一、题目

18.阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。

黑暗中，石头愤愤不平地对身边的钻石说：“我不知道平时人们为什么把你抬得那么高，把你视作宝贝。现在你跟我又有什么两样呢？”

钻石说：“是的，我和你一样，也不会发光。但我懂得如何对待别人的光芒。”

这时，天边露出一丝星光。石头发现，身边的钻石立刻熠熠生辉，它的光芒甚至比星光更闪亮、更耀眼。

要求选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题；不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文，不要套作，不得抄袭。

二、审题立意

材料中关键句是“但我懂得如何对待别人的光芒”，由此可作出这样的演绎：

如果你是钻石，就不要把自己看成石头。是金子总会发光。在某种情形下，“石头”和“钻石”两者可能看不出有何区别；但只要你具备“钻石”的潜质，具备一种条件，换一个环境，或者借助某种外力，“钻石”就可以发出耀眼的光芒。

据此，可提炼出这样几方面意旨：

①正确认识自我；（从“石头”与“钻石”的角度看）②正确对待别人；（从“石头”的角度看）③要学会欣赏别人；（从“石头”角度看）④正确认识自我并善于借助外力以成就自我（彰显自身价值）；吸收别人的长处并为我所用以成就自我（彰显自身价值）。（从“钻石”的角度看）

立意分为切题、基本切题、不切题三类。

考生的立意只要是“正确认识自我”、“正确对待别人”“是金子总会发光的”、“君子善假于物也”之类的，均视为切题，如果表述为“正确认识自我并善于借助外力以成就自我（彰显自身价值）”或“吸收别人的长处，为我所用以成就自我（彰显自身价值）”，视为最佳立意。

如果考生提炼出“尊重别人”、“抓住机遇”、“懂得感恩”之类立意的，判定为审题不准确；但如果考生所写“机遇”有助于自身价值体现的，视为审题正确。阅卷时如能看出行文与材料有关联的，可以结合语言表达，评为四类卷以上。脱离材料内容及含意的范围即所写与材料完全没有关联的，评分最高不超过41分。

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20xx年11月6号作文精讲课后作业

特供海文作文精讲数码班同学参考使用

墨东博

1-1主题宽泛型

As is vividly betrayed in the picture in front of us, it is like a bridge that bridges various gaps to be a road. Just like being conveyed in the set of drawing, the fact that the bridge stands for communication and the gully for misunderstanding among people nowadays profoundly indicates that communication plays an increasingly crucial role and becomes perhaps the only effective approach to disputes, with the world being considerably diversified.

To the popular mind, nevertheless, it is immediately assumed that when communication is argued , it is still communication among the old and the young generation .that is meant. In order to account for what has been mentioned before, several causes should be put forward. On one hand, always rebellious , young people are seemingly turning to be rather odd while their parents are quite embarrassed ,or even unbearable to see all these offbeat behaviors. On the other hand, children may deem parents to be conserved whereas parents may assume that the young are getting wild. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example discussed below, 例证.Consequently, no issue in china is basic to

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2012考研包过班 作文批改

这是我的一个学员的写的作文，发给大家，供大家学习参考

What these two drawings above illustrate is a little flower,under the protection of the greenhouse,is in full bloom / Flourishing no matter how terrible the weather would be like, Of course, the opposite side of this phenomenon also exists.the beautiful flower is no longer growing in favorable condition.In no time will the flower die,if it can not adapt to the new circumstance.

Obviously, the cartoons intend to reveal the phenomenon-the youth lack of independence-which widely exists in our society.It is not uncommon that we graduates,when leave campus for position,have a sense of unfamiliarity and dissatisfactory,moreover escape from the cut-throat competition of job market or low-income, high strength work.Currently, young adults of our generation who are brought up without sadness and sorrow.Parents,all the time,drive their best efforts to meet the unreasonable requirement made by their only child.When we enter into school with the guidance of our teachers,we seldom independently copy with difficulties we have ever confronted.

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2012考研钻石包过班 作文批改 这是我的一个学员的写的作文，发给大家，供大家学习参考。我的qq 377960180 注明 考研钻石班

What these two drawings above illustrate is a little flower,under the protection of the greenhouse,is in full bloom / Flourishing no matter how terrible the weather would be like, Of course, the opposite side of this phenomenon also exists.the beautiful flower is no longer growing in favorable condition.In no time will the flower die,if it can not adapt to the new circumstance.

