目录

TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 思路＋范文 完美重排版 …………………………3

本部分填补了目前网络iBT 备考资料的空白。根据李笑来老师提供的作文思

路与《iBT 高分作文》原书范文重排。本部分对iBT 考试的独立写作部分与

口语部分均具有重要的参考作用。

范文中加粗部分均依为原书所有。

附录一 185 题库按关键词分类 …………………………………………184

照录原书附录

附录二 李笑来作文笔记（独立部分）…………………………………185

根据本人新东方听课详尽笔记整理而成

附录三 句法多样性专题 ………………………………………………193

摘自李笑来老师网站（）

附录四 例证表达法 ………………………………………………………199

摘自李笑来老师网站（）

时间匆忙，欢迎指出错误，将在后面的版本中修正。

感谢笑来老师给我们提供了如此之好的备考材料，一切版权归笑来老师所有。

仅供广大iBT 考生备考参考，建议购买原版以更好使用。

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2006 年11 月10 日

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TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 思路＋范文 完美重排版

1. Why people attend college?

People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个)：增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野

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20##年8月22日大陆托福考试写作真题和范文解析

　　备考托福的小伙伴们注意了，托福真题是你不可缺少的备考利器，前程百利小编给大家整理了刚刚过去的8月22日托福考试写作真题，还有详细的写作思路和优秀范文。小编想要告诉大家的是，托福独立写作再次命中!了解托福考试的题型，有助于我们更好的备考接下来的托福考试，赶紧收藏吧!

　　第一部分

　　综合写作： 有关“计划烧除”的问题

　　阅读：

　　1. “计划烧除”对动物有害;

　　2. “计划烧除”会造成烟气和二氧化碳污染;

　　3. 即使不进行“计划烧除”也会有自然火灾的发生，所以“计划烧除”会浪费财力。

　　听力反驳：

　　1. 因为有几个月动物是不繁殖的，而且成年动物在遇火时可以成功逃脱，因此“计划烧除”不会对动物造成危害;

　　2.“计划烧除”可以让植物吸收二氧化碳;

　　3.“计划烧除”会消除可燃物，减少自然火灾的发生。

　　综合写作思路：

　　1、阅读支持“计划烧除”对动物有害;听力则赞成，动物是不繁殖的，而且成年动物在遇火时可以成功逃脱，因此“计划烧除”不会对动物造成危害。

　　2、阅读部分提出“计划烧除”会造成烟气和二氧化碳污染;但是，听力提出“计划烧除”可以让植物吸收二氧化碳。

　　3、阅读部分提出，即使不进行“计划烧除”也会有自然火灾的发生，所以“计划烧除”会浪费财力;但是，听力部分则反驳说“计划烧除”会消除可燃物，减少自然火灾的发生。

　　范文：

　　The lecturer contends that prescribed burns prevent larger forest fires. This directly contradicts the reading passage’s claim that there are more disadvantages than advantages.

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托福真题:托福作文范文185篇【专业】满分作文(1)

智课网出品

备考新托福(IBT)的同学们或许都听过独立写作185题库, 独立写作185题库是ETS公布的托福考试经典官方作文题库，收录在托福考试官方指南（Official Guide）的附录中，在托福考试改革之前，是作文真题的主要来源。现在的托福考试对官方作文题目进行了扩大，但是185题库仍然和托福作文真题紧密相连，为考生提供最权威最真实的托福范文参考和写作练习。智课网为大家带来托福作文范文185篇并附托福满分作文答题要点，考生们要认真备考。

托福185题库真题：

People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

托福满分作文-托福185范文赏析：

People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons. I believe that the three most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have new experiences, and to increase knowledge of oneself and the world around.

Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the primary reason to go to college. They know that the job market is competitive. At college, they can learn new skills for careers with a lot of opportunities. This means careers, such as information technology, that are expected to need a large workforce in the coming years.

