2014/3/8 Independent Writing – Session 2

TPO 14:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Thanks to the breakthroughs made in science technology, it is now possible for people to travel around the world within two days by commercial jets. Moreover, with the economy, along with the living standards, reaching a new high, people now have more extra money and spare time. As a result, an increasing number of people are now choosing travelling as a way of recreation and entertainment. When it comes to the destinations people choose, I believe that there are more edges of travelling abroad than travelling domestically. (118)

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新托福模考Tpo29 独立写作范文

Tpoic: to improve the quality in education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.

As the qualities of education in the universities become unconvincing than before, a increasing amount people nowadays are concernin whether there exist space for universities to improve. The Most part of them tend to believe that in order to improve the qualities of the education, universities should spend more money on professors’ salaries while others state that the universities should spend it on other fields. Therefore, the controversial issue has been engaged that which field should be invested in to improve the qualities of education makes a widely debate. However, as for me, there is no aoubt that the universities should give the priority to vacational training and recruiting.for news.

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20xx年9月14日托福独立写作思路及范文

Agree or disagree:

Younger school children should be required to study art and music in addition to studying math, language, science and history.

很多同学在看到这道题目时，会觉得这道题并不难，但是还是有一定跑题的风险，因为很多同学直接忽略掉in addition to studying math, language, science and history, 只关注前半部分，大谈特谈study art and music 的好处或坏处，这样写的话就有跑题嫌疑了，因为文章中有个暗含的条件是在学习math, language, science and history 的基础上，是否要去学习art and music。笔者的思路是，学生要学习音乐美术和基础课程(数学，语言，历史和科学)。理由分别去论述，学习基础学科的好处和学习音乐艺术的好处，最后让步总结。

9月14日托福范文如下：

Education, especially elementary education, has always been the permanent topic in our times. One indisputable fact is that the quality of younger children’s education is in consistence with the future of a certain country. Therefore, when it comes to what course younger children should study, people varying in

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Topic: parents are more involved in their children’s education than the parents in the past.

It is not uncommon to see that parents are have incredible zael to participate into their children’s education in many perspectives. At contemporary society, parents always take part in some semilars that are related to students’s study and force their children to join the extra-curricula classes which can help their chldren to improve acdemic performance. Therefore, as far as I am considerd, nowadays, parents’ involvement in kids’ study is much more emphasized than ever before.

Compared with the parents in the past,parents at present, have a strong will to make their children more competent in the future career. With the development of the society, the compitition in the modern society is increasingly fierce than ever before. Every parents want their children not only can survive in the compitition but also want them to be successful in the future. Hence, those parents take pains to achieve this ambitions on their own way and consequently, because they think education is the gateway to seccess, they should be involved in their children’ s study and help their children as well. On the contrary, because of the low living standre, parents in the past only think how to bring chilren up and let them survive, so there is no time for them to have such ambitions. Therefore, it is reasonable for us to think that parents nowdays are more interseted in children’s education.

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A recent investigation issued by the SARFT suggests that the time adults spend on watching television is 1.5h to 2h every day; It rises to 2.5h, when it comes to the preschool children. Undoubtedly, television advertisement holds the unimaginable ability to influence people's mind, especially for kids. For containing the probability of misleading, some people argue that television advertisement which produced especially for young children should be forbidden. However, I believe that television advertising should be not only permitted, but also encouraged. First and foremost, television advertising benefits children's growing up. Because Television advertising has many characteristics, such as timeliness, impressiveness and variety which is the most important one; The massive information contained by the advertising can broaden young children's horizon and let them know the colorful world more and better. What's more, a kind of advertising named public service advertisement always can teach children some truth of the life through telling some little stories. For example, there is a famous advertisement in china called "passing love": A little boy, holding a basin of water level with both hands for his mother who is very tired after work, say: "Mum, wash your feet." This advertisement want to remind people of being a obedient son or daughter. After watching it, my little younger sister did wash her mother's feet, which is really moved the mom.

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TPO4 独立写作

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

On contemporary society, the advent of the technologically science promote the car become more and more. The car serves as an important transportation tool in the modern society and play an extremely essential role in our life. According to my personality and experiences there will be more cars in use than today not fewer in twenty years. The are various factors to explain it.

Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from cars is that family will go out for a trip by car conveniently. Due to its convenience, the increasingly car appear among lots of families, besides the man with a car can go to work quickly not to concern about be late for working. Father would send the children to she school by car and pick up them to go home without any worry about the busy bus. They need not to be tired after a busy day which make them need indeed a car that people can not abandon.

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The reading passage asserts that salvage logging is a good way to deal with the aftermath of disasters. However, the professor refutes the passage, stating that salvage logging is not a good solution.

First, according to the reading passage, the author suggests that removing dead trees will make a better circumstance for the new trees living because the dead trees require a long time to

decompose which is not good for new trees' growing. On contrary, the professor in the listening claims that cleaning up the dead trees is not necessary because it will damage for the soil beneath the trees which is important support for the next generation of trees.

Second, contrary to the belief in the passage that decaying wood will increase the population of harmful creatures which are dangerous for the forest. the lecture claims that there is not only

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