Obviously, the cartoons intend to reveal the phenomenon-the youth lack of independence-which widely exists in our society.It is not uncommon that we graduates,when leave campus for position,have a sense of unfamiliarity and dissatisfactory,moreover escape from the cut-throat competition of job market or low-income, high strength work.Currently, young adults of our generation who are brought up without sadness and sorrow.Parents,all the time,drive their best efforts to meet the unreasonable requirement made by their only child.When we enter into school with the guidance of our teachers,we seldom independently copy with difficulties we have ever confronted.

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林徽因曾说：“真正的平静，不是远离车马喧嚣，而是在内心修篱种菊，即使如流往事，涛声依旧，放弃执念，便可寂静安然。”真正的平静正如此，面对钻石的天价，唯有放弃心中的杂念，泰然处之，方能收获价值。

心之泰然，是坦荡之果，唯有无视价值，方知价值可贵。

“一身正气，两袖清风，三餐温饱，四大皆空”，这是闲士隐者的追求，是清廉的表率。作为一代名臣的杨震虽无闲士隐者之志，但却有清官廉士之心，面对“暮夜无知”的诱惑，杨震头顶天，脚立地，严词拒绝了以金钱来换取仕途的虚假之人，并留下了“天知，地知，你知，我知，何为暮夜无知？”的千古忠言。真正的价值彰显于自身，面对金钱，手不曾抖，眼不曾眨，泰然视之，方显自身价值的可贵。

心之泰然是慧硕之花，无所念想便无所犹豫，便也了无牵挂，使之花开绚丽。

经典之所以被奉为经典，就在于它的无需标榜，无人超越。19xx年那经典名著《西游记》的拍摄，使人们记住了那一张张传神俏皮的脸，记住了那一招招活灵活现的演绎，记住了那一次次翻上跃下的惊险传奇??孙悟空的扮演者六小龄童回忆说，当时拍摄，每集工资一百多，钱虽少，却从未抱怨，只是用心投入，没想到这部电视剧能大红大紫，家喻户晓。 成功往往源于没有在不应过分专注之事上分神，抛弃杂念，专心投入，收获的便是成功。 心之泰然，是成功之源，任他风雨飘摇，我自安之若素。

静水流深，不露不显，并不影响他滋润万物。抛却杂念，安然前行。唯有经受一季明媚春光的诱惑，蝶才能破茧成蝶；否则，便要面对残酷的死亡。唯有不去念想钻石的价值，钻石的价值才能倍增，关键在于自身是否经得起这一世的浮华。陶渊明甘愿荷衣担锄行于农耕田亩却不正视官场一眼，那是勇气；李白敢于高唱“天子呼来不上船，自称臣是酒中仙”，仗剑行走天涯，那是勇气，是斜侧荣华富贵，只求一世洒脱的勇气。

钻石有价，唯有我心泰然，那一刻，才能闪出绝美光华，收获内心真正的无价。

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2011考研钻石包过班 作文批改

What these two drawings above illustrate is a little flower,under the protection of the greenhouse,is in full bloom / Flourishing no matter how terrible the weather would be like, Of course, the opposite side of this phenomenon also exists.the beautiful flower is no longer growing in favorable condition.In no time will the flower die,if it can not adapt to the new circumstance.

Obviously, the cartoons intend to reveal the phenomenon-the youth lack of independence-which widely exists in our society.It is not uncommon that we graduates,when leave campus for position,have a sense of unfamiliarity and dissatisfactory,moreover escape from the cut-throat competition of job market or low-income, high strength work.Currently, young adults of our generation who are brought up without sadness and sorrow.Parents,all the time,drive their best efforts to meet the unreasonable requirement made by their only child.When we enter into school with the guidance of our teachers,we seldom independently copy with difficulties we have ever confronted.

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钻石卡学员超级作文模板

☆一种事物或现象（正面意义倾向）

As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).The most striking feature is (图画重点信

息)。The status of the phenomenon as the focus of public concern mainly results from its profound

influence on individuals, and on our society.

As is symbolically revealed in the above picture(s), the deep implication profoundly indicates

that (从图画提炼出的核心信息

)，which is important and fundamental to anyone who undertakes

great deeds. Nothing is more beneficial than (从图画提炼出的核心词) to overcome our defects

and improve our efficiency.

From what have been discussed above, it is, therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken. On the one hand, we should keep learning more to acquire base. On the other

hand, it is demanding for us to take part in various activities to prove ourselves and strengthen

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