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托福真题:托福作文范文185篇【专业】满分作文(3)

智课网出品

备考新托福(IBT)的同学们或许都听过独立写作185题库, 独立写作185题库是ETS公布的托福考试经典官方作文题库，收录在托福考试官方指南（Official Guide）的附录中，在托福考试改革之前，是作文真题的主要来源。现在的托福考试对官方作文题目进行了扩大，但是185题库仍然和托福作文真题紧密相连，为考生提供最权威最真实的托福范文参考和写作练习。智课网为大家带来托福作文范文185篇并附托福满分作文答题要点，考生们要认真备考。

托福185题库真题：

Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

托福满分作文-托福185范文赏析：

The twentieth century has brought with it many advances. With those advances, human lives have changed dramatically. In some ways life is worse, but mostly it is better. Changes in food preparation methods, for example, have improved our lives greatly.

The convenience of preparing food today is amazing. Even stoves have gotten too slow for us. Microwave cooking is much easier. We can press a few buttons and a meal is completely cooked in just a short time. People used to spend hours preparing a home-cooked meal, and now they can use that time for other, better things. Plus, there are all kinds of portable, prepackaged foods we can buy. Heat them in the office microwave, and lunch at work is quick and easy.

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托福试题:TPO 30独立写作满分作文

智课网出品

TPO,全称TOEFL Practice Online,是ETS有偿提供给考生的托福备考材料,是ETS之前考过的托福试题,对于托福考生考前模拟和复习具有很大的价值,智课网为大家带来托福TPO 30独立写作试题并附托福作文范文及托福满分作文答题要点，考生们要认真备考。

托福TPO30 独立写作试题： It is more enjoyable to have a job and you work only three days a week with long hours rather than work five days a week with shorter hours.

托福满分作文-范文赏析：

The mode of working among employees is usually a question how efficient and how possible accomplishing a task can be. How long employees should spend at work often times depends on the kind of work and company system, where at times workers do work for longer hours but fewer workdays while others take on short hours for more workdays. I do partake working for long hours for fewer workdays.

It’s plausible to applaud working for longer hours for fewer days because such long hours breed ample time to make good concentration on what is being done. In this case, a task can be effectively and efficiently furnished rather than short hours in which an employee will have to panic to accomplish a task within a short time. At the end, efficiency is suffocated at the expense of just accomplishing a task. Thus the motive of working will surely be eroded.

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托福试题:TPO 23独立写作满分作文

智课网出品

TPO,全称TOEFL Practice Online,是ETS有偿提供给考生的托福备考材料,是ETS之前考过的托福试题,对于托福考生考前模拟和复习具有很大的价值,智课网为大家带来托福TPO 23独立写作试题并附托福作文范文及托福满分作文答题要点，考生们要认真备考。

托福TPO23 独立写作试题：

In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.

托福满分作文-范文赏析：

Modern technological development has made our lives faster than ever before. Under this circumstance, people nowadays tend to live with a faster pace, and are now more concerned about efficiency. As a result, doing things slowly and making almost everything correctly seems to be sort of out of date. In a modern society, people should work at a higher speed and risk taking mistakes.

As i have mentioned in the first paragraph, the development of modern technology has made our life faster than ever before. With the assistance of modern techniques, we consequently should work faster than ever before. For instance, in the old days, people made their own clothes by hand. But now, machines in factories have made sewing and weaving quite speedy and of great quality. We do not have to waste any time doing cumbersome works because of modern technology. Therefore, why should we insist on working at a slow pace instead of enjoying the convenience that is brought by technology?

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托福真题:托福作文范文185篇【专业】满分作文(4)

智课网出品

备考新托福(IBT)的同学们或许都听过独立写作185题库, 独立写作185题库是ETS公布的托福考试经典官方作文题库，收录在托福考试官方指南（Official Guide）的附录中，在托福考试改革之前，是作文真题的主要来源。现在的托福考试对官方作文题目进行了扩大，但是185题库仍然和托福作文真题紧密相连，为考生提供最权威最真实的托福范文参考和写作练习。智课网为大家带来托福作文范文185篇并附托福满分作文答题要点，考生们要认真备考。

托福185题库真题：

It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?

托福满分作文-托福185范文赏析：

“Experience is the best teacher” is an old cliché, but I agree with it. The most important, and sometimes the hardest, lessons we learn in life come from our participation in situations. You can’t learn everything from a book.

Of course, learning from books in a formal educational setting is also valuable. It’s in schools that we learn the information we need to function in our society. We learn how to speak and write and understand mathematical equations. This is all information that we need in order to live in our communities and earn a living.

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