托福雅思作文的起承转合

六：雅思：禁止与不禁止的冲突

Example E>Films and computer games with violence are very popular in the world. Some people believe that these have negative effects on society. Other people say these are just harmless relaxations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

开头三句--Introduction: from general to specific

Violent films and computer games should be put out of business, if possible at all, because they can emotionally affect viewers, particularly children. It can be seen that violence remains one of the most problematic areas for censorship in many countries, especially when it is in conjunction with sex and drugs. So, the question is not why but how?

结尾三句--Conclusion: from specific to general

In conclusion, given that violent films and computer games can have adverse influence on society, it is probably not the right thing to outlaw such products completely. It is appropriate that public censorship should be effectively applied, where necessary, so as to prevent young criminal minds. Consequently, the only solution left for now seems to be a rating system that draws a line for R18: restricted for age 18 and over.

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托福雅思作文的起承转合

一：举例雅思与托福类似真题：男女合校对分校的立场冲突。

雅思IELTS Topic>What are the pros and cons of co-educational schooling? Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Provide reasons and examples from your knowledge and experience.

托福TOEFL Topic>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

>起段开头三句话--Introduction: from general to specific

I. 申论主题--中学男女合校制度利少弊多

--Stating your thesis

The effort to introduce female students into male secondary schools, or vice versa, must be regarded as undesirable because the

practice has not been working well.

II. 集中焦点--立场的冲突

--Narrowing your thesis into your focus

Beyond the religious and cultural grounds, there are other issues about co-education that need to be analyzed.

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托福雅思作文素材之竞争还是合作

Competition

1. Competition may be the common fabric of our life.

2. Competition strengthens the ideal of equality of opportunity.

3. Competition brings out the best in us.

4. Competition is inevitable; it is human nature.

5. They provide an environment where we can strive for excellence.

6. Natural selection indisputably occurs in all other competitive systems. These range from

individual firms competing on the free market to individual workers competing for job promotions.

7. In today’s world, we spend most of our time competing. From an early age, we are told that

only the best students get into the really good universalities and that when we graduate, only the best will land the job of their dreams. We use the phrase “get ahead’ interchangeably with ‘succeed”.

8. Competition builds character; it strengthens our self-esteem.

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名师分析：新托福与雅思写作部分的异同

　　新托福考试自登陆中国以来，在整个留学英语考试市场掀起了轩然大波。而新托福考试在考试形式方面的改革也为所有人津津乐道。虽然从考试形式上来讲，新托福考试和老托福考试相比，增加了交流技能口语的考核，而且也取消了之前关注的语法方面的考试，即其考试形式和雅思基本类似，都是从听说读写四个方面来进行考察。但是两者在每个方面还是存在很大的区别。经过分析，本文将主要谈谈雅思与新托福在写作方面考察的异同点，供大家参考。

　　一、考试形式与内容的异同

　　这两类考试在考试形式上还是存在相似点的，雅思和新托福考试的写作考察都是通过两个部分来完成的，且其大作文的考试形式都是议论文文体。但是两者的不同点更多，分别体现在输入形式，小作文的考察点和时间安排上。首先我们看雅思除了口语是面试外，其他都是笔试。小作文是考察图表说明文，花费的时间是20分钟，但是这个时间是可以自由安排的，即20分钟内考生未能合理安排好时间写完小作文的话，还是可以占用大作文的时间的，又或者考生提早完成了，那么剩余的时间则可以被用来放置到写大作文上。然而新托福考试考试则截然不同，它是网考，作文是通过键盘输入的，这就要求考生的考前要熟悉电脑键盘输入。此外，它的小作文与雅思不同，不是图表题，而是一个综合的考试，先阅读一段关于某个话题的文字，然后再听一段文字，这个内容和阅读通常是反驳关系，最后再花20分钟时间写出所听的内容以及其与阅读文章之间的关系。这个20分钟的时间是固定不变的，即20分钟到就转化至大作文的页面，就算提前完成，剩下的时间也无法叠加至大作文。注意到这些不同点，我们在方法技巧的把握上就要事前做好充分准备才能游刃有余的进行考试。

