The chart illustrates the process of extracting fresh water from salt water through a series of simple processes, which uses basic equipments.

First of all, turn on the gas store to heat the salt water in the pot. As the temperature of the salt water gets higher and higher, more and more water changes into water vapor. After that, the water vapor is collected by a metal funnel, then, flows into a long pipe. At the middle of the pipe, a piece of cloth is placed, which is wet by pouring a jug of cold water over it. When the water vapor flows through the long horizontal pipe, it is condensed into liquid again by the cold wet piece of cloth. Finally, the fresh water flows into the vertical pipe and then drops down to the collecting bucket. Then, the whole process is completed.

To sum up, during the whole process only water changes into vapor and the salt is left in the pot. So that fresh water can be extracted.

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Nowadays, many countries tend to use an alternative way to assess the students’ ability instead of traditional exam systems. More attention has been paid to the controversial issue as to whether students could benefit from canceling exams. It is considered by some experts that this measure could decrease students’ pressure. However, I disagree with this trend for two reasons.

Firstly, exam systems could help teachers to make a fair and all-rounded judgment. On the one hand, exam conditions are often strict so that students under exam conditions could hardly copy others’ answers. Compared with alternative ways of assessments, such as essay and course design, it is hard to distinguish whether some ideas are from the students themselves or copy from someone else. On the other hand, teachers can easily make an exam cover the whole book and check if the students have learned all the knowledge from the book. However, essay and course design usually only use part of the book.

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20xx年11月雅思作文七分提分技巧：让你的作文短小精悍的秘密 思创国际教育是石家庄唯一一家真正承诺保分，不过退款的语言培训机构

建议一：避免空洞无意义的单词和词组

1.一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关或重要的信息，完全可以删掉。

比如：When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion。

这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为： Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。

2.有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换。

例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。

“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now。

建议二：避免不必要的重复

1.尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候句子完全可以简化 例如下面这个例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size。

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雅思作文范文大全（含小作文）
好的东西，和大家分享，看这个帖子的人肯定比较多，大家别冒险背诵，了解一下范文的思路好了。 这样好的东西，可惜不是我整理的，是一个叫landfish姑娘收集的，厉害！

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some people claim that the disadvantages of the car are more than the advantages,do you agree or disagree? 

范文1
the birth of cars have made an enormous change to our life.in the past,we travel from one place to another only by foot,nowaday,cars can do it .its goes withour saying that the invention of cars bring great benefit to all of us.but as proverb goes:no garden without weeds.car is not exception.

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7分雅思作文模板大放送 对于作文方面，最好的复习建议就是先看优秀作文模板。这些能获得高分的雅思作文，都拥有着共同的特点，也就是我们需要关注的地方。清晰的结构、地道的英语用法、个性的观点、流畅通顺的语句等，学习他们、并掌握这些优点，有助于大家的考雅思作文考试。 计算机

Globally, we have moved from a culture centered on network television, cable, AM and FM radio and telephone into a digital society with mass media,streaming information, intelligent

computer. To shift to a digital economy, best demonstrated by the explosive growth of the Internet, is transforming everyday products and practices. Ideas expressed in soft wares, chips,

communication systems, financial institutions and mass media have enormous leverage worldwide. Beyond emails and online shopping, the Internet promises to change dramatically huge spectrum activities. Its benefits can be well illustrated in the following aspects.

In the first place, it contributes to escape us from laborious work, save our time, facilitate our lives. Secondly, with computer’s extensive reach into every corner of the world, a perspective of human life can be shown only with a single keystroke. No matter where we are, in school,

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因为要到新西兰，雅思要四个7分。我是英文专业的，考了两次雅思，第一次考前煤气中毒了（太悲惨了……同情你，不过一般情况下大病之后考试的效果往往不是很差~），写作就考前看了两晚上，买的是慎小嶷的十天和他的范文解析，6分，第二次花了一个月看写作，考场当时还要了extra paper （字数最好都不要太多，小作文字数控制在160~180字之间足矣，大作文控制在280~300字左右，尽量不要再要答题纸，写得多挑错的可能性大，而且肯定多少会有一些啰嗦、重复的问题），才5,5分，我想是不是技巧我没有掌握的原因。请问您;

1, 官方的范文写的都很simple,甚至用了firstly,secondly,thirdly,这样的结构。如果照着官方的范文去写，也用这样的开头词，会得高分么？

雅思写作当中一定要出现序数词，因为这相当于标志，便于考官在1~2分钟之内读完你的作文并给你打分；当然你可以选择相应比较难的词汇比如Primarily, Furthermore, Eventually等等，组织好自己的一套词汇

2,官方的范文应该借鉴什么？应该保持simple的文风么？还是范文给出的只是框架是需要再添加内容的？

应该保持简单明了的文风，附件中有一个其他老师VIP的学生考前的练习，这个学生最终得了8.0，你可以适当借鉴一下她的风格~文字很简单，但是很有层次感，从句适用不做作，条理十分清楚。

3, 慎小嶷的书觉得写的很好，但是可能用的不恰当，我背过他的范文解析，是我背的不够多，体会的还不够全面么？您觉得应该怎么运用他的书？或者您觉得谁的书更有指导性？

慎小嶷的书确实很好，但是基本上10个雅思考生里面6个人会有他的书，所以你用的东西很有可能会被扣上抄袭之嫌，另外他的书比较适合目标是6.0左右的考生，因为难度上并不是很大。小作文的话强烈建议朗阁雅思出的红本书，另外机械工业出版社出的《9分IELTS写作》这本书强烈推荐，全是考官所写，你可以体会一下他的用词和结构

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现在的年轻人总是会发出“理想很丰满，现实很骨感”这样的感叹，来表达对现实生活的无奈。而在雅思写作考试中，考生们又何尝不会经历这种无奈呢?写作7分是许多考生梦寐以求的分数，但即使是一些外籍教师所撰写的范文，在考官笔下也不过是7-8分!对于国内大多数雅思考生而言，7分似乎是可望而不可及的。那么，究竟怎样的文章，才能得到考官的青睐，最终幸运的得到7分的分数呢?

一.Task response

1. 具体要求

Task response表示任务的完成。在官方给出的评分标准中，7分有这样的要求：

1. Address all parts of the task,

2. Present a clear position throughout the response,

3. Present, extend and support main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalize and/or supporting ideas may lack focus。

① 回答了题目要求的所有问题。②整篇文章观点鲜明。③详细的解释和论证了观点。

2. 范例评析

▲ 剑桥雅思全真试题7 Test2 Task2

Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding the punishment。

Discuss both views and give your own opinion。

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