篇一 :雅思考试5分作文模板

雅思考试5分作文模板

模版一

In present-day society, the human race is progressing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas. Accompanying all the boons brought about by the profound societal changes have come some sufferings, and _____ is very prominent among them. Some people assert that _____; while the adversaries strongly contend that ____. From my own perspective, their views have both merit and demerit.

Granted, there could be some positive effects ___may bring about. In the first place, 分论点一. For instance, 例证 / 语言论证。In the second place, 分论点二. 论证.

However, the opponents firmly believe that ____., and they against it for a couple of sound reasons. Firstly, ___. Secondly, ____. Thirdly, _____

In the final analysis, I concede that to some extent, 第一个观点. However, 第二个观点。 On balance, I am convinced that 自己的观点。

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篇二 :雅思5.5分作文批改范例

一.            The table shows the total length of high speed train track in three countries in 1990,2010and the projection for 2010.

The table illustrates presents the[A1]  information about the total length of high speed train track in China,France and Japan in 1990,2010 and the projection for 2010[A2] .

It is clear that Japan had the longest high speed train track in1990,with 1200 kms,while France ranked second position ( with 700kms) and China had no high train track at this time .However,the next two decade experienced a sharp increase in high speed[A3] train tracks in China,reaching up to 5800kms in 2010,while the length of high speed train track was 2600kms and 2500kms in France and Japan respectively at in the same year.

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篇三 :雅思写作:5分与6分的区别

雅思写作5分与6分的区别

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雅思写作5分与6分的区别

雅思写作:5分与6分的区别

1.字数不够,不给6分

Tip:多写50字

雅思考试采用人工阅卷,评卷老师不会一个一个字的去数;字数有没有到,完全是凭“目测”。

很多时候,由于书写、版式、空行大小等关系,

明明到了字数的作文,看起来却十分单薄,有字数不足的“嫌疑”。

为了谨慎起见,尽管要求是小作文150字,大作文250字

实际考试要分别写到200字+和300字+,才能保证看起来“够份量”。

2.不分段,不给6分

Tip:必须分段,千万不要整篇文章就“一坨”

小作文2-4段,大作文4-6段;

雅思写作毕竟是一种应试行为,多少带点“八股”,考生必须遵循标准化结构: 开头:1段,介绍话题背景,给出全文观点

中段:2-3个小段,每段有且只有一个分论点;每段开头要有“第一第二第三”,“一方面另一方面”,“首先/其次/再者”之类的标示词

结尾:1段,结论

写作文就是“带着枷锁跳舞”。大家不管用词用句多么鬼斧神工,不管材料和观点多么别开生面,千万不要在结构格式上心血来潮。标准化结构主要目的是方便考官阅卷,迅速查找段意。如果采用怪异/新颖的段落布局,会造成考官阅读不便,降低得分。

3.从句/复杂句没写对,不给6分

Tips:4分作文完全没有复杂句,5分作文有写复杂句,但没有写对;6分作文基本能写出无误的复杂句。

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雅思写作5分与6分的区别

雅思写作5分与6分的区别

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雅思写作5分与6分的区别

你一篇作文里面句式有几种;直接关系你的得分

定语从句,状语从句,宾语从句是必须出现的;主语从句、同位语从句、表语从句是加分的;

各种从句怎么写,我们课上说得最多的

不只一个同学问我:从句要掌握到什么程度?

很多人觉得,只要做语法选择题的时候,知道哪里选which哪里用that就算掌握从句了。

但是雅思考试不吃这一套,它的主旨是“实用”。到底有没有掌握,就看你上了考场能不能使出来。

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篇四 :雅思写作5.5分考试答案

Task 1 Underground Railways Systems

The table shows some details about underground railway systems in six cities, namely, London, Pairs, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.

London was the first city that opened underground railways systems in 1863, while Los Angels was the last one in 2001. As for the other four countries, all of them opened the underground railways in 1900s.

The route in London is also the largest, approximately 400 kilometers. Those of Pairs, Tokyo and Washington DC are between 100 and 200 kilometers. The lengths of underground railways are short in Kyoto and Los Angeles (11 kilometers and 28 kilometers respectively).

Tokyo with 155 kilometers of route has the largest amount of passengers (1927 millions). It is followed by that of Pairs, London and Washington DC. Passengers in Kyoto and Los Angeles are similar, around 50 millions.

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篇五 :雅思大作文5分与7分范文各项指数对比分析

雅思大作文5分与7分范文各项指数对比分析

Let’s compare two answers to a question.The topic is as follows:

International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the advantages of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

A Poor Essay – The following is a band 5 essay.