　　二、评分标准的异同

　　雅思与新托福的议论文的评分标准基本相似，通过朗阁海外考试研究中心的总结，发现这两类考试的评分标准都可以归纳为三个部分，即文章的内容，结构和语言使用。通俗的说就是考生是否能够运用一些简单易懂，且能够表达自己观点的结构来写作，而在内容上是否完整的回答了问题，然后做到了有道理的逻辑性和说服力的扩展。在语言使用上，包括词汇和句型的使用，能否做到多样，准确，灵活运用等。

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雅思、新托福的写作考试分别

朗阁雅思考试研究中心

相信大家都已经感受到了留学热潮，托福雅思这两个名词越来越多的进入到大家的耳中，当然这两项出国留学考试已经成为了目前在全世界范围内最具影响力，科学性最强，考生数量最多的针对非英语为母语国家学生的两大英语能力水平测试，于此同时，雅思与新托福考试一直以来也是众多怀揣出国留学或工作梦想的中国学生和工作人士所面临的最大的一道障碍。虽然雅思考试是英国剑桥大学出题而新托福考试则是由美国的ETS机构主办，但在最近几年的时间里，这两种考试的发展趋势可以说是以迅猛的速度来形容，不仅在全世界范围内收到众多留学生的欢迎，同时也是很多国家和区域的一些大学院校所接受，不管是在欧洲还是美洲国家都逐渐开始互相认可，美国大学更是已经逐渐的全面认可雅思成绩，而新托福成绩也同样被越来越多的英联邦国家作为衡量考生英语能力的另一个标准。所以，很多考生在选择的时候不免就会出现左右为难的情况，越是越多的进行对比两项的考试就越是难进行选择，有的学校两项考试都是可以接受相应的成绩的，所以学生们就会常常问这样的一个问题，那就是我现在的英语水平到底应该是选择哪一项考试会有更大的把握，哪一项会更加适合自己呢？或者换句话说，哪一种考试能够更好的发挥自己的优势，考出更好的成绩，从而为自己争取到更好的大学的offer呢？不管是从听，说，读，写四个方面来衡量的话，这两种考试既有着相似的地方，但却又不乏各自的特点。那么本文中就先单从写作层面来说，朗阁雅思考试研究中心的专家将就这两种考试在写作方面的共同点与不同点做出分析，以便在考试选择上非常纠结的考生做出正确的选择。

1. 评分标准的迥然不同

尽管之前讲到雅思和新托福作文在行文内容，结构上都有着极大的相似之处，但是两种考试的评分标准则有着极大的不同。雅思大作文的评分标准为：Task response, grammatical range and accuracy, coherence and cohesion, and

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综合写作模板

1. in the lecture, the professor made several points about ...... .the professor argues that..... However, the reading passage contends that ......The professor's lecture casts doubt on the reading by using a number of point that are contrary to....

2. the first point that the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is that....According to the professor...... .....differs from the reading in that the reading states.....The point made by the professor casts doubt on the reading becasue....

3. Another point that the professor uses to cast doubt on the reading is....The professor claims that.....However, the reading states.....This point is contradicted by.....

4. Finally,the professor stated that ,on the contrary of reading,......In other words,.....This directly contradicts what the reading passage indicates,because.....

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写作话题

1.文化类---新旧文化价值观

社会类

科技类 教育类

In some cultures the old age is highly valued, while in some cultures youth is highly valued．Discuss and give your opinion.

2.文化类--- 语言

Several languages are dying out every year. However, some people do not think it is important and claim that our life will be simpler

with fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

3.文化类---全球一体化

Differences between countries have become less evident. For example, nowadays the same films, fashions, brands and TV programs are found

4.旅游类---旅游业利弊

Tourism is a multibillion-dollar industry that supports economic development. However, some people think that it causes too much damage to the local environment and culture. What do you think?

5.社会类---食物

Food produced in greater amount and much cheaply due to the developed fertilizers and better machinery yet some others say it is dangerous to human health and local communities. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

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