篇一 :新托福模考tpo28综合写作范文

In the reading, it mainly talks about that Rorbot E Peary has been to north pole because it has three striking evidneces. However, in the lecture, the professor thinks that the points provided in the reading are not convencing.

First of all, the reading points out that at the end of the investigation, the committee has concluded that Rorbot E Peary has been to the north pole. Nevertheless, the professor believes that the committee was not objective at all. Firstly, it was writed by his friends. What’s more, the investigation only msintained for two days and they can get precise conclusion in such a short time. So the committee is biased.

In addition, the reading states that the English explorer Tom Avery has proved the truth that the Rorbot E Peary could reach the north pole within 37 days. On the contrary, the professor argues against that there are many distinguishment between the Rorbot and Tom, because at that time, Rorbot had no food and met the most server weather, which will make them late to reach the north pole.

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篇二 :新托福tpo28独立写作范文

Topic: parents are more involved in their children’s education than the parents in the past.

It is not uncommon to see that parents are have incredible zael to participate into their children’s education in many perspectives. At contemporary society, parents always take part in some semilars that are related to students’s study and force their children to join the extra-curricula classes which can help their chldren to improve acdemic performance. Therefore, as far as I am considerd, nowadays, parents’ involvement in kids’ study is much more emphasized than ever before.

Compared with the parents in the past,parents at present, have a strong will to make their children more competent in the future career. With the development of the society, the compitition in the modern society is increasingly fierce than ever before. Every parents want their children not only can survive in the compitition but also want them to be successful in the future. Hence, those parents take pains to achieve this ambitions on their own way and consequently, because they think education is the gateway to seccess, they should be involved in their children’ s study and help their children as well. On the contrary, because of the low living standre, parents in the past only think how to bring chilren up and let them survive, so there is no time for them to have such ambitions. Therefore, it is reasonable for us to think that parents nowdays are more interseted in children’s education.

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篇三 :托福TPO28综合写作阅读听力文本

TPO28

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Robert E. Peary was a well-known adventurer and arctic explorer who in 1909 set out to reach the North Pole. When he returned from the expedition, he claimed to have reached the pole on April 7, 1909. This report made him into an international celebrity. Though some historians have expressed doubts that Peary did in fact reach the North Pole, three arguments provide strong support for the truth of Peary's claim.

First, the National Geographic Society put together a committee that was instructed to conduct a thorough investigation of Peary's records and equipment. At the end of the investigation, the committee concluded that Peary's accounts were consistent and persuasive and declared that he had indeed reached the North Pole.

Second, a recent expedition provides support for Peary's claim that he reached the North Pole in only 37 days after setting out from Ellesmere Island off the coast of Greenland. Skeptics used to argue that Peary could not have traveled that fast, since even modern snowmobiles take longer to cover the same distance. However, a British explorer named Tom Avery recently made the same trek in less than 37 days. In fact, Avery used the same kind of dogsled and the same number and breed of dogs as Peary had. Thus, Peary's claims are not impossible, and he very well might have been telling the truth.

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篇四 :托福 tpo26 综合写作范文

In terms whether the zebra mussel will exert negative influence on North American, the passage and lecture are contradictory to each other. The author believes that zebra mussel might do harm the local species as they arrived while the lecturer holds a different opinion.

First of all, the author makes a point that the history events suggest the zebra mussel's invasion is unstoppable. In the past, human transportation makes it possible for zebra mussel spread around the whole Europe and it is likely to happen again in North American. However, the lecturer demonstrates a different idea that a change made in the "ballast water" will prevent the invasion of zebra mussel from continuing. He says that if we refill the "ballast water" with ocean water, the mussel will no longer survive because the saline water might probably kill them all.

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篇五 :TPO 28 综合写作 杨舸寒 - 副本 - 副本

The lecture present(第三人称单数) some negative viewpoints on the reading section, challenging conventional idea as stated in the reading passage that discuss(第三人称单数) the report about Peary reach (第三人称单数)the North Pole.

In the listening, the professor hold (第三人称单数)a reverse statement concerning that the committee consist (第三人称单数)of the Peary's close friends. The committee only has two days to investigation Peary's records and equipment. Therefore it's careless. This point is the explicit divergence of what is presented in the reading material that National Geographic Society make(第三人称单数) a committee prove(第三人称单数) the truth of the Peary's expedition.

Additionally, the lecture states that the Pearly route (此处少谓语动词 应该是用be different from)different for Tom. Pearlt(拼写错误) impact(动词词性错误) by the weather change, food supply and so on. Thus their expand time can not(cannot要连起来 cannot be compared)compared. This is second point which contrasts with the argument in the article that reading passage use(第三人称单数) other explorer as example to prove the Peary authenticity.

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篇六 :托福综合写作 tpo29 范文

综合写作 tpo29 范文

In the reading, it mainly talks about that the edmontosautus in order to survive would migrate south to more suitable place. Nonetheless, in the lecture, the professor thinks the arguments provided in the reading are not convincing.

First of all, the reading mentions that the edmontosaur’s diet support the migrating idea because in the winter, the cold weather prevent plnats from surviving in the north. Nevertheless, the professor concludes that there is no relation between the magration and food supply by giving the fact that long ago the weather in summer was warmer than today’s and even if at the approach of the winter, there did existed enough nurients to feed animals like edmontosauts.

Additonally, the reading states that the many edmontosaur skeletons have been unreathed in the same site which means that the edmontosaur were in herd and there are some similarities bewteen the edmonsaurs and modern migrating animals that find food by migrating. On the contrary, the professor claims that though the enmonsaurs can live in herd, the propose of living in herd is not migrating but aginasting the predators.

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篇七 :1月13日单日TPO28综合写作

In the reading material, the author gives three reasons to prove the truth that Peary had reached the North Pole. However, in the listening part, the professor claims that the reasons mentioned in the reasing are not convincing at all.

First, the writer says that the committee declared that Peary had indeed reached the North Pole. The professor adimits that the committee had declared that, but it cannot prove anything. He says that the committee was not objective. It was composed of Peary's friends and Peary was one of the donators. And the investigation had lasted just two days. So the evidence from the committee is not convincing.

What's more, it is mentioned in the reading material that Tom Avery had reached the North Pole in less time than Peary did with the same conditions, which could prove that it was possible that Peary had reached the North Pole. The speaker refutes that claim by pointing out that Avery didn't carry many things as Peary did. The food for Avery were dropped by airplane. And the weather condition of Avery's trip was better than that of Peary. So it cannot prove that Peary had been to the North Pole.

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篇八 :tpo-8 独立写作范文

A recent investigation issued by the SARFT suggests that the time adults spend on watching television is 1.5h to 2h every day; It rises to 2.5h, when it comes to the preschool children. Undoubtedly, television advertisement holds the unimaginable ability to influence people's mind, especially for kids. For containing the probability of misleading, some people argue that television advertisement which produced especially for young children should be forbidden. However, I believe that television advertising should be not only permitted, but also encouraged. First and foremost, television advertising benefits children's growing up. Because Television advertising has many characteristics, such as timeliness, impressiveness and variety which is the most important one; The massive information contained by the advertising can broaden young children's horizon and let them know the colorful world more and better. What's more, a kind of advertising named public service advertisement always can teach children some truth of the life through telling some little stories. For example, there is a famous advertisement in china called "passing love": A little boy, holding a basin of water level with both hands for his mother who is very tired after work, say: "Mum, wash your feet." This advertisement want to remind people of being a obedient son or daughter. After watching it, my little younger sister did wash her mother's feet, which is really moved the mom.

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