International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

In my opinion advantages outweight the disadvantages. Firstly, many countries like Egypt or Tailand live from tourism Lots of people work there as a seilsmens or tourist guides. These countries without support of tourists wouldn’t be able to funtcion properly. Secondly, in countries visited by tourists are plenty of places where people just can’t pass because of rare animals or plants. Another thing is that people like traveling and seeing new exotic places. They like lie on the beach or swim in ocean.

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篇六 :雅思写作6.5分学习笔记

7.14

雅思作文:

小作文:三分之一分数 150-180字

大作文:三分之二分数 250-280字

如何1+1>2?

1、记笔记:速记 自查

2、看参考书

写作胜经:P115 33篇非常重要,看内容不看结构

00-12年写作机经:每天四道,P28 08.1.10至最后

读话题,找考点

看题型,定结构

划核心词,定同义、近义词

T2解题步骤:

1、审题:话题 题型 核心词

2、思路:必须一分为二

3、结构:4/5段,prefer 4段

4、表达:话题考点

话题:

教育

社会

科技传媒

国家政策

题型:

1、让步反驳 3-7 do u agree or disagree

2、平衡写 5-5 discuss

3、问题解决(PRS)

4、组合题

评分标准:

Content: what why how

Organization: 衔接词

Vocabulary

Grammar:18-22句话,7种不同句型

EX: study in another country 1、论点-7分-一心一意

A great many advantages can be seen from…

First of all, these developed countries are home to some of the most prestigious universities in the world, such as Cambridge and Oxford.

In this sense, XXX can not only offer the best academic environment but also advanced educational facilities to XXX, which, by contrast, might not be easily obtained from their domestic study.

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篇七 :雅思写作7分与5分的区别

雅思写作7分是很多人的目标,但是实际的情况是中国考生的雅思写作成绩徘徊在5分左右。那就有很多人不明白了,究竟雅思写作5分和雅思写作7分的区别在哪里呢?尤其是在最基本的句式表达方面。

以同一个句子三种表达为例大家琢磨琢磨吧:

1. Interestingly, the newer metro systems are much shorter than the older ones.

2. It is interesting to note that the more recently established metro systems are far shorter than the older ones .

3. One interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the more recently established systems are considerably shorter than the older ones.

再来三句:

1. It is also important to note that more girls go to high school in all parts of the world except East Asia.

2. It is also worth noting that females are more likely to attend second school in all regions except East Asia.

3. Also noteworthy is the fact that females are more likely to receive a secondary education in all regions except East Asia.

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篇八 :雅思写作经验5.5分怎样可以拿7分的关键

雅思写作经验5.5分怎样可以拿7分的关键

上海环球雅思

上次,环球雅思季春桦老师为大家带来的雅思5.5分怎样可以拿7分的三个关键,未完待续,今天季春桦来继续和大家聊聊,雅思写作5.5分怎样可以拿7分的关键。详情请看下文:

雅思写作经验之7分关键四:

要自己动手写,不要生搬硬套所谓的高分“套句”,“模板”

很多雅思考生在考雅思考试之前,背诵了大量的雅思写作套句,这些套句其实就像一把双刃剑,正确的使用的确可以加快写作速度以及凑满字数。但是,反之,大量并且不恰当地使用只能适得其反。例如,很多功底只有4-5分的考生,非要套用所谓“8分”的套句,这些套句在文章中会显得非常地不协调,破坏文章的统一风格。当然,考官会一眼看出哪些句子是背来的,最终会给一个极低的分数。

另外,考生们所掌握的套句,如今在市面上大量流通,这势必造成考生所谓套句大量雷同,撞车的现象。因此这就是为什么考生总是在雅思写作考试中拿4.5,5.5,总是考不到6分的根本原因之一。所以,建议雅思考试的考生们,如果非要考前准备一个写作模板的话,那这个模板一定得是原创的,而且能够同考题密切紧贴,能让自己的写作文风非常自然的表现,要做到天衣无缝的使用。

以上就是上海环球雅思资深讲师季春桦从一对一教学课程中所得出雅思写作经验5.5分怎样可以拿7分的关键的感想,希望能够给大家的学习带来实用的帮助。最后环球雅思提醒考生们,要认真对待雅思写作这

雅思写作经验55分怎样可以拿7分的关键

门考试,真的没有什么所谓的速成和捷径,一定要努力学习才可以。加油啊!

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