点建议。

注意:

1、词数100左右;

2、信的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Ms Li,

I'm very happy to have you as our English Thank you!

Li Hua

One Possible Version:

Dear Ms Li,

I'm very happy to have you as our English teacher.

As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.

My English is just OK and the two main problem in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.

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篇七 :20xx-20xx年全国卷历年高考英语作文范文

20##-2012年全国英语高考卷1,2作文范文

2002年高考英语全国卷

 最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。

注意:

1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数:100左右。 3、参考词汇:门票:entrance fee

One possible version:

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.

   Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

   On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.

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篇八 :全国历年各地高考作文题(二)包含题目解析及范文

历年各地高考作文题(一)

——20xx年

1.(重庆)写作 (本大题60分)

材料一:香港大学校工袁苏妹没有上过大学,不知道什么是“院士”,也没做什么惊天 动地的大事,只是44年如一日用心、用情为学生做饭、扫地,深深地感动了学生。学生说“她就像我们的妈妈一样 ”。20xx年9月,香港大学授予她“荣誉院士”,称她”以自己的生命影响大学堂仔的生命”,是“香港大学之宝”。

材料二:巫溪县乡村教师赵世术,20年独守讲台,13年残体支撑,在大山深处点燃 知识的火把,照亮了小村里一代代渴求的眼睛。他在22年间延展自己的爱心,沉淀为精神的沃土,让希望在春天发芽。他因“师魂灿烂”而被评为20xx年“感动重庆”十大人物之一。

请结合材料和自己的体验与感悟,以“情有独钟”为话题,写一篇文章。

要求:①选题角度,明确立意;②自拟标题,自选文体(诗歌除外);③不少于800字;④不得套作,不得抄袭。

【考点】本题考查“能写论述类、实用类和文学类文章”的能力。能力层级为E

【解析】

材料作文加话题作文,本题将高考作文的常规的两种命题思路整合起来,给考生在合理的范围内最大的发挥余地。“衣带渐宽终不悔,为伊消得人憔悴”的“情有独钟”在这里不为爱情,而是为事业。

审题:两个材料的共同点就是“坚持”,因此“情有独钟”的“情”就非“感情”而是“心志”或“信如果写记叙文,我们可以根据上述的立意来进行构思故事,生活中,我们总会碰到一个人,他如袁苏妹赵世术一样在平凡的岗位上兢兢业业地工作着,他或许是清道夫,或许是拾荒者,但是他仍然用自己的双手打磨着自己的生活,一年又一年。这也是情有独钟,我们或许还没有看到他荣光的结局,但是我们可以预见它,可以预支我们的祝贺。

2.(浙江)阅读下面的文字,根据要求作文。(60分)

一代人有一代人的偶像。钱学森、袁隆平、宗庆后、张艺谋、马化腾、刘翔……他们是不同时代不同行业的成功者,有无数崇拜者和模仿者追随其后。他们做过什么,又是怎么做的,被写进了种种励志读本,然而,他们的成功很难复制,因为时间在变,万物在变,一个人成功的赋予也在变。

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